I still remember in my childhood i prefer winterpreferring winter in my childhood. I still remember preferring winter in my childhood.

I still remember that in my childhood iI preferred winter. I still remember that in my childhood I preferred winter.

Back then there were still snowingy days, and iI would sometimes play outside with other kids. Back then there were still snowy days, and I would sometimes play outside with other kids.

Back then there were still snowingy days, and iI would sometimes play outside with other kids. Back then there were still snowy days, and I would sometimes play outside with other kids.

My father is an interesting man, and he always shows us, me and my little brother, thick ice blocks taken from a pool or river. My father is an interesting man, and he always shows us, me and my little brother, thick ice blocks taken from a pool or river.

My father is an interesting man and he always shows us, me and my little brother thick ice blocks taken from the pool or river. My father is an interesting man and he always shows us, me and my little brother thick ice blocks taken from the pool or river.

"us, me and my little brother" feels like a strange list to me, since "us" should include "me" already. If "us" is "me and my little brother", then I would leave out the "us". "...he always shows me and my little brother..." "Us" isn't usually used until there's a known group, either by context or because it was mentioned previously.

It's nowbeen snowing for years now, and iI do not like winter anymore. It's been snowing for years now, and I do not like winter anymore.

you could also write: It's now been snowing for years. Any's fine

It's now been snowing for years now, and i, so I do not like winter anymore. It's now been snowing for years, so I do not like winter anymore.

Instead, Autumn became themy new favorite seasone until a heart-breaking date. Instead, Autumn became my new favorite season until a heart-breaking date.

Instead, Aautumn became the new favorite one until a heart-breaking date. Instead, autumn became the new favorite one until a heart-breaking date.

Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two whole springs, so now my favorite part would be summer as at least, it's noseason is summer since it at least treatings me badly, isn't it?well Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two springs, so now my favorite season is summer since it at least treats me well

Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two whole springs, so now my favorite partseason would be summer as, because at least, it's not treating me badly, isn't it? Severe melancholy haunted me in the last two whole springs, so now my favorite season would be summer, because at least it's not treating me badly, isn't it?