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छठा दिन: आजकल मुझे सिर्फ़ एक अच्छा नौकरी चाहिए
मैं छात्र हूँ । मेरी पढ़ाई करने के अलावा मैं काम नहीं करती हूँ । आमतौर पर मैं इस के बारे में नहीं बोलती हूँ । मुझे लगता है कि कभी-कभी कोई लोग इसके लिए मुझसे ईर्ष्या करते हैं । लोग सोचते हैं कि मैं अमीर हुई होगी इसलिए मैं काम करना नहीं चाहती हूँ । यह ऐसा नहीं है । असल में में बहुत नौकरी करना चाहती हूँ । मुझे नहीं चाहिए कि मैं हमेशा अपने माता-पिता के पैसे खर्च करते रहेंगे । काश कि मैं जल्दी ही अपनी यूनिवर्सिटी की पढ़ाई के साथ खतम करती होगी ।
April 6, 2021
April 6, 2021
April 6, 2021
Day 5: Favorite TV show
I have a lot of favorite TV Shows, when I was younger I spent a lot of time watching series on my computer, I really liked Gossip Girl, Vampire Diaries, The Originals, and Pretty Little Liars.
I also like to watch Grey's Anatomy, I always cry with that TV show, I still cry when I remember the death of my two favorite character, they were in a plane accident and their dead were really horrible.
They were a couple, and they were angry with each other’s, but when the time of the dead came, they forgave their selves, it was very, very sad.
I can’t believe they had died like that, they didn’t deserve it. But well, writers do whatever they like most.
Is annoying.
Mark and Lexie deserve better, and I’m sure that everyone who had seen the series agrees with me.
April 6, 2021
Review 2132
The country are much more rigid about immigrants, by strictly dividing them into 2 categories: legal and illegal, a division that has somehow undermined the immigration system. Many talented people prefer immigration to pursuing their calling, which will contribute to the prosperity of immigrant countries. That is why managing immigration today requires multiple paths and multiple outcomes.
April 6, 2021
Travelling abroad helps to understand your own country
Training essay
Nowadays many people travel all over the world. Many of them say that travelling helps them to understand their own country better. At that time others people believe that understanding of your own country doesn`t require travelling abroad; on the contrary, it may impede to person love and appreciate his own country.
In my opinion, comprising of two things always helps to understand better every of them. So, if a person go abroad, firstly he can see differencies between his own country and another country. For example, something the person took for granted in his own country may be absent in another country, and this fact may provoke thinking about reasons in history and culture of his homeland. Second, talking about foreing culture with habitants of foreing country may make one ponder what he could tell about his one.
At the same time some people believe that a person can learn more about his own country without traveling abroad. On the contrary, travelling will distract him from the motherland. Because one must visit all regions of his country before he going somewhere else.
I am not agree with this opinion for particular reason: nobody can learn something quite deeply without comparison with different versions.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is impossible to enrich one's knowing about his country without traveling abroad. It is the most effective way to get that knowledge.
April 5, 2021
Review 2131
Being average just won't earn employers what they used to. New technology has been eating jobs forever, and always will. In a world where average is over, there are many things we need to do to support employment, but nothing would be more important than passing some policies that ensures everyone has access to post-high school education.
April 5, 2021
April 5, 2021
Coses per mirar
La pandèmia de la Covid-19 ha sigut una bona occasió per descobrir coses per mirar en la televisió. Des del començament de la quaratena, he anat probant noves sèries que els amics m’han recomenat. La sèrie que he gaudit més és Gran hotel, una història en castellà de tres temporades que té lloc al nord d’Espanya al 1905. Es tracta d’un pagès que ve a un hotel de luxe per buscar la seva germana, qui ha desaparegut. Acaba fent-se “cambrer” per tenir una raó per quedar-se a l’hotel. La família rica que opera l’hotel té els seus propis secrets que posen en joc l’herència de l’hotel… Aquesta sèria m’ha ajudat molt a fer creixer el vocabulari i la gramàtica en castellà.
En general, no solc mirar pel·licules. Per a mi és difícil reconèixer cares noves, i quan consegueixo tenir en compte qui és qui, la pel·licula ja s’ha acabat. Prefereixo les sèries perquè amb vàries temporades tinc temps per aprendre les cares i els noms dels personatges. Però si hagués d’escollir una pel·licula preferida, diria Ferris Bueller’s Day Off. És una comèdia amb un estudiant de secondària a Chicago que fingeix estar malalt per no anar a l’escola, i passa el dia amb la seva xicota i el seu amic fent (líos) per tota la ciutat. Però el director de l’escola no creu res i intenta agafar-los les mans en la massa.
April 5, 2021
2021-04 Challenge Day 05
Em inglês, temos uma expressão que significa um jeito para defraudar outra pessoa. Mas tem vários equivalentes em português: “Ele me limpou as contas”, “Ele me deixou sem um tostão”, mesmo “Ele cobrou couro e cabelo”. São criativas! Imagine o sentimento quando percebe que alguém fez isso com você (lembra-se do Bernie Madoff). Um senhor perdeu $13 milhões de dólares por causa dele.
April 5, 2021
Rhycce - Challenge Day 5 - Cual es tu pelicula favorita
Mi película favorita es la trilogía de ¨Lord of the Rings¨. Es sobre un grupo de amigos que tiene que viajar por vastas tierras, montañas, cuevas y bosques para destruir un anillo. El anillo fabricó en secreto y contiene gran mal. Si llega a su maestra, muerte y destrucción caerían en el mundo. Así que los amigos tienen que ser valiente y viajar lejos al lugar donde lo fabricó para destruirlo. Por el camino, ellos conocen a unos amigos nuevos y se enfrentan muchos enemigos y desafíos.
Algunos de ellos mueren, sus amistades están probados y rotos. Pero finalmente, ellos trabajan junto en caminos diferentes para destruir el anillo y salvar el mundo.
Me gusta esta pelicula porque me enseña que está bien no estar de acuerdo con tus amigos. Lo que importa es superar esos desafíos y seguir adelante.
April 5, 2021
Day 4: Favorite Food
I don’t know if I had an actually favorite food because I like some many types of food that I can’t even count them.
I like mostly Italian food, I guess, I like pizza, pasta, and lasagna, my favorite one could be Lasagna, is so good that I will never get tired of it.
What I don’t like? Well, this list is also very long.
I don’t like pig or Chinese food, I don’t like sushi or liver, neither I like Paella or seafood, I’m bad mouth with seafood.
My favorite recipe, it will be lasagna, if I had to choose one but I’m not good at kitchen so I don’t know how to make it. We have to prepare the meat, and the salsa, to buy cheese and ham, is a little bit complicated for me.
April 5, 2021
April 5, 2021
Los libros
Aunque la escritura ha existido durante miles de años, los libros son muchos más recientes. ¡Incluso los griegos antiguos no los usaron! Solo se inventaron durante el imperio romano, donde empezaron a extenderse. Este proceso fue ayudado por las ventajas que libros tienen sobre rollos. Se ven especialmente en los libros con tapas duras, como es más difícil dañarlos. Además, los libros usan menos espacio que los rollos, lo cual los hace más económicos.
Sin embargo, los primeros libros eran muy diferentes de los de hoy. ¡De hecho, el papel actual no se usaba durante mucho tiempo! En lugar de eso, se usaba pergamino. Y porque no había manera de impresión, todos de ellos se tenían que escribir a mano. Se solía hacer por los monjes, así que los monetarios eran las bibliotecas de antigüedad, especialmente durante la edad media. Puesto que eran tan difíciles crear, los libros se valían muchísimo. ¡Incluso eran conectados a cadenas para protegerlos!
Dos oraciones con "cuando + el imperfecto de subjuntivo".
1. ¡La leería cuando me la dieras!
2. Se acabaría cuando lo dejaras de jugar.
April 5, 2021
My family
In my family we are a lot of people, my family is very big, I have a lot of cousin from my mom's family. In my first family we are six people, my mother, my father, my two brothers, my sister and I.
So I have three brothers, two older than me and one younger, the younger hast sixteen years old and the older hast twenty-nine, we live in a house in a centric zone, we have managed to have a great relationship between all of us, despites our differences and our character.
My family is very important to me, I really care for them, specially my mom, she has sixty years old, and my father has sixtytwo and because all this Covid things, we take more prevention when we go outside because they can get sick and be in a bad situation.
We also have a dog and a cat, whose we rescued, they both have a good relationship also.
We rescued the cat a year before, she was in the street, very little and with hungry and thirsty, now she is very beautiful and lovely.
With the Dog, we rescued him two months ago, he is still little, he has like four months of being born, the doctor said, he was so skinny, but now he seems very happy in the house.
So, in total, we are eight at house, counting our animals.
April 5, 2021
Série/filme favorito (30 Day Language Challenge, Day 5)
Primeiro queria dizer que eu realmente tenho dificuldades com estes superlativos: comida/série favorita, livro favorito etc. Para mim depende muito do momento em que eu tenho de escolher para poder dizer qual é minha coisa preferida... Então acho que eu simplesmente vou mencionar alguns filmes/séries que assisto com frequência.
Para mim assistir a filmes/séries é uma forma de relaxamento e normalmente preciso de algo simples e não muito complicado. Gosto de filmes de ação, comedias e às vezes também musicais ou dramas.
Adoro alguns filmes com Bruce Willis como por exemplo os séries “Die Hard” e “RED”. Também gosto dos filmes de ação “Bond” e “Mission Impossible.” Uma comedia que tenho assistido frequentemente é “Love, Simon” porque na época pude identificar muito com o personagem principal e sempre terá um lugar especial no meu coração por as muitas memórias feitas em conexão a este filme. Outros filmes preferidos da minha família e de mim são os filmes "Ice Age". Quando estão no televisor, toda família está assistindo e temos muitas piadas internas que tem de ver com todas as personagens e comentários nestes filmes.
Entre minhas séries de comédia preferidas estão "How I Met Your Mother", “One Day at a Time”, “Modern Family”, “Love, Victor” e “The Bold Type”. Além disso gosto dos séries mais dramáticas como “Good Trouble”, “Party of Five”, “Tales of the City” e “The L-Word Generation Q”. Recentemente eu também assisti a uma série chamada “It’s a Sin”. Esta série passa nos anos 80 em Inglaterra e é sobre a vida de um grupo de pessoas LGBT+ e como experimentam o surgimento e a crise em torno do VIH/aids. Foi bem legal saber mais sobre esta época e chorei algumas vezes porque é um pouco triste.
Especialmente por ter estudado ciências políticas eu às vezes assisto a séries que falam sobre a política de modo fictício. Alguns exemplos incluem “Madam Secretary” e “Designated Survivor”. Tentei assistir a “Narcos” e a “Ingobernable” porque quise consumir conteúdo em espanhol/da América Latina mas foi real demais e tinha as imagens na minha cabeça o tempo tudo (em livros suporto violência, abuso, etc. mas não nos filmes).
Por último três séries mais vêm à mente, e que não posso por em outras categorias, são “Queer Eye”, “Game of Thrones” (a parte da última temporada) e “Killing Eve”.
April 5, 2021
How yo doin'?
If I said: "So no one told you life was gonna be this way", would you already know what TV show I mean? I think so, because we're talking about one of the most famous and greatest shows in television history. The one and only "Friends".
In case that you are from another planet, I will talk about the plot. "Friends" follow the adventures of six New Yorkers who live in big apartments, don't seem to work too much, and spend a lot of time hanging around at a coffee shop called "Central Perk". I remember thinking that life would be that way when I grew up, but it didn't turn up exactly this way. However, I still adore watching this old TV show; maybe it's because each character has a strong distinctive personality that makes them special. When you see a couple of episodes, you get to know them and you can predict their behavior. It's funny to see! Besides, friendship is one of the most important things in life and I like TV shows that highlight that.
I love all the characters, but probably Rachel, Phoebe, and Monica are the ones I enjoy the most.
April 5, 2021
April 5, 2021
Schwerkraft
Es ist nicht einfach für mich, mir nur einen einzigen Film oder eine einzige Serie auszusuchen. Ich bin ein großer Kinoenthusiast und habe viele beliebte Filme auf meiner Liste. Aber, mal angenommen, ich müsste jemandem um jeden Preis nur einen empfehlen. Nun ja, auch dann hätte ich viele Möglichkeiten (haha). Sprechen wir aber über Gravity. Hast Du schon mal diesen Film gesehen? Ich werde versuchen, mit meinen eigenen Wörtern darüber zu schreiben, ohne das Ende und die Wendepunkte zu verraten.
Also, obwohl der Film als Sci-Fi beschreibt wurde, ist es viel mehr als nur das. Es geht nicht nur um ein Abenteuer außerhalb der Erde, mit allen Schwierigkeiten, die entstehen können. Es geht um den Sinn des Lebens. Es geht auch um die Motivation, die man hat oder nicht hat, um weiterzuleben. Und es geht um Hoffnung. Ich kann mich nicht an diesen Film erinnern, ohne Gänsehaut zu bekommen. Er hat mich sehr berührt und ich konnte nicht umhin zu weinen, jedes Mal, wenn ich ihn gesehen habe. Nun ja, nur weil ein Film einen zum Weinen bringt, heißt das noch lange nicht, dass er ein guter Film ist. Aber Gravity ist beides: Er ist ein guter Film, der mich auch zum Weinen gebracht hat. Aber nicht wegen Szene, die Klischee sind. Um ehrlich zu sagen, frage ich mich, ob es viele andere Menschen gibt, die bei diesem Film geweint haben. Vielleicht nur ich? Ich muss zugeben, dass ich besonders empfindlich bin, aber das hängt natürlich von vielen Faktoren ab.
Nun ja, ich erinnere mich an den Namen der Hauptcharaktere nicht, aber das ist nicht wichtig. Hauptsache ist, dass man manchmal keine Kraft mehr hat, um um etwas zu kämpfen. Aber im Laufe des Lebens lernt man einige Menschen kennen, die uns auf die eine oder die andere Weise uns helfen, ein neues Licht zu sehen oder eine andere Denkweisen zu haben. Mehr möchte ich nicht darüber erzählen. Wenn Du diesen Film noch nie gesehen hast, verschwende keine Zeit mehr und geh ihn ansehen! Ich kann ihn Dir nur wärmstens empfehlen.
April 5, 2021
¿Cuál es tu programa de televisión favorito?
Era una mentira cuando les dicho a ustedes que no puedo escribir hoy. Entonces, voy a contarles sobre el programa que estoy mirando recientemente que se llama 'What We Do in the Shadows' o 'Qué hacemos en las sombras'. O sea, mi programa favorito ahora mismo.
Es hecho por el director Taika Waititi. Quizás conoces a él por la película del mismo nombre o 'Thor: Ragnarok'.
WWDITS es un documentario falso que sigue un grupo de vampiros en Staten Island, Nueva York en la epoca moderna. Los cameramen les acompañan a los vampiros durante sus vidas diarias ¡o nocturnas deberíamos decir!
Los vampiros se llaman El Gran Nandor, Lazlo, Nadja y Colin Robinson. Viven en una casa grande y vieja con el familiar de Nandor, Guillermo (No sé cómo se traduce 'familiar' en este contexto... ¿un sirviente?). Guillermo le ha servido a Nandor por diez años y quiere mucho ser vampiro también pero Nandor no le cambiará porque necesita su servicio.
La mayoría de los vampiros son góticas y llevan puesto ropa negra con diseños detallados. Se parecen fresas pero se ven muy extraños en el día actual. Pero a nadie no parece le importa este hecho. Quizás es algo hacer con sus habilidades paranormales y hipnóticas.
Un personaje que no parece misterioso es Colin Robinson. Colin es un vampiro de energía. Le ve un tipo típico que vería en una oficina. Él habla de temas aburridos por un tiempo largo. Él alimenta por desagüe tú energía y disfruta tu miseria también.
Te recomiendo este programa. Es chistoso ¡y es otro trabajo buenísimo de Taika!
April 5, 2021
Shrek
(Before start, I didn't learned about gramatical rules, I know that I should to do it soon. This probably has many errors, but I'm trying to do it better).
The first movie of Shrek is one of my favorites. It was so simple, funny and breaking stereotypes. During my childhood I watched many times princess movies where the delicately and poor princcess find the "true eternal love" with a refined and educated prince. Barbies movie's are a good example of this. Instead Shrek isn't a prince, he is a lonely and sentimental ogre that falls in love with an unusual princess.
I know that probably there is a lot of better examples about" how to break a stereotype", but as a child it was maybe the first time I watched something that impacted me so much.
Fiona is a realistic woman for me, instead of a perfect princess. She can protect herself, fight. She has good manners but also enjoy to be more comfortable and less refinated (burping or eating rats, for example). She can feel angry, uncomfortable, disagree and reflect about her actions. For example, when she heard the conversation of Shrek with Burro (Donkey I guess, I don't know what is his name in English) about people criticizing and stigmatizing him because he's an ogre. Then she regrets, reflecting about her words, trying to be better after that.
Shrek is so asocial in the beginning because of the world, I know and understand that feeling.
The "terrible and ugly ogre" have feelings, this fact changes your perspective and give you a good lesson: Don't judge someone just for it's appearance. Shrek loved Fiona not because "is a princess", he met her better, falling in love because he really liked how was she.
Fiona grow alone in a tower, waiting for a magical love of fairytales. She didn't excluded Shrek because "he isn't a prince", she loved him even knowing he is an ogre and that she will stay as an ogre.
They teached me something that I didn't realized for a long time. True love isn't perfect, you don't need a perfect fairytale in real life to be happy. Happiness is what matters, not be a perfect person in couple with another perfect person. It's more important enjoy your life that be what people wants to.
Burro (donkey I guess), is a good friend. He's always trying to be nice, smiling and being funny. But he also can be angry, serious, sad and miss someone. Burro encouraged Shrek to don't give up with Fiona. That's a good example about how is a genuine friend, someone who honestly cares and helps you in difficult moments.
So, for all these reasons I love this movie. I admit that I'm not a cinephile, usually is disgusting for me watch a movie. Shrek is a big exception in my life.
Thanks for your time, I hope to did it better this time. I feel really ashamed and clumsy thinking about how many errors I have again, but it's part of learning.
April 5, 2021
April 5, 2021
The Favourite Movie
Note: The journal is aiming for a formal tone.
No week goes by without me watching a movie. There are periods in which I watch movies more often and other times when I forget about them because I am occupied with work. Sometimes after watching a movie, I feel bad for the time I could have spent more wisely. However, they helped me improve my English substantially. I even watched some of them multiple times, for example, the series of Harry Potter films.
They are based on books written by J. K. Rowling. The first book, Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, was published in 1997. Since then, more than 500 million copies of these books have been sold, making it the best-selling book series in history. It has been translated into more than 80 languages making it popular all around the world.
The main character is Harry Potter—a young wizard. He and his friends attend a wizarding school learning everything about witchcraft and wizardry. Throughout the series, they experience the return of the dark wizard, Lord Voldemort, against whom and his followers they are trying to fight.
The wizarding world in both books and films gained lots of fans throughout the years and does not seem to be getting any less popular. Some people like books more because the story is more detailed. On the other hand, the films provide a lively experience. Even though everybody has their preference, I can recommend both.
April 5, 2021
Meu filme preferido
Eu gosto muito de séries sobre temas histoicais ou de fantasia porque eu acho que é divertido imaginar que você está vivendo num mundo totalmente differente. Eu acho que é dificíl dizer o que está minha séries preferida mas acho que é Vikings. Na minha opinião a série é mais accurata do que outras séries sobre os vikings. Então eu gosto muita da musica, das roupas e quando eles falam um pouco nórdico. As cenas de luta são muito boas também e eu gosto da historia no meior parte. ( os atores sâo attrativos também...)
Meu filme preferido é Shrek 2 porque ele me lembro da minha infancia porque eu amava esse filme no passado até agora. Eu acho que a mensagem e muito boa e os memes são bons também. Normalmente eu nao gosto quando as pessoas começam a cantar em filmes mas a cena de “I need a hero” é muito boa.
April 5, 2021
¡Ser Gruñón en la Mañana!
Reto de escritura: Día 5
Lunes, 5 de abril de 2021
Yo no estoy segura porque algunas personas generalmente son felices en la mañana y dispuestas a hablar, mientras otras como yo se despiertan gruñonas. ¿Quizás porque soy una introvertida?
No me importa hablar e incluso sonreír pero después de beber mi cafeína. Me gusta el té verde al despertarme por la mañana, luego empiezo a pensar bien y ver el mundo un mejor lugar (,")