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April 16, 2025
My Second Elder Brother
My second elder brother is five years older than me. When I was in middle school, he was also in the same school.
My second elder brother was not very good at schooling, but he liked working. He did much housework.
He was stubborn and didn’t follow my mother well, so he often got hit by my mother.
After he graduated from middle school, he sold baby chicks for a few years. That was the only way for people in my village to earn money by riding a bike around different villages and selling chicks.
In 1982, my father retired (he worked in the local government). According to Chinese policy, one of his children could get a job because of his retirement. Therefore, my second elder brother got a job in the local tobacco company.
The tobacco company in China was a good work - unit. It was in charge of the whole industry. Private companies were not allowed to do tobacco business. So the treatment of employees was very good.
Now, he has two houses: one is in Shanghai and the other is in my home county seat. He lives between these houses in different seasons.
He has only a daughter, my niece. She has a daughter, and her husband is a naval officer. She lives with her daughter in Shanghai most of the time.
My second elder brother also retired. He doesn’t have so many things to do now. He just enjoys his life after retirement.
April 16, 2025
火影忍者
我最近在耍些叫做火影忍者的著名日漫。火影忍者我20年前第一看到了，它长时间在播放新的集。
我突然想在耍几个集但觉得非常无聊。很慢。给一个网上朋友这么说以后，我们一点讨论火影忍者，我突然又陷了。（got into it怎么说阿）
我找到了有汉语日语双字母的版本，但我几乎不看中文，我看日语的或听日语。但我有关于人名注意到了几个点。Naruto这个名字应该是因为听起来像Nagato想起来的，可是中文翻译是鸣人和长门，这都不想。但没办法吧，“长门”的翻译是因为日语用这两个字写得（只是繁体字），我觉得没什么名字像Changmen这个翻译同时它的拼写像能翻译为Naruto的。Nagato也是很晚登场的，所以决定把Naruto叫为鸣人的人应该没办法知道长门这个名字。可是，鸣人这两个字，虽然是日语里能读为Naruto的，但也和另一个他叫Naruto的理由有矛盾。火影忍者的角色，大多不是有普通的日语名，是以事物为命名的。Naruto是一种事物，看来在中文叫鸣门。（鸣门更像长门！）Naruto是间接地以这个鸣门被命名的也是在动漫被说明的。本来一个角色在吃拉面，在拉面看到了鸣门的时候，把在撰写的小说的主角命名Naruto，然后Naruto的爸爸看小说想把儿子以主角命名Naruto。
Kakashi的名字被翻译为卡卡西，但Kakashi在日语也是一个事物，是稻草人。卡卡西is fun to say though（怎么说？）
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
私の日本旅行：第3日
この日は皇居に行くことにした。東京メトロは使うことがないけど駅で優しい叔母さんは使う方が見せた。それから、電車の使うは簡単でしたので本当にありがとう、駅叔母さん！来た時は皇居東御苑に行ってすごいところでした！とても緑！たくさんの面白くて立派な建物や廃墟！セミの音もとってもうるさかった！日本に来る前にセミが聞くことがないけど素敵な音です。でも、そこでまた暑かった。とっても暑かった。直射日光でいすぎたのが思うから日射病がかかて来た…だから、建物に入ってアイスで冷えた。治ってからまた出かけてあまりの御苑が見て回った。それから、皇居の全部の周りが歩くことにした。長い散歩でしたけど楽しいとたくさんの綺麗な光景があった。皇居外苑でやがて来てから日が暮れ始めたのでしばらくもっと見て回ってから近い居酒屋に入って晩御飯（イカと焼き鳥）が食べた。
April 16, 2025
オリジナルより有名なカバー
２００２年にジョニーキャッシュがカバーの歌「Hurt」を作りました。原作は１９９５年でナイン・インチ・ネイルズを作った歌でした。原作のテーマはクスリの中毒でした。ナイン・インチ・ネイルズのジャンルが好きな人に原作は少し人気です。ジョニーキャッシュは１９６０年代に人気でした。はじめに１９９０年代のバンドの歌をカバーするのは変な決定と考えられていた。トピックとジャンルは他の世代のと考えられていましたから。
それにしても、カバーがすごく人気になりました。同じ歌詞でも、新しい意味を見つけました。テーマは老年の後悔でした。動画もそのテーマを見せました。歌手の病気、孤独、全然が見せられました。すごく人気だっても、すごく豊かになっても、悲しみはすごく明らかでした。
原作よりカバーがすごく人気になりました。一年間のあと、ジョニーキャッシが亡くなりました。その後、歌が記憶の歌そうになりました。
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
My adventure with lang
Today I want to talk about my adventure. I'm with my wife since 2021 and married in 2024. She's my paradise and represents everything for me. Before her, I was a little gamer boy and now I'm learning Italian, Spanish and want to improve my English. It's all because of my family who lives in every continent.
More since my son. It's for his future that I'm sure to take those efforts.
It's incredible how can a life change and I'm sure now, My family is the most important.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
La prononciation aux deux côtés de la mer
Cela fait plus ou mois un an que j'apprends le français. Depuis que j'ai commencé à l'apprendre, j'étais sûr que je voulait apprendre le français canadien. Pourtant plusieurs ressources conseillaient de ne pas prendre la peine de faire une distinction entre les deux dialectes, puisque les deux sont assez similaires et les differences apparaissent surtout dans la langue familière.
C'est vrai que, surtout au début de d'apprentissage, il n'en vaut la peine. Mais je dirais que la différence en prononciation mérite d'être plus d'attention. Les différences phonétiques entre les deux dialectes sont, à mon avis, très evidentes.
Comparé au français "parisien" standard, le français canadien fait plus de distinctions entre les sons nasales (« en » vs « un »), les voyelles fermés et ouvertes (« ferais » vs « ferai ») et autres sons (« a » vs « â »). Ils ont aussi la tendance à prononcer plusieurs voyelles différemment, selon la région (voir la prononciation de « fête » et « être »).
Après avoir appris le français en utilisant principalement des ressources européens, je peux constater qu'il est plus difficile de comprendre les canadiens que les européens quand ils parlent. Je suis sûr que cela deviendra plus facile avec le temps, au fur et à mesure que je faire en sorte d'écouter plus de contenu en français canadien.
April 16, 2025
My pool party
It has been a long time since my last post. I've been studying a lot of subjects and skills, one of which is programming and building. But my principal point is to communicate with you about my birthday and pool party. I decided not to go to the army, instead my mind has requested me for a big and funny party. I would invite many girls and friends to a mind-blowing event. The problem is I don´t have enough cash to finance this event. I would be ashamed if people paid for entrance, but it is not an action that an anfitrion should do. However, the high cost may cancel the party, and I had to make a little, poor, boring house party. I could deal with that, but I want this. Does anybody have any advice?
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Übung zur Verwendung von "im Austausch für"
Meine Tochter hat etwas Geld im Austausch für ihre Hilfe im Haushalt bekommen. (Klingt "bei der Hausarbeit" natürlicher?)
Ich habe einige frische Eier vom Bauernhof bekommen.
Im Austausch für sie habe ich ihm Gemüse aus dem eigenen Garten gegeben.
Im Austausch für den leckeren Kuchen bekommt mein Mann einen Kuss von mir.
Er sieht irgendwie enttäuscht aus.
Der Mann ist sehr verärgert, da er ein gebrauchtes Fahrrad im Austausch für sein neues Auto bekommen hat.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Un Mythe de Ma Ville
Dans ma ville, il y a une roche avec empreinte que ressemble à un pied pointu. La légende est le pied est un pied de le diable. La roche est près de une école. Selon le mythe, le fondateur de l'école a promis le diable sa âme pour d'argent. Un jour, le diable a allé à l'école pour obtenir l'âme, mais le fondateur n'a pas été là. La femme de le fondateur a été là. Elle n'a pas su pour la promesse, et elle a chassé le diable. Le diable a sauté par la fenêtre et a atterri sur la roche.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Un fine settimana con la mia famiglia
Cercherò di nuovo di scrivere un breve testo; a volte mi sembra noioso scrivere sempre le stesse cose.
Preferisco stare da sola o soltanto con mio marito quando ho il weekend libero. Però, di tanto in tanto vado a trovare mio papà o mia mamma viene a trovarci.
Lo scorso sabato, io e mio marito siamo andati da mio papà per cenare assieme. A mio papà piace tanto cucinare, soprattutto gli piace preparare piatti diversi e complicati.
La zuppa fatta da lui era buonissima, però ho dovuto mettere un po' di sale per ottenere quel gusto perfetto.
Dopo essere tornati a casa, mia mamma è venuta a trovarci. È stata l'ultima volta che ha dato da mangiare alla nostra gatta. Anche adesso piange pensandoci.
Ho lavorato domenica, però non mi è dispiaciuto; lavorando, ho potuto affrontare la giornata.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Introduction
Bounjour
J m’palle alex . Je suis un canadien. j ai vingt quarte ai . J’ habite une Toronto une canada . Je suis banque . J’aime football et la musique . J’ habite une appartement un milieu et ville . J’ ai un petite famille mon pére , mon mére et mon fére . Mon pére est homme de affire , Mon mére est is professeure Mon fére est étudiante.
April 16, 2025
My Eldest Brother
My eldest brother is twelve years older than me. I can’t remember many things when I lived with him. When he joined the army, I was only in Grade Two at a primary school.
He completed high school courses in our local high school, but he couldn’t take the university entrance exam as the exam was canceled in China from 1966 to 1977.
At that time, living conditions in the countryside were extremely tough. We didn’t even have enough food and clothes. Therefore, my eldest brother decided to join the army, which was the only path for him to get a better life.
Three years after he started serving in the army, he got promoted to be an officer. His position started from a platoon leader and ended as a battalion commander.
After he was discharged from the army, he was allocated a job in a state-owned company in Shanghai. He was one of the leaders in that company.
Now, he has been retired for ten years. His family lives in Shanghai. He has a son, my nephew, who also lives and works in Shanghai.
My eldest brother received many awards while he was serving in the army and he also took part in a war between China and a country. My family worried a lot about his life when he was in that war.
I hope my eldest brother and his family stay healthy, happy and peaceful.
April 16, 2025
Today's Reading
I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent.Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor.However,the reality is more likely to be there no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.
April 16, 2025
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