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Zusätzliche Hobbys
Ich habe viele verschiedene Hobbys und manchmal ist es ziemlich schwierig, allen genug Zeit zu widmen. Trotzdem habe ich auch manche Aktivitäten, die ich gerne anfangen würde. Zum Beispiel Zeichnen, Schwimmen und Programmierung. Ich mag fotografieren und ich habe gedacht, dass Zeichnen als kreatives Hobby eine gute Alternative wird. Als Junge habe ich für ein paar Jahren geschwommen, aber dann habe ich es aufgegeben. Jetzt habe ich vor, mehr Zeit beim Sport zu verbringen. Deswegen habe ich entschieden, dass ich zukünftig in ein Schwimmbad gehen werde.
Was das Programmieren betrifft, ich mag die Mathe und habe schon zweimal versucht, dieses Hobby anfangen. Leider hatte ich keinen Erfolg wegen des Fehlens eines klaren Plans. Vielleicht werde ich im Sommer nochmal versuchen...
April 24, 2025
Krankmeldung in Deutschland.
Ich verstehe warum die Büros die erstes Tag nicht bezahlen möchte, aber sie müssen in Betracht die Familien ziehen. Für viele Familien nur ein Eltern arbeitet weil die anderes muss auf die Kinder passen. Wenn das berufstätige Eltern keinen Geld verdient es sehr schwer für die Familien sein kann.
Natürlich, glaube ich dass Menschen sollen keine Brückentage benutzen, aber ich kann nicht die Situation in das ganzes Land anderen.
Einer anderen Grund warum viele Leute die Brückentage benutzen ist die teuere Ferien. In das top-season sind die Urlaubs teuerste und nicht viele Menschen so viel Geld haben.
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HELP!! It's too easy
I had an assignment which was a really tough one. I need to explain art history using annotations such as books(not allowed to use Wikipedia). However, I had no time to finish this, so I used ChatGPT and just explained in Japanese like "Please write a 150-word sentence with like a high school student's grammar level. Don't be specific because I didn't read it, and the professor also knows". And GPT answered splendidly well. My brain says, "This is not the right thing" and I feel guilty. AI is really useful these days, but it also makes me lazy. That's why I came back here to write English on my own. AI is too easy, and it leads me to take the easy way and making me unable to think anything by myself.
I have to be strict with myself!!!
April 24, 2025
2nd text
This is my second text here
I started to read a new book. I have never read a book in English so I bought it with a topic that I like it: wrestling.
Title´s book is "Crazy is my superpower" by A.J Mendez, former wwe wrestler.
Took me 20 min read the first page because It has a lot of words that I didn´t know their meaning.
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
Ultimamente
Sono malata in questo momento, mi manca poter dormire bene, è ciò che mi infastidisce di più.
Oggi ho fatto acqua di papaya.
Non ho finito di leggere il mio libro, devo concentrarmi di più in finire il libro.
È molto interessante e un po' triste, il libro si chiama "Il cacciatore di aquiloni".
E ho sentito che mi spezzerà il cuore, non vedo l’ora! 😭
April 24, 2025
Können Frauen und Männer befreundet sein?
Das ist ein kompliziertes Thema. Jetzt höre ich ein Podcast und es anfängt mit einer Frau, sie sagt, dass ihr Freundschaft mit ihrem Freund beendet hat, als er ihr seine Gefühle gestand.
Ich glaube, dass es möglich ist, aber meistens kann es keine Freundschaft sein, ohne dass einer oder beide mehr wollen.
Es ist auch einfacher, romantische Gefühle zu entwickeln, wenn man jemanden oft sieht, denn man fühlt sich mehr zu dieser Person hingezogen. In der Psychologie nennt man das den „Mere-Exposure-Effekt“ (auf Deutsch: „Effekt bloßer Darbietung“).
Oder vielleicht gibt es Eifersucht bei Paaren, sie könnten sich unwohl fühlen, wenn es eine Freundschaft mit jemandem von anderen Geschlecht gibt.
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
Come perdere peso (1/6)
Come perdere peso (1/6)
Non sono un uomo grasso, non lo sono mai stato. Però, quando guardo vecchie foto di me stesso, mi accorgo che in alcuni anni sono più grasso che in altri. Nel 2010, quando mia figlia aveva 2 anni, io e la mia famiglia siamo tornati da una vacanza in Okinawa. Che buona vacanza! Però ... mi sono accorto di essere più grasso che mai. Un mese dopo mia moglie è rimasta incinta di nostro figlio. Ero molto felice, ma ... so che quando la moglie è incinta, il marito ingrassa. Oh no ...
Nello stesso periodo, un amico ha perso 10 chilogrammi. Wow! "Come hai fatto?" Ho chiesto.
Mi ha spiegato: è andato dal dottore per la sua visita medica annuale il medico ha detto che lui era troppo
grasso. Il medico ha detto che può mangiare solo 1800 calori al giorno. Allora ha iniziato un piano di conteggio delle calorie. È un ingegnere, quindi è diventato entusiasmante fare piani, grafici e statistiche ecc. Comunque, ha perso circa 10 chilogrammi. Ottimo!
April 24, 2025
April 24, 2025
Eine Formalle Email an das Gemeindeamt
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
Mein Name ist Marco und ich habe meine Reisepass vor vier Monaten beantragt. Leider habe ich ihn bis heute nicht erhalten.
Ich habe bereits sehr lange gewartet und brauche den Reisepass dringend, da ich in zwei Wochen eine Geschäftreise habe. Mein Arbeitgeber ist darüber sehr verärgert.
Können SIe mir bitte mitteilen, wann ich meine Reisepass erwarten kann und warum es so lange dauert?
Sie erreichen mich unter der Telefonnummer +49666666 oder per E-mail an [email protected]. Ich bitte um eine rasche Rückmeldung.
Vielen Dank im Voraus,
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,
Marco.
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April 23, 2025
First day of using this site
I want to learn English deeply. I have already graduated from the university, but lastly ı thought ı knew English very well, but it was not. I have just learned anything related to the curriculum, so now I have just specified two hours in my day to learn English. In addition, I want to use all the words that I have learned before, but ı do not know how I can ı put them ın my essay or ın my writing . So from now on ı will write every day a small paragraph, and I will be happy ıf you correct that for me
April 23, 2025
April 23, 2025
Mio giorno
Oggi mi sono svegliata alle 7:00. Mi sveglio di solito alle 7:30, ma oggi mi sono svegliata presto. Mi sono alzata alle 8, e ho cucinato due uova, un'insalata, e pane. Ho fatto anche il caffè con il French press. Oggi non avevo molto lavoro da fare, quindi sono andata a correre. Mi ho fatto la doccia dopo e mi ho lavato i capelli. Più tardi ho mangiato maiale e patate per pranzo. Sono andata al negozio di alimentari per comprare pesce, broccoli, e cavolfiore per cena. Era molta deliziosa. Adesso sono stanca, quindi dormo presto.
April 23, 2025
the work of beautiful art made by making pottery
I've been learning how to make pottery for two years. It gives me a sense of peace, and I met a lot of very sophisticated classmates. By seeing them and learning pottery with them, I get relaxed. Most of them are older than me, and two of them are non Japanese. One of them is from Thailand who got married to a Japanese man. The other one is from Malaysia. There are two old Japanese men in front of my seat. Without learning pottery, it could be difficult to communicate each other, but with the help of learning it, we always enjoy talk in class. Through learning pottery, I always enjoy the beauty of art and heart. It's not a comepetition, but a work of art made by all the people I meet in class.
April 23, 2025
April 23, 2025
Chilean Army Missions.
The main mission of the Chilean Army is keeping peace, national sovereignty, territorial integrity, and protection of citizens, institutions and vital resources of the country against any foreign threat. In summary, its objective is insure the national defense of the country.
The Chilean Army missions are:
Sovereignty defense and territorial integrity: Implies the boarder protection.
International cooperation and external political support: International missions and international cooperation in external political measures.
Support to the National development and governmental actions: Supporting national development projects and governmental issues.
Territorial security and interests: Boarder security and maritime guarantees.
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