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Sept. 16, 2025
新学期の初日 (今週の話)
(I tried to make it sound like an elementary kid wrote it)
Lots of things happened today! I was so excited because it was the first day of school! I woke up early, ate breakfast, put on my uniform. I left the house at 8:30am and headed to school. There was surprisingly a lot of people. The gym got hot so they opened all the windows. The teachers introduced themselves one by one. I think all the teachers were nice. I met up with my friend and told him "You're short as always" and he really got mad at me.
After school, I went to the store and bought cheap tea. When I got home my mom told me "Close the door properly!". Then she told me "Eat your dinner, if you leave any it'll be a problem". Recently, Ive been sleeping as soon as I eat my dinner. My mom knows this, so she tells me "Hurry and eat!" as soon as I come home. I guess me being asleep is easier for her.
Sept. 15, 2025
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (3/12)
L'hiragana si usa per le parole dell'origine giapponese.
Il katakana si usa per le parole di origine straniera.
Questa regola non è 100 per cento, ma generalmente sì. Non è troppo difficili da imparare l'hiragana e il katakana. I caratteri sono molto coerenti e solo una lettera può essere letta in due modi. "は" è "ha" o "wa" a seconda del contesto. In teoria i giapponesi possono scrivere tutto usando solo questi due alfabeti. I libri per bambini sono spesso scritti in questo modo.
Però ...
In addizione dell'hiragana e del katakana la lingua giapponese usa una forma adattata di caratteri cinesi,
chiama "kanji" o "caratteri cinesi." Non sono esattamente gli stessi caratteri usati nei paesi cinesi (Cina, Taiwan, Hong Kong ecc.), ma sono simili. I cinesi possono spesso capirli anche se non parlano giapponese.
I kanji sono difficili ...
Sept. 15, 2025
ein bisschen mehr über Fast Fashion
Um noch ein wenig mit dem Thema von gestern fortzufahren: Fast Fashion.
Ich habe gestern schon erwähnt, dass diese Produkte aufgrund ihrer Qualität schnell im Müll landen.Ein weiteres Problem ist, dass die Herstellung dieser Klamotten riesiger Ressourcen verbraucht. Dabei wird auch viele Chemikalien verwendet, die in Grundwasser landet werden und folglich in Wasserverschmutzung. Zulässt entsteht dabei eine schlechte Arbeitsbeziehung, trotzdem laut es, dass bei den High-End-Marke die Arbeitsbeziehung die Situation ist nicht anders. Es besteht trotzdem eine andere Möglichkeit. Welche? Morgen werde ich darüber schreiben. 😊
Sept. 15, 2025
Brainrot
Social media is declining our intelligence and critical thinking abilities?
Lately, I have been watching different videos and listening podcasts that talk about this. Social media is a huge community to learn (like this website) and share a lot information per second with the whole world, and at the same time those are the main problems. We do not have patience anymore, we want everything reduced in a 30 sec tik tok video.
We are no longer interested in youtube videos or quiet movies because we are not able to pay attention more than one minute without scrolling through our fyp. Also, maybe is something that just happens to me, but i can not read consciously like before. I try to read 30 pages, but it is difficult to understand all the letters and words, my brain just turns off during the process.
Going more deeply, human beings are losing their ability to love and understand each other. Nowadays, we live in a violent world where everyone is facing their own problems and does not have time to be empathetic or to worry about others. We want all, but now, not later. Quickly.
We do not want to fight or try anymore, if something does not happen like we planned it just not worthy of our attention.
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Sept. 15, 2025
Jag äter för mycket
Jag är på universitetet nu alltså behöver jag göra min egna mat. Det är inte så svårt men jag kan inte laga mat. Förut gjorde min familj alla att laga mat och jag åt bara det. Jag äter för mycket nu - särskilt ohälsa mat. Jag äter för mycket Pringles och brownies. Jag behöver äter mindre mat och den rätt mat.
Jag förstår mer svenska åtminstone. Jag tror att det är så i alla fall. Jag tittar på mycket svenska serie och YouTube och jag tror att jag förbättra mig varje dag. Men universitetet är svårt - jag använder vanligtvis svenska att klara. Det finns så många folk och jag känner inte mig någon alls. Jag gör en kurs på musik men jag är inte taggad om musik längre. Jag vet inte varför men det är inte så kult som innan. Kanske gjorde jag för mycket musik undrar sommaren. Jag vet inte. Jag borde fortsätta att göra musik dock eftersom min pappa vill mej att göra musik och han tänker att jag är duktig på det. Jag vet inte. Jag brukade att vilja att vara som Taylor Swift men jag är inte så taggad längre. Jag brukade att skriva många låtar men jag gör inte nu. Jag vet inte. Tack för att du läste.
Sept. 15, 2025
A Day Trip by the Shinkansen 新幹線での日帰り旅行
I took the bullet train this past weekend since I had some errands to run in a nearby prefecture. It was about a 90-minute trip.
On the way there, I sat in a non-reserved seat. It was so crowded that I barely managed to find a seat. After that, everything went smoothly. I had some local food at the station building, took a bus to my destination, and finished what I had to do.
On the way back, the non-reserved car was much less crowded, so I had no trouble finding a seat.
Although I’m the kind of person who finds traveling more of a hassle than a pleasure, it was still exciting to visit a new place, try food I don’t usually eat, and ride an unfamiliar bus line. At the same time, it was so exhausting that on the way back I popped a piece of chocolate into my mouth. Otherwise, I felt like I might have fainted.
I’ll be taking the bullet train again next month. This time it will be a longer ride, so I’m planning to get a reserved seat. I would also like to enjoy a meal on the train.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Las cosas que perdimos en el fuego
Mi amiga de Argentina me ha prestado su libro que se llama ‘las cosas que perdimos en el fuego’ es una colección de historias cortas. Ayer empecé a leer el libro y la primera historia se llama ‘el chico sucio’. Se trata de una mujer que vive el barrio Constitución en Buenos Aires, sus padres creen que está loca porque vive en ese barrio peligroso pero á ella le gusta vivir ahí. Sus vecinos son una madre y su hijo que son pobre. Una noche el chico llamaba a la puerta de la mujer y decía que tenía hambre, la mujer le daba comida y le compraba un helado. Cuando regresaron de la heladería la mama del ‘chico sucio’ fue muy enojada con la mujer porque no sabía que hizo ella con su hijo.
Algunas días después la policía ha encontrado a un chico matado/muerto. La mujer pensaba que era el chico sucio y se sentía mal porque no le cuidaba. Al final fue otro chico y …. no he leído más
Me parece muy interesante aunque todavía no he acabado con el capítulo.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
My Day
Today was the end of the week end so I went to high school and I saw my friends. I started with a spanish class and I had a test. I think I will have a great grade because I learnt my lessons and it was quite simple. After I had sports class but my teacher wasn't here. So, with a friend, we wanted in the gym (to work out) because he went there for 2 weeks. But we couldn't because I had to be 16 and I am fifteen. And the worse in that is that I will be sixteen tomorrow. But I'm going to sign up in another gym close to my friend's gym so we will can go there together.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
After vacation
It was the first day at work after my vacation. I thought it would be worse. However, although I have a tough task, I have done it.
My work is about constantly solving problems. I'm a developer. Code changes all the time. Sometimes you need to create a new feature and it means you should read a lot of code to make sure that your input wouldn't break anything. Additionally, you analyze files to keep code clear and understandable. For example, today I've worked on a component that I had made before, and because of new requirements I had to divide it into other components. I don't think my solution is great, but considering the circumstances, is better than it was or could be.
I often doubt myself as a developer. At least, I don’t have a diploma in Computer Science. My job is unofficial but it's all I could find without any experience. To be honest, it's not my style to choose something easy. There is a huge competition in IT. But I would be bored if my path was easier.
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Sept. 15, 2025
Turkish Language
As a native Turkish, I sometimes have difficulty explaning Turkish Language's detail to foreigner that what part of it is easy and what part of it is difficult. I will share this video with anyone who wants to learn Turkish's detail. I am so happy to see a non-Turkish evaluating this language. Additionally I want to point out another matter. Due to the difference between Turkish language and European Language, Turks have difficulty learning these languages. Because There is no articles and gender of words such as Italian, French, German etc and we, Turks, cannot understand how the articles are used and determined the correct articles by words. As far as I remember there is no specific rule what word is masculine or feminine.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Richard Löwenherz 1
Heinrich der Jüngere war schon storben, weshalb Richard Löwenherz, der der dritte Sohn von Heinrich II. und der beliebteste von Eleonore war, den Thron bestieg.
Er unternahm mit Philipp August den dritten Kreuzzug. Philipp versuchte Richard und seine Schwester zu verheiraten. Richard zustimmte aber nicht dieser Ehe.
Sept. 15, 2025
My Introduction and day off
Hello. How about today?
I’ll introduce myself and explain my day off.
First, I work as a Japanese government officer. I started it 3years ago. It’s very challenging for me, but I think that my work is highly rewarding! That’s because I can work in national government and feel dedication for my native and people. Honestly, sometimes my work that gives numberless hard tasks is exhausting to me. However, in this condition, I’m reminded to me that my work is helpful and informative for my country and people! Thanks to that, I continue to fight!
Second, let me explain my day off.
I usually spent my day off with my friends. For example, coming to drink or browse used clothing shops.
On the other hand, l like to stay home. It can be relax and care my body. I think it needs for me to do next week’s works.
Sept. 15, 2025
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming. It’s one of China’s traditional festivals.
I don’t know the origin of this festival. I only know some of its traditions.
The festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month in the Chinese calendar. This date usually falls in the middle of September in the solar calendar.
This festival is a time for people to visit their relatives, such as their maternal and paternal grandparents, uncles and aunts.
An indispensable gift when visiting relatives is mooncakes — a type of pastry made from wheat flour, nuts, dried fruits and sugar.
I don’t like eating mooncakes because they are too sweet. I always feel cloying after eating them.
Nevertheless, mooncakes have already become a symbol of this festival; without them, it wouldn’t feel like the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Thus, about one or two months before the festival, factories start producing mooncakes, which are then delivered to markets for sale. The prices of mooncakes also vary widely.
Every year for this festival, I don’t buy many mooncakes. I only buy a few high-quality ones for my family to taste.
Sept. 15, 2025
L’automne est arrivé
L’automne est arrivé, les station des buses sont de nouveau pleins d’élèves. Les journées s’écourtent. Les feuilles tombent. On est dans le neuvième mois de l’année. Comme c’est difficile d’accepter le passage de l’été. Les journées sont longes pleins du soleil, quand on se lève, le soleil est en haut, et même à neuf heures la lumières du jour est toujours visible.
Sept. 15, 2025
Mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätze
Mit der Zunahme der Urbanisierung und der Entstehung verschiedener Umweltprobleme stellt sich die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen. Diese Maßnahme bringt viele Vorteile mit sich. Als ein Vorteil lässt sich die Verbesserung der Luftqualität nennen. Außerdem führt die Schaffung mehr Grünflächen zur Senkung der Temperatur. Dies lässt sich dadurch erklären, dass Grünflächen Kohlendioxid absorbieren, was im Laufe der Zeit zu einer Reduktion der Treibhausgasemissionen führt und deswegen die durchschnittliche Temperatur sinkt. Ein weiterer positiver Aspekt wäre der Lebensraum für Tiere, wodurch die Biodiversität zunimmt. Darüber hinaus könnten mehr Grünflächen der Gesundheit dadurch förderlich sein, dass sie Menschen zum Sport oder Spielen sowie Verbringung der Zeit mit ihren Familien motivieren. Trotz der Vorteile der Grünfläche ist es zu berücksichtigen, dass in der heutigen Zeit das Bedürfnis nach Mobilität kontinuierlich steigt. Viele Menschen sind auf Autos angewiesen, weswegen der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration der Menschen auslösen kann. Außerdem kann dieser Mangel dazu führen, dass es eilig habende Menschen die Straßenregeln nicht mehr einhalten.
Die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen, lässt sich also nicht leicht beantworten. Einerseits fördert die Schaffung der Grünflächen die Gesundheit und das allgemeine Wollbefinden, andererseits könnte der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration und Wut der Menschen auslösen.Ein Vorschlag wäre die Förderung alternativer Verkehrsmittel wie Fahrrad ,Bahn, damit man sowohl die Probleme der Mangel an Parkplätzen lösen kann, als auch mehr Grünfläche schaffen kann.