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1. September
Heute wird in Russland Tag des Wissens gefeiert. Das ist traditionell das Datum, an dem das Schuljahr beginnt. Viele Leute wissen es nicht, aber russische Schüler haben Ferien das ganze Sommer. Generell finde ich das russische Schulsystem sehr interessant. Zum Beispiel, als ich in der Gymnasium war, hatten wir nur 15 Minuten zum Essen. Als ich es einem französischen Freund kürzlich erzählt habe, hat er mir gesagt, dass wenn es in Frankreich auch so wäre, die Schüler eine neue Revolution einrichten würden.
Von was ich mich erinnern kann, dauerten Unterrichte im Schnitt 7 Stunden. Ich hatte gute Noten, aber meistens nicht ausgezeichnete. Manche Lehrer und folglich Fächer haben mir nicht gefallen, beispielsweise Biologie oder Russisch. Interessanterweise hat mein Geschichtslehrer mehr zu meinem Interesse am Lesen beigetragen als meine Literaturlehrerin, weil ich nach dem Unterricht mit ihm über Bücher gesprochen habe.
Am größten hasse ich es, meine Zeit zu verschwenden. Leider gab es eine Menge davon in meiner Schule.
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Canicule
Cet été a été vraiment chaud. Ici au Japon, il fait 40 degrés. Je n’ai presque jamais connu une chaleur dépassant la température du corps. C’est une chaleur qui me donne l’impression d’être à Dubaï, au Moyen-Orient.
J’ai eu plusieurs fois des coups de chaleur et je ne me sentais pas bien. Cette canicule semble devoir durer encore quelque temps.
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Daily life: Part 15
Dr. Gupta:
To continue our discussion of the health benefits of good nutrition, I'd like you to consider the broader topic of eating habits--not just what people eat and drink, but how often, how much, and when. Those who want to improve their health often begin by changing some kinds of eating habits. This includes a wide range of behaviors. What is one poor eating habit that would be important for most people to change, and why?
Kelly:
If people could start with one change to improve their eating habits, it would be to eat a better breakfast. Most people are so rushed in the morning that they don't take the time to sit down and eat a balanced meal. A good breakfast gives you more energy all day and keeps you from eating too much later on.
Paul:
I think most people don't bother to learn much about the food that they eat. This ignorance is a kind of bad eating habit, It can be burdensome, but you should try to read every food package label. The more you can learn about what you're putting in your body, the more likely you'll be to make good decisions.
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Actually, Kelly and Paul make a good point that bad eating habits would harm people's health. In addition, I want to point out another bad eating habit that could decrease our health as well. It's a late-night snack. As we all know, recently, more people prefer to stay up all night, with the only thing on their minds is eating some junk food. such as a convenience noodle, spicy jerk, various snacks that could get on the online, or maybe order some food that includes a surplus of oil, which would let you weigh up! These junk foods must damage your health and make you get a common disease. especially causes stomach problems. Finally, you need to pay a lot of money on hospital. Don't take a toll on your health.
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Un mensaje para mi amigo.
¡Hola Mario! ¿Cómo estás?
He escuchado que tú vas a participar una competencia de maratón, ¡Qué te vas a bien! Por supuesto, también voy a participarla. Pero en este mes, no podría entrenar y correr en mi tiempo libre. Porque tenía mucho trabajo, es que entrenaba en gimnasio solo cinco veces. Tal vez, no podrá correr rápidamente en próxima competencia. Mi único objetivo será terminar la carrera.
Por otra parte, mi papá está muy bien. Ahora está trabajando en todos los días. Hace dos semanas, no podría levantarse de su cama por el golpe de calor. Nosotros íbamos a hospital enseguida, luego muy bien. Después de tomar agua con sal y comer mucha alimentación, recuperaba su cuelpo.
Gracias por su mensaje, hasta próxima competencia.
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Heinrich I. von England
Heinrich I. von England war der vierte und jüngste Sohn von Wilhelms dem Eroberen. Als sein Vater starb, bekamen seine Brüder Land erbten; Robert Normandie, Whilhelm England, aber nichts bekam Heinrich. Als Whilhelm starb, stieg schnell Heinrich, der zufällig zu dieser Zeit dort war, auf den Thron.
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Lunedì 1 settembre
È iniziato un nuovo mese e mi sento rinfrescata, pronta ad affrontare la settimana.
Ormai mi sono abituata ad avere una routine e ad andare in ufficio. Nonostante il tempo, mi assicuro sempre di andarci a piedi, così da fare la mia passeggiata quotidiana.
Prima di lavorare qui, credevo che sarebbe stato difficile tornare in ufficio, però alla fine mi ci sono abituata.
Stare lì è diventato come se chiudessi gli occhi e, in un attimo, fossi già a casa.
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How to speak fluently
Talk to yourself based on words or sentences you have learned in books, rephrasing those contents.
Rephrasing is not reciting, but speaking in your own words.
For example, I feel very happy because the book helps me a lot.
I found this book to be quite useful, cuz it contains contents that turned out to be composed of daily words and expressions.
I found it very nice to repeat the contents, and then I can retell the stories using the words I'm familiar with.
The Biblical stories written by Van Loon are highly recommended.
Make sure that you retell the stories at least 50 times.
You may not become fluent at first, but the more you repeat, the more fluent you will become.
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Digging for Sweet Potatoes
When I was a kid, sweet potatoes were grown in my village and served as our staple food.
In the area where I lived, sweet potatoes were harvested in late October or early November.
During the harvest, people would first cut off the sweet potato vines and then use cattle to plow the sweet potatoes out of the soil.
However, some sweet potatoes were always left in the fields. So, the children in the village, including me, would go to the fields to dig for them.
We carried a shovel and a basket to dig for the sweet potatoes. After digging up some, we liked to roast them right there in the fields.
First, we dug a small ditch and collected dry straw. Then, we placed the sweet potatoes along the edge of the ditch, put the straw inside the ditch beneath them, and lit the straw to roast them.
After roasting the sweet potatoes for about twenty minutes, we placed them in the ditch and covered them with the soil we had dug out earlier.
About ten minutes later, the roasted sweet potatoes were ready to eat. They were delicious when cooked this way.
Digging for sweet potatoes was an exciting activity that children loved to do in the past.
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Who is coming?
Hello everyone its my first time here, I'm glad to let you know that you will see me around due to I want to improve my writing skills, the mean reason... I applied for back office role and I did not pass the writing test , that's make me a little sad you know... So I would like to ask for you help, I think that maybe is the style that could sound a kind of spaninglish or maybe make me lack some of vocabulary to sound more natural and fluent. What do you think? Im Mexican Im 29 years old and would like to work in to aviation envaroiment, flying a plane to be specific. I studied for a commercial pilot and my bigger dream is travel through the world, living exciting adventures.
Maybe I could try to answer interesting questions that you have on mind or I can change some histories with you guys.
I cant wait to read you back! Thank u (:
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教科書の質問：家から昼ご飯を持っていく習慣
あなたの国では、家から昼ご飯を持っていく習慣がありますか。いつ、どこに、どのようなものを持っていきますか。
はい、アメリカで家から昼ご飯を持っていく習慣があります。学校に昼ご飯を持っていく学生がいます。仕事場に昼ご飯を持っていく大人もいます。学生たちはランチバッグを持っていきます。食べ物を冷たいままの状態残っているために、保冷剤をランチバッグに入れます。仕事にランチバッグを持っていく大人がいますけど、昼ご飯をプラスチックバッグに持っていく大人もいます。
日本のもので、あなたの国でも人気があるものはありますか。それは、どうして人気がありますか。
アニメを見るから、ご飯、ゆで卵、から揚げ、や野菜は弁当箱の中に人気があるものはずです。アメリカでは学生たちがたいてい持っていくものはサンドイッチ、切ったリンゴ、サラだ、や牛乳です。、作りやすいし、両親が子供のために昼ご飯を詰めてあげるし、栄養的し、学生たちも早く食べられるのでその食事は人気があると思います。
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Mortar
When I was old enough to remember things, there was a mortar in the center of my village, and it was a place for people to gather, relax and socialize.
The mortar was made of stone. It was actually a stone cylinder, about 60 centimeters tall and 50 centimeters in diameter.
At the center of its top, the stone cylinder was hollowed out into a hemispherical space with a diameter of around 25 centimeters.
The pestle for the mortar was also made of stone—a hemispherical piece that matched the mortar. At the center of the flat side of the pestle, there was a small hole, which was used to insert a wooden stick as the handle of the pestle.
It was the only mortar in my village. People used it to remove grain chaff. For example, in May, the wheat would grow grains, though it was not fully ripe. At this time, people would pick the green wheat ears, put them in the mortar, and remove the chaff to make porridge or sweet fermented wheat.
When doing this, they would hold the wooden handle of the pestle with their hands, lift the pestle high first, and then hit the wheat ears inside the mortar hard. They repeated this process until all the chaff was removed from the grains.
Of course, the mortar no longer exists. I don't even know when it disappeared or where it is now.
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Meine Erfahrungen mit Deutsch und Kultur
Ich lerne Deutsch, damit ich die deutsche Kultur besser verstehen kann, besonders die Direktheit der Deutschen. Wenn ich Deutsch mit anderen Menschen spreche, bin ich direkter als wenn ich Französisch oder Englisch spreche, weil ich meine Meinung sagen kann, ohne andere zu beleidigen. Außerdem kann ich die Wahrheit sagen, und die Menschen schätzen das. Zum Beispiel kann ich sagen, dass ich nicht mit ihnen übereinstimme, besonders wenn wir über Politik diskutieren. Wenn ich über Politik mit anderen Amerikanern diskutieren möchte, wird es oft ein Konflikt, besonders innerhalb einer Gruppe. In den USA gibt es viele Schwierigkeiten bei Gruppendiskussionen über Politik, da einige Menschen strikt Republikaner oder Demokraten sind. Persönlich bin ich weder Republikaner noch Demokrat, also ist das oft peinlich. Ich glaube, die politischen Parteien in den USA sind restriktiv, und es gibt kaum Chancen für Parteien außerhalb des Mainstreams.
Aug. 31, 2025
Le film « Weapons »
Ce week-end Cineplex Odeon a eu une promotion. Une billette normal était $5.00. J’ai décidé de profiter de la promotion. Comme j’y allais seul, je pouvais choisir le film que je voulais. Après que j’ai lu des critiques, j’ai choisi, « Weapons « . Il était un film d’horreur et s’agissait de dix-sept enfants qui disparaissent mystérieusement et de l’enquête pour eux trouver. J’ai pensé que le film était captivant. Je le beaucoup apprécié.
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