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Le plat national d’Australie
Un sondage australien a révélé que le plat national d’Australie est l’agneau rôti. C’est vrai que le pays est connu pour l’agneau mais à vrai dire, j’étais un peu étonnée. D’après moi, le plat préféré est la tourte à la viande. Alors, pourquoi dis-je cela ? Tous les Australiens adorent la tourte. On mange les petites à l’occasion des anniversaires. On mange les plus grandes aux matchs de foot et à l’occasion des événements sportifs.
Je regarde toujours des émissions de cuisine à la télévision. Je suis les chefs célèbres comme Jamie Oliver, Yotolenghi et Nigella. J’admets qu’il y a aussi de nombreux chefs célèbres australiens que j’aime. Certains d’entre eux sont Adam Liew, Poh et Marion Grasby. Ce que j’aime dans leurs recettes sont les saveurs asiatiques. Il y a une fusion de l’Orient et de l’Occident : c’est merveilleux !
Alors revenons en sujet du jour, le plat national. J’ai regardé une émission qui a décrit les plats nationaux par région. C’était un programme instructif car le plat préféré change d’une région à l’autre. Par exemple, dans les régions plus isolées ou dans lesquelles plus de peuples indigènes habitent, ils mangent de kangourous, de émeu, de crocodiles et de fruits et légumes indigènes. Le long de la mer, les habitants mangent plutôt le poisson et les fruits de mer. En bref, à mon avis, il n’y a pas un seule plat national australien.
Oct. 21, 2023
Sabato
Oggi è tranquillo, mi rilasso e mi riposo. Mi sono svegliata tardi, quindo non ho bevuto caffè. Fra poco pranzeremo mentre guarderemo un episodio della una serie TV e poi faremo una breve passeggiata.
Questo pomeriggio studierò un po' ( in realtà ripasserò ) dopo aver fatto un pisolino. Non c'è alcuna fretta. Voglio ripassare tuttò ciò che ho imparato l'altra settimana.
A domani!
Oct. 21, 2023
Der Beginn des Endes der Welt
Es geht um ein Comic von Tirabosco und Wazem. Meine Zusammenfassung des Beginns des Buches enthält Spoilers, aber meiner Erfahrung nach ist es den Leute für Comic egal.
Los uns die Heldin des Buches Léa nennen. Léa ist mit zwanzig verloren und sucht noch einen Sinn zum Leben. Sie liegt Tag und Nacht beweglos auf dem Boden der Wohnung, die sie mit ihrem Freund teilt. Dieser ist geärgert und fragt sie, wann und wenn sie endlich wachen wird und eine Arbeit findet. Das Wetter geht auf die Nerven: Seit Tage oder sogar Wochen regnet es ständig und zwar so stark, dass Leute anfangen, über ,,das Enden der Welt" zu sprechen.
Nur eine Sache konnte Léa aufwachen: ein Anruf vom Krankenhaus. Ihr Vater liegt nun nach einem Herzinfarkt in Koma. Nach einem kurzen Besuch im Krankenhaus fährt Léa mit dem Fahrrad zu das Haus ihres Vaters, um um die Katze zu kümmern. In diesem großen kalten Bauwerk mitten auf dem Wald gibt es wegen des Regens kein Strom mehr. Sie entscheidet trotzdem zu seines Freundes größten Missfallen zu bleiben und auf dem Boden zu liegen.
Es dämmert schon als eine geheimnisvolle alte Frau tritt ungeladet ein, um sich vom Regen zu schützen. Zusammen leuchten die beide Frauen Kerzen und trinken eine Menge von Omas Walnusschnapps. Lia erzählt, dass sie ihre Oma wie eine Mutter sah. Sie hat ihre richtige Mutter nicht bekannt, weil, als sie noch ein Baby war, diese sie ohne erwähnten Grund im Sticht gelassen hat. Ihr Vater wohnte im einem den zwei Dachgeschoßzimmern und war nur während den Mahlzeiten zu sehen. Er war sozusagen für seine Tochter abweisend.
Léa erklärt, dass obwohl das Leben mit ihrer Oma schön war, hat sie sich immer gefragt, warum ihre Mutter verschwindet ist. Dieses Geheimnis lässt sie keine Ruhe und deswegen kann sie sich nicht richtig lebendig fühlen.
Die alte Frau hat fast nicht über sie selbst gesagt. Sie behauptet, dass sie mit Katzen sprechen kann und dass ihre Lebensgeschichte ansonsten zinslos ist. Anstatt führt sie Léa weiter zu erzählen. Und sie fragt endlich, was im geschlossenen Dachgeschoßzimmer, des Schlüssels verloren wurde und wohin niemand betreten darf, steht?
Warte mal... Wie kann sie über dem verbotenen Zimmer wissen? Warum möchtet sie alles über Léas Gefühle wissen? Lea, ist es wirklich vernünftig mit diesem düsteren Auftauchen Schnaps zu trinken, bis du ganz besoffen bist? Stell dir vor: Es ist Nacht, du bist ohne Strom im Mitte des Waldes, isoliert, wohin niemand wegen des Endes der Welt hinfahren kann...
Oct. 21, 2023
La era de IA ha comenzado
Desde la publicación de Chat GPT en el pasado noviembre, una aplicación de IA generativa, la IA generativa se ha convertido en una de las industrias populares.
En el mes pasado, se ha publicado otra aplicación, Falcon 180B, y desde entonces, la competencia de IA ha comenzado.
Falcon 180B es una aplicación de IA generativa parecida a Chat GPT. Tiene capaces de redactar, traducir, resumir textos etc.. Su centro localiza en Abu Dhabi, la capital de Emirato Árabe Unidos (UAE). El Secretario General del Consejo de Investigación de Tecnología Avanzada, Faisal Al Bannai, ha destacado en un comunicado que el impacto de IA sería positivo en el mundo, y que en el futuro el impacto de IA esté de todos.
En mi opinión, tenemos que aceptar que estamos la era de IA y ser preparado este impacto. Aunque la IA puede ayudarnos y hacernos más conveniente en nuestra vida, necesitamos también tener cuenta con amenazas las cuales la IA nos traerá. Tantas manifestaciones como en Hollywood representan que la IA va a cambiar la manera de nuestra vida.
Oct. 21, 2023
3. Hur lär du dig svenska? Lätt svenska med Oskar avnsitt 3
Jag har lärt mig svenska på många sätt under åren. Det fanns inga svenska kurser i skolan, så måste jag lära språket på egen hand. Jag tycker mest om att lyssna på musik på svenska, men jag har också läste böcker, tittat på tv-serier och pratat med svenskar.
Oct. 21, 2023
Freundschaft
Das Thema "Freundschaft" finde ich sehr richtig. Heuzutage ist der Alter des Internets, also glaube ich, dass Jungentliche viel Zeit im Internet verbringen, um seinen Freuden zu chatten, statt sie sich treffen. Ich habe eine beste Freundin, weil wir jetzt weit voneinander entfernt leben, treffen wir uns nicht so oft vielleicht 1 Mal jedes Monat. Da wir nicht zusammen ausgehen kann, chatten wit jeden Tag. Dankbar für das Internet. Für mich Freundschaft wie die Medizin, meinen Freunden helfen mir sowohl von dem Leben, als auch im Geiste. Ich finde, dass mein Leben ohne Freundschaft unglücklich wird.
Oct. 21, 2023
Oct. 21, 2023
What's Happing?
Today, I asked the question, "Where is the Gaza Strip?" on Google Bard, which is a well-known main AI chatbot. Surprisingly, Google Bard refused to answer. After that, I inputted many more countries or places to test and found that Bard also refused to reply for countries like Iran, Palestine, and Israel. It's clear that Bard has censored related information about the ongoing Middle East issues.
Political issues are indeed highly contentious, and I also read many articles suggesting us refrain our own true standpoints about the Israel-Palestine conflict. In truth, I don't think that's a good sign.
Oct. 21, 2023
Venerdì 23 giugno 2023
Domenica 18 giugno 2023
Siamo andati a Matsumoto. (Vivo in Giappone) Mia figlia ha avuto la pratica di danza, mia moglie ha fato lo shopping, mio figlio e io siamo andati guardare il film "Super Mario Brothers." E' stato divertente. Abbiamo mangiato il popcorn nella cinema che è qualcosa non abbiamo fatto da prima la pandemia. Dopo, noi quattro abbiamo mangiato una cena di bistecca per la giornata di padre. Non ho perso peso oggi!
Venerdì 23 giugno 2023
(Sono canadese e insegnante di inglese in Giappone). Oggi è la lezione su Canada Day all'asilo di Matsumoto dove lavoro part-time. Canada Day è veramente il primo luglio, ma vado al asilo solo due volte per mese.) Ho portato il mia bandiera canadese e ho appreso ai bambini giapponesi il vocabolario inglese i più importante su Canada: alce, scoiattolo, orso polare, procione, e naturalmente, sciroppo d'acero. Abbiamo cantato un canzone canadese e io loro ho letto una storia su Canada. Ha piaciuto ai bambini.
Oct. 20, 2023
Could you please correct these sentences?
I need to shift my attention away from sitting on social media towards language learning.
At first, people, in whom conservative beliefs were ingrained/ instilled since very young, were appalled at/by the new law, but later they had a change of heart.
Every now and then, a change of scene is vital to remain on good terms with your family.
Due to the strict parenting, which is present in Chinese culture, kids have a head start in school and further educational institutions.
Oct. 20, 2023
スキーしことがあります
はじめてスキーをしたは三十歳の頃、北海道の旅行に行きました。それから、約二十年にわたる時間もスキーしたことがありません。
第二回は2019年の春になる三月に、ちょうどちん友はスキーする旅を誘いました。目的地は新潟県の湯沢町、周りに雪場がたくさんあります。友達もともとはスキーの運動がとても上手なんです。こんの機会によって、もちろん行かなければなりません！せっかく皆は一緒にスキーに行きたいでした。僕もこん回の旅行をきっかけにして、スキーの技術はもっと上達するかもしれません。
確かに今回の数日間に友人から教導してた。そしてこの前にもしたことがあります。大体に自信満々すぎると思います。
スキー板を脱いだと、5階の階段を降りたとたんすぐに階段でスリープしてしまいました。結局、背中の筋肉が気づいました。１ヶ月ほど痛くなります。
Oct. 20, 2023
Une nuit dans la rue en plein hiver
Dépenses une nuit dans la rue de l`hiver
2023-12-19
Pendant le mois de Décembre, un organisme de défense des sans-abris organisé un événement pour sensibiliser l'opinion publique sur le sans-abrisme. Ils contesté les gens à dépenser une nuit dans les rues, et j`ai décidé de participer parce que je voulais comprendre les difficultés que les sans-abris expérience. J`ai commencé avec un jour de prèparation. J`ai rencontré avec les personnes de l`organisme pour apprendre leurs mission. J`ai appris beaucoup de facteurs sur le sans-abrisme comme l'instabilité économique, addiction, et santé mentale.
Donc, par une nuit froide d`hiver, je suis sorti dans les rues avec un sac de couchage, quelques couvertures et quelques vêtements. Quand le température baisse et le jour est devenu plus sombre, j`ai commencé de réaliser le realité sévère de les sans-abris. J`ai realisé pour beaucoup de les individus, il y a pas de lit ou le confort d`une maison chauffée.
Pendant la nuit longue, j`ai experiénce beaucoup de défis. Il était difficile de trouver un endroit sûr pour dépenser la nuit. Le froid était inconfortable et le bruit de la ville a rendu le sommeil difficile. Je me suis sentie vulnérable et exposée, mais je savais que pour moi, il est juste une nuit, cependant pour les sans-abris, il est tout les jours.
Malgré les difficultés, j`ai vu aussi la résilience de la communauté des sans-abris. J'ai rencontré des personnes qui partagé leurs histoires et expériences, m'offrant gentillesse, même dans des circonstances difficiles. Leur force est une source d'inspiration.
Donc, je te demande , chers étudiants, pour s'impliquer dans lutter contre le sans-abrisme. Vous pouvez faire du bénévolat dans des refuges, faire des dons à des organisations de sans-abri ou participer à des initiatives visant à sensibiliser le public à ce problème. En travaillant ensemble, nous pouvons faire la différence.
Oct. 20, 2023
please review my essay
Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the possible and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
In recent times, the widespread availability of ocmputers has led to an increase in the number of children playing computer games. While these games can provide entertainment and eudcaiotnal advantage, there are also some drawback collisions associated with excessive gaming. There are some positive and negative effects of children playing computer games and suggest strategies to reduce the harmful issues.
On the one hand, playing computer games has some benefit outcomes. Firstly, games have a dissension result in cognitive and intellectual development. For example, a player needs attentiveness, fast reaction, and often logical thinking to compte a mission in a shooter. In addition, games for teenagers also have such an asvantage as they help developmental skills and memory. To illustrate, barr conducted a study and found that students playing computer games improved their communication, resoourfulness, a d adaptability significantly,
On the other hand, ther are people who believe that playing computer games has brought several detrimental effect on younger people. One of the major contradiction impacts of children playing computer games is the potential for addiction. As a result, youngsters cna become so engrossed in gaming that they neglect other important activiies, such as homework, physical exercise, and soialising with friends and family. Another outturn id that imprudent gaming can upshot a child’s emotional well-being, leading to increase aggression and mood sw ings. For instance, a study published in the journal “pediatrics” found that adolescents who played video games for more than three hours a day were more like likely to have behavioural and emotional problems, including hyperactivity, problems with peers, etc.
To keep down the disadvantage belongings to youth playing computer games, parents and educators can deal with this problem. First of all, parents sould limit the amount of time their juveniles spend on gaming while also encouraging them to participate in other ac tivities, such as sports, reading, and creative hobbies. Furthermore, instructors can incorporate digital literacy programs into their curriculum, teraching pupils how to use compmuters and technology responsibility and abundantly.
Oct. 20, 2023
Day four: My life in Cyprus - part one
I migrated to Cyprus at the beginning of this year. I expected that it would be difficult to speak with people or explain something but it appears that many people here know the Russian language.
Part of them migrated from Georgia and Armenia they were born in the USSR which is why their generation still knows some Russian.
There is a big community of Georgians and Armenians they even have some weight in the government
One Greek taxi driver lifted me to an airport, and I discovered that Pontic Greeks can speak Russian too.
Once, I had been hanging out with my friend. We were sitting on a bench talking of nothing when Greek senior women stopped and made a compliment in Greek. I understood that was the compliment because, after our confused faces, she pointed at my legs and gave a thumbs up. She didn't speak English at all, but when she found out we are Russians, she switched and with poor Russian said how much she loves Russian literature and that she used to speak better in the past but it was difficult to find a Russian book here.
After that episode, I felt bad because even senior people knew my language better than I knew theirs after living here for half of the year.
For now, I practice some Greek in Duolingo and learned some greetings and words of gratitude but I'm scared to use them because I feel like an imposter who trying to trick locals with little knowledge
Oct. 20, 2023
日本語が上手になるために
言語学習者は個人的な経験によって学習方法がそれぞれ違っています。私も今まで沢山の学習方法を試したり、私にどんな方法はあってるか確かめたりしました。
日本語を勉強し始めた時に、初心者にとってたくさんの分かりにくいところがあるので、作っておいた言葉や表現のフラッシュカードのアプリを利用したり、復習したりする事が凄く役に立ちました。他の方法は色んな動画やポッドキャストや音楽などを聴くことです。最初は何も聞き取れなかったですが、もっと努力して、何度も録音を聞いて、単語を探してみたら、徐々に理解できるようになってきました。聴く練習として日本人との会話をすることも非常にいい方法だと思ってます。
他に大事な事は自分の弱いところに気付くことです。例えば、私にとって、漢字を読むのは一番難しくて、苦手な部分なんですが、できるだけ毎日、色んな文章を読むようにしています。
最後に、日本語だけではなく、どんな言語でも上手になるためには、毎日毎日、疲れている時も、忙しい時も、凄い努力しなければならないと思います。
Oct. 20, 2023
Oct. 20, 2023
Venerdì
Sta arrivando il weekend, che felicità! Piano piano finisco tutto ciò che devo fare.
Mia mamma verrà fra qualche ora. Fortunatamente a volte le giornate lavorative sono tranquille, ma non dipende da me. Sono grata di avere quest'opportunità di poter passare del tempo con mia mamma durante il lavoro. Non sta mai molto da noi.
Sto per studiare un po'. A domani!
Oct. 20, 2023
A description of the picture "Beard"
The picture(https://imgur.com/a/hdtPZiI) is called “Beard”. Everything begins with a woman entering the shop and leaving her baby alone. Not the best idea if you ask me. A pedestrian enters the next frame: he is an old man with a beard similar to Lenin’s one, hat and glasses. The man gets interested with the kid in the left alone pushchair, so he bends towards. Really, I can’t think why he would do this with the strange child, but the kid doesn’t like his privacy interfered, so he grabs the man’s beard, and he wouldn’t let it go. The man finally detaches him, but the kid has torn off his beard.
The last frame shows us the smiling kid with the torn off beard in his grasp and the shocked mother who has just left the store. I think the man got what he deserved because people shouldn’t do whatever they want with strange children. And, of course, mothers shouldn’t leave their children alone.
Oct. 20, 2023
Oct. 20, 2023
What characteristics and skill a pilot should have?
A pilot should be rational, observant, responsible and assertive. Staying healthy is the basic qualification, preventing any physical problems might occurs during a flight. Ability of English and handling multitask are also required; these are essential to make the whole procedure being operated properly no matter in a learning phase or being a commercial pilot already from the crew briefing before every flight until parking the airplane in the harbour and step out of the cockpit. Last but not least, dealing with emergency situations correctly while keeping calm makes value of an outstanding pilot. Although it’s rare that severe problems will happened en route nowadays, pilots should have this skill and always pursuing a higher quality to make the flight safe.
Oct. 20, 2023
please review my essay
Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin by at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on the appropriate/optimal age to start formal education, with some proposing the age of seven and others arguing for an earlier commencement. From my perspective, studying formally should begin before children reach seven.
Opinions are divided on whether children should be sent to school after the age of seven or earlier. Although there are sound reasons for the approach to starting school later, I champion the other viewpoint.
On the one hand, some advocate children studying formally only when they pass seven due to concerns about the potential negative impacts of the earlier start.
On the one hand, opponents of waiting until reaching seven years of age to start formal study have their own justifiable concerns.
on the one hand, advocators of the latter begin for formal study, believe that an earlier start would have negative impacts on chldren.
They believe that children sent to school at a very young age would have less time for unstructured play and the exploration of their interests. This deprives them of a carefree childhood, which is curicial for their mental health, development, and overall happiness in life. Furthermore, younger childre, accustomed to playying freely at home, might struggle to adapt to the rigid schedules, mundane tasks, and exam-related stress and anxiety associated with formal schooling. As a result, they may develop an unfavorable view of school and even a negative attitude towards learning.
On the other hand, others, including myself, champion the earlier start. we believe that the worry about the potential adverse effects are too overcautious and unnecessary. First-grade courses are specially designed to suit young children and their needs, with straightforward, basic, and undemanding content often taught through songs and games. hence, it is unlikely that children, even those who are younger than seven, would experience stress or overload by going to school. in fact, it is more likely that they can gain many benefits from this. it is scientifically proven that the younger an individual is, the greater capacity for acquiring knowlege and information. furthremore, an early start provides more time for children to gradually absorb the necessary knowledge, giving them a head start in their educational journey.n.
in conclusion, it is imporbabale that the drawbacks of starting school early, including taking a toll on children's mental health and development, along with developing resentment toward learning, that cause widespread of its opponents would happen. this, coupled with the major benefits, for example, easier and increased time for knowledge acquirement, makes it a viable approach for children education.
Oct. 20, 2023
Diary 3 😀
I am not a very self-disciplined person. Considering health as my most important concern, I never starve myself even though I want to lose weight so much. Due to my special work schedule, I usually go to bed after midnight, so I usually get up late. I often exercise on my spinning at home and take a shower later. Sometimes I take a walk on my treadmill and do some reading at the same time. I also have to take good care of my skin. Reading, exercising and skin care are all my regular tasks. Without perfect time management, I can hardly make time for English learning and musical instrument practicing. I guess I have to sleep a little less.
Oct. 20, 2023
Dricker du kaffe? - Lätt svenska med Oskar avsnitt 2
Jag har aldrig druckit kaffe. Jag ville inte bli beronde av koffein. Dessutom är koffein inte bra för min ångest.
Mina partners måste dricka kaffe eller nånting annat med koffein i det varje dag, annars får de huvudvärk. De tycker om att ha kaffe med mycket mjölk eller kaffegrädde. På varm dagar så har de iskaffe.
Dricker du kaffe? Hur ofta?
Oct. 20, 2023
PLEASE REVIEW MY ESSAY
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?
At the present age, global warming is a challenging issue worldwide. This essay will discuss the causes behind this problem and state several measures that can be taken by the government and individuals to tackle this issue.
To begin with, the global warming can stem from various causes. Firstly, using too much fossil fuels such as oi, gas can release carbon dioxide and other harmful gases into the atmosphere. In cities, a large amount of gases comes from using these energy resources for transport, electricity and heating. Another reason is deforestation. Deforestation is mainly used for agriculture and logging. Hoever, trees and jungles have a important role in regulating theclimate and promoting a health envronment. Thus, when the forest is being lost gradually, this lead to the increasing amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.
To tackle this problem, there are several measures that governments can consider. Firstly, they should encourage companies to change from using fossil fuels to renewable energysuch as solar energy, wind energy and water energy. This can help reduce the greenhouse gas emissions and allow companies to sa ve money in a long time. Secondly, there should be heavy penalties for illegal forest exploitation to make sure that the forests are managed and protected. As individuals, we can take part in environmental protection, use public transport instead of private cats. By taking these actions, this problem would be properly tackled.
In conclusion, global warming is a serious problem that all countries have to face. It can come from many reasons byut the governments and individuals also have solutions to tackle this problem.
Oct. 20, 2023
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