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Sept. 22, 2025
Mini-Fakten
Ich bin der Ansicht, dass lediglich die Sprachkenntnisse dafür nicht genügt, vertraut mit einem Land zu sein: Man sollte die kulturellen und geographischen Kenntnissen nicht vernachlässigen. Heute habe ich beschlossen, in einer Woche ein paar Mini-Fakten über die 30 größten Städten Deutschlands kennen: wo sie geographisch liegen, wie viele Einwohner haben und welchen Ruf besitzen. Dadurch möchte ich die Kultur und die Geographie des Landes besser kennenlernen. Zum Beispiel liegt Münster in NRW, ist eine sehr fahrradfreundliche Studentenstadt mit ca. 300.000 Einwohner. Derartige Zusammenfassungen können hilfreich sein, um das Lernen abwechslungsreicher zu machen und um nicht nur die dreckige Grammatik zu lernen.
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
The Matrix review.
Yesterday I was pretty bored and I watched 'The Matrix' of 1999 movie. The main character it's called: Neo or Thomas A. Anderson (he has 2 lifes, lmao). At the beginning of the movie we can see Thomas Anderson, a software developer who sells ilegal items (I'm not pretty sure what he sells, the only thing that I know is these stuff are ilegal because he has lawsuits against him). At the beginning he looks pretty tired of his current life, he can't sleep and he's always pale, but in one of these scenes, an email arrives and says something like: 'follow the white rabbit'. At that moment he doesn't understand pretty well what is happening, but somebody knocks on his door, and in that moment is when he realizes the email isn't just a random email. He looked the couple of customers, a male and a female, the female has a white rabbit tattooed on her neck. They asked him why is he too pale, and he only says that he's pretty tired and he's having weird dreams, they invited him to a party to distract himself and he agrees because the email said: 'Follow the white rabbit' (the female). When they went to the party, he was alone in a corner, then a random girl arrived and she presented herself to him, she was Trinity.
This is only the beginning, after that occured a lot of things more. In resume, Neo or Thomas A. Anderson is the 'one', they've been (the resistence against machines) looking for him since the day one when the machines took the power, and the only one that could fight and defeat those is our protagonist. Today I wanna watch the second part of the movie, at least for me it is a master piece and I'm so hyped about what will occur in the second movie. I recomend this movie a lot. (I know it is an oldie one, but I had never seen it before, so let me be happy! :()
Sept. 22, 2025
『当たり前』について考える
私たちの生活に『当たり前』はいっぱいありました。例えば：空気も水も、当たり前にきれいな場所です、家族の愛当たり前のようにそこに存在する。私たちはこんな『当たり前』の便利と温暖の中で込んでいます。しかし、その後にある大切さを感じることくを忘れました。
ある日、空気が汚染される、水資源が緊張する、家族と別れる時になって、それらが当たり前ではないと知っています。「ない」の危険は日常生活の大切を対比しました。
だから、感謝の心が呼んで、『当たり前』と考えて。これは感情的ではありません、明確な認識です：自分の全てでも珍しい、自然と生命に尊敬する。これなら、私たちは幸せの生活ができます。
Sept. 22, 2025
Бывшая дружба
На первый год бакалавра, когда я начал университет, я познакомился с очень симпатическим одноклассником. Мы произходят от такого же места: на самом деле, его семья достаточно известна в моем родном городе. Мы быстро стали хорошими друзьями. Мы всегда были вместе, семясь, расказывая шутки или просто болтая. Мы говорили о всём. Он меня выучил многому о музыке, потому что он абсолютно любил музыку (конечно он сам был музыкантом). Взамен я его выучил о темах, которыми я интересуюсь.
В второй год этот друг поехал изучать за границу, но я остался во Франции. На самом деле все люди, которых я любил на первый год, поехали туда и сюда. Мы прововидили много времени вместе, так этот год был грустнее. Я чувствовал какую-то пустоту.
Я никогда ещё не видел друга. Однако, несолько лет назад я связался с ним ещё раз, в разговоре типо «что нового, как поживаешь?». Я наивно ожидал счастливого воссоединения. Вместо этого я только получил холодные, лаконичные ответы. Ответы, которые означают: «не хочу говорить с тобой, ты мешаешь». Очевидно человеческое тепло нашего первого года исчезнуло... Знаю, что говорят «с глаз долой, из сердца вон» но всё-таки я надеялся на что-то... другого, потому что я редко ладил с другим человеком, как я ладил с ним. Для него я был чужым. Ладно.
Это резумирует мою историю с другими: череда разочарований. Сейчас я ничего не ожидаю, у меня никакая надежда о никём. Я даже не пробую строить отношения. Зачём зря посвящать себя отношению, которое всё равно другому человеку? Я просто живу для себя и сосредотачиваюсь на других делах.
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
New graduate
I graduated from Industrial engineering last in June. I haven't job but I am looking job. This process quite hardly. I feel stressful and not enough.I target improve is my job topics and English language. Who's know maybe I move to abroad. I hope to short time I start new my career life.
Sept. 22, 2025
Art exhibition visit in last week
The exhibition I visited is called “Language Africana that makes Brazil” I thought very interesting because more word that is used every day and not and we don’t know where it comes from. The day I went had more black people, I realized the importance of representation is important in art, for the black people feel like they belong
Sept. 22, 2025
Porquoi j’apprends le français
Pour l’anée dernière, j’ai été apprendre le français tous les jours parceque j’habite au Canada et ici, on doit prendre le fraçais à l’école. Maintenant, je suis au lycée donc le niveau de français est très difficile. À part cela, je apprends le français parceque j’ai une rêve de habiter au Quèbec. C’est un très beau endroit au Canada. Enfin, il y a beacoup des pays qui principalement parle français donc cette langue et très utile pour voyager et j’adore voyager!
Sept. 22, 2025
Steamed Buns
Steamed buns are a staple food for Chinese people who live in the northern part of China because wheat is mostly grown there.
It's simple to make steamed buns. Use wheat flour, water and a certain amount of yeast to make a dough and wait for the dough to ferment. Then knead the fermented dough with dry wheat flour and make the dough into many small bun blanks and wait for them to ferment a second time. When the bun blanks are well fermented, place them in a wok and steam them.
When the buns are finished being steamed, they become bigger than they were when they were blanks, and inside them, there are many tiny air bubbles, making steamed buns taste soft and delicious.
Although they are a staple food for most Chinese people, people couldn't eat them before the early eighties, especially those who lived in the countryside.
Before 1982, people in the countryside didn't farm based on family units; instead, many families farmed together as a production team, which led to the fact that no one really worked hard and the wheat yield was very low.
At that time, people could only eat steamed buns made of wheat flour during the traditional Chinese New Year or when they visited their relatives.
About two or three days before Chinese New Year's Eve, my mom started making steamed buns. She made two or three old-fashioned large red ceramic basins of dough, which was enough to make five or six large iron woks of steamed buns.
It is the coldest time of the year where I live during the traditional Chinese New Year, so the steamed buns won't go bad, and they are expected to be enough to eat for the first fifteen days of the year.
When steaming steamed buns before the traditional Chinese New Year, I liked to stoke the earthen stove. I liked to smell the steamed buns' scent when they were almost done and see the scene when my mom removed the lid from the wok.
In 1982, people in the countryside no longer farmed together due to a new rural policy. They started farming based on family units. They were assigned farmland and started working for their own families. In the same year, they could eat steamed buns made of wheat flour on ordinary days.
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
Would you like to see a live-action movie from a manga?
I have many favorite manga, but they don't need to turn into a live-action movies. Because there have been a lot of movies turned into from a manga, but I don't think most of them are good in terms of actions or clothes. They look like just cosplay videos.
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
《如果X此次获胜，一定会再度挑起战争》O国家谋划应对E战胜W的局面
知道翻译质量不是特别高，再说是政治话题让人烦得不得了，但是如果有人愿意认真纠正所有的问题。。。
EW冲突离结束越来越近，为造成E的战略失败而尽力的O政治界和军事界坐立不安。
M国政府暂时没能提出和平解决方案的具体建议，O却好像认为大局已定，自己该好好考虑如何转危为机了。
对当前俄乌冲突缓和趋势最为担忧的，或许是Y国。Y国军方人士指出，如果冲突终止，E兵力将获得显著恢复；一旦未来O与E爆发军事对抗，这一情况将带来重大安全风险。
W前线一停火，E会恢复全面行动能力，并与所谓的“新邪恶轴心”的国家加强协作。这一变化可能引发局势全面的快速调整，进而导致在战略对立中，常规遏制手段重新被启用。
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
Hochzeit Einladung - Informal
Liebe Kathi,
vielen Dank für dem netten Einladung zu eure Hochzeit! Ich möchte gern zu eure Hochzeit kommen. Leider kennen ich die Stadt nicht so gut. Könntest du mir vielleicht ein Hotel empfehlen, die in der Nähe ist? Ich hatte letzt Woche ein großes Operation und kann nicht so lang gehen. Ich möchte, dass mein Hotel nicht so weit weg ist.
Habt ihr auch ein Geschenkliste irgendwo? Ich würde euch gern etwas kaufen, aber ich will nicht ein Geschenk mitbringen, die euch nicht passt. Was wünscht ihr? Lieber ein Geschenk oder Geld? Beides sind für mich möglich.
Ich freue mich so, euch bald wieder zu sehen!
Liebe grüße,
Naomi
P.s. Darf ich womöglich meinen Hund mitbringen? Keine Sorge wenn nicht!
Sept. 22, 2025
A Dad and Two Uncles Make a Wonderful Family 2人のおじさん、素敵な家族
I started watching an American TV comedy series from the 1980s called Full House. The story is about the Tanner family, who lost their mother in a car accident. The father, Danny Tanner, asked his brother-in-law Jesse and his best friend Joey to move in and help raise his three daughters: 10-year-old DJ, 5-year-old Stephanie, and baby Michelle, who is only 9 months old. The three sisters each have their own personalities. In every episode, they run into small troubles, get help from their dad and two uncles, solve the problems, and grow along the way.
Growing up in a Japanese family, I found it fascinating that the Tanners openly express every emotion, from gratitude to anger, so freely. In my family, I rarely shared my worries with my parents, and we did not express love verbally the way the Tanner sisters do.
Although in real life it may be unlikely for two men outside the immediate family to take part in raising children, I found the setup very appealing. After all, it takes a village to raise a child, and the involvement of caring adults beyond parents is truly important.
Sept. 22, 2025
Johann Ohneland 3
Johann, der insgeheim die Magna Carta ablehnte, verlangte vom Papst Innozenz III. die Nichtigkeit der Magna Carta. Der Papst machte das, und die Festländer begann dann gegen den König einen Krieg. Dieser Krieg wurde den Ersten Krieg der Barone genannt. Johann starb während des Kriegs in der Dysenterie, und der Krieg endete.
Sept. 22, 2025
À sombra da bananeira
1. Há alguém que não gostasse passar a vida toda à sombra da bananeira? É um paraíso.
2. – Ele queixa-se sempre de não ter dinheiro, de não poder viajar ou sair com amigos.
- Não é supreendente. Ele viva à sombra da bananeira. Tem o trabalho mal pago, mas faz nada para arranjar outro.
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
Sept. 22, 2025
Practice
1) My brother and I resemble in appearance.
2) There were some personnel changes after the new leader was inducted.
3) He is a very prudent man. I barely saw him make any mistake.
4) Stop doing that. You're gonna scupper our plan.
5) If you want to know the real of this city, go visit the ghettos/slums.
Sept. 22, 2025
Qué hice hoy?
Mi punto débil es cuando tengo que usar el pretérito o el imperfecto. Entonces, tengo que hablar y escribir en el pasado para practicarlos.
Mi esposa y yo fuimos a las papelerías. Lo necesitaba comprar un cuaderno para escribir mis notas de la lección del Esperanto. Visitamos tres papelerías. Desafortunadamente los dos primeros no lo tuvieron el tipo de cuaderno el que quería. Al tercero papelería lo encontré el cuaderno correcto. También la papelería tuvo un cuaderno de horario el que necesité.
Estoy emocionado para escribir mis notas de Esperanto en mi cuaderno nuevo!