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Was denke ich über die 30-Tage-Challenge
Heute ist der letzte Tag der Challenge dieser Seite. Was denke ich darüber?
Nun ja, ich denke, dass es eine sehr gute Idee ist, besonders für Menschen, die eine Sprache üben möchten, aber keine Ahnung haben, worüber sie schreiben können. Es gibt solche Menschen. Ich benutze seit 2008 die Seite Lang-8, welche die Inspiration für Langcorrect ist, und ich erinnere mich, dass viele Menschen oft geschrieben haben: Ich weiß nicht, worüber ich schreiben soll. Eine Challenge wie diese ist gut, weil man keine Sorgen darüber machen müssen. Es gibt viele Ideen und Themen und alles, was man machen soll, ist schreiben. Mein Problem ist das Gegenseitige: Ich habe zu viele Ideen und Themen, worüber ich schreiben möchte. Ja, das kann ein Problem sein. Nicht nur habe ich viele Ideen, sondern schreibe ich auch zu viel. Meine Texte werden oftmals so lang, dass kaum jemand Lust hat, sie zu korrigieren. Deshalb weiß ich es sehr zu schätzen, dass Du gerade diesen Text liest und höchstwahrscheinlich korrigierst. Mir wurde bereits mehrfach empfohlen, kurze Texte zu schreiben, damit die Möglichkeit, die sie korrigiert werden, erhöht. Eben deswegen werde ich diesen Text jetzt beenden. lol
April 30, 2021
Can't Go Back
Could you help me write the lyrics of this song?
I couldn't find it anywhere. :(
(Its really short)
Richard Earnshaw, Polina Griffith - Can't Go Back (Classic Vocal Mix).
https://youtu.be/n354xA8Wa7U
"We try to hold on to
... feelings ... passes by
some of ... will never know
We look for a reason
to fulfill the ... of time
And we learn to let it go...
(chorus)
But I just can't go back
into the past
the doors ...
... feelings
I'm trying ...
...
For I'll never be the one ...
You ride like ...
... broken mean much more to me
You ride like ...
... broke mean much more to me
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April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
Korossol into the Ring 30
Wow. The 30 Days Language Challenge has ended. Finally. I thought I would die.
Dont misanderstand me: I had a lot of fun, learned a lot and met nice people who bravely read through my mistakes. It was good!
But I overestimed myself. I shouldn't have took a challenge so soon. I just signed-in, I didn't even understand how the site worked. I also had other obligations that took a lot of my time and more work everyday just didn't cut in. That was bad.
Writing in English is difficult for me. As I'm french and on this site, you had probably guessed it. The idea behing Langcorrect seemed sound. It actually helped me tremendously. But it IS work. I have to push myself everyday to do it. It's actually harder to write about mundane things than writing stories. I didnt know that. But I could write 250 words a day in English, as long as I tried hard.
The problem was that I was already writing 1400 words in French by day, working on my short-story and editing older texts for publication. I was also working. And having a life. It was hard and I'm very tired. My eyes burn.
The writing was not so difficult, but it was hard to find the time and the courage to correct others stories and to read my corrections. I realized I could do one but not both.
I think that in the future, I will write on this site every other day. I hope this means: "I wrote yesterday, I won't today, maybe tomorrow." Sorry, I find that idiom very confusing. I will write one day and correct the day after.
Maybe I will take a free week before...
April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
Journal
It was really hot today. The temperature has reached almost 30 degrees Celsius. I still felt very hot even though I just wore a single shirt and single pants. Several years ago, I was afraid of winter cold but never afraid of summer heat. But now, no matter whether it is winter cold or summer hot, I can't stand both of them. I suppose the reason is because I am getting old. In the region where I live, the coldest temperature in winter can be as low as minus 15 to 20 degrees, and the highest temperature in summer can be as high as 35 to 40 degrees. So the temperature here is not ideal. I have been searching for a place with nice weather for many years, but I still can't find it. Kunming is called a spring city in our country. I have been there several times. The temperature in summer in Kunming is usually below 30 degrees, and the lowest temperature in winter is usually around 0 degrees. But the altitude of Kunming is around 1900. Besides this, the air there is pretty dry. I think these are two disadvantages of the city. Maybe anything has their dual characters. You never find a thing that is all good or all bad. So I think my idea is not actual. I am sure that I can never find that place.
April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
Dag 30 en het is geen einde!
Ik ben heel blij dat ik deze website nu ken. Soms had ik niet zo veel kracht om dagelijks veel te schrijven maar ik heb tenminst een beetje wat geschreven. Elk woord brengt me nader naar mijn droom. Dank aan alle die mijn tekstjes hebben gecorrigeerd. Dank voor alle jullie nuttige commentaren en opmerkingen. Ik waardeer het extreem dat jullie voor me tijd namen!
Het was ook heel leuk voor mij russische teksten te corregeren. Dat doe ik nog steeds graag en ga verder doen.
Wat gebeurt nu met mijn Nederlands?
Ik ga hier voor mijn taaltoets Nederlands (EER) oefenen. De opdracht is het volgende: ik moet een grote wetenschappelijke tekst (800 tot 900 woorden) in een maximaal 80 woorden lange tekst kunnen weergeven. 90 woorden zijn al niet voldoend.. Hoe ga ik het doen? Geen plan. Maar de oefening baart kunst! Er zijn ook drie andere opdrachten in dit examen maar deze kan ik hiet niet oefenen.
Wens me geluk!
April 30, 2021
New English Speaking book
I bought a book about an English speaking test which is called OPIc.
With the book, I could get many tips for getting higher degree of the test.
For example, I need to consider grammas especially tenses which is my weakness.
Using many types of subjects, I can make more diverse sentences
Linkers and conjunctions are also important for natural sentences.
Most of all, I have to say them as many as possible.
April 30, 2021
Ende der Herausforderung
30 Tage sind schon vergangen, ich bin ein bisschen überrascht, muss ich sagen. Es war spannend und ich muss jede die meine Texte korrigiert haben bedanken. Ihr alle sind großartige, ich bin sehr dankbar. Ich wollte auch sagen, dass vielleicht in Zukunft können die Herausforderungen ein bisschen mehr mit verschiedene kulturelle Themen zu tun haben wie Kunst, Geschichte, Politik, Wissenschaft und Technologie. Manchmal hatte ich das Gefühl, nur über Sprache lernen zu schreiben, was nicht zu viel Spaß macht. Insgesamt aber war es eine tolle Erfahrung, auf jeden Fall!
April 30, 2021
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April 30, 2021
Último dia
Durante este challenge, eu aprendi muitas novas palavras. Por exemplo, no início eu precisava muito mais tempo para procurar o vocabulário e com o tempo eu não tive que investir tanto tempo na procura. Tenho o sentido que também a minha grámatica melhorou. Fazendo este challenge, eu não tive tanto tempo para aprender outras coisas da língua, como ler livros em português ou assistir videos. Então nos dias seguintes gostaria usar este tempo para melhorar meu nível lendo e ouvindo.
April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
Sentence 095: No Love Lost, Par For The Course, Way Off Mark
There's really no love lost between my brother and me. We have no spoken for years.
"She came late to all our appointments last week." - "Par for the course, surely, rarely anyone would describe her as 'punctual'".
This study is so way off the mark that I won't even read the summary.
April 30, 2021
İyi günler!
1)
A: Günaydın. Sinin adın ne?
B: Merhaba. Benim adım Kurirei. Sinin adın ne?
A: Benim adın X. Memnum oldum.
B: Ben de.
...
A: Hoşça kal, görüşürüz!
B: Görüşmek üzere, iyi günler!
2)
A: Günaydın. Sizin adınız ne?
B: Merhaba. Benim adım kurirei. Sizin adınız ne?
A: Benim adın X. Memnum oldum.
B: Ben de.
...
A: Hoşça kalın, görüşürüz!
B: Görüşmek üzere, iyi günler!
April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
Les quatre saisons en Suède (1)
La Suède est un pays allongé. Un part se situe au nord de cercle polaire arctique. Pour aller du sud au nord, ça fait 24 heures en voiture car la distance est environ 2000 kilomètres. Quand on a encore d’hiver au nord, en même temps le printemps est arrivé au sud.
Une caractéristique d’hiver en Suède était le froid avec de neige mais malheureusement le temps est devenu plus chaud à cause de changement climatique. On n’a que de neige au nord. Au nord du cercle polaire il n’y a jamais de lumière du jour, le soleil reste au-dessous de l’horizon mais si on a de la chance on peut voir l’aurore boréale, un phénomène lumineux sur le ciel sombre. C’est vraiment magnifique.
Au printemps la lumière est revenue et la nature se réveille. La première preuve sont les plantes sauvages comme anémone hépatique et anémone sylvie. Les autres signes sont des arbres avec des petites feuilles vert clair. Tôt le matin, les oiseaux chantent fort. Tout le monde sort pour profiter du soleil. En ce moment les cerisiers japonaises avec ses fleurs sur les branches nues au centre ville à Stockholm est une attraction pour beaucoup de gens. Au nord de cercle polaire le soleil ne se couche pas, c’est la lumière du jour toute la nuit. En mai-juin on peut voir le soleil de minuit.
April 30, 2021
Un amigo de infancia
Voy a hablar sobre mi mejor amigo de infancia
Mi mejor amigo se llama Kenny. Nos conocimos en 1982 cuando eramos estudantes de escuela primaria. Se sentó al lado de mi desde el primer día. Kenny era alto y delgado. Tuvo el pelo moreno, corto y liso. Llevó gafas. El estaba simpático y amable pero le gustaba hablar mucho en la clase. Yo era muy timido y tranquilo. Me gustaba mucho aprender y estudiar. Al otro lado, a Kenny le gustaba jugar y hacer deportes. Me parecí Kenny no era bueno estudiante. Por eso, no nos llevábamos bien durante el primer tres meses. Un día después de la escuela, Kenny vino y me invitó a jugar al tenis de mesa. Desde ese momento, nosotros jugabamos al tenis de mesa casi todos los días. Ahora, yo soy medico y Kenny es policía. Tenemos contactos por teléfono y internet. Ademas, mis hijas jugan al tenis de mesa con sus hijos una vez al mes.
April 30, 2021
31
Hoy voy a vestirme de blanco.
Estos árboles tienen muchas hojas.
Los pájaros vuelan en el cielo con facilidad.
El verano pasado hacía muy calor.
La cosecha ha sido muy buena.
Me gusta mucho las frutas.
Los árboles de mi jardín están en flor.
Hoy el sol ha puesto más tarde que ayer.
Cada estacion dura tres meses.
April 30, 2021
April 30, 2021
Journal
I heard of New York Central Park a long time ago and I have found some videos about it on the Internet since then. It is a very big public park with beautiful flowers, grass and trees. It seems there are two lakes in it. One is large, the other is smaller. The park is rectangular and is located right downtown, and is surrounded by so many big tall modern buildings. In short, it is really a amazing place.