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『オンライン学習とオフライン学習のどちらが良いか』というテーマについての意見文を書く
現在、テクノロジーの発展により、オンライン学習は一般的な教育方法となっています。しかし、オンライン学習とオフライン学習とどちらが学習の効率が高いかはよく議論されている問題です。個人的には、オフライン学習の方が好ましいと思います。
まず、オフライン学習では教師と生徒の間に直接インタラクティブな学習環境が生まれ、授業が理解しやすくなります。さらに、インタラクティブは、生徒がコミュニケーション能力やグループワークのスキルを発展させるのに役立ちますが、オンライン学習ならばちょっと難しいです。
次に、オフライン学習では、教師の直接的な観察があるため、学生はオンライン学習に比べてより規律正しく学習することができます。
たとえば、教師は授業中に各生徒を観察できます。生徒が注意を払っていない場合、教師はすぐに直接注意することができます。
もちろん、オンライン学習にも特定の利点があります。例えば、移動時間を節約でき、時間や場所に順向があります。それでも私はオフライン学習のほうが好みます。なぜなら、オフライン学習は直接的なインタラクティブを提供し、学習に集中しやすくなるからです。
Sept. 16, 2025
Wie kann man das Überessen vermeiden?
Es ist eine schlechte und potenziell sehr schädliche Angewohnheit, nach dem Essen noch etwas zum Teller hinzuzufügen, also mehr zu essen, als ursprünglich geplant. Es scheint offensichtlich zu sein, doch wenn man schnell isst, verspürt man nach einer Mahlzeit ein kurzfristiges Hungergefühl. Es vergeht nach 5 Minuten, doch fällt es für manche schwer, es zu bekämpfen.
Das ist uns allen schon mal passiert: man hat vor, nur ein Stück Kuchen oder Wassermelone zu essen, aber man isst am Ende mehrmals so viel. Der Grund liegt darin, dass unsere Gehirne sich so entwickelt haben, dass wir so viele Kalorien wie möglich konsumieren wollen, wenn wir die Möglichkeit und den Platz im Bauch dafür haben. Dazu kommt, dass zuckerhaltige Produkte sehr stimulierend in diesem Sinn sind.
Sept. 16, 2025
仕事をする上で必要なスキルは何ですか。
現代の職場環境では、成功するのには専門知識だけでなく、他の多くのソフトスキルとハードスキルも必要です。私の意見では、仕事をうまく完成するために、コミュニケーション力、時間管理などの必要なスキルを身につけておく必要があります。
まず、コミュニケーション スキルは仕事での成功を決定する重要な要素の 1 つで。良いコミュニケーションにより、誤解を避け、仕事の効率を高め、職場での良い人間関係を築くのに役立ちます。2つ目は、時間管理スキルです。効果的な時間管理により、過度なプレッシャーを感じることなく時間通りに仕事を完成できます。例えば、1日に多くの仕事をこなさなければならない場合、まず最も重要な仕事を優先し、その後、残りの時間で緊急度の高い順に他の仕事を進める計画を立てる必要があります。これらのスキルを向上するのには、短期間で習得できるものではないので、毎日練習を重ねなければなりません。そして上記のスキルは、仕事を効果的に完成するだけでなく、将来のキャリアを発展させるのにも役立ちます。
Sept. 16, 2025
Sept. 16, 2025
Sept. 16, 2025
Ganztagsschule
Ist eine Ganztagsschule wirklich von Vorteil? Spricht das die SchülerInnen an oder ist sie ein Albtraum?
In der heutigen Zeit erfreuen sich Ganztagsschulen großer Beliebtheit, weswegen sich die Frage stellt, welche Vor- und Nachteile sie mit sich bringen. Als ein Vorteil lässt sich anführen, dass die SchülerInnen keine Hausaufgaben außerhalb der Schulzeit haben. Außerdem erweisen sich Ganztagsschulen als zusätzliche Hilfe für schwache SchülerInnen. Die Befürworter weisen zudem darauf hin, dass in solchen Schulen die Leistungen der Kinder weniger von der Unterstützung der Eltern abhängig sind, es gibt nämlich SchülerInnen, die nur dann lernen, wenn sie ein Elternteil dabei haben, was dazu führt, dass sie mit zunehmendem Alter nicht mehr selbst lernen können. Jedoch bringen Ganztagsschulen auch Nachteile mit sich. Als Nachteil lässt sich vor allem anführen, dass die Eltern dadurch weniger erzieherischen Einfluss auf ihre Kinder haben, sind werden nämlich vom Verhalten anderer Kinder maßgeblich beeinflusst. Außerdem könnten Ganztagsschulen die soziale und psychische Belastung der Kinder mit Schulangst oder einer introvertierten Persönlichkeit steigern. Ein weiterer Nachteil wäre, dass die SchülerInnen weniger Verantwortung für ihren Lernprozess und ihre Freizeitgestaltung übernehmen. Ein weiterer zu nennender Nachteil wäre, dass die SchülerInnen weniger Zeit mit ihren Familien und Freunden außerhalb der Schule verbringen können, was sich negativ auf ihre Psyche auswirken kann.
Zusammenfassend lässt sich feststellen, dass Ganztagsschulen sowohl Vorteile als auch Nachteile mit sich bringen. Meiner Meinung nach sollte jeder hinsichtlich seines Persönlichkeitsmerkmals entscheiden, ob er eine Ganztagsschule besucht. Wer introvertiert ist und unabhängig von der Eltern lernen kann, muss nicht eine Ganztagsschule besuchen. Jedoch, wer extrovertiert ist und mit anderen Menschen gut umgehen kann oder strenge die das Kind wegen des Lernens psychisch belastende Eltern hat, könnte sich Ganztagsschulen zunutze machen.
Sept. 16, 2025
Raising Chickens
When I was a child, people in my village started raising chickens in spring.
In my area, there were a few chicken hatcheries every spring. When the baby chickens grew up to marketable age, they sold the chickens to nearby families on credit.
When people bought the baby chickens, they fed the chickens with grains and their leftover meals.
They didn't have a special place for raising the chickens; instead, their chickens could run anywhere in the village. Thus, chickens in the village needed to be dyed with different colors on different parts of the chickens' bodies to tell whose chickens they were.
Usually, each family would have a chicken coop, but when the chickens grew up, they liked to fly to trees at night and sleep there.
Raising chickens was not easy. People needed to vaccinate the chickens several times when they were young. In addition, people needed to pay much attention to preventing yellow weasels, which were natural enemies of chickens.
If the chickens unfortunately got fowl plague, they would die very quickly. The symptoms of fowl plague were a runny nose, fever, and lethargy.
Chickens could be eaten around October. By then they weighed about 0.5 kilograms. It was the time when their meat was tender and fragrant.
We only ate chickens when our relatives visited us because of poor living conditions. We never ate a chicken by ourselves.
Sept. 16, 2025
Alcune considerazioni sulle lingue
Le lingue vive sono come gli esseri viventi: evolvono, si trasformano col tempo. La percezione di cos'è giusto o falso, di quello che si può dire o no, evolve anche assieme agli usi di una lingua. Studiare la storia di una lingua permette di prendere coscienza di questi cambiamenti. Ci aiuta a capire che le regole lessicali o grammaticali che prendiamo per evidenze non sono leggi immutabili. Per esempio, 50-60 anni fa, si imparava in Francia che non si poteva iniziare una frase con una congiunzione coordinante, perché queste collegano normalmente due proposizioni principali che devono trovarsi nella stessa frase perché c'è una relazione logica tra loro. Oggi, penso che anche i grammatici più conservatori non ritengano che sia falso.
Alcune persone credono che le lingue sono solo una somma di norme arbitrarie. Quindi si può fare tutto ciò che vuole con la lingua. Nelle scienze dure, la realtà determina ciò che si rivela falso o giusto. Se deciso arbitrariamente che due più due faccia cinque, avrei pronto grandi problemi di contabilità! Nelle lingue invece, è vero che moltissime cose risultano da convenzioni umane. Se tutti fossero d'accordo per chiamare il volleyball "handball" e viceversa, in assoluto non ci sarebbe nessuno problema.
Tuttavia, le lingue non possono essere interamente arbitrarie a causa della semantica, cioè della frontera tra queste lingue et gli oggetti che descrivono e categorizzano. Una frase come *"ieri andrò a Milano" è falsa perché ha una contradizione semantica, perciò non può affatto essere capita. O la persona ha sbagliata l'avverbio e voleva dire "DOMANI andrò a Milano", o ha sbagliata il tempo verbale e voleva dire "ieri SONO ANDATO a Milano".
Il pericolo di un conservatismo linguistico troppo grande è entrare nel mondo di Don Chisciotte e prendere per assolute cose che in realtà sono costruzioni umane, senza sguardo critico. Il pericolo di un lassismo troppo grande, invece, è entrare in un mondo in cui la lingua non ha più nessuno rapporto con la realtà, o in cui la realtà stessa non esiste al di fuori del linguaggio! Bisogna trovare un giusto equilibro, e questo richiede una reflessione costante.
Sept. 16, 2025
Out of Sight. Out of Mind?
I wonder how often do we think about love one? Do we think about parents, friends, lovers or even pets everyday? Of course, sometimes it's easier to think about someone if they're right in front of your face.
but what about someone who already kick the bucket? What about someone who you can't even contact? What about someone who leave you behind? and finally what about someone who you're very close in the past but now, don't talk much as used to?
I have been face calling him everyday. Although some calls last only one minute because we just literally ask what did you eat for dinner and that's it but, in a weird way, that one minute have lifed my mood for a whole day. That said it isn't always smooth sailing. This is a time that I muted the notification and forgot to check Whatapp. But in the end, I fixed that issue and we continue this ritual.
Sept. 16, 2025
Sept. 16, 2025
Gerund or Infinitve
I recently watched a video on YouTube. It was an english grammar test. I never really think what is right when I speak english. I've been learning english for a very long time now so I am fluent which does not mean that my grammar is always correct. In the video I was confused when I had to choose between the gerund and the infinitive. There are cases when only one of them is working. But why? Couldn't I say: "... only one of them works"? What's the difference between: "My plants are growing" and "My plants grow"? Maybe it's just a formal thing which native speakers themselves don't do correct as well or forget?
Sept. 16, 2025
Едем домой
Едем домой. Я за рулём, Бася рядом. Молчим, думаем. Я погладил жену по животу.
- "Будет жалко, когда он исчезнет. Я привык к нему."
- "Ты такой умный. Сам бы попробовал его так долго носить. Это тяжело."
Мы только что выехали с парковки магазина. Фонари освещают дорогу. Сегодня пятница, уже вечер. Бася купила фрукты и мороженое. Я положил в корзину бутылку праздничного пива и норвежский коричневый сыр.
- "В конце концов, мы в Норвегии - подумал я."
Едем дальше.
- "Я начну писать книгу, - сказал я."
- "Да, давай. Как она будет называться?"
- "Название не имеет значения. Самое важное - содержание. Конечно, я буду писать по-русски. По-польски мне бы не хотелось"
Бася съела банан. Видно, не знает что сделать с кожурой. Кладет её мне на плечо и смеётся.
- "Выброси её в окно - говорю. Она так и делает."
- "Выброси ещё эту лушпайку из кофейной чашки, - добавляю."
- "Чёрт! Половину вернул ветер обратно в машину."
Через несколько минут я снова произнёс:
- "Я буду главным героем."
Приехали, идём домой. Как обычно, Бася поднимает самый тяжелый пакет с покупками и сразу говорит:
- "Ты мог бы это забрать у меня!"
Вошли в дом. Посреди прихожей сидит кот и лениво смотрит на меня.
- "Наверное, снова нагадил! Выкинь его на улицу, мерзавца этакого. Пусть погуляет, а то всё время только спит."
Я ничего не чувствую, вроде не воняет. Беру кота на руки.
- "Иди сюда, Румпусек, миленький."
Я взъерошил кота и он начал мурлыкать.
На следующий день живот у Баси исчез. В этот мир пришёл Франек.
2014.11.16
Sept. 16, 2025
The Osaka Expo No.4
The Lithuanian booth was really interesting. Many medicinal herbs were on display. It seems that nowadays they are applied in drug development by pharmaceutical companies.
When I think about how, in the Middle Ages, women who used herbs to cure illnesses were treated as witches, I wonder what the Christian Church was really there for.
Sept. 16, 2025
Une argumentation : Une sieste pendant la pause déjeuner ?
Bonjour à tous et à toutes,
cela fait longtemps que j'ai écrit un texte pour langcorrect même si c'est un de mes sites web préférés.
Mais maintenant cela va recommencer à augmenter parce que dans deux mois je vais passer mon DELF B2 (pour lequel je ne suis pas de tout prête).
Aujourd'hui, j'amerais commencer avec une petite argumentation sur un suject simple :
Une sieste pendant la pause déjeuner aide-t-elle vraiment à d'être plus productive ?
Dans les autres pays comme le japons ou l'espagne la sieste fait déjà partie dans la vie quotiedienne. Soit parce que cela devrait aider à être encore plus productive, soit parce que il est trop chaud pour travailler le midi.
Je prensenterai vous un avantage et un inconvénient de ce sujet :
Ce qui plaide en faveur est qu'ils existes déjà plusieurs travaux de recherche de l'influence positive de la sieste.
Une sieste de 10 à 20 minutes et déjà suffisante pour se sentir rafraîchi. Mais attention ! Si le sommeil dûre trop long l'effect et l'opposite. On se sent fatigué. En résumé, une sieste bien fait pouvait vraiment augmenter la productivitée et la motivation des employé.es.
De l'autre côté, les pauses déjeuner dûrent souvent que trentes minutes. Alors c'est assez difficile pour les employés de manger, aller dans la sale de bain, envoyer une petite message à leurs amis ou à la famille et de dormir - tous en 30 minutes. Si les patrons voient vraiment les avantages de la sieste je propose qu'ils prolongent la pause. Toutefois il faut s'attendre à ce que le temps de travail s'allonge également.
Globalement, je trouve que la siest est une bonne idée, mais la réalisation serait plutôt difficile.
Sept. 16, 2025
Diz o roto ao nu
Encontrei num website 55 expressões que se são crendo a ser usadas no dia a dia dos portugueses. Não sei se seja a verdade. Não tenho a certeza de como usar algumas delas na conversa. Vou inventar as situações com essas expressões, uma a uma, para provar se as compreendo corretamente.
2. Uma conversa do casal
- Estou farta do caos em casa. Estás sempre a deixar as tuas coisas por todos os lados.
- Diz o roto ao nu. Os teus cosméticos e joias estão até ma minha gaveta no armário.
Sept. 16, 2025
Catching Hares
In autumn, when I was a child living in a village, one interesting thing for children was to watch adults catching wild hares.
People in my village grew cotton every year for their clothes and shoes. The cotton straw was strong and dense, so it became a good place for hares to hide in.
Before the cotton straw was pulled out, people started to catch hares. Their net was rectangular in shape, a long side of which was long enough to block one side of a cotton field, and the short side of the net was about 70 centimeters.
They used some wooden sticks to stand the short side of the net vertically along one side of a cotton field. Then they held wooden sticks to beat the cotton straw from the other three sides and moved towards the net.
Thus, hares in the cotton field could only run to the side with the net, and when they ran into the net, they would be trapped.
At the spot of catching hares, there were also many dogs. When they saw hares running out of the field, the dogs were very excited and ran after the hares.
We, the children in the village, did not have any toys and our life was often boring. So watching adults catch hares was our entertainment.
Sept. 16, 2025
La vuelta al trabajo
Durante todo el mes de agosto, fui de vacaciones en el sur de Francia con mis amigos y mi familia. Al principio del mes, fui en el país vasco para ver mi padre y mi hermana y hemos hecho actividades disfrutando del sol y de la calor. Despues, volví a París para trabajar una semana. Finalmente, tomé el tren hasta Toulon, donde mis amigos y yo hemos reservado una casa con piscina cerca de la playa, une lugar perfecto para descansar y disfrutar de las vacaciones.
Pero, todas las cosas tienen un fin, volví de nuevo a París hasta una semana. Hace frio y lluvie tambíen, eso no es muy motivador para volver a trabajo.
Sept. 16, 2025
Aidez-moi à corriger ce texte touristique, s'il vous plaît
Matin :
Départ de Téhéran.
Déjeuner au restaurant GilehBoum ou dans un autre restaurant local.
Après-midi :
Visite d’une foulerie de feutre (la fabrique de feutre /ou/ la **foulonnerie** (endroit où on fait du feutre) de feutre), d’un atelier de TchadorShabBafi et d’une usine de thé.
Soir :
Présentation de la culture et de la musique traditionnelle de la région.
Dîner au restaurant GilehBoum
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Sept. 16, 2025
Martedì 16 settembre
È una giornata come le altre, però sono un po' pensierosa. Spero di riuscire anche oggi a dare il meglio di me.
Mi sento a mio agio al lavoro quando inizio a padroneggiare le mansioni e sono sicura che, entro la fine dell'anno, mi sentirò più tranquilla.
Pur non avendo fatto colazione, non ho fame; mangerò comunque qualcosa di leggero per avere più energie.
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Sept. 16, 2025
A Tractor-Ploughing Practicum
In the second year of my technical secondary school, my classmates and I participated in a tractor-ploughing practicum at a state-owned farm about 120 kilometers from our school.
We traveled to the farm by a large bus on October 1st. The farm was vast; standing in its center, we couldn’t see any villages nearby.
Within the farm, there was a residential area for farm employees, resembling a small village with various buildings.
We stayed in a large single-story dormitory with bunk beds.
Our task was to learn how to drive tractors and plough the farmland under the guidance of a qualified driver. The practicum lasted one month.
The training was divided into two shifts: day and night. We operated Dongfanghong 75 chain tractors, which were among the most powerful tractors at the time.
During the night shift, ploughing the farmland felt unique. The tractor’s lights seemed brighter in the darkness, and the fields were so vast that it took a long time to travel from one end to the other. This meant fewer operations were required.
The tractor’s clutch was very stiff and required significant strength to operate. One female student, weighing only about 45 kilograms, couldn’t press the clutch even when standing on it, so she was unable to participate in the practicum.
We had a break at midnight, during which we were treated to a bowl of mutton soup, which was the most delicious mutton soup I’ve ever tasted.
In the early morning, the morning glories on the fences of the farm workers’ houses bloomed beautifully, adorned with dew on their petals. This was, in my opinion, the most beautiful scenery on the farm.
At the end of October, we completed the practicum and returned to our school. I haven’t visited the farm since, but I’m very curious to know what it’s like now.
Sept. 16, 2025
UDEMY Learning goals today
Today I've begun a course about learning python programming by doing fifty projects. The first section took me about one and a half hour to complete and was about introduction to programming, guidelines, environment configuration and simple "hello world" program. I've a decent background in programming speccially C#, so I think that I will not have any problems understanding the sintax, but I will try to do my best effort with the assigments and understand the theory because is not the first time that I try to follow a python course.
Sept. 16, 2025
Un día de descubrimientos en Cornell Tech
Hoy decidí conocer a algunas nuevas personas en el café de Bloomberg en Cornell Tech para ir a Roosevelt Island y tomar algunas fotos con mi teléfono. Personalmente, fue muy divertido, especialmente cuando hablé con el anfitrión, Eric Chan, porque publica mucho en LinkedIn sobre los eventos solo para antiguos alumnos de Cornell. También aprendí mucho sobre algunas startups fundadas por antiguos alumnos de Cornell. Por ejemplo, aprendí sobre una startup, Krea, que utiliza IA generativa para crear fotos, vídeos, objetos 3D y transferencia de movimiento. Pienso usar Krea para crear una foto, probablemente una foto de Chicago o San Francisco porque nunca he visto estas ciudades. Aunque no he visto Chicago, podría visitarla con un amigo que viva allí. Él podría llevarme a algunos restaurantes y probar la pizza de Chicago. En mi opinión, me encanta la pizza en New Haven, especialmente la pizza de Frank Pepe, pero también me gusta la pizza de Nueva York.
Krea: https://www.krea.ai/