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Aug. 18, 2025
Meine Reise in Europa, Folge 3: Papst und Kaiser
Nach ein Frühstück bevor dem Treviso-Brunnen, bin ich der Vatikan gehen gesehen. Ich habe nur 15 minuten gewartet, weil es nicht so vielen Menschen gab, deshalb war ich glücklich. Das Gebäude war sehr beeindruckend und der Innerraum des Petersdoms war ein wahres Wunder.
Auf dem Weg des Circus Maximo, bin ich den Tiber entlang spaziert, wo ich ein Eis gekauft habe. Es ist schnell gesmolzen aber es hat mich gut getan.
Nächste habe ich die antike Ruinen besucht, besonders die des Kaiserpalast, der war so groß wie eine Labyrinth. Ich bin im Hotel zurück gegangen um ein Nickerchen zu machen, weil ich ein bisschen müde war.
Nachdem ich aufgewacht bin, bin ich in der Stadt gelaufen und habe ich ein Pizza für das Abendessen gekauft.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
MY BROTHER IS LEAVING THE CITY FOR A YEAR
My brother Pablo and I are like best friends. We really get on well with each other and we always have fun together. He's older than me and he will end his degree, but he is going to finish it in Praga.
He will do an erasmus the next year, it's similar to a scholarship. Our goverment will pay him an amount of money and he will be able to get his career done in another country.
I'm really upset because he is like the union of all of my family, I feel much more comfortable with my family if he is next to me. Plus, I always do activities with him or talk about our lives everyday, so I will feel really alone without Pablo.
One of the last things we are going to do before he leaves is a tatoo about us, we are thinking about some ideas but we are not sure enough for now.
Aug. 18, 2025
Se vivessi in Italia...
Se vivessi in Italia, probabilmente abitassi in una città grande come Roma, Napoli, o Palermo. Amo grandi città e anche se mi trasferissi in un piccolo luogo visitassi altre città spesso. Mi concentrei a diventare fluente in Italiano più velocemente possibile. Sono sicuro che le Gente ci incontro sarebbero estremamente gentili e vorrei a parlare con li quando posso. Forse tornerò a scuola in Italia, non Sono sicuro cosa voglio fare quando sarò finito con il mio viaggio. Allora, potessi volere fare qualcosa di diverso da quello che facevo prima, cioè ingegneria. Voglio dire, qualcune cosa io faccia, spero abbia scopo e significato.
Aug. 18, 2025
I'M DISSAPOINTED WITH MY FAMILY
I had forgotten how this page was called and I had to ask to chat gpt.
I just want to talk about how dissapointed I am with my aunt; few days ago, I texted in this website about the situation with my aunt and her cat.
She asked me if I could take care of her cat again, in my mind I was like: "can you please stop travelling or at least don't call me for this fucking job again". However, I was positive and I thought that this time would be different and she would pay me, because she was going to the beach for 1 week.
I told her that I would be her cat's carer.
When she came back, she didn't even thank me for everything I did, wtf. From now on, I'm totally sure that I will never help her, she's not gratteful, that's obvious.
Aug. 18, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 20
Anna said, "You want proof, right? Then follow me."
Anna and Alok went to the same place where Alok had killed the jackal. But when they reached the spot, they saw that the dead body of the jackal was missing.
Seeing this, Anna said, "See this, I told you the jackal was not an ordinary one. He had some magical powers; he came alive after some time of his death!"
Alok replied with a smile, "Really? Do you think I am a fool? It is a jungle. There are many wild animals living here. I think some other wild animal took the jackal’s dead body to eat."
Anna angrily replied, "Why don’t you believe my words? I am not making a fool of you, it is real."
Anna observed the place closely with a shocking expression. She said, "Oh my God! Alok, look here—the blood stamp of a person! I think the jackal turned into a human and left this place. Here is his footprint."
Alok came closer to Anna and observed the bloody footprints of human feet. He said, "We have to follow these footprints to know the truth of the jackal."
So, they followed the footprints.
Aug. 18, 2025
Tenses of my day
1. Today, I’m not very productive, I finished some tasks and learned English for 1 hour.
2. Now, I go to get lunch and watch some videos or read a book.
3. I’m tired, but the day starts now.
4. In this moment, I’m reading a book called “As coisas que você só vê quando desacelera” by Haemin Sunin.
Aug. 18, 2025
The Black Sea
I would like to share an article I read about theBlack Sea.
The article also mentions that recently, geological and archaeological discoveries have changed the way we think about the Black Sea. Actually they say that it was originally a freshwater lake. Because all glaciers melted during the last Ice Age and came out it. The Black Sea became salty when the Mediterranean spilt over this age.
Aug. 18, 2025
Mon genre de musique préferé
Pour moi c'est une question très difficile parce que j'écoutes beaucoup de genres. Il y a quelques ans, quand j'étais un ado, j'ai écouté la musique veille des années 1960 et 1970 et quand j'étais un peu plus âgée, j'ai aimé la musique indie des 1990. Aujourd'hui j'aime ces genre parce que j'éprouve de nostalgie, mais j'ai aussi etendue mon goût. Récemment j'ai apprécié la musique arabe et la musique classique. J'aime beaucoup le chanteur palestinien Saint Levant qui chante en arabe, anglais, et même en français et je le verrai en live bientôt. D'ailleurs j'adore la musique classique depuis étant une môme. J'ai appris jouer du piano et du flûte quand j'étais très jeune alors je pense que je peux comprendre cette musique de façon que des personnes qui n'ont pas appris jouer d'un instrument peuvent. Généralement, j'écoutes le genre de musique qui corresponde à mon humeur et le « Vibe » (comme on dit en anglais) que je veux vivre à ce moment-là.
Savez-vous qu'il y a de recherche qui suggère que notre goût de musique pour la vie est impacté le plus par ce que nous écoutons à l'âge 13-14 ?
Merci d'avoir corrigé
Aug. 18, 2025
Antik Mısır
Antik Mısırı kültürü çok seviyorum! Bu tutkum gençken doğdu. Mısır tanrıların küçük yontuların koleksiyonum var. Her biri küçük yontu bir kitapçıkla satıldı. Bu kitapçıklarda, tanrının tarikatı ve semboları hakkında, arkeolojik yerler, Mısır dili, mühim firavunlar hakkında bilgi vardı. Koleksiyon harika!
Mükemmel Antik Mısır'dan çok az şey miras aldık, ama o bize güzel bir hediye iletti: yazıyı! Latin, Yunan, Arap, İbrani, Devanagari, Thai, Gürcü, Kambocalı yazısı... Hepsi Fenike alfabesiden geldiler. Fenike alfabesi kendisi basitleştirilmiş hiyerogliflerden geldi. Çılgınlık, değil mi?
Aug. 18, 2025
Acabo de ver un video sobre el famoso Karl Marx
En este escrito, voy a recapitular lo que apprendi el video del youtuber "platonto" :
- La filosofia de Karl Marx se construiye sobre el siguiente principio : el ser humano quien debe trabajar para expresarse, es un animalo practico
-Karl Marx odiaba el capitalismo, sin embargo, no rechazo totalmente porque hay que llevar el capitalismo a su extremo y despues repartir la riqueza entre la gente : no podemos repartir la riqueza si no hay riqueza, pero es gracias al capitalismo que un pobre puede estar rico, en un sistemo feuda no es posible.
Ademas la filosofia de Karl Marx es malinterpretado de muchas personas, por ejemplo la lucha de classe no es la revolucion perso solo un evolucion de los trabajadores.
Aug. 18, 2025
The real advantage of teleportation
I would love to have the power of teleportation. I love travelling but is something expensive and, depend on the place where do you want to go, you will need to stay more days or less. I have always dreamt with having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work next day without jet lag.
But the really important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks or you go to a party and it gets really late, with teleportation you don´t need to wait for the subway! you go directly home yo your bed! It`s totally the best superpower that I can imagine.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Den gleichen Inhalt mehrmals konsumieren
Es gibt viele Menschen, die dieselbe Bücher oder Filme wieder und wieder lesen oder ansehen. Wie immer, gibt es sowohl Vor- als auch Nachteile darin, und ich möchte sie heute aufzählen. Einerseits, wenn jemandem etwas Harmloses gefällt, gibt es ein Grund dafür, darauf zu verzichten? Außerdem braucht man manchmal viel Zeit dafür, ein neues gutes Buch oder einen Film zu finden. Andererseits, wie kann man seine Horizonte erweitern, wenn man keine neuen Informationen und Meinungen aussetzt?
Darüber hinaus gilt dieses Problem nicht nur für Medienstücke, sondern auch für alles andere: das Essen, das Reisen, das Kennenlernen neuer Leute usw. Ich habe vor kurzem mit einem Freund gesprochen, der sich „House“ elf mal angesehen hat. Er leidet an allen obergenannten Problemen und versucht fleißig, sie zu überwinden. Aber für solche Menschen ist es wirklich schwer, die Komfortzone zu verlassen.
Aug. 18, 2025
Do you like to order takeout?
Recently, all the food selling platforms are having a buzi war against each other, which benefits us consumers a lot—We get so many coupons for ordering takeouts. Not that I'm a fan of eating takeout, but it did save me some money. And most importantly, time. I don't cook, so I eat out. But it takes me more than 10 minutes to get to the restaurant I usually eat at. Back and forth, that adds up to nearly half an hour. Nevertheless, I believe every free luch(?) has a consequence. When the war is over and the backdrop goes down, maybe it's the time we pay double.
Aug. 18, 2025
Japans Nachlichten
Seit der letzten Tragödie spricht der ganz Japan nur von Bären. Oft sehe ich unabsichtlich die Videos, in den Menschen, die von Bären angegrifft wurden, ihre Erfahren erzählen. Ihre Geschichten sind sehr grausam, sodass ich hier darüber nicht schreiben kann. Ehrlich gesagt möchte ich solche Geschichten gar nicht hören.
Aug. 18, 2025
Daily Life: Part 7
Today, I want to share some tips about how to abolish your bad habit. Yesterday, one kind friend who communicates here taught me some shimmery advice. I'm just following one of advice. It's worked! I just studied English without my phone, and the result is that I divided my study time by 2 times than before. While I had been studying, I never wanted to grab my phone, because it was in another room. In conclusion, it's a good way for me to avoid scrolling phone during studying. By the way, just want to say thanks you! My pal!
Aug. 18, 2025
How long is the game?
Hello! I would like share my opinion about the games pricing in realtion to lenghts. Many computer games have beautiful graphics and maybe intresting plot, but they are short. New games cost sometimes even 60USD. It's not just about a price but lenght this games. If games cost that much they should be at least on hundred hours of gamplay, but instead we get games which last for several hours... Of course graphics and plot are very important, but which such short game I can't even enjoy this, because many game are simply not create to replay. That's why I like strategy games. I can play multiple campanies and don't get bored.
Aug. 18, 2025
Sentence practice 03
1 We need to take into account the society and the economic circumstances.
We have to consider the society and the economic environment.
2 High-density planting is threatening the biodiversity.
High-density planting has constituted a threat to the biodiversity.
3 Receiving education equally helps students slove the problem of getting low grades.
Equal access to education can help students with their problems of not performing well in study.
4 Access to different culture can stimulate innovation.
Exposure to different culture can promote innovation.
5 Governments should attach more importance to social welfare, especially the medical benifits.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
My favorite core
I like watching TikTok. Since there are many "Core". Do you know core? It is explained as aesthetic or kind of beauty. For example, my favorite core is autumn core. According to fandom, autumn core is "Autumncore, or Fallcore is an aesthetic focusing on the season known as Autumn." I like it. Deep color, deep atmosphere and a slight chill make me comfortable and emotional. And as a person who live in most humid and warm country in the world, autumn's dry and sadness seems so romantic. I can't stop scrolling the autumn core page on TikTok.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Using an Exercise Ball as a Chair バランスボールを椅子にする
I have been using an exercise ball as my chair for a long time. Originally, it was just a tentative idea, but since it worked well, I haven’t replaced it with a regular chair for years. Of course, it’s less stable than an ordinary chair, but that’s the fun of it! I can balance myself with my legs while sitting, which feels a bit like light exercise. I’ve noticed that I can focus better when I’m gently moving because I’m naturally a bit fidgety.
Since I work from home, I don’t get much exercise on a daily basis. I hope that the time I spend sitting at my desk can at least do some good for my body. Thanks to the exercise ball, I believe I’m engaging my core muscles and improving my blood circulation. Also, since there’s no backrest, I’m probably using my back muscles to maintain good posture.
That said, it’s overly optimistic to think that just sitting on the ball is enough exercise. I know I need to increase the duration and intensity of my workouts to stay fit.