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Marathon
Tomorrow morning, a marathon event will be held in my city. This event has been held in my city for three years (including this one).
This marathon consists of four parts: five - kilometer happy running, ten - kilometer elite running, half marathon, and full marathon.
The five - kilometer happy running is extremely popular. When the registration opens, all the spots are filled within just two minutes. The participation limit for the happy running is set at only five thousand people.
In the happy running group, most participants are families—parents accompanied by their children. When the children are too young to run on their own, parents often place them in baby carriages and pull them along.
The participants in the marathon come from diverse backgrounds. There are men and women, young and old, as well as some disabled individuals. In the first marathon, I witnessed a young disabled man in a wheelchair exerting great effort to move forward by rotating the wheels.
In last year's marathon, Li Meizhen, a member of the Chinese national marathon team, participated in the ten - kilometer elite race and won the championship. She is not only a remarkable athlete but also quite charming.
One of my classmates from specialized technical secondary school, Zhao Wenjing, who is in his sixties, has taken part in numerous marathon events across various cities in China. Despite his short and thin stature, which is considered an ideal build for marathon running, he always participates in marathons with his wife. For him, these marathon trips serve as a form of travel.
I am planning to watch the marathon tomorrow morning. I enjoy the sight of runners filling the streets and the sound of the audience's enthusiastic cheers. It's truly an exhilarating experience, and I'll be there with my wife.
April 19, 2025
Wie kann man die Motivation aufrechterhalten?
Heute hatte ich keine Lust, Deutsch zu lernen. Ich habe nur fünf neue Wörter entdeckt und ein paar grammatische Regeln wiederholt. Jetzt habe ich auch keine Lust, dieser Aufsatz zu schreiben. Manchmal gibt es solche Tage und es ist notwendig, zumindest etwas zu machen. Aber es ist auch notwendig, nicht zu übertreiben mit dem Lernen, um kein Burnout zu haben. Jetzt werde ich mit jemandem auf Deutsch sprechen und es muss mir helfen.
April 19, 2025
Today's diary
I published my first passage yesterday.At first,I thought no one would noticed it,but I received very careful correction and kind encouragement,which made me raise up and inspired.Thank you!
I woke up in the afternoon today,because last night I listened audio drama too late.I felt really hungry so I quickly went to the canteen to have something to eat.I had 麻辣烫 today.I don't know how to say that in English.In sort,it's a delicious food. You can pick up what you like to eat and put it in a big plastic basin,then give the waiter to cook it.
After I finished my lunch,I walked to dormitory.And I found the fruit shop next to our dormitory started to sale watermelon which is my favorite fruit.So I bought one,it coast me 14rmb!I thouht it was a little expansive cause it was only half and small.As usual, I can buy a big whole one and pay 10rmb in June and July......
Now,i'm scooping watermelon and typing, I feel cozy and relax.
April 19, 2025
April 19, 2025
Schwimmen gehen
Wir werden schwimmen gehen. Zuerst muss ich ein List machen, für die Dinge, dass ich nehmen muss.
1. Ein Badeanzug.
2. Ein Badetuch.
3. Kleidung für morgen, weil wir in mein Onkel Haus schlafen werden.
4. Mein Kindle, für den Fall, dass ich lesen will.
5. Ein Zahnbürste.
6. Sandalen.
7. Sonnencreme.
April 19, 2025
April 19, 2025
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
Martedì, 11 febbraio 2025
Martedì, 11 febbraio 2025
Oggi è una festa giapponese. Ho tradotto cinque pagine di ‘Perry’. È molto difficile. Ho suonato il violoncello per un'ora, poi ho comprato del cherosene. Il benziaio è stato così maleducato!
"Sposta la macchina lì!" mi ha sbottato. "Lì, più presto! ... Togli i serbatoi dalla macchina! Toglili fuori!" Certo non ho fatto niente. Non è il mio lavoro, e non mi piace essere sgridato.
"Non mi ha sentito!?" mi ha abbaiato di nuovo l'uomo.
Non ho detto niente, ma gli ho lanciato un'occhiata maligno, 'l'occhiata del gaijin.' Gaijin significa 'straniero' in giapponese. È come il malocchio. Il vecchio li ha tolti, li ha riempiti (è il suo lavoro, dopotutto!) Li ha rimessi nella macchina senza parola di più. Ho pagato e ho guidato via.
Il servizio giapponese è di solito eccellente. I giapponesi sono (quasi) sempre educati e amichevoli. Questo tipo, no. È stato davvero uno stronzo! Non andrò mai più a quella stazione di servizio. Non mi interessa quanto sia economico o comoda. Non mai più!
April 18, 2025
City Flower
In China, most cities have their “city flower”-a famous local flower representing the city.
My city-Fuyang, in Anhui Province, also has its flower-the Chinese rose, which is the best flower in my area.
These days, I suddenly notice that the flower is blooming and at its best. I don’t even know when the Chinese roses started to bloom; it seems like they bloomed overnight.
This flower in Chinese is 月季. The first Chinese character means month. It’s said that this flower can bloom every month, but I don’t know if this is true as I never tried to prove it.
The colors of the Chinese rose are various, which can be white, red, pink, yellow, orange, purple, etc. Some can be mixed colors.
Most of the flowers are planted along the streets, which are designed this way: a plant belt in the center of the street, and on both sides of the motor vehicle lane are two plant belts, separating the motor vehicle lanes and non-motor vehicle lanes. Pedestrian lanes are on the outmost part of the street where there are also two plant belts. Thus, there are at least five plant belts along the streets. Imagine the flowers on the five plant belts blooming. What a great sight the they are!
I am a little sad that I can’t post photos and videos about our city flower here. But I do believe that you can see them if you look for them on the internet.
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
我尊重谁？
我最尊重我朋友们。他们给我的生命意思，目的？我不知。特别是我台湾人的朋友。我最喜欢她，我们每天聊天。我欣赏她的性格，我每次微笑了。我们笑了一起，说笑话，等等。我有自由，我不担心。我可以说凡事，她不介意。但是有时我问自己 “为社么呢她很神秘？“。 至于她的性格，我学习着。我最喜欢他们的声音，真的可爱。我比她高，但是她比我大岁。 她几乎18岁。我几年17岁。有时，我整天不可以谈谈她。可惜。我们的5点上午是她的5点下午。另外，我平时有学校，所以我们整天不可以谈谈。她也有学校。说实话，我要旅行台湾。台湾像我老家，印度。是的，我是印度人，你是惊讶吗。反正，她不表示她的脸，她说她不漂亮。但是我不相信了。我觉得她真的漂亮。我只看看他们的身体。我不是变态，好了？不批评我。我只喜欢她的性格，我不在乎那种东西。 一天，我要旅行她。但是我没有钱。我没有工作。从11岁到 19 岁， 我不可以有。长故事。我不要说明为什么我不可以有。其实，我的朋友遇到马云，他有钱！我操。难以置信，其实，不可思议。好了，而已，我祝你们好运。拜拜
April 18, 2025
?מה אוהבת משחקת את
.אני אוהבת משחקת במשחקים כמו זלדה ופוקימון
זלדה מעניין מאוד לי כי החידות כיף ועושה לי חושבת מאוד. אחת המעדיפה שלי אורקל של האג'ס(עידנים). פוקימון כיף מאוד כי החמודות יצורים עושה לי שמח. אני אוהבת רואה של כל הם. גם הנסיעה כיף על הולכת. אחת המעדיפה שלי פוקימון בדולח. שניהם נוסטלגיים לי. חושבת שלהם עושה לי רוצה משחקים הם חחח
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
“Oppenheimer”
Recently, I watched the American film “Oppenheimer,” which depicts the life of the genius physicist, Oppenheimer, known as the father of atomic bombs. Despite its acclaim, I was hesitant to watch it as a Japanese person, as the atomic bomb he created devastated Hiroshima and Nagasaki in 1945. However, I believe this film is worth seeing now, as a war-loving dictator threatens to use nuclear weapons. After successfully detonating bombs in the war against Japan, Oppenheimer said, “I’ve become Death, I am now the destructor of worlds.” This suggests he may have repented of creating such a terrible bomb. All world leaders should heed these words and prevent the use and even production of nuclear weapons. Japan is the only country to have experienced nuclear disasters. The Japanese government must more strongly appeal for nuclear abolition. However, somehow, I cannot help but feel pessimistic about this issue.
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
～時
日本語の勉強のサークルと日本語の文法を話していました。「A時、B」というフォームを勉強しました。教科書には、「A時、B」の説明の中には、（英語ですみません）”If, at the time the main event B takes place, A is current or is still in the future, use the present tense in A”という点が一つです。練習問題の「日本に（行く・行った）時、旅館に泊まりたいです」と書いてあります。この文の状況には、今「私」はまだ日本に行ったことがなくて、日本に行こうと思っていて、今も日本に着いた後にも旅館に泊まりたいということだと分かりました。だから、「行く」が正しいと思ったが、教科書によると「行った」が正しいと書いてあるから、よく分かりませんでした。
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
Correo electrónico
Para: [email protected]
Asunto: Recomendación para la familia Croissant
Querida Ana,
Me llamo Ángela Velázquez y he sido la niñera para la familia Croissant en Francia por los últimos ocho meses. Me cuesta mucho a dejar la familia Croissant por su mudanza a Barcelona. Los dos niños, Michelle y René, tienen los tres y los cinco años, respectivamente. Michelle, la niña, le gusta jugar con las muñecas, dibujar y pasear con el perro, Blanche. Por otro lado, el niño René asiste una guardia durante la semana y juega el fútbol con sus amigos.
Por favor, toma en cuenta las necesidades únicas de los chicos. René tiene una condición médica, asthma, cuya condición requiere un medicamento que se llama el albuterol una vez al día vía la inhalación. Es importante que tengas el medicamento contigo por todo el tiempo. Además, Michelle tiene una alergia a los cacahuates. ¡ Absolutamente no puede comer la alimentación que ha tenido el contacto con los nueces! Para ella, siempre necesitas tener el EpiPen contigo en el caso de una emergencia con las vías respiratorias.
En definitiva, son los niños agradables y aventureros. Te recomiendo que puedas planear algunas viajes a los museos locales en Barcelona y asistas un partido de fútbol con ellos. Sea estricta con la rutina antes de dormir y les lea una historia o dos antes de apagar la luz. ¡No les des los dulces después de la tarde o los chicos nunca se duermen! ¡Les ame como sus propios hijos si puedas y les dé un abrazo enorme por mí!
Si tienes algunas dudas, escríbame a 888-888-8888 por WhatsApp.
Saludos y mucha suerte,
Ángela
April 18, 2025
April 18, 2025
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