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Liquorice All Sorts (136)
My friend gave me British candies called Liquorice All Sorts.
There were various kinds of chewy candies in a package(bag?)
One of them, a sweet and brown one was tasty. It tasted like brown sugar.
I tried all kinds, and when I tried a black one, I found it very interesting.
It was okay, but wasn't really tasty. Only one try was enough for me.
There were round ones with tiny blue beads-like things stick around.
They were also interesting.
However, most of them were tasty other than the two kinds.
Trying new food is always fun for me.
Aug. 21, 2025
used these words
Wooden, Adequate, Analysis, Ballot, Between
I'm going to die on this wooden table. I ate too much, and I still can't stand up. It can be adequate to feed a poor family that the things I have eaten so far. First of all, I need to melt down what I ate. After that, I should think carefully and make an analysis about the ballot. There are two hours left for giving my vote. But also, I haven't made a decision between options yet.
Aug. 21, 2025
Workout Morning Routines
As an early bird, the best moment to do difficult/demanding stuff, like deep studying or doing exercises, is early in the morning. It's working for me, at least for now.
Working out the body is crucial to maintain it and to ensure a good sleep. I'm not interested on being in-shape or having an athletic performance. I'm happy doing stretching session in the morning, it's a way to start a new day properly.
My routines are not longer complicated since the only thing I have to do is to follow a video instruction on YouTube, I don't have to plan anything by my own or take decisions. There a videos for warming up, "core" workout session (chest, back, abs, legs), flexibility, etc.
My morning routines start at 6AM, have a average duration of 30 minutes and I perform them at least 5 days of the week.
This little habit just brings me results like any other thing I ever tried, they are doing so now and will probably continue to do so in the long term.
Aug. 21, 2025
昨日の夢
昨日はクラッカーの夢を見ました。 クラッカーは何年も前にペットとして飼っていた優しいバフ・オーピントン鶏です。現実ではヒナの頃から育て、やがて母の知人の知人の家に譲り渡しました。そこにはペットの鶏の群れがいて、広い庭があり、彼女がもっと幸せに暮らせると思ったからです。
夢の中では、私は彼女を野生に任せて見捨ててしまっていました。もう三年も経っていました。外に座ってる彼女を見つけた瞬間、すぐに彼女だと気付きました。痩せて、足元には血がポタポタ落ちていました。逃げられないように素早く抱き上げ、家の中に連れて帰りました。彼女にあげるおやつを探して冷蔵庫の中を見ました。クラッカーはケール、トマト、ブルーベリーなどの果菜類を食べて嬉しそうでした。現実ではブルーベリーと蝸牛が好きでした。彼女がよく食べて健康を取り戻してほしいと願いました。そして、もう危険な外で暮らすことのないよう、良い家に届けたいと思いました。
時折、こういう夢を見ます。クラッカーが私の家の隣で野生を歩く姿を見かけるのです。時には元気そうで他の鳥たちと過ごし、時には弱って、飢えていることもあります。 現実の世界では、彼女は今どんな日々を過ごしているのでしょうか…
Aug. 21, 2025
Aug. 21, 2025
tried to use these words in sentences
Blue, Between, Annoyed, Amusing, Bizarre.
Everyone chooses between these two colours mostly according to matching with their genders: blue and pink. If a guy chooses the pink from those, people won't look this situation in a good way. They will think about his sexual orientation directly and there will be two options; he's gay or he's about to being gay. On the other hand, a girl can choose the blue comfortably. It means she's masculine or she is a hopeful person. It's not equal, is it? I hate being sexist, it makes me annoyed. Colour is just a colour, there is nothing more than that. Also, I believe the power of colours. They are certainly meaningful. If everyone wears colourful clothes instead of only black and whites, they will have more amusing life for sure. Their clothes' colours will affect their energy. I will keep thinking like that even if my opinion sounds bizarre..
Aug. 21, 2025
Grandpa Is an Old Man
As far as I can remember, grandpa had been an old man.
He was so old, as if never had been young.
He was so old, as if was born to be my grandpa.
Although I never contemplated that he would die eventually.
I always thought: one could alway linger one year more, despite their oldness.
Yet he died anyway.
As mud walls:
with enough storms, the demise is guaranteed.
Gone.
Finished.
I know few about his past life.
He mentioned some; I forgot most.
Just like he loves me much,
I call him 'Grandpa' in return.
Aug. 21, 2025
Aug. 21, 2025
Mi ciudad favorita para vivir
Mi ciudad favorita para vivir es Lille, Francia. Me gusta vivir allí porque la ciudad tiene una hermosa arquitectura y muchos eventos. Por ejemplo, disfruté caminando cerca de museos y tiendas. Cuando viajé a Lille, visité el museo de Bellas Artes y la Catedral de Notre Dame. Además, la próxima vez que quiera vivir allí, me gustaría disfrutar de la gastronomía, especialmente la carbonade flamande, el Potjevleesch y la Gaufre Fourré. También visitaré más museos y aprenderé más sobre la historia de Francia.
Sitio Web: https://travelfrancebucketlist.com/lille-food/
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My Day
Hello, Today was a day of relax, I was learning somethings about my area of study (Technology) from different sources, and I put my focus in concepts that in the past was many confuses. In addition, I had a session of english, where I realized exercise of sentences in impersonal passive and personal passive. I have some problems because I don't understand absolutely this concepts and is a little difficult apply them in a real context
Aug. 20, 2025
Cyprus
Cyprus is located in the eastern Mediterranean Sea.
Since ancient times, it has been a transportation hub connecting the Middle East, Africa and Europe.
Cyprus Island was inhabited by humans about 8,000 years ago.
The Old Testament refers to Cyprus as Kittim.
Cyprus is mentioned five times in the New Testament, all of which are in Acts.
In the 12th century BC, the Greeks began to migrate to Cyprus.
As a result, Cyprus has been deeply influenced by Greek culture.
The official language of Cyprus is Greek, and English is also widely spoken.
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Vorstellungsgespräch
Heute hatte ich ein Vorstellungsgespräch, um in einem Bäckerei zu arbeiten. Dies war mein viertes Vorstellungsgespräch, seit ich in Deutschland lebe. Letzte Jahr hatte ich meine erstes Vorstellungsgespräch, um in der Allgemeinchirurgie-Abteilung zu hospitieren und später als Ärztin zu arbeiten. Ich war damals echt nervös, trotzdem habe ich es geschafft, ich habe die Stelle als Hospitantin bekomen. Leider konnte ich dort nicht bleiben. Warum? Das ist andere Geschichte. Mein zweites und drittes Vorstellungsgespräch war am April dieses Jahr, um eine Stelle als Medizinfachangstellte zu bekommen, und später als Pflegerhelferin.
Wegen meiner vorheriger Erfahrungen war ich heute nicht zu nervös. Trotzdem fühlte ich mich unter Drück gesetzt, weil ich fast arbeiten musste. Ich musste überzeugend klingen, zumal ich eine kleine Berschränkung mit meiner Aufenhaltserlaubnis habe.
Am Ende ist es für mich gut gelaufen! :D
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Rutin
Hi, this is first post me . I started to new learn. I just speak and write basic levels. Today is great day. Full tıme I worked and cooked then I walked seashore. I wanted to eat a taste and give an order. It is name KAPAKTA. ıt s very delicius and basic. I recommend it. Then I readed a book and I will sleep soon.
Aug. 20, 2025
Painting my bedroom
Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something not really important. When we ended up the conversation she started looking all my bedroom really focused and she found out that it was really dirty, specially the walls.
Since that moment, my mother has told me that we would have to paint all my walls soon.
Today was the marked day and she made all my family work for her caprice, why do I have to do it? I can live without having my room perfectly.
My dad play the worse role, he made a really big effort today. Poor of him!
Even so, we finally paint all the room.
If you are interested in the results, my bedroom's walls were yellow and now are white.
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¿Qué se necesita hacer para aprender una lengua extranjera?
Hay muchas cosas básicas que se necesitan para empezar a aprender una lengua extranjera, como un libro de texto, un profesor bueno, o simplemente las ganas. Sin embargo, pienso que lo principal es tener mucha paciencia. Todos los que hemos empezado con un nuevo idioma como adultos, sabemos que los principios son muy duros. A pesar de que tenemos muchas ganas y dedicamos mucho tiempo para mejorar, no sabemos muchas palabras y nos cuesta hablar o escribir. Hay muchos videos en youtube que alegan que con un método maravilla los estudiantes llegarán a nivel B2 en un año. Pienso que son exagerados. Todos queremos mejorar rápidamente, pero pienso que no hay manera de acelerar el aprendizaje. Así que se necesita mucha paciencia y regularidad.