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April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
HELP!! It's too easy
I had an assignment which was a really tough one. I need to explain art history using annotations such as books(not allowed to use Wikipedia). However, I had no time to finish this, so I used ChatGPT and just explained in Japanese like "Please write a 150-word sentence with like a high school student's grammar level. Don't be specific because I didn't read it, and the professor also knows". And GPT answered splendidly well. My brain says, "This is not the right thing" and I feel guilty. AI is really useful these days, but it also makes me lazy. That's why I came back here to write English on my own. AI is too easy, and it leads me to take the easy way and making me unable to think anything by myself.
I have to be strict with myself!!!
April 24, 2025
2nd text
This is my second text here
I started to read a new book. I have never read a book in English so I bought it with a topic that I like it: wrestling.
Title´s book is "Crazy is my superpower" by A.J Mendez, former wwe wrestler.
Took me 20 min read the first page because It has a lot of words that I didn´t know their meaning.
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
Ultimamente
Sono malata in questo momento, mi manca poter dormire bene, è ciò che mi infastidisce di più.
Oggi ho fatto acqua di papaya.
Non ho finito di leggere il mio libro, devo concentrarmi di più in finire il libro.
È molto interessante e un po' triste, il libro si chiama "Il cacciatore di aquiloni".
E ho sentito che mi spezzerà il cuore, non vedo l’ora! 😭
April 24, 2025
Können Frauen und Männer befreundet sein?
Das ist ein kompliziertes Thema. Jetzt höre ich ein Podcast und es anfängt mit einer Frau, sie sagt, dass ihr Freundschaft mit ihrem Freund beendet hat, als er ihr seine Gefühle gestand.
Ich glaube, dass es möglich ist, aber meistens kann es keine Freundschaft sein, ohne dass einer oder beide mehr wollen.
Es ist auch einfacher, romantische Gefühle zu entwickeln, wenn man jemanden oft sieht, denn man fühlt sich mehr zu dieser Person hingezogen. In der Psychologie nennt man das den „Mere-Exposure-Effekt“ (auf Deutsch: „Effekt bloßer Darbietung“).
Oder vielleicht gibt es Eifersucht bei Paaren, sie könnten sich unwohl fühlen, wenn es eine Freundschaft mit jemandem von anderen Geschlecht gibt.
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
Come perdere peso (1/6)
Come perdere peso (1/6)
Non sono un uomo grasso, non lo sono mai stato. Però, quando guardo vecchie foto di me stesso, mi accorgo che in alcuni anni sono più grasso che in altri. Nel 2010, quando mia figlia aveva 2 anni, io e la mia famiglia siamo tornati da una vacanza in Okinawa. Che buona vacanza! Però ... mi sono accorto di essere più grasso che mai. Un mese dopo mia moglie è rimasta incinta di nostro figlio. Ero molto felice, ma ... so che quando la moglie è incinta, il marito ingrassa. Oh no ...
Nello stesso periodo, un amico ha perso 10 chilogrammi. Wow! "Come hai fatto?" Ho chiesto.
Mi ha spiegato: è andato dal dottore per la sua visita medica annuale il medico ha detto che lui era troppo
grasso. Il medico ha detto che può mangiare solo 1800 calori al giorno. Allora ha iniziato un piano di conteggio delle calorie. È un ingegnere, quindi è diventato entusiasmante fare piani, grafici e statistiche ecc. Comunque, ha perso circa 10 chilogrammi. Ottimo!
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
Eine Formalle Email an das Gemeindeamt
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
Mein Name ist Marco und ich habe meine Reisepass vor vier Monaten beantragt. Leider habe ich ihn bis heute nicht erhalten.
Ich habe bereits sehr lange gewartet und brauche den Reisepass dringend, da ich in zwei Wochen eine Geschäftreise habe. Mein Arbeitgeber ist darüber sehr verärgert.
Können SIe mir bitte mitteilen, wann ich meine Reisepass erwarten kann und warum es so lange dauert?
Sie erreichen mich unter der Telefonnummer +49666666 oder per E-mail an [email protected]. Ich bitte um eine rasche Rückmeldung.
Vielen Dank im Voraus,
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,
Marco.
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April 23, 2025
First day of using this site
I want to learn English deeply. I have already graduated from the university, but lastly ı thought ı knew English very well, but it was not. I have just learned anything related to the curriculum, so now I have just specified two hours in my day to learn English. In addition, I want to use all the words that I have learned before, but ı do not know how I can ı put them ın my essay or ın my writing . So from now on ı will write every day a small paragraph, and I will be happy ıf you correct that for me
April 23, 2025
April 23, 2025
Mio giorno
Oggi mi sono svegliata alle 7:00. Mi sveglio di solito alle 7:30, ma oggi mi sono svegliata presto. Mi sono alzata alle 8, e ho cucinato due uova, un'insalata, e pane. Ho fatto anche il caffè con il French press. Oggi non avevo molto lavoro da fare, quindi sono andata a correre. Mi ho fatto la doccia dopo e mi ho lavato i capelli. Più tardi ho mangiato maiale e patate per pranzo. Sono andata al negozio di alimentari per comprare pesce, broccoli, e cavolfiore per cena. Era molta deliziosa. Adesso sono stanca, quindi dormo presto.
April 23, 2025
the work of beautiful art made by making pottery
I've been learning how to make pottery for two years. It gives me a sense of peace, and I met a lot of very sophisticated classmates. By seeing them and learning pottery with them, I get relaxed. Most of them are older than me, and two of them are non Japanese. One of them is from Thailand who got married to a Japanese man. The other one is from Malaysia. There are two old Japanese men in front of my seat. Without learning pottery, it could be difficult to communicate each other, but with the help of learning it, we always enjoy talk in class. Through learning pottery, I always enjoy the beauty of art and heart. It's not a comepetition, but a work of art made by all the people I meet in class.
April 23, 2025
April 23, 2025
Chilean Army Missions.
The main mission of the Chilean Army is keeping peace, national sovereignty, territorial integrity, and protection of citizens, institutions and vital resources of the country against any foreign threat. In summary, its objective is insure the national defense of the country.
The Chilean Army missions are:
Sovereignty defense and territorial integrity: Implies the boarder protection.
International cooperation and external political support: International missions and international cooperation in external political measures.
Support to the National development and governmental actions: Supporting national development projects and governmental issues.
Territorial security and interests: Boarder security and maritime guarantees.
April 23, 2025
April 23, 2025
L'anxiété sociale
J'ai anxiété sociale. Bah il faut préciser quand-même que je n'a pas été diagnostiqué, mais portant j'ai eu des thérapy chez le psy. Il faut aussi dire que le psy m'a beaucoup aidé, parce que grâce à ça j'ai pu aller à rencontrer des gens. Pourtant, quand je vais dans une librairie pour socialiser, je me sens mal à l'aise.
Au final se sentir mal à l'aise c'est pas si grave que ça, parce que au fur et à mesure que tu avances dans la conversation ce sentiment disparait ; ce qui me saoule vraiment c'est le fait de ne pas pouvoir parler avec les autres comme je voudrais.
Je m'explique : quand je parle avec quelqu'un je galère pour y répondre à ses questions, et en plus je n'arrive pas à poser des questions à mon tour, ou à proposer des thèmes de conversation ; donc ma conversation c'est pas agréable. En Colombie et en Amérique latine en général les gens sont très ouvertes à la conversation, sont très sociables, et ça c'est voie. Quand je vais dans une librairie je vois des gens parlant avec le staff, et ça pu durer des heures, c'est dingue. Les gens, soi le staff ou les invités, sont très bienveillantes avec tous, ils te posent des questions genre « ça va aujourd'hui ? », « comment s'est-il passé l'examen ? », « Où vis-tu ? », etc, mais pour moi c'est pas facile alors que tout le monde peux parler sans price de tête.
Aujourd'hui je vais dans une librairie, j'espère que ça va bien se passer.
April 23, 2025
Auf dem Bild
Auf dem Bild gibt es vielen unterschiedlichen Sachen. Ich sehe zum Beispiel viele Blättern mit unterschiedlichen Farben, einigen sind rot, andere orange, und einpaar sind grün. Ich lege das Bild an der Wand, weil es überhaupt kein normales Bild ist, sondern Dekorationen auf einem Kalender.
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