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お勧めのお菓子
誰か何日本のお菓子を勧めれますか?
個人的に、私が発見した一番好きなお菓子はミンティアーでした。ミンティアは、その名前自体からわかるように、ミントです。好きなお菓子の一つです。ぶどうの味が一番好きでした。アサヒ作ったミントです。何年も前に父が日本にある軍事基地で働いてのでの日本に住んでいる僕の女性のいとこはこれを紹介した時発見しました。とても美味しくて口にゆっくり溶かしましたので。それまで、いつもそれを買います。他の好きなお菓子はアルフォートのチョコレートとダースとポッキーとロイスチョコレートです。時々明治チョコレートも。
これらのチョコレートは有名ですか,それとも海外でのみ有名なのでしょうか?
しかし、キットカットに勝るものはありません.でも、これは決まり文句すぎます。個性的なものが欲しかったです。それでおしまい。終わりました。
April 22, 2025
La mode vestimentaire
En lisant ce texte, je me suis rendu compte que quand je lis les mots « mode » et « ringard », je pense automatiquement en le sens vestimentaire, et que ce n'est pas forcément le cas. Bref, je vais répondre dans ce sens quand même.
Ce que j'aime c'est de voir des gens porter les genres de vêtements qui les plaisent. De voir des personnes s'exprimer leurs goûts et individualités sans peur d'être jugées ou moquées. Quand j'avais 20 ans, une collègue a complimenté ma tenue (qui n'était qu'une jupe en jean et un t-shirt avec un dessin d'un chat mignon). Elle a dit plutôt sincèrement qu'elle aimerait de porter une tenue similaire mais qu'elle n'a plus le droit à son âge (fin de la quarantaine). Ça m'a fait de la peine. Pourquoi c'est important ?
Je pourrais parler de la mode vestimentaire que j'aime ou déteste si je la portais moi-même, mais sur les autres, je suis neutre. S'ils sont heureux, je suis heureuse pour eux.
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
My First Workplace
My first workplace was in a county situated in the eastern part of Anhui Province, about 200 kilometers from my hometown. The department I worked for was a government-funded institution named the Agricultural Machinery Training Class.
That county is situated in a hilly area, so the ground there is uneven. It’s lower in the southeast and higher in the northwest.
My office was in the northwest part of the county and consisted of a row of bungalows stretching from east to west, with about ten individual rooms.
Since it was a hilly area, the underground water was very deep, which made it difficult to fetch water. Therefore, my coworkers and I often collected rainwater for use.
There may have been one or two running taps, but somehow they seemed to be locked all the time. Sometimes, maybe they were unlocked, but there was no water at all.
There were not many people in my department, maybe only six or seven. One of our leaders lived in the department alone, just like us (that year, two new graduates were allocated to that department, and I was one of them), as his family was not in that county. We cooked food together.
Our work was not very busy as our task was only to conduct a few training sessions. The participants were agricultural machinery operators in that county.
I worked there for four years. At that time, I could only go back home during the traditional Chinese Spring Festival. In 1989, with the help of my relatives, I was transferred back to my hometown, Fuyang.
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
Sentences-building Exercise - IELTS Vocubularies
Keeping biodiversity is essential for ecosystem sustainability.
Governments should take measures to prevent deforestation and establish conservation areas for fauna.
Air pollution is a significant concern, particularly the issue of harmful emissions.
A shift from fossil fuels to renewable energy is imperative for human society.
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
Martedì 22 aprile
Farò tesoro del tempo libero facendo una lunga passeggiata. Ho qualche commissione da fare, quindi mi sono svegliata ben prima che suonasse la sveglia.
Giuro che il mio cervello si assicura che sia sveglia per affrontare la giornata.
Si avvicina il mio compleanno. Per quest'occasione, tempo fa, un amico che avevo mi avrebbe fatto un regalo. Però non andiamo più molto d'accordo, perciò non credo che me ne farà uno quest'anno.
Ad essere onesta, non voglio nemmeno vederlo, è una persona la cui mentalità e le cui convinzioni sono opposte alle mie.
Ho letto qualcosa a riguardo, si chiama "l'ultimo incontro". Quando l'universo decide che voi due non dovreste più incontrarvi, non vi incontrerete mai.
Finora è stato vero, e spero che continui ad essere così.
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
What would you like to change in your culture?
Last night, I was asked the question in the title while chatting. I took a little time and then answered as follows:
If I could, I want to change the mindset of looking up to men and down on women among generations. Things have changed a lot in the past 100 years. But still, in many families in China, the grandparents and parents prefer boys to girls.
My parents have three children: my elder sister, me and my younger brother. When I was a kid, my mother always said that she treated the three of us equally. But, she herself was the only person who believed it. I bought my father's first smart phone but what he was pround of was the phone shell that my brother bought for him.
I used to be very sad and angry about those kind of situations. My sister is the first child in the family. Her situation was a little better, but not by much. She once told me she would never be the parent like our parents. But now, as a mother of two kids, she acts exactly like my mother. Since my nephew was born, my niece never appear on her social media.
That's a terrible thing. I want to change it, but I feel powerless.
April 22, 2025
Was habe ich gestern gemacht?
Gestern war ein erfolgreiches Tag! Zuerst habe ich die erste Folge von der siebten Staffel der "Black Mirror" angeschaut und es war wirklich geil! Danach habe ich eine Joggingrunde gemacht. Es hat mir viel Spaß gemacht. Während meines Laufs habe ich gleichzeitig eine Folge von "Easy German Podcast" angehört. Sie haben über die beste Zeit im Leben unterhalten. Nach dem Duschen habe ich ein Buch für 80 Minuten gelesen und danach habe ich eingeschlafen.
April 22, 2025
「ハリーポッター」の小説
今日は「ハリーポッター」の小説について話したいと思います。僕はハリーポッターとともに成長しました。キャラクターに同じ歳です。この小説、二回読んだことがあります。一回目はフランス語で読みましたが、二回目は英語で読みました。外語で本を読むのは難しいですが、言語を練習ために役に立つ経験です。たぶん将来には日本語で読んでなれます。それができればとてもうれしいですが、まだ上手ではありませんね。
どうしてこの小説を読むことはいいだと思っていますか？第一に、人気な小説です。理由は映画だけではありません。映画は、たぶん評判の要因だと思いますが、小説はとてもすごいですからも人気があります。映画はとてもおすすめですが、ハリーポッターの世界が好きなら、小説は映画より詳しくて、多い新しいキャラクターがいますよ。ですから、小説もとてもおすすめです。読むながら、他の世界にいますよ。現在の問題はなくなります。この気持ち、とても楽しいですね。そして、この小説が長いですから、時間がかかります。でもそれが悪いことではありません、逆に、時間がかかったら、いいことだと思います。本当に現実の世界から脱走できれば、いいことですね！
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
Heute
Ich bin mit meiner Oma zu Obst kaufen gegangen.
Mein Onkel hat Fleisch kochen und danach haben wir gegessen.
Wir haben auch eine scharfe Soße gemacht.
Wir haben meinem Onkel geholfen, ein Möbelstück aufzubauen.
Danach haben wir Kaffee getrunken und jetzt spielen wir chess, ich möchte verbessern.
April 22, 2025
Il playoff di pallacanestro a New York
Stasera ho guardato la partita playoff di pallacanestro fra i New York Knicks e i Detroit Pistons. Sono una tifosa dei Knicks perché ho sempre vissuto a New York. I Knicks hanno perso tutta la partita, ma sono riusciti a pareggiare verso la fine. Purtroppo hanno perso all'ultimo minuto. Hanno già vinto una partita nelle serie, quindi dovranno vincere altre tre più partite per avanzare al secondo turno.
April 22, 2025
“Fruits”
When I was a child in the countryside, I never saw fruits such as apples, bananas, mangoes, oranges.
Families in my village had vegetable gardens, where villagers planted Chinese cabbage, tomatoes, green onions, radishes. We treated the tomatoes and radishes as our “fruits”, as well as raw sweet potatoes.
We could eat watermelons as they were a local melon with which villagers could make some money.
When I was in the first or second year of middle school, my oldest brother came home from Shanghai, where he served as an officer in the army. He brought some apples to my family—it was the first time I had ever eaten apples.
After I started working in cities, all kinds of fruits were easy to get in markets, but my salary was too little to buy those expensive fruits.
In the past several years, my salary has increased. I have enough money to afford fruits, but somehow I no longer want to eat them.
April 22, 2025
April 22, 2025
Call Broker Hotline -copied down some useful phrases
I’d like to follow up on a home loan application currently in progress. Could you please check the status for me?
I just wanted to check which stage the application is currently at.
I noticed it's been a while. Just wondering if there’s any outstanding information?
The client is hoping to move forward soon, so we’d appreciate any update or if it’s possible to expedite the process.
Let me repeat that back to you.
Sorry, just to confirm…
Sorry, could you say that again a bit slower?
Sorry, the line was unclear. Could you repeat that last part?
April 22, 2025
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