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Dec. 15, 2025
Pourquoi est-ce que j’écrire cet blog?
J’ai réalisé que je n’ai pas dit pourquoi est que j’écris ce blog.
Il y a quelques années, je me suis déménagé au Canada. Je suis arrivé à la province d’Ontario.
Je suis arrivé initialement pour étudier collège.
Cependant, mon plain a changé, et maintenant je voudrais rester ici. J’aime le Canada!
La chose est que, pour pouvoir rester ici, tu dois avoir un perfil très compétitif. Part d’avoir un perfil très compétitif est pouvoir parler les deux langues de le pays: anglais et français.
Je peux parler anglais, mais mon français doit améliorer. J’ai commencé avec Duolingo peu plus de 400 jours avant, j’ai commencé avec classe particulier aussi.
En ce moment j’essaye d’écrire cette textes tous les matins, j’écoute la radio en français dans le travail, et j’essaye de parler tous les soirs. Je suis en train de essayer de implémenter l’apprentissage avec immersion.
Je crois que je suis niveau A2 maintenant, j’ai une anne pour être niveau B2.
L’autre chose qu’aide beaucoup est que mon premier langue est l’espagnol, donc il y a beaucoup de vocabulaire similaire dans les deux langues.
J’ai améliore un peu plus chaque jour.
Merci beaucoup pour lire et pour ton aide!
Dec. 15, 2025
Dec. 15, 2025
Ma vie quotidienne
Habituellement, entre lundi à vendredi, je me réveille vers 6h mais je me couche vers 6h30 parceque j'ai tendence à tomber sur mon lit accidentellement. Mais les fins de semaine, je me lève plus tard, vers 7h30 car je me sens que c'est très important de reposer, surtout le weekend. Ensuite, je fais ma toilette et je m'habille, tous les choses normales. Puis, je prends mon petit-déjeuner assez tôt, vers 8h. Quotidiennement, je mange des œufs avec une tartine et une bonne tasse de thé. Après avoir pris mon petit-déjeuner, j'étudie un peu avant de partir pour l'école vers 8h55. Mon école est très proche de chez moi, donc je marche, quelquefois avec mes amis, mais habituellement seul. À l'école, j'ai quatre cours chaque jour, le cour de Mathématiques, le Fraçais, les Études Canadiens, l'Anglais tous les deux jours et le cour de sciences des autre jours. J'ai aussi une pause vers midi pour une heure et c'est l'heure quand je mange mange déjeuner dans la cafétetria avec mes amis. Les cours terminent vers 3h35 et après les cours, je fais mes devoirs et je joue des sports avec mes amis. Les jeudis et mardis, j'ai l'entraînement de badminton, mon sport principal. Ensuite, je prends mon souper vers 8h du soir et regarde la télé avant de coucher vers 9h30. Les week-ends, je me détends et fais mes devoirs. Parce que je suis lycéen, il faut que je prenne une pause chaque fois que possible.
Dec. 15, 2025
Dec. 15, 2025
Día 3 - Un día perfecto para organizar actividades.
Hoy es lunes y estoy muy emocionada porque tengo algunas cosas que quiero terminar hoy. La primera cosa que hice fue buscar un nuevo programa para organizar mis actividades. Coge Trello como mi favorita y vamos a ver si eso me va a ayudar con todas las cosas que necesito hacer en diciembre.
Dec. 15, 2025
Veri sızıntıları
Dün Türk bir arkadaşla e-Devlet hizmetinde veri sızıntısı hakkında konuşuyordum. Birçok ülkede hackerlerin hücumları ulusal hizmetlere ve kurumlara karşı çoğalıyor. Onlar geliş bir masale. Bu hücumlarından bazıları yalnız suçlulardan gelir, diğerler artan uluslararası gerilimlerin bağlamındaki bazı devletlerin ekonomik bir savaşın parçasıdır. Hükümetler siber güvenlik stratejilerini yaratamadığı görünüyor. Fransa'da, seçilmiş memurlar bu kanu hakkında kadar cahil ki, korkutucu. Belediye başkanım Facebook ve X arasında farkı hatta bilmiyor: böyle insanların iyi OpSec çözümlerini geliştireceğine nasıl güvenmek? Bazen siber suçlulara verimizi hizmet ediğimizi hissediyorum: onu çalmak için gayret etmelerine bile gerek yok!
Dec. 15, 2025
Dec. 15, 2025
Countries's Power.
Ten years ago, Turkish military shot down a Russian war plane as the plane violated Turkey's airspace. Then Russia started some sanctions against Türkiye such as avoiding Russians to have a holiday in Turkish cities or intimidated Türkiye's goverment into cutting off natural gas they supplied. In the end, Turkish goverment apologised family of pilot in the plane and paid a compensations. Now, Russia shot Turkish ships with a missile and Türkiye's The Ministry of Foreign Affair did nothing.This is way too upsetting. Unfortunatelly Türkiye does not have enough power to make Russia do the same thing that Russia made Turkey do ten years ago.
Dec. 15, 2025
Runeid from Bensin
I usually wake up at 5:00 on Mondays because there is heavy traffic in the morning, so I have to leave for work earlier.
This happened this morning. I was driving my car when I suddenly noticed that I only had enough fuel for about 20 kilometers.
I changed direction toward a gas station.
I missed the turn to the closest station, so I decided to go to another nearby one. While I was heading there, I ran out of gas and my car stopped.
Dec. 15, 2025
IELTS Training test
Since I write diaries on this website, I feel nervous about my English skills. I can communicate in English, but I am not good at it. All my writing on this website needed to be fixed.
I wondered what my level of English is. I searched the IELTS test questions, and I solved them.
Only I attempted the reading and listening sections, and the results were disappointing. I asked to check my score to AI, and it said my reading score was band 4.5~5, and listening was band 6. There was a huge gap in reading and listening. I struggled to read long sentences, because I didn't know many key words. Undergo, fulfilled, enterprise, revival, republicanism, reintroduction, infertile...and more. In the listening test, I wrote answers with misspellings. I regret that I should have studied more when I was younger. But the time already passed, now I have to study.
Dec. 15, 2025
Dec. 15, 2025
Dec. 15, 2025
Dec. 15, 2025
Scrapbook Afternoon
There’s a virtual event that takes place every Christmas season where a female readers collective invites everyone to read books written by women, and one of the special activities was to create a scrapbook with the books you want to read.
I didn’t know what a scrapbook was, but it was super fun to create one, I felt like a kid again, cutting pieces of paper, stickers and old magazines to recreate the cover of the books I’m planning to read this year.
Since I do digital art, creating with physical media was refreshing, and something I’d like to do more in the future
Dec. 15, 2025
Dec. 15, 2025
The Breakfast
My husband has day off today. I made a great breakfast this morning. Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk. We had breakfast together, talking a lot. I had a nice morning. I love Japanese breakfasts, too. What kind of breakfast do you like?
Dec. 15, 2025
Study English By Watching Cartoons
My daughter and I both are learning English, she is eleven years old and in grade six primary school. As she usually watches cartoons, I suggested we could watch English cartoons together. I found the English version cartoon-Miraculous:Lady Bug &Cat Noir-she usually watched. We watched one episode and found the cartoon characters speak too fast to understand. We totally couldn't hear a thing they said at all.
Would please recommend an English cartoon with slow dialogue for us?
Dec. 14, 2025
Die Freunde
Ich habe heute 12 Stunde geschlafen! Ich war wirklich extrem erschöpft. Ich wollte mehr Stunde ins Bett bleiben, aber ich hatte heute viel zu tun.
Heute haben wir, mein Freund un ich, nach Lichtenfels mit dem Zug gefahren, um unsere ältere Freunde zu besuchen. Sie haben uns zu ihre Wohnung eingeladen, um Kaffee zu trinken und Kuchen zu essen. Sie haben eigentlich Kuchen für uns gebacken, die sehr lecker war, und sie haben uns auch viele Schokolade, Muffins und Snacks angebetet. Zusätzlich haben sie uns Geschenke geschenkt.
Sie sind immer sehr nett zu uns!
Wir hatten auch die Gelegenheit Eddy, der Kater, zu begrüßen und mit ihm zu spielen. Er war sehr froh! Er hat uns geschnurrt.
Ich hatte eine schöne Zeit.
Dec. 14, 2025
Providence
Although my french ability is limited, I was fascinated by a French film.
This film has French subtitles, but it doesn't affect understanding if you're a beginner of French.
Because the films have a voice in English.
How did you become so wealthy if you stayed all that time in prison?
I believe it was providence.
what's your understanding of providence?
In the overall sense, that destiny will ensure justice.
We must believe that everything happens by divine providence.
The Count of Monte Cristo was put in jail for 15 years.
After escaping from prison, he embarked on a path of revenge.
His original name was Edmond Dantès, but he changed it to Monte Cristo.
Dec. 14, 2025
🎨《共享的画布：关于人生脚本的思考》（修订版）
我们降生时，仿佛一卷空白的羊皮纸——随着时间流逝，
被无数双手塑造，被偶然与选择轻轻触碰，
也被贪婪、愤怒和污垢的笔触所染。
我们的生命始于柔和的素描
——未来可能性的苍白轮廓。
随着环境像砂纸般在我们身上摩擦，生命慢慢获得了纹理，
刻下凹痕、伤疤与棱角，直到我们心想：“这就是我。”
有时，我们以鲜活的笔触作画，
把混乱转化为旋转的图案，闪烁着一丝优雅的光芒。
然而，另一些时候，我们却在画架前僵住：
心中充满疑虑，画笔在手中颤抖，怀疑自己是否真的懂得如何创造。
以艺术的方式生活需要勇气
——需要敢于拥抱自身错误的魄力。
这也需要取舍：知道哪些该保留，
哪些应重新描绘，以寻求更好的形态。
而且，幽默始终不可或缺；
我们往往把自己这小小的画布看得过于严肃。
的确，我们必须学会爱上自己的不完美，
因为不久之后，它们将与宇宙的画布融为一体，成为存在那神奇熵流的一部分。
Dec. 14, 2025
Dec. 14, 2025