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Beitrag
Heute habe ich weder Lust noch Konzentration, etwas Langes zu schreiben, weswegen ich mich für einen kurzen Text bzw. eine Frage entschieden habe. In der Prüfung, die ich ablegen muss, gibt es einen Teil, in dem ich einen Beitrag verfassen und darin über ein bestimmtes Thema argumentieren muss. In einem Beitrag sollte eine neutrale Sprache verwendet werden. Das heißt, man sollte nichts Offizielles schreiben aber auch keine Umgangssprache verwenden. Meine Frage ist also, ob ihr jemals einen Beitrag geschrieben habt und euere Meinung über etwas geäußert habt. Außerdem möchte ich wissen, wie man nach eurer Meinung einen Beitrag schreibt.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
ニュースの記事の翻訳 九月二十一日 一年米の量について
国（くに）は、来年六月までの一年間に必要（ひつよう）米（こめ）の量（りょう）を計算（けいさん）しました。
人が食べるための米の量は697万ｔから711万ｔになりそうだと言っています。一番多（おお）い場合（ばあい）でも、前の年と同（おな）じぐらいにらると考え（かんがえ）ています。
国は今まで必要（ひつよう）な米が毎年１０万ｔずつ少（すく）なくなると考え（かんがえ）ていました。
しかし、二年続（つづ）けて、国の計算（けいさん）より多くの米必要（ひつよう）になりました。このため、米の値段（ねだん）が上（あ）がったと言われています。
今年は、旅行にくる外国人が食べる量なども考え（かんがえ）て計算（けいさん）しました。国によると、今年とれる米は、７２８万ｔから７４５万ｔになりそうです。
国は、必要（ひつよう）な量より多くの米がとれそうだといっています。
Sept. 21, 2025
Food
Fun fact, I have porridge for breakfast every day. I've got used to it since my boyfriend and I started to live together. Before this I had a tea and some sweet things like cookies for breakfast. We have been eating cereal in the morning for approximately one year. Then we switched to buckwheat porridge. We add some fruits and toppings to the dish so we've not got tired of it. Sometimes we cook something else, for example, an omelette or pancakes. But we cook the porridge more often.
There's one more thing I usually eat, it's chocolate. I think it's a bad day if I don't get any chocolate.
Sept. 21, 2025
Elektro- und Oberleitungsbusse
Ich fahre mit dem Bus nur dann, wenn ich irgendeine Strecke überwinden muss, wo Fahrräder nicht erlaubt sind, zum Beispiel auf einer Autobahn ohne den Gehweg. Um mein Fahrrad nicht fallen zu lassen, muss ich ihn halten und folglich stehen.
In Moskau waren vor einigen Jahren alle Busse durch Elektrobusse ersetzt, die sehr angenehm sind: Dort gibt es viel Platz und sogar Ladegeräte.
2020 hat die Stadtregierung endlich auf alle Oberleitungsbusse verzichten, da sie hässlich aussehen und zu viel Geld erfordern. Seitdem habe ich keinen einzigen Trolleybus gesehen.
Sept. 21, 2025
Do you use Audible?
This year earlier, I started using Audible. At first, listening to audiobooks was too hard for me, so I took a gap. This month, I picked it up again. But it seems that I can't try a simple of an audiobook before I buy it. That's odd, I remember I used to do so. Did Amazon just change the policy?
Sept. 21, 2025
My trip to Switzerland: Day 4, morning
On the last day of our trip, My wife and I took a ropeway to the viewpoint of Harder Kulm. The weather was the best during the trip. The line of tourists waiting for ropeway was much shorter than that we saw on the first day of the trip. We could take a ride within only 10 minutes after waiting in the line. The gondola was full of people, but it didn't feel very uncomfortable as all of the passengers looked very energetic and pleasant. From the destination of the ropeway there was a narrow but a tad long pathway to the view point. Along this way there were a couple of wooden dolls playing the Swiss traditional wind instrument (I forgot the name.) The view from the pathway was already stunning, but the scenery from the view point was far more beautiful. The lakes that engulfed Interlaken were reflecting the sunlight and the water looked shining green. Over the lakes was some of the giant famous mountains, such as the Eiger. Everything looked like shining. We couldn't help without asking another tourist to take our photos with the scenery. After being back to Interlaken, we picked up our luggage in the hotel and headed to a supermarket next to the main station. We grabbed sandwiches and water to prepare for our 6 hours train ride, and took a train to Heidelberg.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Production 1
I arrived a week ago in Lyon, and it was a difficult week to discover a new city. First, I have travelled 7 hours with only one break to eat, and endured an hour of traffic jam to come late to the inventory of my new apartment.
Just after my quick inventory, I met my new flatmates, and one say immediately " do they say you about cockroaches, bedbugs, and water leaks ?", a nightmare !
I didn't dinner after all this adventures, and stayed almost all the time in my bedroom for three days.
In fact Lyon is not so dramatical, with a lot of courage and a little bit of beautiful weather, i have visited Lyon to find a better neighbourhood to live since today.
I came here to study, I just begin a new cursus so in summary thats like a totally new departure, like I start from 0 without nobody to reassure me.
Sept. 21, 2025
The 1+1 Dilemma
On the morning of one day in summer when I was hanging out with other children in my village, my father told me that it was time for me to start school, although the elementary school in my village had started a new semester a few weeks earlier. At that moment, I was wearing shorts and a Breton shirt.
On the afternoon of that day, I went to school with a few other older children in my village. The elementary school was right behind my village and was only separated by a small moat. That was how I started my school life.
Since I didn't start school at the beginning of that semester, I had no idea what to do when doing my seatwork. I remember one piece of seatwork was a math problem, 1 + 1 = . I didn't know how to do it, so I had to see how my deskmates did theirs. The deskmate on my left wrote 1. Then I wrote 1 on my exercise book. But when I saw what my deskmate on the right wrote, it was 0. I had to erase the answer I just wrote down and write 0 instead.
I remember I changed the answer between 1 and 0 several times so that the paper in the answer area even wore out. However, I can't remember what the exact answer was when I finally handed my seatwork in.
That is a very interesting memory that happened in my elementary school, and I can't forget it even now.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Who do you want to turn into someone famous for one day?
I wouldn't want to turn into anyone famous even for just one day, because after all I will turn back myself. The power or a lot of money can't be anything for just one day, and I'm going to feel vain. Rather than that, I want to improve myself as soon as possible.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (8/12)
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (8/12)
C'erano due revisioni maggiori alla lingua giapponesi, una volta negli anni 1870, dopo la restaurazione dell'imperatore, e un'altra negli 1940 dopo la guerra durante l'occupazione. In entrambe le occasioni, molto kanji erano semplificati o eliminati per facilitarne l'alfabetizzazione.
Ricordate il kanji per imparare, 学? Prima del 1945, il kanji aveva questo aspetto: 學. Non troppo difficile, vero? Ma questo è solo uno esempio. Ce ne sono migliaia, e alcuni molto più complicato dell'esempio sopra. Per esempio, uno, due, tre （一、二、三）tutti lo sanno. Pero, prima del 1945 ... preparatevi ... 壱、弐、参. Aie!
Ricordate quando ho detto che ci sono "circa" 47 lettere del hiragana. Prima del 1945 si usavano (ゐ) e (ゑ) e gli altri esotici caratteri. Per leggere un giornale stampato prima del 1945 avreste bisogno di un molto bello dizionario o delle risorse dell'internet. Vabbé, non ci era nessun internet nel 1925.
Leggere un libro stampato prima del 1870 è impossibile per un profano. Dovresti essere un esperto di giapponese medievale per capirlo.
Oggi possiamo trovare i classici della letteratura nelle librerie o nelle biblioteche, ma sono tutti tradotti in giapponese moderno.
Sept. 21, 2025
短い文なのに、難しい文がある
日本語には、よく短い文があるけど、これは分かりにくいと思います。この間勉強会のみんなとさくらももこが書いた「もものかんづめ」という本を読んでいます。これには様々な面白い作文があります。作文の一つには、さくらさんがある雑誌のバカな記事について書きました。例えば、記事には「妻があきれた馬鹿っ夫」の一つだそうです。さくらさんは雑誌に関して「こんなもの載せてる方こそ”馬鹿っ雑誌”である。」と書きました。「載せて(い)る方こそ」というのは一番難しい部分だと思います。「方」は「方法」のような意味の気がします。「こそ」は「こちらこそ」の「こそ」と同じ言葉でしょうか。意味の全体は、雑誌がバカの理由はバカの記事を載せているの他に理由の必要がないと分かりました。
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Drawing
I like drawing since... I don't know, I can't remember. When I realized I was living, I already like making lines with colors. I remember when I making cartoons characters on my textbook, haha, brings back memories.
Sometimes I made my friends mad at me because of the jealousy. I don't even understand why, why they put so much attention to this 'talent' of mine. Like, I can't even make my life with this talent. It can't give you lots of money. Well, it does, sometimes I got asked from my friend on Facebook to make drawing for them, and they'll pay for it. And I like sharing my arts to my social media, like those days. My arts been everywhere because of the funny things I put on it. Suddenly I got lots of followers. They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, they like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't we just do both?).
I got famous like... Instantly.
“not bad!” I said.
But I guess dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it. About 1 month ago, my account got disabled for (S word) reason. All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS all GONE!!!
Now, I barely open drawing software on my phone. I can't find the right time, simply because I got to work. And thanks Mark, you make the situation even worse.
Sept. 21, 2025
Frankie von Jochen Gutsch und Maxim Leo
Kurz habe ich Frankie gelesen. Es wurde dieses Jahr veröffentlicht. Es ist die Geschichte eines Katers. Wortwörtlich : der Erzähler ist der Kater. Es ist wirklich gut geschrieben. Mal witzig, mal berührend, manchmal auch ehrlich traurig. Das Wortschatz ist eher einfach, außer für die unzählbaren Tiernammen. Es ist nicht etwas, das wir in der Volkshochschule lernen.
Ohne Vorbehalte Empfehle ich allem Frankie.
Viel Spaß beim Lesen!
Sept. 21, 2025
Lo que hice hoy
Mi esposa y yo andamos a una tienda especial hoy. La visitamos una perfumería para comprar perfume. Tenía poner nuestro nombre un una lista de esperar, por qué siempre la tienda está llena de gente. Caminamos a un cafetería mientras nos esperábamos. Nos sentamos a una mesa y tomar un espresso. Charlábamos de algo que estaba pasando en la calle. Mi teléfono zumbido porque me llamó la perfumería para decirme que un espacio está libre por nosotros. Terminamos a nuesro espresso y nos andamos pronto.
Cuando llegamos a la perfumería nos preguntaban de que huelos a quisiera tratar. Les dijimos lo que queríamos y se nos trajeron perfumes con un huelo similar. Nos dijo de las perfumes a trabajadora mientras las olíamos. Nos explicaban de las partes únicas y lo que estábamos oliendo. Fue una experiencia única.
Hace una hora las encontramos las perfumes lo que nos gustamos. Tenemos emoción para tratarlas a mañana.
Sept. 21, 2025
Why I Weigh Myself Every Day 毎朝体重を測る理由
I weigh myself every day. It’s just part of my routine: I do it after my usual 10-minute workout in the morning, so it has never felt like a burden. Thanks to this habit, both my weight and body fat have stayed stable over the past year or two.
The fluctuation is usually no more than about one kilogram. If I feel I’ve overeaten, the scale reflects that the next day or the day after. After karate practice, my body fat goes down and my muscle mass goes up. My body is very honest.
One of my friends, after finding out that I weigh myself daily, teased me by asking, “Aren’t you a bit obsessed?” That made me wonder if I was overthinking it. But I believe this routine works well for me: weighing myself daily minimizes changes and helps me put the brakes on before I gain weight. Ironically, the friend who said that is actually overweight. Maybe I should have told him, “Why don’t you start weighing yourself too?”
Sept. 20, 2025
Haredi Jews
Bibi is the childhood nickname of Benjamin Netanyahu in Hebrew.
Bibi is gifted in languages and he is fluent in Hebrew, English and French.
Before the founding of the State of Israel in 1948, Jews were scattered all over the world.
That is why it is not surprising that a Jew can speak three languages.
According to statistics, the population of Israel is about 9.75 million, and the population of Haredi Jews is about 1.4 million.
The stereotype is that all Jews are rich.
There is an old saying in English "rich as a Jew".
Haredi Jews do not have to work.
They pray for a long time every day.
They turn off their smartphones and the Internet.
They do not serve in the military and oppose the creation of the State of Israel.
They believe that the destruction of Israel was the will of God.
If the Jews do not obey God's plan, there will be great disasters in the future.
Sept. 20, 2025
Mis personajes originales (3)
Esto es mi final publicación sobre mis personajes. My final personaje se llama Ricky. Tiene 15 o 16 años (ya no sé). También no sé si es latina o algo diferente, no puedo escoger el color de su pelo. Creo que los colores café, negro, y rojizo todo parece bueno, no puedo escoger.
Ella es la mejor amiga de mi otro personaje, Oliver. Tiene problemas de ansiedad, y Oliver ayuda. Ricky le gusta leer y dibujar. También le gusta la lluvia.
Ya no tengo mucho información sobre ella. Quiero crear más para su personaje, como más de sus intereses o cosas sobre su familia.
Sept. 20, 2025