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Oct. 20, 2023
What characteristics and skill a pilot should have?
A pilot should be rational, observant, responsible and assertive. Staying healthy is the basic qualification, preventing any physical problems might occurs during a flight. Ability of English and handling multitask are also required; these are essential to make the whole procedure being operated properly no matter in a learning phase or being a commercial pilot already from the crew briefing before every flight until parking the airplane in the harbour and step out of the cockpit. Last but not least, dealing with emergency situations correctly while keeping calm makes value of an outstanding pilot. Although it’s rare that severe problems will happened en route nowadays, pilots should have this skill and always pursuing a higher quality to make the flight safe.
Oct. 20, 2023
please review my essay
Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin by at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on the appropriate/optimal age to start formal education, with some proposing the age of seven and others arguing for an earlier commencement. From my perspective, studying formally should begin before children reach seven.
Opinions are divided on whether children should be sent to school after the age of seven or earlier. Although there are sound reasons for the approach to starting school later, I champion the other viewpoint.
On the one hand, some advocate children studying formally only when they pass seven due to concerns about the potential negative impacts of the earlier start.
On the one hand, opponents of waiting until reaching seven years of age to start formal study have their own justifiable concerns.
on the one hand, advocators of the latter begin for formal study, believe that an earlier start would have negative impacts on chldren.
They believe that children sent to school at a very young age would have less time for unstructured play and the exploration of their interests. This deprives them of a carefree childhood, which is curicial for their mental health, development, and overall happiness in life. Furthermore, younger childre, accustomed to playying freely at home, might struggle to adapt to the rigid schedules, mundane tasks, and exam-related stress and anxiety associated with formal schooling. As a result, they may develop an unfavorable view of school and even a negative attitude towards learning.
On the other hand, others, including myself, champion the earlier start. we believe that the worry about the potential adverse effects are too overcautious and unnecessary. First-grade courses are specially designed to suit young children and their needs, with straightforward, basic, and undemanding content often taught through songs and games. hence, it is unlikely that children, even those who are younger than seven, would experience stress or overload by going to school. in fact, it is more likely that they can gain many benefits from this. it is scientifically proven that the younger an individual is, the greater capacity for acquiring knowlege and information. furthremore, an early start provides more time for children to gradually absorb the necessary knowledge, giving them a head start in their educational journey.n.
in conclusion, it is imporbabale that the drawbacks of starting school early, including taking a toll on children's mental health and development, along with developing resentment toward learning, that cause widespread of its opponents would happen. this, coupled with the major benefits, for example, easier and increased time for knowledge acquirement, makes it a viable approach for children education.
Oct. 20, 2023
Diary 3 😀
I am not a very self-disciplined person. Considering health as my most important concern, I never starve myself even though I want to lose weight so much. Due to my special work schedule, I usually go to bed after midnight, so I usually get up late. I often exercise on my spinning at home and take a shower later. Sometimes I take a walk on my treadmill and do some reading at the same time. I also have to take good care of my skin. Reading, exercising and skin care are all my regular tasks. Without perfect time management, I can hardly make time for English learning and musical instrument practicing. I guess I have to sleep a little less.
Oct. 20, 2023
Dricker du kaffe? - Lätt svenska med Oskar avsnitt 2
Jag har aldrig druckit kaffe. Jag ville inte bli beronde av koffein. Dessutom är koffein inte bra för min ångest.
Mina partners måste dricka kaffe eller nånting annat med koffein i det varje dag, annars får de huvudvärk. De tycker om att ha kaffe med mycket mjölk eller kaffegrädde. På varm dagar så har de iskaffe.
Dricker du kaffe? Hur ofta?
Oct. 20, 2023
PLEASE REVIEW MY ESSAY
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?
At the present age, global warming is a challenging issue worldwide. This essay will discuss the causes behind this problem and state several measures that can be taken by the government and individuals to tackle this issue.
To begin with, the global warming can stem from various causes. Firstly, using too much fossil fuels such as oi, gas can release carbon dioxide and other harmful gases into the atmosphere. In cities, a large amount of gases comes from using these energy resources for transport, electricity and heating. Another reason is deforestation. Deforestation is mainly used for agriculture and logging. Hoever, trees and jungles have a important role in regulating theclimate and promoting a health envronment. Thus, when the forest is being lost gradually, this lead to the increasing amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.
To tackle this problem, there are several measures that governments can consider. Firstly, they should encourage companies to change from using fossil fuels to renewable energysuch as solar energy, wind energy and water energy. This can help reduce the greenhouse gas emissions and allow companies to sa ve money in a long time. Secondly, there should be heavy penalties for illegal forest exploitation to make sure that the forests are managed and protected. As individuals, we can take part in environmental protection, use public transport instead of private cats. By taking these actions, this problem would be properly tackled.
In conclusion, global warming is a serious problem that all countries have to face. It can come from many reasons byut the governments and individuals also have solutions to tackle this problem.
Oct. 20, 2023
Oct. 20, 2023
Oct. 20, 2023
Buy a Bike
I am on the way to Kunshan, which is a county level city belonging to Suzhou, and the number one county level city in economy in China.
Giant is a famous bike brand in China. Although it's actually a bike company from Taiwan, it has three factories in Kunshan.
Compared with Chinese traditional bike brands Phoenix and Forever, Giant is expensive, but it's acceptable compared with Trek and specialized. So it has the best balance between quality, shape and cost.
I have tried to buy a Giant recently, but I can't find an ideal one in my city. I even went to the capital of my province, but I still didn't get one that I was satisfied with.
In the past few days, I looked for a bike from live streams on Douyin (the Chinese version of TikTok) and I learned that Kunshan has at least more than twenty Giant bike shops. A comment left me with a deep impression, "if you can't buy a specific model of Giant bike in Kunshan, then you are not able to buy it anywhere nationwide in China."
I want to spend about thirty thousand RMB to buy a carbon-made road bike between the model of Propel and Tcr. I really like the color of the Propel that the Giant team players used in the competition, but it was way expensive.
I hope I can buy a Giant ideal bike in Kunshan. Do you like cycling? And what are your bike brands?
Oct. 19, 2023
Oct. 19, 2023
Bobobo-bo Bo-bobo - Episode 12
I watched the Japanese anime Bobobo-bo Bo-bobo ep 12.
The synopsis of this episode is famous since it doesn't make sense at all.
But after watching the episode, you would understand that it describes the episode well.
The Official Synopsis: Bo-bobo and the crews have returned to the countryside. They had planted a field of disposable chopsticks with the greatest of care, and harvested a fairy-tale theme park there, but it has become the base of the A-Block Hair Hunters.
You can watch the episode on the SHONEN JUMP CHANNEL OFFICIAL YouTube channel for limited period.
Oct. 19, 2023
El ataque a un hospital en Gaza
En el día 17 de octubre un hospital en Gaza fue atacado por un cohete,que causa 471 muertos y docenas heridos. Entre los fallecidos, una mayor parte es infantiles, en los que algunos se perdieron su cabeza. Es una de las tragedia en la historia humana y como infierno.
De momento, ningún países o organizaciones confesa a este ataque. Israel y Hamás han negado inmediatamente por este ataque. Los investigadores siguen trabajando para encontrar el autor de este ataque.
Cuando ví esta noticia, me sentía muy triste. El hospital es un lugar que salva la gente. De debería ser como un objetivo del ataque. No menciona que la mayoría de la gente en este hospital es bebés. Creo que este ataque y su autor son imperdonable.
Oct. 19, 2023
Wunschberufe von Kindern und Jugendlichen
Als Kind wünscht man sich, einmal Arzt oder Lehrer zu werden. Bevor ich zu diesem Thema Stellung nehme, möchte ich mit Hilfe der Grafik einige Fakten verdeutlichen. Die Grafik mit dem Titel "Wenn ich groß bin, werde ich..." gibt uns wichtige Informationen über die Neigung von Jungen und Mädchen, einen bestimmten Beruf zu ergreifen. Wirft man einen kurzen Blick auf die Statistik, so fällt sofort auf, dass sich die Kauffrau bei den Mädchen großer Beliebtheit erfreut. Im Vergleich dazu wollen die Jungen Mechatroniker werden. Wie die Grafik zeigt, rangieren die Kindergärtnerin und der Koch auf den hinteren Plätzen, was bedeutet, dass es in Zukunft einen Mangel an Arbeitskräften auf dem Arbeitsmarkt geben wird. Es folgen die Tierärztin mit 7,1% bei den Mädchen und der Bankkaufmann mit 8,5 % bei den Jungen. Die anderen Informationen haben mich nicht so sehr überrascht.
Meiner Meinung nach sind die Berufe Kindergärtnerin und Mechatroniker nicht so perspektivsreich, um auf dem Arbeitsmarkt aufzusteigen. Aus diesem Grund erwecken sie kein Interesse bei Jugendlichen. Darüber hinaus kommt es häufig vor, dass man sich in diesen Bereichen oft mit einem geringen Einkommen begnügen muss.
Es ist zu beachten , dass die Berufswünsche von Jungen und Mädchen stark voneinander abweichen. Dafür gibt es mehrere Gründe. Zum einen möchte ich zur Erwägung bringen , dass sich Jungen vor allem Berufe auswählen, die mit der Körperkraft zu tun haben. Zum anderen sind Mädchen mehr sensibler, wenn es darum geht, sich um andere Menschen zu kümmern, z.B. Lehrerin, Ärztin, Tierpflegerin.
In meinem Heimatland ist die Situation etwas anders. Immer mehr Jugendliche, sei es Mädchen, sei es Jungen , legen bei der Berufswahl großen Wert auf Berufe, die sowohl gut bezahlt sind , als auch wenig anstrengend sind. Insofern glaube ich , dass eine ähnliche Umfrage bei uns zu einem anderen Ergebnis führen würde.
Abschließend möchte ich sagen , dass man sich bei der Berufswahl gut überlegen sollte ,welcher Beruf am besten zu einem passt, um es später nicht zu bereuen.
Oct. 19, 2023
Ma ville III
Ma ville est située à l'est de la capitale de l'Espagne, et elle est une ville qui a eu une évolution si importante au cours des dernières années, qu'on dejá peut l'appelle une cité.
Elle a environ deux cents mille habitants, principalement grâce à les nouveaux projets d'innovation. On peut regarder des beaux paisages et des rues très soignées, et on peut s'amuser trop. Il y a deux cinemas, environ de dix terrains pour jouer au basket ou au football, et il y a nombreux de parcs pour faire un promenade. En plus, il y a beaucoup des bars pour faire des rendezvous avec des amis.
Mais, commes dans les autres villes urbanisées, ce n'est pas tout bien. On a des problèmes de pollution à cause du transport et des chimiques dangereux pour l'environnement. Néanmoins, les citoyens de ma ville sont consciencées de ces problèmes et il essayent les reduir, par example en utilisant le transport public.
C'est une très bon lieu pour vivre, et jour à jour il devient meilleur.
Oct. 19, 2023
Var bor du? - Lätt svenska med Oskar avsnitt 1
Hej allihopa. Jag ville använda podcasten Lätt svenska med Oskar för att öva min svenska. Avsnitt 1 frågor om ditt namn och var du bor.
Jag heter Milo och jag bor i delstaten Kalifornien i USA. Jag är nära Stilla havet, i Santa Lucia-bergen. Jag älskar att bo här.
Var bor du? Tycker du om där du bor?
Oct. 19, 2023
Mi viaje a Japón
La semana pasada mi esposo y yo regresamos de Japón. ¡Pasamos dos semanas ahí y lo pasamos muy bien! Caminábamos casi veinte mil pasos en promedio por día y teníamos las comidas más increíbles. Comenzamos nuestro viaje en Tokio donde quedamos cuatro días. Tomamos una clase para hacer sushi y visitamos los mercados, visitamos la famosa calle de Shibuya, y exploramos los museos interactivos. Luego tomamos el tren bala desde Tokio a Kioto. En Kioto visitamos muchos templos y santuarios, vimos el famoso bosque de bambú, y visitamos los monos del parque Arashiyama. Desde Kioto tomamos otro tren bala a Osaka, que nos tomó quince minutos. Osaka es similar a Tokio y es la segunda ciudad más grande de Japón. Nuestro hotel aquí era muy pequeño, no había no espacio suficiente para nuestro maletas pero afortunadamente solo quedamos ahí por un día. Visitamos Dontonburi, una famosa zona de vida nocturna y probamos el takoyaki, que es como una doña relleno de pulpo. Desde ahí regresamos a Tokio para nuestro vuelo de regreso a casa. Quedamos un poquito más días ahí y visitamos un onsen en Hakone. Desafortunadamente no pudimos ver la montaña de Fuji porque el clima no estaba bien pero esperamos verlo la próxima vez que vayamos.
Oct. 19, 2023
Day three
About progress and how to track it.
It is a big pleasure when you can see the progress of your hard work. I wish I had a progress bar under the head it would give me additional motivation. Or I could open an achievement tab and check what should I do to get an achievement "specialist in British accents" or "understands Boomhauer from King of the Hill cartoon".
Unfortunately, I am not into the videogames so I should think of ways to encourage myself.
One of them is this everyday diary. I hope I can write a small text within a month.
The second one is the hardest - video essays. It is best if I want to work on my accent and fluent speech but I have to overcome the unpleasant feeling when I listen to my voice sound. The side effect of video speeches - increasing confidence and presentation skills.
I used to read English articles and add new words to the flashcard app to repeat them. I am tired of this practice because either I don't have time to repeat or I have nothing to repeat. And even if I learned these words there is a small chance I use them in a dialog.
But I can combine two practices - learning new words and writing texts. For example, select 5-7 new words from the dictionary and by all means use them in the text.
Oct. 19, 2023
La discipline
Celles qui ont un désir de s'améliorer, de changer, de parvenir à leur but ont besoin de la discipline. Être capable de ne pas arrêter, de rester cohérent même si l'on n'a pas envie. Celles qui ne font rien que rêvasser ne sont pas digne de leur rêves. Seulement celles-ci qui sont prêts à travailler dur et pas se laisser contrôler par leurs pulsions sont vraiment qualifiés de réaliser leurs rêves. Vrai change n'arrive pas dans un seul moment c'est une processus. Donc il faut se donner à fond pour y parvenir.
Oct. 19, 2023
Böses Blut - Teil 1
David und Emma sahen sich auf anderen Seite des Tisches an. Das junge Paar war fröhlich: Das Essen war köstlich, das Licht der Kerzen war sanft und die Musik war perfekt.
David schaute auf Emmas Lächeln. Der ganze Schmerz der letzten Trennung verschwand. Sein ganze Zweifeln und Ängste vor der Liebe waren verschwunden. Seine Hand erreichte und faßte ihre an.
'Ich möchte Sie etwas fragen' David suchte ihre Augen. Könnte sie erraten, was jetzt kommt?
Ihr Lächeln gab ihm Mut. Sie hielt seine Hände. 'Mach keine Sorge. Was auch immer es ist, ich werde wahrscheinlich ja sagen.'
Oct. 19, 2023
Jour 2
Hier soir, mon amie Lauren et moi sommes allés au restaurant pour fêter mon anniversaire. On a eu envie d'aller à un restaurant italien, mais on a changé d'avis et au lieu de ça, on est allé à un restaurant de bifteck. J'ai commandé un hamburger et des frites. Je l'ai aimé bien, c'était délicieux. Après avoir dîner, on est retourné chez moi pour jouer au jeux vidéos, Halo spécifiquement. Je suis horrible à y jouer et alors Lauren a gagné trois fois sur trois ! Il faut que j'améliore mes aptitudes de Halo haha. Après une heure de jouer, Lauren est partie est j'ai téléphoné une autre amie, Madi. On s'est discuté pendant 3 heures plus ou moins, et après ça, je me suis couché.
Oct. 19, 2023
Oct. 19, 2023
Giovedì
Ho fatto una lunga passeggiata oggi - ho camminato per oltre 2 ore. Mi sono abituata a camminare molto da quando sono stata a Bologna qualche settimana fa.
Fin da bambina mi piace scrivere, quindi sono grata di avere quest'opportunità scrivendo qui.
Sono stanchissima di lavorare, ma presto viene il weekend. Ho già saputo l'orario di novembre, lavoro da mezzogiorno alle otto e mezzo di sera. Lavoro le domeniche, ma almeno i venerdì e i sabati sono liberi.
Fra poco mangerò qualcosa di leggero. A domani!
Oct. 19, 2023
Correct the lyrics
They'll find her at dawn, like a Camellia,
Where the temples stand so rare,
No need for this vessel, she knew,
And now the sky's her hue.
'Neath cedar's song, on oak knees,
Within the silver breeze,
Her legs entwined by vines -
The forest's melancholic signs
(Chorus) 5
Twilight, violets, bruises, scars
Even in daylight, the moon lit her face,
Her hands like glass flowers
In an ethereal embrace.
Oct. 19, 2023
The definition of pilot
Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentioned flight. In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to the destination, but the only way to get human being off the ground. Movement other than walking on the ground and swimming in the water, flying is the only action human being failed to execute without any assistance. That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I eager to become a pilot.
Oct. 19, 2023
Fix the lyrics
- HOUSE NUMBER 11
I was born and raised at House Number 11,
Sun and air - my life's heaven.
A shelter for birds, I was content,
But then she appeared.
Every day, I observed everything
She did on her balcony.
Watching how she started and ended the day,
Trying to find a better way.
(Chorus)
A silent witness to a single life,
In a small house, in a noisy land.
In a world that's a sparkling whirl,
I stay still as the stories unwind.
(Verse 2)
Well... Meditating, yoga in the morning,
And the day was reborn.
She started smoking, cried, and tried to cope,
Tended to the plants with love.
She sang and wrote in her diary,
Crafted beautiful things with her man.
They arranged candles, dinners, love,
Creating paradise amid life's constant change.
(or: Through the winds of change, they were creating paradise.)
(Bridge)
The future is unknown, I cannot tell,
Renovations may end, children may dwell.
Laughter may fill the air, or her mind may break,
He may drown his sorrows, or a journey undertake.
They may depart this world, side by side,
But I'll remain here, where I'll always abide.
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