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Sept. 9, 2025
9/8 (月) NCTからのへチャンのフルアルバムが出ちゃったについて
今日はやっとへチャンのアルバムが出ちゃった。周りのみんながすごく楽しみにしてて出たら嬉しかったよ。MV (タイトルのため) はカッコいいけど、評価にちょっと地味だった。ダメじゃないけど、かなりクリエイティブすぎる。古い絵を使うことがすごく好きなんで、コレオグラフィーは難しそうだ。曲は本当にいいだね。へチャンの好きな音楽をガチでみんなに示した。ただのアイドルより珍しいアーティストだなと思う。アルバムのジャンルは90's R&Bがあるだけではなく、Neo SoulとかContemporaryとか。本当にMicheal JacksonとJustin Timberlakeからのそういう音楽がすごく好きそうだよ。とにかく、CRZY／ADRENALINE／Love Beyond／WYN?って曲がめっちゃ好きだ。CRZYやばい (笑)。
Sept. 9, 2025
Sept. 8, 2025
The book which i read this summer
My italian teacher gave us to read 3 book for summer holidays, in particular i liked one of them. The title is the norman wife and it's a historic book. It talks about a story of the queen Costanza D'altavilla. Before she was a nun but his father forced her to marry Enrico Di svevia. Costanza hated him because he was a crude man and also he hated her because she was older then Enrico and also she couldn't have children. Costanza wanted with all her heart a child and at the end of the book was born Federico their son. Costanza was very brave ,all the court hated her and her baby because she was unconventional woman . When the baby was born Enrico died and after 3 years also Costanza died but the child grew up with the populance.
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Sept. 8, 2025
Where to Read, That Is The Question 本をどこで読むのか問題
As a bookworm, I'm dissatisfied that I don't have a chair suitable for reading. I love being able to read in a relaxed posture, with my neck and arms comfortable. A dining chair or a desk chair can do the job, but they are far from perfect. Reading in bed is cozy, but it often leaves me with a stiff neck or makes me sleepy.
Ideally, a sofa would solve the problem. However, I haven't seriously considered buying one because it could be expensive and it might get in the way when I vacuum.
For now, my favorite solution is reading in the bathtub while using the lid as a makeshift desk. Surprisingly, I can concentrate really well for short periods, though my books do end up a little wrinkled.
Sept. 8, 2025
Sept. 8, 2025
Mein Tag
Heute bin ich um 11 Uhr aufgestanden (genau sehr spät). Ich weiß nicht warum, aber ich war erschöpft. Ich dachte zunächst, dass ich nur müde war, wegen der gestrigen Aktivität (Grillen), aber spät in der Nacht habe ich unter starke Halschmerzen gelitten. Jetzt weiß nicht, ob ich eine Erkaltung habe oder... Nun, ich habe gegen 11 Uhr mit meinem Freund frühstücken (er hatte alles schon fertig) und dann haben wir auf dem Sofa gessesen, um Kaffee gemeinsam zu trinken, während wir Anime angeschaut haben. Mein Freund musste heute um 14 Uhr arbeiten, sodass er gegen 13 Uhr angefangen hat, um er sich für die Arbeit vorzubereiten, während ich ihm das Essen in einer Tupperware servierte. Als er die Wohnung verließt, habe ich die Wohnung aufgeräumt und habe mich geduscht. Um 16 Uhr habe ich mit dem Lernen angefangen. Jetzt mache ich nur ein C1-Kurs, sondern auch vorbereite ich mich für die Fachspracheprüfung, die ich am Ende Oktober abgelegt wird.
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Sept. 8, 2025
Est-ce que la romance est morte? Ma commentaire
Dans ce vidéo de la chaîne Assiarabian,
il s'agit de la perception de l'amour aujourd'dui dans le ouest et de la rôle que les reseaux sociaux jouent.
Sur les r.s. le concept de l'amour est
devenu tout superficiel. Tout ce qui
compte est "gagner" la validation et l'admiration de quelqu'un et manipuler des gens pour recevoir ceci. Selon les normes sociales contemporaires, la plupart de gens ne veut pas aimer, mais ils veulent être aimés et attirants.
Nous sommes aussi influencés par le système capitaliste dans cet égard parce que l'amour devient und chose à acheter. Il est profitable alors nous nous plaçons
dans un marché pour vente et nous
attendons un échange égal. Ça fait reigné aussi au concept de ne pas devoir
se changer pour personne parce que si elle ne t'aime pas c'est parce qu'elle ne te mérite pas et pas à cause
de ta conduire.
Erich Fromm soutenue qu'en realité l'amour nécessite de la discipline, de la considération, de l'engagement, de la patience, du respect et de l'empathie.
On dois se rappeler que les r.s. sont
une "hyperrealité": un endroit qui est
confondu avec la réalité véritable.
Tous les moments montrés sur l'internet sont choisis pour montrer une image élaborée. De plus, ça ce qui est publié est là plus obtenir une réaction quelle qu'elle soit. En bref: ce n'est pas réel.
Sept. 8, 2025
Wise - Fintech App
I have a new assignment from 1st October in UK, while I am living in Germany now. Last week, I visited London and decided my new flat, making a preliminary contract with a real estate agent. The agent requested me to place a holding deposit. That’s why I transferred the money from my bank account with a German local bank by using Wise App. Making several taps, I could smoothly transfer the money to the real estate agent. It’s a really amazing experience of fintech app. I will continue to use this app after moving to London.
Sept. 8, 2025
My Day
Today, it was the start of the week so I went to school. I saw my friends so that was cool. I had lucnh with other friends from other classes at midday. It was cool, we ate at the Mcdo. I was just a bit sad because I had a sport class but we didn't do sport because we had to choose a menue to determinate what we will do during the year (different activities). So I choose a menu with 3 x 500 metters (run), dance (I don't like it but it may will be funny) and volley (I don't play often but I love this sport) and I will do sport class with friends so it is very cool. Globally, it was a good day.
Sept. 8, 2025
Sept. 8, 2025
Heinrich II. 3
Gottfried, ein Bruder von Heinrich II., marschierte an Ludwigs Seite in die Normandie ein. Heinrich zwang seinen Bruder zur Kaptulation, und Ludwig wurde krank. Ein Waffenstillstand wurde dann geschloßen. Heinrich marschierte in England ein, weil die Krise auf dem Kontinent wurde überwunden.
Sept. 8, 2025
La cascada
Ayer fue domingo, y me quedó con algun tiempo libre que no había estado esperando. Decidí irme a un sendero cerca de mi universidad, que termina a una cascada. Hoy en día, estoy estudiando en una universidad en las montañas. Una de las cosas que me re gusta de vivir allá es el aceso a la naturaleza. Orginialmente vengo de las afueras de una ciudad en el "Midwest" de EEUU. En otras palabras, el lugar más aburrido de todo el mundo. La realidad es que me re encantó crecerme allí. La gente fueron re lindas, me hice amigos re queridos, y me presentó con tantas oportunidades de que siempre estoy agradecido. Pero eventualmente, me di cuenta de que chiquita fue la burbuja en que estaba viviendo, y me dió ganas de escapar. Por eso, decidí alejarme de mi ciudad de nacimiento para experienciar algo nuevo.
Como ya mencioné, me encanta ser capaz de pasar un toque en la naturaleza cuando quiera, y el sendero a la cascada es uno de mis favoritos en el area. Debajo de la cascada, hay una laguna donde se puede meter. El agua viene de la nieva en las cimas de las montañas así que usualmente corro hasta allá para calentarme un poco antes de me meto. Pero mi rodilla me ha estado doliendo hace algunas semanas, y ayer solo andé. No hacía sol y, cuando llegué a la laguna, que está en las alturas, el aire me hice temblar.
Usualmente hay un montón de gente allá, pero por alguna razón no había. Porque siempre dicen que meterse en agua frío es saludable o algo así, decidí que iba a meterme. Este es donde me equivoqué por primera vez.
Había planeado quedarme en el agua hasta dos minutos pero, despues de me zambullí adentro y contacté ese agua, fue un desafío lograr aún 30 segundos. Me tiré del agua, temblando de frío, y me apuré hacia mi mochila donde estaba mi toalla. No me había dado cuenta de que hora fue y, de repente, el sol se ha desaparecido. Me sequé y puse mi camisa, todavía con tanto frío como un cadáver, y empezó caminar hacia el estacionamiento. Desafortunadamente, seguí el sendero incorrecto (yo lo culpo al hecho de que no podía pensar con tanto frío), y me encontré completamente perdido en el bosque, sin recepción, ni comida, ni un idea de donde estuviera. Además, en este momento todo fue oscuro.
Hice algunos "jumping jacks" para recircular el sangre, con el idea de que ese me calentaría bastante para pensar un poco más claro. Eventualmente, con el luz de mi móvil, me navigué al sendero correcto, y escapé del bosque. Y todo el tiempo lo que estaba pensando fue: este será el tema perfecto para un post en LangCorrect.
Ojalá que mis errores (en la gramática y en el sentido común) te hayan hecho reír. Por favor compartí algunas correcciones o consejos para sonar más nativo. Espero con ganas leerlas.
Nota: Mi novia y varios de mis profesores son Argentinos así que he adoptado un poco eso dialecto.
Sept. 8, 2025
Sept. 8, 2025
Fancy restaurant
The last weekend was the birthday of my wife. She wanted to go a fancy restaurant in near city.
Arrived there was empty, beautiful place with excellent food but expensive. However the waiters were slow, everything took time. In the time to close the bill it was the big confusion, order written wrong, unreal discounts. I don't go there anynmore.
Sept. 8, 2025
I modi di studiare l'italiano (parte1)
L'inglese ha un metodo consolidato per la spiegazione della grammatica come i cinque tipi di frasi (SV,SVC,SVO,SVOC e SVOO), e della pronuncia.
Ma nel libro di grammatica italiana in Giapponese è scritto solo che la frase principale italiana è SVO.
Esistono gli italiani che parlano giapponese , ma la lingua italiana è ancora una lingua difficile da apprendere in Giappone.
Sept. 8, 2025
What are some characteristics of your personality?
I am open and friendly. I am both an extrovert and an introvert. I like being with friends, but I also like being alone. I make time for my friends, my family and of course for myself. I often talk and laugh with my family. I often meet my friends at school. I spent a lot of time with them in the summer. We went running together, ate gyros, walked around the city. I like being alone, I listen to music, read books and learn a lot. I am really confident and optimistic. I always try to think positively.
Ont he whole, I am satisfied with myself. But I wasn't like that before. I had no self-confidence, I didn't have many friends and I didn't have a good relationship with my family. I wasn't happy with myself and I was always comparing myself to others. But I realized these mistakes and started to improve myself. I learned a lot from my mistakes and my past. Now I have self-confidence, high self-esteem and I have dreams that I want to achieve. I struggle to achieve my goals. I hated math and chemistry, but after I decided to start learning everything from scratch over the summer, I realized that I really like math and chemistry. You just have to make time for it in your free time. I can distinguish important things from unimportant things. For example, I studied math instead of TikTok. My friends say that good sence of humor. I always enjoy making someone’s day better. I get on well with people. I always try stand ap for myself. I am sporty and I ofen do any exercise. I am organized. I don’t like put off somethings, it's better to learn things as soon as possible. I always take advantage of new opportunities. I used to be a perfectionist. I felt bad if I didn't do the things I planned that day. But now I've managed to fix this mistake too. Not only do I study all the time, but I'm also with my friends. They are my relaxation. It’s not so easy to break your bad habits but i’ve succeeded. I was addicted to social media, but I break a habit.
Sept. 8, 2025
What do you look like? Could you distribe yourself?
I’m a teenager of 16 my higt is average, 168 cm and I’am slender, I weigh 54 kg.
I used to be even thinner than this. But regular exercise and a protein-rich diet restored my figure. I’m glad put on weigh some kg. I have got long, straight, thik dark brown hair. I wear my hair ponytail, bob of hair and braided hair. I have never dyed my hair blonde. I know it wouldn't look good. I have got greenish brown eyes. I have a very special eye color. I like it. (Dzseni has it too). As for my face, it’s oval. My eyebrows are arched.
For makeup, I use mascara to highlight my eyes and eyebrow pencils because I fell from a tree when I was little child and there is a scar on my eyebrow. I only use make up. Sometimes my forhead is pimply. This often happens during adolescence.
I setisfied my hair. I go hairdresser twice a year. I wach my hair once a week. It doesn't fall out and just gets a little greasy. I love my hair. I often wear it in a bun and loose. Sometimes I add cute clips.
Sept. 8, 2025
intoduction
I would like to introduce myself in a few word. My name is Boglárka Baranyai, but my friends call me Bogi. I have second name Hanga, but I don’t use it.
I’m from Hungary and I live in Nyírbátor.
I’m 16 years old. I was born in 2009 in Debrecen and my birthday is on the 11th of April.
I am fram Hungary, and I am Hungarian.
I can speak thee languages. Hungarian, that’s my native language, English, which I have been learning for 2 years now, and German I have been learning for 6 years.
My mother speaks English a little, but she speaks German very well. She have German intermediate language exam. My brother and my sister are learning English at school.
I live at 16 Martinovics street, Nyírbátor.
i’m a student. I go to Báthory István Catholic Primary School and High School in Nyírbátor.