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April 26, 2025
Oggi
Oggi ho letto per una ora, ma c'era la mia famiglia e non riuscivo a concentrarmi molto.
Ho studiato tedesco e poi ho visto un video in italiano.
Adesso stava giocando a scacchi.
Oggi abbiamo visto fuori da casa di mia nonna e abbiamo visto che la bicicletta di mio zio era rubata.
Mi infastidisce il fatto che devo ancora usare il traduttore, perché appena ho iniziato a imparare l'italiano.
Ma immagino di non essere l'unica.
April 26, 2025
My last holiday
Last Sunday, I and my girlfriends went to the exibition of my favorite auther at Kyobashi, Tokyo.
At first, we're so surprised because the venue was highly crowded by many guests.
We're required to wait 3 hours to entire the venue!
So we got a reservation and went to a cafe.
This cafe provided us great cheese cakes!
It's fantastic!
We may visit this cafe again.
April 26, 2025
April 26, 2025
In letzter Zeit
Fast immer, wenn ich schreibe, habe ich keinen Plan.
Ich schreibe, was mir in den Sinn kommt.
Ich bin seit etwa einer Woche krank.
Jemand hat das Fahrrad von meinem Onkel beklaut, und es war vor dem Haus meiner Oma.
Es war ein gutes Fahrrad, es ist sehr frustrierend.
Normalerweise das Fahrrad aufbewahrt wurde, aber wir haben gedacht, dass es gut wäre, wenn wir es draußen lassen.
Danach haben wir die Katze von meiner Oma bei Tierarzt gebracht und sie wurde geimpft.
April 25, 2025
My ideal study destination
Study destination, what about it. Maybe it´s sounds simple or just another superfluo question with barely importance to mayority of the people but we don´t notice, it´s one of the most important decision that we´ve to take alone. There´s a lot of help from institutions, familiy, etc. But in the end its no the case. The impact on our proyection is invaluable. In this text, using my experiencia i going to point in the first place the importance and them where is my ideal destination.
Get out of your confortable zone is too hard because this sesation, instinc is inner our brains. Why move on or change something when its already works and almost why take some risks. This is the question, this the breakpoint at least to me. In childhood, even now I admire, the people who left his mark in history, who mades social, politicals changes and there´s a constant study far froom home. I take all this context, the make a point to justifice, my ideal destination and Why I did this, i believe every space even a small one, can have an impact. I don´t have an ideal place, the only thing that i´m sure is abroad of my contry. The experiencia of open your mind, notice that your world is small and out of them are some incredibles realitys, cultures is one of the most beautiful experiences in life.
The conclusion of this small text wherever you have to idea to study try to that opcion be outside, far froom you safe zone and I promise it will chance your history and your life.
April 25, 2025
10 Jahre Deutsche Reise
Ich habe angefangen Deustch zu lernen im Jahr 2016. Ich musste eine Sprache auswählen für die Schule, weil in meinem Land jeder muss zwei Sprachen lernen. Meine zweite Sprache ist Niederländisch, also ich habe Deutsch gewählt. Ich dachte dass es einfach wäre.
Ich habe mich sehr geirrt. Deutsch ist sehr schwierig, aber ich finde es immer noch schön zu leren. Die Sprache klingt wunderschön, und es ist nicht so schwer zu sprechen. Jetzt versuche ich mich durch Schreiben zu verbessern. Es ist nicht einfach, und ich vergesse viele Wörter, aber ich hoffe dass ich bald eine Besserung sehe.
Tschüss!
April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
My Trike
Last winter, I bought a small trike. The brand of it is Jinpeng, and the model is Douqi Pro. Its size is 2080mm in length, 1060mm in width and 1635mm in height. It has three seats: a driver seat and passenger seats.
It is a battery-powered trike with a 650 - watt electromotor. There are two doors respectively on the left and right and a small skylight on its roof. It is really like a mini car.
Why did I buy it? During winter, the weather in my place is very cold - the temperature can be negative. If I ride an electric bike to work, the cold air makes my face ache, my nose run and me cough.
If I drive a car to work, it is difficult to find a free parking space. And you know, driving a car means a lot of trouble, such as getting traffic tickets, finding free parking spaces and adding gasoline.
This trike won’t get a traffic ticket as there aren't strict rules for trikes in my city. It’s very easy to find a parking space for it since it’s very small. It’s very convenient to drive because it is small and flexible.
It also saves money. It can run about sixty kilometers with a single full charge, which is about eight hours of charging and only consumes two Chinese yuan.
Before I bought it, I often stayed at home on weekends, but after I bought it, I ride it around my city every weekend. It’s much healthier riding around than just staying at home.
Today is the weekend again and I am going to ride around with my wife. I don’t have a plan for the trip; we just ride somewhere spontaneously to relax and have fun.
Well, that’s all for this journal and I will see you soon with the next one.
April 25, 2025
Come perdere peso (3/6)
Come perdere peso (3/6)
1. Mangiare calorie, non berle.
Quando mia moglie era incinta con il nostro figlio, ho smesso di bere l'alcol. Ho notato che ho perso peso molto rapidamente. La cola è pieno di zucchero, quindi ho smesso anche di berla. Poi ho letto da qualche parte che nutrizionalmente il succo non è meglio della cola. Ho deciso che avrei bevuto solo acqua, tè senza zucchero, o caffè nero.
È una buon'idea. Un pasto in una ristorante ha circa 2000 o anche 3000 calorie. Perché peggiorare la situazione?
Una birra o una cola ha circa 300-500 calorie. Neanche non hanno alcun valore nutrizionale. Per perdere peso, la prima regola è mangiare le calorie, non berle.
April 25, 2025
Consejos para comprar una bici
Un colega del trabajo me ha recurrido pidiendo recomendaciones de dónde y de qué estilos de bicicletas que debe de comprar. Tengo que ejercer un poco de cautela en aconsejarle porque él es novato en el ciclismo, y por otro lado tengo mucha experiencia. Asimismo, por instinto es posible que le dé consejos que no son aptos para alguien de su nivel al respecto de la calidad y precio de bicicleta que más le convendría. Soy aficionado a las bicis de carretera, las cuales no tienen mucho que ver con las personas que simplemente quieren montar de forma casual para divertirse. En fin, le informé de unas tiendas que cuenta con empleados informados sobre distintas categorías de clientes que podrían ayudar a mi colega en su decisión.
April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
An Ocean Of Frustation
There's an ocean of frustations
And I drown in it every day
Silence, thougths, inmsomnia.
I wish I could reboot
Try again
But maybe it only made it worst
It is a lot of changes
But the lonliness its the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.
April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
my contact with writing
I've always been passionate about books. At nine years old, I looked at my mother and said: "I wanna be a writer!" and this decision changed my life. I started creating comic books about mystery (yes, I wrote and drew too). I showed to my friends and it was amazing to them. Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out (is this right?) as I'm planning ;) 🤍
April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
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April 25, 2025
April 25, 2025
Technologien im Alltag
Hallo zusammen,
ich möchte über ein besonderes Thema sprechen, das mir sehr interessiere. Das Thema: Technologien im Alltag.
Beginnen wir mit einem Blick auf die aktuelle Situation, es ist unbestreitbar, dass heutzutage Technologien ein Teil von unserem Lebe ist. Deshalb müssen wir auf die Risiken denken.
Früh benutzten Kindern Technologien wenige, aber heutzutage habe ich Kinder mit 6 Jahr mit ein Handy gesehen. Das repräsentiert ein großes Problem für Zukunftsgenerationen. Viele auf die aktuelle Psychologiegesundsprobleme verbinden mit Medien und Technologie.
Zum Beispiele habe die UNO gezeigt, dass viele Ländern in der Schule Handys verboten haben, weil sie die Bildung auf Kindern beeinflussen. Aber das Problem endete nicht doch. Eltern denken, dass technologische Gerät eine guten Dinge sind, um ihren Kinder zu ablenken.
Wir müssen realisieren, dass großes Problem, das wir erzeugen.
Ich hoffe, dass wir darüber durchdenken.
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