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Tsuru
Als ich jung war, wollte ich immer dieses Origami machen. Ich könnte simpel Origami, wie ein Herz, ein Kaninchen oder einen Fuchs machen, aber ich könnte niemals den Tsuru machen. Laut der Legende, wer eintausend Tsuru macht, bekommt einen Wunsch. Heute habe ich beschlossen, mindestens einen davon zu machen. Ich musste mir ein Video ansehen, weil die Diagramme mich verwirren. Am Ende, habe ich es gemacht, aber es sieht immer noch nicht so gut aus. Ich bin aber sicher, es zu perfektionieren, falls ich 1000 mache. Diesen Wunsch zu bekommen, würde es wert machen.
June 1, 2021
What book do I read these days ? On the road, from Kerouac
These days, you'll find me reading On the road, from Jack Kerouac. I live in Germany and I found the book for free in a special book-sharing box in the street. The book is worldly famous to have inspired all a generation of Beats and Hippies in the 60s and 70s. That's why I am very interested to know more about it.
I never had the occasion to read it in Englisch (its original language) or in French (my mother tongue). Now I kind of have to read it in German, which is a language I am currently learning. I already read around 25 pages. Of course, I am far from understanding every word, and I often miss the meaning of complete sentences. But I am still able to read it rather fluently and to enjoy the story. I namely hate to read with the dictionnary nearby. I prefer to accept that I will not understand everything !
The author was a young New-Yorker writer. In the book, he explains how he decided in 1947 to travel from East to West through the US. He had no car, and as he was on a budget, he tried to spent as less as possible on the public transports and relied on "stop". By that, I mean that he waited on the side of the road until someone nicely picked him up. By doing that, he met varied people and lived some real adventures.
To be able to say more about the story, I will have to progress in my reading. Anyway, my text is already long enough as it is !
June 1, 2021
Teil 5 Natur und Karneval in Brasilien
(Das ist ein Teil eines Briefes)
Es kann einigen Menschen Spaß machen, in betrunkenem Zustand auf der Straße mit vielen Menschen zusammen zu sein, zu tanzen und so, aber ich würde einem Ausländer definitiv empfehlen, nicht allein zum Karneval zu kommen, immer mit Freunden zusammenzubleiben und nicht so viel zu trinken, dass man nicht mehr weiß, was man tut. Viele Verbrechen passieren während des Karneval und es wäre eine große Schade, wenn ein solch schlimmes Ereignis die ganze Erfahrung in und die Erinnerung an Brasilien ruinieren würde. Leider muss man auf vieles achten, wenn man hierherkommen möchte. So ist Brasilien. :(
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Natur und Karneval in Brasilien
(Das ist ein Teil eines Briefes)
Du musst nicht auf Umgangssprache verzichten. Nun ja, vielleicht werde ich das eine oder das andere Wort nicht verstehen, aber, wenn das passiert, kann ich es googeln oder einfach dich nach der Bedeutung fragen, hehe.
Über Brasilien... Nun ja, wenn man reist, kann man natürlich einiges erleben. Ich meine, die gute Seiten. Besonders, wenn man viel Geld hat. Das Leben in Brasilien ist ganz anderes. Ich glaube, dass Brasilien sehr gut ist, wenn man reich ist. Leider für die anderen ist Brasilien kein gutes Land. Es war nie wunderbar, aber es geht nach und nach schlimmer, besonders nachdem Bolsonaro Präsident geworden ist. Ich glaube, du hast schon eine Idee davon danke den Nachrichten über Brasilien seit 2019...
June 1, 2021
Wriring Challange, June 1st
When I was growing up, I wanted to become a scientist. I was good at biology at high school, so, I would imagine myself wearing a white lab coat doing experiments all day, discovering the unknown world of the cells and the underlying molecular mechanisms of incurable diseases and saving the world! The company I am working for contributed a lot during the pandemic by providing the researchers around the world with the materials they need to study Covid-19 virus like genes and proteins. Dreams come true, as they say.
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Thank you.
June 1, 2021
Welches Buch lese ich zurzeit ? Unterwegs von Jack Kerouac
Derzeit lese ich ein Buch : Unterwegs (On the road), von Jack Kerouac. Ich habe es kostenlos auf der Straße gefunden. Jenes Buch ist international sehr bekannt : seine Geschichte hat in den 60- und 70-Jahriger eine ganze Generation von Beat und Hippies inspiriert. Dann glaube ich, es kann interessant sein, dieses Buch zu kennen. Trotzdem habe ich es niemals gelesen, entweder auf Englisch noch auf Französisch. Ich entdecke es erstmalich auf Deutsch. Ich habe noch etwa 25 Seite gelesen. Ich verstehe nicht alle Wörter und manchmal bleibt sogar eine ganze Satze geheim. Aber am meistens kann ich das Text fließend lesen und die Geschichte genießen. Ich hasse nämlich, ein Buch mit dem Übersetzer nebenan zu lesen. Ich akzeptiere liber, dass ich nicht alle verstehe.
Der Autor war ein junger Newyorker, der Schrifsteller von Beruf war. Im Buch erzählt er, wie er 1947 einen Fernreise von Ost nach West durch die USA zu machen sich entscheidet hat. Da hatte er damals nicht genug, um einen solchen Reise zu finanzieren, ist er am meistens als Anhalter gefährt. Er hat dabei viele verschiedene Leute kennengelernt, und begeisteten Abenteuer gelebt. Mehr kann ich noch nicht sagen. Ich muss einfach beim lesen fortschritten ! Vielleicht wird es das Thema für einen kommenden Text in Lancorrect.com ?
June 1, 2021
What did you want to grow up to be when you were a child?
When I was a child, the adults at home or at school were all about, what job we children wanted to do in the future. Some children were able to answer directly to this question with a lot of assurance. "I want to be a vet, because I love animals", or "I want to be a firefighter, as firefighters are all very brave and drive a cool red car" were typical answers I could hear these times. But as far as I was concerned, I did not have such beautiful ideas.
The adults tend then to insist, until I said something. I did not want to upset them, so I told them that I wanted to be a painter. Of course, I liked to draw, so my answer was inspired by that. But the truth is, that I could not once imagine myself as an adult who would have enough self-trust to be able to present paintings to the public. I was indeed very shy.
The only idea I had was about were I wanted to live. I would have dream to live nearby the ocean, in order to be able everyday to watch the waves colliding against the granite rocks and hear the crazy seagulls' screams. My wish did not change and I still crave nowadays for the ocean. However I was forced to make other choices in life. Writing about what the child I was wanted, reminds me of this. I definitely have to move on in the future. Hopefully I will !
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Was wünschte ich werden, als ich ein Kinder war ?
Als ich ein Kind war, fragten oft Erwachsenen den Kinder darüber, was sie als Beruf machen wollen würden. Mehrere Kinder könnte antworten : "Tierartzt, weil ich Tiere mag", "Feuerwehr-mann oder -frau, weil ich sehr mutig bin"n u.s.W. Aber als Kind hatte ich keine Ahnung darum, welches Beruf ich in Zukunft machen wollte. Als die Erwachsene fragten weiter, sollte ich irgetwas antworten. Ich mochte zeichnen, deswegen antwortete ich, dass ich Mahlerin werden wollte. Tatsäslich war es nicht rigtig. Ich könnte mir nämlich nicht in der Zukunft vorstellen.
Die einzige Idee, die ich hatte, war wo ich wohnen wünschte. Ich wünschte neben dem Ozean wohnen, um jeden Tag die Welle zu schauen können und um die Möwen zu hören. Meinen Wünscht wird nicht geändert, aber es ist für mich derzeit nicht möglich, nach dem Ozean zu umziehen. Hoffentlich werde ich in der Zukunft es schaffen !
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Why do Japanese love "Demon Slayer"?
When I heard a name of "Demon Slayer" was last year after COVID 19 have occurred and made all over the world into pandemic. I read several episodes of it by an online magazine sites. I wasn't impressed like most Japanese people, who commented that this animation was so great and couldn't stop reading or watching until they finish all episodes they were able to.
Coincidently, a friend of mine was interested in watching it on Netflix. So we sew all seasons together. Yes, I thought a screen images were beautiful and a story wasn't neither too complicated nor too simple. The story was about that battles between demons, which eat human being and young people, who chosen as a fighter. Why were many Japanese crazy about this story? Why did it give rise to a social phenomenon in Japan?
In my opinion, this story described about human love. Also, it wasn't not only show us all fighters' background and sad families circumstances, but also all demons' desires or sadness minutely. In addition, we could feel a genuine love as young fighters sacrificed their lives to save people from demons without any reward. Full of pure souls were in "Demon Slayer". Now in Japan, we have known that there aren't many Japanese who have a beautiful spirit and human love like those younger fighters in it. I think that is the reason, which it attracted us and developed a mania.
In Japan, the sales of movie "Demon Slayer" broke an all-time box-office record. It is an amazing! Yesterday after I watched it at the theater, I was stirred by deep emotion.
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Toen ik klein was, had ik er geen gedachten over wat ik eens wil worden. Het heeft me bijna alles gelukt was ik ooit heb geprobeerd te doen. De eerste gedachten tot het thema heb ik met 14 gekregen. Andere mogelijkheden behalve een patholoog te worden waren om natuurkunde te studeren of naar zeemacht te gaan.
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Living in Suwon
Suwon which is located at the southern part of Seoul is a capital city of Gyunggi province.
I have beenliving here since 2010 after joining my job.
It is convenient to go other cities especially, going to Seoul, so I can travel every weekend.
Many parks in the city, make me feel relaxed.
There are big shopping malls and departments as well as small big traditional markets.
Suwon is famous about Bulgogi which was served for the kings of Choseon dynasty.
Because I can experience all of them, I really like living this city.
June 1, 2021
Note: LGBTQIAN Biology
Biological essentialism is a belief that an individual's personality or some specific quality is an innate and natrual essence, rather than changing by circumastances.
The sexual orientation is caused by a complex interplay of genetic, hormonal, and environmental influences. There are some researchs show that they born from this way. One is Twin studies. Scientists have found identical twins are more likely to have the same sexual orientation than non-identical twins. Another one is boys were surgically reassigned female, but they still consider themselves as men.
Apparently there are more studies on gay than other types. Ok, skip the complex introduction of chemical-biological terminology.
Childhood gender nonconformity is a strong predictor of adult sexual orientation. But what is interesting in the questionnaire is that many gays are reluctant to admit it. Because they believe that if they take female dress will face more peer pressure, and can not attract the same sex. I can identify with that. My biological sex is female, but I'm more boyish. All the girls around me dress up and enjoy wearing dresses. This makes me out of place and does put me under a lot of pressure.
June 1, 2021
What is your favorite tea?
Recently, I got into "black" tea.
As you can see my profile, I have already been into "green" tea.
But the other day, my friend who knows I like green tea recommended black tea.
I didn't know there are many kinds of black tea and recipes about that.
When I overcome this examination-week, I want to taste and compare many black teas with many recipes.
Of course, don't forget to eat some sweets then.
If you have favorite tea, let me know!!
June 1, 2021
Day One
When I was a child, I wanted to be a firefighter or a banker as far as I remember. I've admired firefighters because they bravely confront fire to save people. However, I gave up being a firefighter when I was in elementary school. It was because I was not good at physical education and sports. I was born in February and shorter than average as a kid.
I don't remember why I wanted to be a banker exactly. I guess I thought bankers can use money as they want. I might have been affected by a popular TV drama that theme was a bank.