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Mis clases
Asisto a mis clases, pero cuando no tenemos clases mis amigos y yo nos quedamos cerca de la facultad de medicina para hablar. Es mucha diversión. A veces algunos de nosotros salen para comprar algo para comer, pero retornan si no tienen clases.
Por la tarde usualmente me preparo para salir. A veces uno de mis amigos me lleva hasta mi casa, pero la mayoría de las veces tomo transporte público. A veces hay mucho tráfico, pero trato de escuchar audios como mis apuntos de formato oral, porque es difícil leer cuando se está moviendo de manera impredecible los vehículos.
Por la noche preparo para el día que viene, empaco mi mochila y elijo la ropa que quiero usar (me ayuda salir más rápido de la casa en las mañanas). Pero a veces fallo en esta etapa porque despues de un día de tanto trabajar, lo único que quiero hacer es relajarme. Todavía trabajo en esta fase de mi día.
Sept. 27, 2025
¡Sueño con esto!
Esto es una pregunta interesante. Pienso mucho en ella. Estoy desempleado actualmente, pero no tengo dinero para un año. Es muy estresante.
Si tuviere dinero para un año, y tuviere no estres:
Crearía un videojuego. Soy ingeniero de software, y crear un juego es divertido. Los juegos roguelike son mis favoritos.
Pero estoy cuando trabajo, estoy ocupado. Cuando desempleado, estoy ocupado encuentro trabajo. Así es la vida. Deseo la situación en tu propuesta de escritura. ¡Sería asombroso!
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Les eventemnets pour la weekend.
Ce Weekend, je n'ai pas l'école sur dimanche, samedi, lundi, ou mardi. J'ai hâte! Aujourd'hui, je vais regarder un film français, lire <<little women>> (c'est un belle livre), crochet (je fais une couverture bleue), faire mes deviors d'anglais et français et etudier pour chemie et biologie, et ranger ma chambre. Cet jour vas simple mais productif. À demain, je ne sais pas quoi je vais faire. Lundi, je vais sortir avec mes amis, je ne sais pas quelle activitie nous allons faire. Mardi, je vais sortit avec mon frére, nous allons achéter du dejeuner.
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
In unserer Folge heute
Kürtzlich habe ich eine Email von der Ausländerbehörde erhalten, in der stand, dass meine Anfrage an der Agentur für Arbeit geschickt würde.🎉 Jetzt muss ich nur auf der Zustimmung warten. Ich hoffe, dass ich eine positive Rückmeldung bekommen, das heißt, dass ich arbeiten darf.
Ich habe hier einmal erzählt, dass ich versucht habe, in einem Pflegerheim zu arbeiten. Warum spreche ich das jetzt an? Sie werden es verstehen.😂 Hier die Geschichte:
Bei dem Vorstellungsgespräch um als Pflegehelferin zu arbeiten hat alles gut gelaufen. Am nächsten Tag habe ich eine Einladung zur Hospitation per Email bekommen. Sie haben mir auch um meinen Aufenhaltstitel gebeten.
Bevor ich dieses Job gesucht habe, habe ich die Ausländerbehörde gefragt, ob ich arbeiten dürfen. Ihre Antwort war: "Sie dürfen 20 Stunden pro Woche arbeiten aber ihre Fiktionsbescheinigung ist nur gültig bis 4. Mai (ich hatte noch ein Monat Gültigkeit). Was sollte das bedeuten? Darf ich arbeiten oder nicht? Na ja, rate mal!
Morgen erzähle ich euch mehr.
Vielleicht werde ich in der Zukunft einen Roman schreiben: Die Reise eines Panamaerin in fremden Ländern.😂
Sept. 27, 2025
Dan Brown's book
I read "Orígen" the last month. This book was written by Dan Brown, who's known for other books like "the Da Vinci code" or " Angels and Demons".
When I was young I read a lot while I was going to University by train. Now, I read very little but my friend recomended me this book and I enjoyed whit it a lot.
The book talk about mistery, religion, science and love. It's a good combination to keep your attention.
Sept. 27, 2025
Missverständnisse in der Komunikation
In unserem Alltagsleben kommt es immer wieder zu Missverständnissen, die unsere Beziehungen entweder positiv oder negativ beeinflussen. Häufig wird auf die negativen Aspekte von Missverständnissen hingewiesen, sie führen nämlich meist zu Konfikten. Sie lösen Gefühle wie Enttäuschung, Wut und Frustrustion aus und können in manchen Fällen Beziehungen abbrechen, was zu einer emotionalen Belastung führen kann. Hinzu kommt, dass ein Missverständniss mit Geschäftspartnern kostenspielige Konsequenzen haben kann. Besonders im Außenhandel, wo man mit Menschen aus anderen Kulturen umgehen muss, passieren diese Missverständnisse häufig. Man sollte jedoch beachten, dass wie jeder Fehler sich auch Missverständnisse als vorteilhaft erweisen, sie können nämlich dazu führen, dass man lernt, sich klarer und präziser auszudrücken und dies fördert die Komunikationsfähigkeit. Manchmal liegen Missverständnisse an kulturellen Unterschieden. Um sie zu vermeiden, sollte man sich in einigen Fällen mit anderen Kulturen vertraut machen. Diese Maßnahme könnte zu einem kulturellen Austausch beitragen, was sich widerrum als Vorteil anführen lässt.
Insgessmt lässt sich feststellen, dass Missverständnisse zwar meist zu Konflikten und negativen Gefühlen führen, sie spielen jedoch in unserem Alltag eine wichtige Rolle. Sie fördern unsere Kommunikationfähigheit, wodurch sich unsere Ausdrucksweise verbessert. Außerdem können sie dazu dienen, uns mit anderen Kulturen vertraut zu machen.
Sept. 27, 2025
イラストレータのブログにコメントを書きたい！
最近、「日本にもう一回行きたい」と思い出します。特別に、「僕と同じでイラストレーターと漫画家が書いているの人と友達になりたい」とずっと思いています。
今日、日本で10年の前買ったイラストが身に付いて、そのイラストの反対に見ると、イラストレーターのブロっぐが書かれていました。イラストレーターのブログで最近のポストがあるから、コメントにしたい！
なんか、「10年の前に、カナダから日本に行った時、東京でプリントを買いました！モンとレアルの家の壁にはよくに付いています！このブログはもうあれのことは嬉しいです ：）美しいえおを描くのはありがとございます！」のように書きたいけど．．．日本語がよく練習しなかったですから、助けを求めています。（また、練習したい！w）
ありがとうございます！：
Sept. 27, 2025
Cada día
Cada día, me despierto a las 4 de la mañana. Suele tomarme alrededor de 15 minutos para levantarme, y tal vez 5 minutos más para procesar las cosas principales que tengo que hacer para el día. De ahí entro en el baño para ducharme. Usualmente mi mamá cariñosa cocina para mí, así que al salir del baño ya está preparado mi desayuno. Me seco, me visto, como mi desayuno, me cepillo los dientes y salgo a las seis.
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Wie kann man seinen aktiven Wortschatz bereichern?
Vor kurzem habe ich eine neue Methode ausprobiert, um neue Vokabeln nicht nur passiv zu kennen, sondern auch sie aktiv im Sprechen zu verwenden. Da sie sich als effektiv erwies, möchte ich ihr heute einen kurzen Aufsatz widmen.
Was mir geholfen hat ist, einen Zettel mit verschiedenen Sprichwörtern und Redewendungen auszufüllen. Vor jedem Gespräch lese ich ihn durch, um mich an sie alle noch mal zu erinnern und um sie buchstäblich vor den Augen zu haben.
Im Laufe des Gesprächs werfe ich einen Blick auf den Zettel und setze die neuen Wörter erfolgreich in meine Sprache um.
Sept. 27, 2025
Размышления о гордыне
С начала времен могущественные люди строят прекрасные, впечатляющие здания, чтобы следующие поколения помнили их. Это способ получить доступ к какому-то виду бессмертия. Многие из этих думали, что они были бесмогущими. Некоторые даже считали, что они были богими! Но сегодня, что остатлось от фараонов, от грозных завоевателей Персидской или Римской Империи? Почти ничего. Несколько имен с биографическими деталями, шёптанных среди книжных червей, которые разбираются в истории. О более новых фигурах мы знаем больше, потому что у нас больше документов, больше источников, которые научат нас, кем они были. Однако, в итоге время, или скорее энтропия, разрушает всё, и документы и напонимания. Через два тысячи лет мы узнаем так плохо о Маргарите Юрсенаре и Ленине, как мы сегодня знаем Парменида или Кира Великого.
Время всегда ущелмляет гордость людей со своими притязаниами на бессмертие. Гордыня — самый опастный смертный грех. Почему? Это просто: нам нужна гордость, и гордость — земля, в которой растит гордыня. Возможно жить без жадности, без завистя. Но невозможно жить без гордости. Наше чувство собственного достоинства, самолюбия, наше желание к уважению: все происходят из нашей гордости. Но возможно вазвратить и манипулировать эту гордость: тогда она превращается в гордыню. А гордныня глупными обманами приводит нас к безумия. Гордыня — самый быстрый способ, чтобы потеряться.
Sept. 27, 2025
Return to Japan
After my 2 year-long work in Germany, I went back to Japan. Overall, working in an European country was a great eye-opening experience. I could also learn many cultural differences. It was also very interesting to know that there were also huge differences between German and American cultures. As a person who lived in a small island for long, the experience of having lived in the US was already an astonishing experience and sometimes undermined my view of many things. The experience in Germany further expanded my horizon. Sometimes it felt challenging to live and work there because a lot of experiences I gained in the US didn't work and the cultural norm was very different from either of Japan and the US. It still feels embarrassing, but for the first month in Germany, I had a prejudice that while each Western county has their own history and culture, their culture and norm should have a lot in common. The experiences living in different countries greatly helped me realize the importance to learn, respect and get accustomed with each country's culture, being humble without having any prejudice. In turn, I also found myself more respectful and mindful of the Japanese culture. I am very grateful for all those experiences and hope the experiences could bring further fruitful experiences.
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
My favourite movie is "Gattaca."
I'm huge fan of sci-fi films. I have been fascinated by spaceships and robots since childhood. Maybe, it was a reason why I became a programmer. From my early years I wrote program code, fixed computers and read books about cosmos. But my mother disapproved my passion. She told me that science — is low-paid work. I object. All of my life became joyful because I fell in love with math. "Gattaca" it is story about independent soul. Regardless of life circumstances, brave person can to change the status quo. "There's no gene for fate"
Sept. 27, 2025
The Science of Falling in Love
Indeed, falling in love is a really interesting subject to talk about. I thought it had nothing with sciences but I was totally wrong. There are 3 différents aspects from love. First, the physical attraction. People who aren't asexuel (someone who don't have sexual attraction) can have lust from someone. And the journalist who said that said that it was Fair to think it's thanks to that that we can live because without reproduction we should be extincted. The cells responsable of lust is the testosterone for men and I don't remember the women cell's name. Also, there is the passion about your partner cause about the dopamine.
Thanks for reading !
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Notes from the Feedback on My First 10 Texts
First of all, I thank all of the correctors for their help! I've decided to make a summary of my first 10 texts. I would really appreciate if you could give me your feedback on these notes. I'm not sure that I got everything from the feedback right.
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Starting a sentence with "now" implies you were doing something else before, so it's inappropriate at the very beginning of a text. If you're talking about the current moment, you can say "right now." For example: "Right now, I'm looking..." Alternatively, you can remove "right now" altogether, as the verb tense will be enough to convey the meaning.
"Desire" expresses a strong, deep wish. "Want" is more appropriate in most common situations.
"To go downtown" is more idiomatic than "to visit town."
When making a list, it's better to use the serial comma (a comma before the last item, even when there is an "and"). It's also better to use "and." For example: "...apples, bananas, and oranges."
In a rhetorical question like "You could ask: [question]...", you should use "could," not "would." For example: "You could ask me: 'What...?'"
The verb for rewriting a text is "rewrite," not "recreate."
"End up doing" is an idiomatic expression, similar to "eventually deciding" or "ending up with a decision." It's a natural alternative to "decide." For example: "If I end up discussing topics that... I will quit..."
If an event is "approaching," it's more natural to say it is "coming up" rather than just "coming." For example: "My birthday is coming up."
It's important to use linking words (conjunctions, etc.). In English, coherence is valued; being choppy is not considered a style.
"Admire" is used for a person, a group of people, or a thing. For an activity, "enjoy" is more suitable. For example: "I enjoy creating towns. I admire city planners."
I don't know when to use "the" versus "a" with a first mention followed by a defining relative clause. For example: "...working on a/the town named..." Even though it's the first mention, the clause makes it specific, which often calls for "the." I'm puzzled.
Using "there is" isn't suitable when talking about something you created. For instance, if you created a town in a game, you should say, "I made..." because it emphasizes your work.
The verb "tell" requires an object. If there isn't one, use "talk." For example: "Tell me about..." or "Let's talk about..."
"Top" is primarily an adjective, not a noun. You would say "one of my top projects," not "one of my tops."
"Building and creating" is considered a single concept (a compound subject), so it takes a singular verb: "is detailed," not "are detailed." Why? Because the activities are so closely linked they are treated as one idea.
Short sentences are often better when joined with a conjunction or a semicolon for better flow.
Instead of "only books," it's more natural to say "just some books."
Use "I could understand" (not "can") when referring to a hypothetical or potential action by someone else. "Could" is less absolute.
When writing a person's thoughts, it's better to use quotation marks for clarity.
"Communicating" is not the same as "to chat".You can be communicating through Morse code or body language. For social interaction, "talk to a person" is better.
"Alcoholic beverages" can be shortened to "alcohol." Native speakers generally prefer more concise terms, and "alcohol" sounds more natural.
The word "parties" is typically used with the verb "enjoy."
Use the noun "normalization," not the gerund "normalizing," in phrases like "the normalization of..."
"Deal with something" is often better than "face" because it implies active management or handling of a situation, whereas "face" can be more passive.
Come = move towards you
Go = move away from you
Avoid omitting the object in a sentence.
The common idiom is "Long story short," not the full phrase "To make a long story short."
"I managed to get it done" is used for completing a specific task, similar to "managed to cope."
In programming contexts, you "build a feature," not "create" one, and you "review" files, not "analyze" them.
The word "competition" is used without an article. For example, "in competition with..."
A more natural phrasing is, "It's not my style to choose the easy way," rather than "choose something easy."
In hypothetical or "unreal" conditional sentences, use "were," not "was." For example: "If my path were easier..." This is similar to "If I were...".
The word "unfreedom" does not exist.
Use the plural "choices" because having options implies there is more than one choice.
"Option" is more common and natural than "variant."
Instead of "in another way," use "differently." For example, "Cats see the world differently." It sounds more natural.
"Homeless" is an adjective. Using it as a noun (e.g., "the homeless") can be considered offensive. It's better to say "homeless people."
The word "fundament" is outdated; use "fundamental" instead. For example, "Chaos is fundamental in the world."
Sept. 27, 2025
Food-delivery apps and kitchen
Food-delivery is often touted as the dealth of kitchen.Reserach from London School of Economics study shows that more than a half people in today society prefer clean and healthy diet.Compare to takeout food,the dishes cooked by themselves are favored by them.Food delivery industry is supposed to enhanced hygiene management.Compare to convenient life,a healthy lifestyle is what we truly need.
Sept. 27, 2025
My Fourth Day
I don't have much time to write every day, but I keep going toward my goal. Today I have some questions for you guys. I'd really appreciated, if you could reply. If you're not a native speaker, but you have C1 level of English, you passed exams IELTS etc., maybe you have good speaking skills, what did you do to achieve this level? What sources did you use for it? What motivated you to reach your goal?
Sept. 27, 2025
Hello
I want to become a public school teacher because I believe that education is the most powerful tool to transform lives. Teaching in the public school system will allow me to serve a diverse community of learners, especially those who need guidance, encouragement, and opportunities to succeed. As a teacher, I can contribute to the development of learners by providing meaningful and engaging lessons, instilling positive values, and creating a classroom environment where every child feels accepted and capable. Beyond the classroom, I will help society by shaping responsible, compassionate, and lifelong learners who can contribute to nation-building. Teaching is not only a profession for me—it is a calling to serve, inspire, and make a difference.
Sept. 27, 2025
Mein Arzttermin
Seit sechzehn Jahren ich habe viele Gesundheitsprobleme. In 2010 hatte ich Endometriumkrebs, und in 2016 hatte ich Gastrointestinaler Stromatumor (GIST). Der zweite Krebs ist immer noch ein Problem. Ich muss ein mal im Monate zu meiner Onkologin gehen. Meine Onkologin und die Krankenschwesterin sind sehr nett. Die Onkologin kann sehr gut Englisch sprechen, deshalb wir haben miteinander Englisch gesprochen. Aber das letzte Mal, haben wir Deutsch (Hochdeutsch, nicht Schweizerdeutsch) gesprochen, und ich könnte fast alles verstanden! Ich war so aufgeregt, weil ich habe nur seit 3 Monaten Deutsch in Ernt gelernt.
Sept. 27, 2025
The First Day of My Holiday
I got up so early to take the train to Quanzhou this morning that I felt tired and sleepy during the train ride.
I'm currently sitting in the hotel room, waiting for my friends. Maybe it's due to the delicious local food, I feel refreshed again.
The hotel we're staying at tonight belongs to the IHG. It was booked by one of my friends. Her husband likes international brands. I think she shares the same preference, even though she didn't agree.
I myself prefer local hotels with a good reputation, which are mostly new and with some special local decoration or food.
Sept. 27, 2025