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My Introduction and day off
Hello. How about today?
I’ll introduce myself and explain my day off.
First, I work as a Japanese government officer. I started it 3years ago. It’s very challenging for me, but I think that my work is highly rewarding! That’s because I can work in national government and feel dedication for my native and people. Honestly, sometimes my work that gives numberless hard tasks is exhausting to me. However, in this condition, I’m reminded to me that my work is helpful and informative for my country and people! Thanks to that, I continue to fight!
Second, let me explain my day off.
I usually spent my day off with my friends. For example, coming to drink or browse used clothing shops.
On the other hand, l like to stay home. It can be relax and care my body. I think it needs for me to do next week’s works.
Sept. 15, 2025
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming. It’s one of China’s traditional festivals.
I don’t know the origin of this festival. I only know some of its traditions.
The festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month in the Chinese calendar. This date usually falls in the middle of September in the solar calendar.
This festival is a time for people to visit their relatives, such as their maternal and paternal grandparents, uncles and aunts.
An indispensable gift when visiting relatives is mooncakes — a type of pastry made from wheat flour, nuts, dried fruits and sugar.
I don’t like eating mooncakes because they are too sweet. I always feel cloying after eating them.
Nevertheless, mooncakes have already become a symbol of this festival; without them, it wouldn’t feel like the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Thus, about one or two months before the festival, factories start producing mooncakes, which are then delivered to markets for sale. The prices of mooncakes also vary widely.
Every year for this festival, I don’t buy many mooncakes. I only buy a few high-quality ones for my family to taste.
Sept. 15, 2025
L’automne est arrivé
L’automne est arrivé, les station des buses sont de nouveau pleins d’élèves. Les journées s’écourtent. Les feuilles tombent. On est dans le neuvième mois de l’année. Comme c’est difficile d’accepter le passage de l’été. Les journées sont longes pleins du soleil, quand on se lève, le soleil est en haut, et même à neuf heures la lumières du jour est toujours visible.
Sept. 15, 2025
Mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätze
Mit der Zunahme der Urbanisierung und der Entstehung verschiedener Umweltprobleme stellt sich die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen. Diese Maßnahme bringt viele Vorteile mit sich. Als ein Vorteil lässt sich die Verbesserung der Luftqualität nennen. Außerdem führt die Schaffung mehr Grünflächen zur Senkung der Temperatur. Dies lässt sich dadurch erklären, dass Grünflächen Kohlendioxid absorbieren, was im Laufe der Zeit zu einer Reduktion der Treibhausgasemissionen führt und deswegen die durchschnittliche Temperatur sinkt. Ein weiterer positiver Aspekt wäre der Lebensraum für Tiere, wodurch die Biodiversität zunimmt. Darüber hinaus könnten mehr Grünflächen der Gesundheit dadurch förderlich sein, dass sie Menschen zum Sport oder Spielen sowie Verbringung der Zeit mit ihren Familien motivieren. Trotz der Vorteile der Grünfläche ist es zu berücksichtigen, dass in der heutigen Zeit das Bedürfnis nach Mobilität kontinuierlich steigt. Viele Menschen sind auf Autos angewiesen, weswegen der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration der Menschen auslösen kann. Außerdem kann dieser Mangel dazu führen, dass es eilig habende Menschen die Straßenregeln nicht mehr einhalten.
Die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen, lässt sich also nicht leicht beantworten. Einerseits fördert die Schaffung der Grünflächen die Gesundheit und das allgemeine Wollbefinden, andererseits könnte der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration und Wut der Menschen auslösen.Ein Vorschlag wäre die Förderung alternativer Verkehrsmittel wie Fahrrad ,Bahn, damit man sowohl die Probleme der Mangel an Parkplätzen lösen kann, als auch mehr Grünfläche schaffen kann.
Sept. 15, 2025
Aktuelles Spiel
Ich spiele aktuelle ein Konsolenspiel, das heißt "Bandle Tales". Ich denke, ich bin eigentlich süchtig danach, weil ich habe es gestern bis 4 Uhr gespielt.
Es gibt kein Kampf in dem Spiel. Ich sammele Zutaten oder Stoff und bastele etwas als Aufgabe.
Es ist sehr gemütlich zu spielen. Aber ich denke, ich habe es gestern übertrieben.
Ich würde heute Nacht früher ins Bett gehen.
Sept. 15, 2025
Dilbilgisini ihmal etmemek
Haftada bir kez, Türkçe Türk arkadaşla öğrenirim. "Yedi İklim" adlı bir kıtab kullanırım. Bu kitap kötü değil, sadece dilbilgisini öğretmez! Elbette mesele değil, çünkü bu arkadaş bana grameri açıklayabilir, sadece bana göre, Türkçe dilbilgisisiz öğretmek problematik. Nasıl birisi bir dili anlayabilir, eğer çalısmasını anlamasa? Cümleler ezberden, makine gibi tekrarlamak" "anlamak" anlamına gelmez. *
Aslında, tüm diller öğrenmesi için dilbilgisini ihmal etmemeyi tavsiye ediyorum, özellikle Türkçe için, cünkü Türkçe yapısı Hind-Avrupalı'kinden çok farklı — örneğin, ekleri kullanbilirmek gerçekten esas.
Sept. 15, 2025
I moved to the mountains.
The mountain looked serene in the early morning light. A cold sunshine left me feeling invigorated. I moved last week. That's why I don't write anything. Every morning I wake up, drink my coffee and just look at the mountains near my new house. The fresh scent of the mountain herbs envelops me. My mind as clear as never before. I'll live here all winter and I hope to buy a house on this magical ground.
Sept. 15, 2025
Memento
Vor mehr als einem Jahr habe ich mir zum ersten Mal den Film „Memento“ angeschaut. Obwohl schon relativ lange Zeit verstrichen ist, kann ich ihn seitdem nicht vergessen.
Er wurde von Christopher Nolan inszeniert und ist meiner Meinung nach einer, wenn nicht der beste, seiner Filme.
In der Handlung geht es um die Geschichte von Leonard, der unter eine rare Art Amnesie leitet: er ist unfähig, neue Erinnerungen zu gestalten und hat kein Kurzzeitgedächtnis. Mit Hilfe von Notizen, Fotos und sogar Tattoos versucht Leonard, den Täter seiner Frau zu finden. Doch wie kann er wissen, dass er das schon früher mehrmals nicht getan hat?
Trotz 25 Jahren seit der Veröffentlichung bleibt dieses Werk aus mehreren Gründen absolut einzigartig. Zum Beispiel gibt es keine lineare Erzählung, stattdessen folgt man zwei Erzählungen, eine von denen wird in umgekehrten Reihenfolge schwarz-weiß vorgestellt. Am Ende des Filmes treffen sich die beiden, und man erhält die Lösung zum Rätsel.
Sept. 15, 2025
Mi primera entrada
Hola todos!
Hoy escribo mi primera entrada en LangCorrect.
Yo estoy aprendiendo español durante un año.
Uso cuatros materiales diferentes para aprender.
Uso Duolingo para aprender palabras nuevas.
Hablo con mi maestra de español, Laura, en Preply cada miercoles durante una hora.
Recientemente, empezo usar "Dreaming Spanish" para practicar mi comprensión auditiva.
Y ahora, empezo usar esta plataforma.
Sept. 15, 2025
My dad's secret
When I was in primary school, I always thought my father's hair can't grey since,I haven't never seen him to barber shop nor dry his hair at our home. It wouldn't be surprising when teacher taught us greying of hair start when you reach 50 years old, I shouted "You're such a liar! not even single hair on my dad's head is grey!“ Everyone looked at me like I'm an idoit. I feeled embrassing but still believed what I said. That evening when my dad picked me up at the school, I immediately asked him "Dad, you haven't been dyed your hair, haven't you? your hairs are natural?" Dad turned his head and speak with confident "Son, where do you this's from? Of course, I dyed my hair. Who would want other to see his old hairs?" Since then, I learn that Teacher can be right sometimes.
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Sept. 15, 2025
Daily Life: Part 19
Qingdao will have a giant rain after two days. To be honest, most people don't like rainy days, because it will interrupt their plans. But for me, it is a good opportunity to get more money; there are some people who need to be sacrificed. Why not me? I feel honored that I could help another person during a rainy day. maybe they are aged, paralyzed, or children. I have to say that these people need to pay attention to take care of themself. Since I decided to be a temporary deliver, I need to respond. Also, I have ordered a raincoat and anti-slip slippers for myself. I prepared everything that I think I need to have on a rainy day. ok, now, I'm about to go home and take a shower. Chatting with my parents about what's happened today. At the end of the day, I wish all of you guys having a good one!
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Sept. 15, 2025
No tempo da Maria Cachucha
Encontrei num website 55 expressões que se são crendo a ser usadas no dia a dia dos portugueses. Não sei se seja a verdade. Não tenho a certeza de como usar algumas delas na conversa. Vou inventar as situações com essas expressões, uma a uma, para provar se as compreendo corretamente.
1. Duas amigas encontram-se depois do longo tempo.
- Olá! Como estás? Não nos vemos há séculos.
- Que surpresa! O que fizeste com o teu cabelo? Onde é que o teu rabo-de-cavalo?
- Ha-ha, foi no tempo da Maria Cachucha. Cortei há uns meses.
Pode ser usada assim?
Sept. 15, 2025
Un stent
Peter n’a que 43 ans. Il est marié et a deux petits garçons. Peter était en bonne santé, ni gros ni trop lourd. Il est travailleur indépendant et j’imagine qu’il travaille de longues heures. Ayant une jeune famille, je me doute bien qu’il a beaucoup de temps de soit se détendre soit faire des exercices.
La semaine dernière, il s’est plaint d’une douleur au bras. Sa femme a immédiatement appelé l’ambulance. Peter a été rapidement transporté à l’hôpital. Aux urgences, le médecin a prescrit de nombreux examens car il soupçonnait que c’était une crise cardiaque.
Bien que le résultat de la majorité de ces examens soit négatif, le médecin n’était pas satisfait et il a prescrit un autre examen, plus sophistiqué. Le résultat était que Peter avait deux artères bouchées et le chirurgien a posé deux stents.
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My trip to Switzerland: Day 3, afternoon
After the hike at the First, my wife and I headed back for the cable car station at the main tourist area in Grindelwald. We were tired, but we sticked to our original plan of a hike at Meannlichen. We took a trail called Panorama Hiking Trail, that took us around 2 hours to Kleinen Scheidegg. In the middle of the trail, we saw a herdsman guiding a herd of cows with their herding dogs and a procession of them walking in the opposite direction. It was my very first time to see herding and a very pleasant experience for us. The view from the trail was also scenic and by far exceeded my expectation. After the trail, we headed back to the main station in Grindelwald in which we could find a train to go to the nearest station to our hotel. I was filled with the satisfaction with the pleasant hike, but I was also a bit pissed off by one difficult-to-understand event. When we were heading to the main station, I passed by a shop to buy a cigarette as there was a smoking stand. When I was about to lid fire on a cigarette, a cashier who rang up the sale of the cigarette took away the stand which was right in front of me. I was a bit offended, because I saw a pile of ash on the stand and felt like that cashier intentionally took it away so I cannot smoke there. We actually had a bit of difficulty in communication when I bought the cigarette and that might have annoyed or irritated the cashier, but I am pretty sure I tried to keep behaving in the best way I can do. I anyway tried not to be obsessed with this too much, because I didn't want to let this event, regardless which person was bad, ruin all the great experiences I had so far on this day. After the train, we grabbed some delis at a supermarket and ate them in our room of the hotel. We also went to a self-service pub nearby our hotel. Pouring beer by myself was much fun and all beers I tried were delicious. I was glad that the day was over with this nice new experience.
Sept. 15, 2025
Dîner avec nos amis
C’était une soirée très géniale. Nous avons été invités à dîner chez nos amis. Nous nous entendons très bien et nous sommes amis depuis 40 ans. Nous avions travaillé dans le même hôtel et dans la même année nous avions déménagé à l’Australie.
Nos enfants ont le même âge et pendant leur enfance nous avions fait beaucoup de vacances ensemble. Maintenant, nos filles sont adultes et elles vivent dans une autre ville, mais notre amitié continue et nous nous voyons souvent.
À 18:30h, nous sommes allés chez nos amis. Ils vivent dans la banlieue voisine, seulement 15minute à vol d’oiseau. Comme j’ai remarqué, nous travaillions dans un hôtel et ils étaient chefs professionnels. Comme toujours, le repas était délicieux. Nous avons parlé de tout et de rien et la soirée s’est terminée en beauté.
Sept. 15, 2025
Nettoyage de printemps
Officiellement, le printemps a débuté le premier septembre. Bien qu’il soit printemps, il fait encore froid. Malgré la météo j’ai le pas vif et léger. Cette hiver a été rude et les jours étaient nuageux et gris. De plus, il pleuvait beaucoup.
Ce week-end, j’ai décidé de faire un grand nettoyage, un « spring clean » comme on dit en anglais. Je suis consciencieuse et fais le ménage régulièrement. Je passe la serpillière et l’aspirateur, je nettoie les salles de bains, les chambres et la cuisine.
En ce qui concerne le nettoyage de printemps, en plus, je vais nettoyer des fenêtres, ranger des étagères et des placards. Je possède des vêtements que je ne porte plus et j’ai l’intention de les donner à und boutique caritative. Oui, le week-end sera chargé mais enrichissant.
Sept. 15, 2025
Day 1
I started this app for level up of my English skill especially writing.
Anyway, I think you need self-introduction.
I'm a college student in Japan. And I'm learning English because I want to get high score of TOEIC.
Do you know TOEIC? This is an English exam which is famous in Japan.
TOEIC is consisted of four skills. Listening, Reading, Speaking, and Writing.
Maybe, it's too hard but I'll do my best!!
Sept. 15, 2025
family
My parents are in their fourties. Both my mom and dad are 42 years old. I love my parents very much. They are funny and I feel good with them. But sometimes they are very strict. If I meet friends they want me to be home by 8 pm. And they don't let me go to school in clothes that I like. They are strict, but I know that they only do this for my good and because they are worried about me.
Usaully it is my mother who i get on better with. She is very understanding and helps me with a lot of good advice. I also talk to my father about problems, but less often because he works a lot.
My parents get on well with each other. They discuss everything together, if they don’t have the same opinion, they try to reach an agreement without an argument. They love each other and they love me very much. They are very nice parnts.
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family
I love my siblings very much. If there is a problem, we talk about it. We laugh a lot together at family dinners. We may be siblings, but each of us has a different personality. I don't think I want to change the current situation. I really love my siblings and I get along well with them.
My parents divorced 10 years ago. My mother had a great responsibility to raise three children alone. But she was only a single mom for a few years. She met my foster father 7 years ago and we have been living together ever since. They got married two years ago. I quickly fell in love with my new father. His name is László Kovács. He's a very good dad. He has very good sense of humor. He loves us very much. He supports and helps us. He can always make me laugh. He is sometimes nervous about his work, I can understand him. It is difficult to work in 3 shifts.
My mother is pretty and beautifull women. She’s medium leight. She’s got blond, cury hair and greenish brown eyes. She heart of gold. Basically I take after my dad in looks, but I have got mother’s character. We atre both very affecttionate. She can always make me laugh. There are a lot of features I admire in her as person, such as how organized and responsible she is, how loving and caring she is towards her family and others. Sheis very family-oriented: her most importent aim is to have a happy family. She does everything for us. She is really unselfish she never thinks about herself, but alwys thinks of other people first. I wish you would take care of yourself more.
Sept. 15, 2025
Family
The most important word in my life is family. I love my fmily. So when I hear this word I think of peolple who are happy thogether, who love each other. I think of mum, dad, sister, brother, grandparents, aunt, uncle, and cousins. They are the people who I can rely on when I need them. I know that my family will always be there for me. We support each other.
I have a big family, we are five: my mother, my father, my brother, my sister and myself.
I have a sister and a brother.
My sister is 2 years younger than me. Our personalities are completely different. She is lazy and grumpy. While I am hardworking and persistent in my goals. I try to guide her on the right path. We are different but we still understand each other well. When she is sad, I always try to comfort her and give her good advice.
My brother is a year older. There is not much of an age difference between us. I used to not get along with him. We had a lot of disagreements and fights. But over time, I have come to like him more. We have a lot in common and we help each other achieve our goals. We share our problems and help each other. Our taste in music is similar.
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