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May 12, 2021
Guida alla scuola in Australiana
Similmente dalla strutturata la scuola in Italia, la scuola in Australiana si divide in 4 cicli; Sono l'asilo nido, scuola dell’infanzia, primo ciclo di istruzione, poi secondo ciclo di istruzione. La scuola in australiana iniziata quando la bambina e’ cinque anni mentre in Italia, la scuola iniziata quando la bambina e’ sei anni. Sia la scuola dell’obbligo dura 10 anni. In Italia la scuola dell’obbligo e’ gratuita a differenza di Australiana.
Allo stesso modo Italia, in Australiana non ha l’obbligo di frequenza. Questa istituzione non e’ focalizzata tanto sull'istruzione ma come istituzione di carattere assistenziale mentre usata dai genitori che lavorando. Per i bambini dai 0 a i 2 o 3 anni di eta’.
Diversamente da Italia, scuola dell’infanzia ha l’obbligo di frequenza. Scuola dell’infanzia in Australiana segue un fondamento progetto educativo, imparando numeri, colori e lettere. Questo è per i bambini 3 e 4 anni di eta’.
Il primo ciclo di istruzione e’ obbligatoria e viene frequentato dai minori che vanno dai 5 ai 12 anni d’eta. In Australiana, la scuola primaria non e’ composto da due livelli. Qui studente imparare varie materie ma non senza sostenere l’esame quando hanno finito.
Secondo ciclo di istruzione ha l’obbligo di frequenza fino all'anno 10, pero’ un studente potrebbe partito se lo desiderano. Lo frequentano i ragazzi dai 13 ai 18 anni. La scuola superiore, le materie sono insegnate allo stesso modo e non c’è enfasi su materie particolari. In modo simile all’Italia, abbiamo esame per il loro accesso all’università ma sono formattati in modo diverso.
May 12, 2021
A book I recently read.
At first, I am checking some e-books in my reading app about how to study better, at this situation, things that are commonly related to study, like making plans, or rearranging schedule doesn't satisfy me, I try to look some useful study method.
Finally, I found an e-book that the title sounds doubtful, but the content is great, it let me found my study method.
It told that, no matter how you persuade yourself to work harder, it did no good to the actual study, it will eventually increase the tiredness of the learning process. It seems that the true thing you need is to be kind with yourself whether mind or body, be relax but concentrate during the learning process.
May 12, 2021
Happiness Due To Parents
I talked to my parents on the phone today.
Recently, I was too busy so I couldn't make a call to them for a week.
When I called them, they were very glad to talk.
I suddenly realized that I was very happy because I could hear my parents' voice anytime.
I don't know how many times I can communicate with my parents for the rest of my life.
I should contact my parents as much as possible to keep this happiness.
May 12, 2021
A Short Story
The weather at May promised to be lovely, and so Tom and Kate agreed to go play some tennis this Sunday. Kate is always punctual, so she had got to Tom's apartment on time. When she came in, she instantly knew something was wrong. She could see it on Tom's face. He looked so sad and startled. Kate was always a smart girl, and it didn't take her long to figure out what was going on. She was quick to notice the racket Tom was holding was broken. What had happened? wondered Kate. She asked Tom about it gently. He shared that today he got so excited about playing tennis that he accidentally pulled the racket in different directions, and it broke down. Kate for a moment thought about what happened. Her mother used to say to her she should always strive to remain optimistic to matter what happens. And Kate attempted to follow this advise. She said to Tom, Don't worry. Your racket was old and ragged anyway. I will buy you a new one as a present for your upcoming birthday! Tom couldn't be more pleased with her suggestion. He thanked her earnestly, and they hurried up to the store. There Kate told Tom he could choose any racket he liked and she would buy it. Excited, Tom started looking over the rackets the store was offering. There were many alluring offers. Finally Tom picked a racket to buy. It was white and shiny and we must say, a bit pricey. But Kate kept her promise and bought it anyway. Tom said he couldn't wish for a better birthday present. He was eager to try out a new racket, and so they hurried to the tennis court. Sun was shining, and it was the perfect setting for a game of tennis. Tom got so excited that he played tennis better than usual and beat Kate the first two matches.
May 12, 2021
Diary: Sad
We recently had a big story in China where a student from Chengdu 49 Middle School fell down from a building and died. Their parents don't find a person who know the situation. An anonymous user claimed on the internet that it was his classmate, and the whole class was cautioned that anyone who told would be disciplined and would not be able to take the college entrance exam.
I don't know exactly what happened, but it reminded me of something I experienced in high school. In my junior high school, a boy climbed up the earth sculpture in the school and then accidently fell down and died. In my high school, a boy died suddenly on the first day of the school's mandatory morning run. None of these things generated news coverage, and they were all successfully forced down by the school.
Today is the anniversary of the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake. Many children died when school houses collapsed, and some of the tragedy was due to poor quality construction. Until now, there is no official report on the findings of the quality of the school buildings and no apology to the parents who lost their children because of the poor quality of the houses.
Sad :(
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Questions
Materials:
It was like I was right there having a tour of the place. Are the streets usually that empty or is it just because it's very early on your way to work?
Question:
What is the usage of “having a tour of the place”?
Materials:
But I do know that being there to visit for vacation purposes is very different than having to live and work and support myself in another country.
Question:
What is the usage of “having to live and~”
What is the usage of “being there to visit ~”?
Thank you guys very much!
May 12, 2021
An Empty Feeling
After finishing reading a novel or watching a movie, I bathe in the afterglow and feel a bit of empty feeling. It is hard to explain the empty feeling. It is like sadness or absent-mindedness. This is probably because I want to see the continuation, and finishing the story is a parting with the characters. I am sometimes too empathetic to them.
May 12, 2021
Präpositionen mit dem Genitiv (C1)
Angesichts
Angesichts der Laune von Martina gehen wir spazieren.
Der Kämpfer muss angesichts seiner Verletzung dringend Hilfe bekommen.
Angesichts dieser Argumente komme ich zu dem Schluss, dass Pandas tatsächlich Bäre sind.
Angesichts der Tatsache, dass Pandas Bäre sind, mussen Menschen auf sie achten.
Angesichts seiner letzen Diebstahl ist er von der Polizei aufsucht.
Mithilfe
Mithilfe meiner Freundin habe ich ein Haus gebaut.
Josef öffnete den Brief mithilfe eines Messeres.
Anhand
Wir bewerten die Qualität der Erde anhand von pH-Werten.
Ich werde anhand dieser Grafik beschreiben, wie sich die Coronazahlen in Össterreich gesteigert haben.
Anhand dieser Statistik kann man deutlich sehen, dass die Zahlen gestiegen sind.
Ich werde meine Meinung anhand eines Besispiels erläutern.
Unweit
Ich wohne unweit des Flusses.
Infolge
Infolge des Überfalls ist die Stadt zerstört.
Infolge der unangenehmen Situation bleiben wir alle ruhig.
(An)statt
Anstatt eines Computers kaufe ich Heute auf dem Basar ein Handy.
Hinsichtlich
Hisichtlich der Frage, ob Pandas Bären oder Süßigkeiten sind, sind sich die Politiker nicht einig.
Hinsichtlich der Frage, ob Erdölgewinnung reduziert werden sollten, gibt es drei wichtige Argumente zu beobachten.
Hinsichtlich der Bezahlung den Überstunden gehört unserer Firma zu den besten in ganzen Österreich.
May 12, 2021
Ek voel nie lekker nie.
Vandag voel ek nogsteeds nie lekker nie.
Dit gaan aan vir 2 weke noe. Ek is so gatvol om siek te voel.
Ek het laas Donderdag my antibiotika klaar gemaak, maar ek is nogsteeds nie gesond nie.
Ons het 'n werksfinksie hierdie toekomende naweek, maar ek dink ek en die kinders moet by die huis bly want ek siek is, en ek is baie bang vir hierdie Covid. Daar gaan vier en fyftig mense daar wees. Dit maak my senuweeagtig.
Ek hoes baie, my keel and bors is seer, my neus loop verskriklik baie en dit maak my naar.
Die kinders het net nou gesond geword en ek is nie lus om hulle alweer siek moet wees nie.
May 12, 2021
Journal
The trip to Hong Kong was the first time I went abroad. I remember that I applied for Hong Kong and Macau pass back then. Hong Kong gave me the impression that it was modern, and had many dense high-rise buildings and highly developed financial and commercial industries. But Hong Kong is very small and the streets are very narrow, even the lobbies of four-star hotels are very small. But I think it was very prosperous, especially at night when I watched the flashing neon commercials on the tall buildings on both sides of the straits on a cruise on the Victoria Strait. It was really shocking, because the neon lights were all over the buildings. In Macau, we visited the Venetian and New Pujing Hotel. Many tourists gambled a few times, but I just took a look because I am not interested in gambling. I remember that before we went out of the Shenzhen customs, the tour guide told us that we would face communication problems and Hong Kong Feet, and so on. She suggested that we buy a lot of daily necessities for emergency needs. But that was not the case when I arrived in Hong Kong. She only wanted us to buy more things to get more commission. However, this was not a bad thing, because things in Hong Kong were much more expensive than in Shenzhen. On that trip to Hong Kong, I bought a video camera for more than two thousand yuan RMB. It was very fashionable at that time, but look back now, it is very silly because nowadays, a smartphone is already enough. And moreover, that camera seems to have been missing a long time ago.
Although your Mandarin is not very good, your Cantonese should be very good, so I think the language is not a problem for you to be in Hong Kong because Hong Kong people can all speak Cantonese.
May 12, 2021
Mi profesor de español
Cuando vivía en los EE.UU., tuve clases de español durante 8 años y pude hablar muy bien en español. Pero me mudé a Austria en 2019 y aprendí aleman muy rápido. Durante esto me olvidé mucho de español. Ahora soy un estudiante en la universidad y estudio la educación inglesa y española. Necesité que tomar otras clases de español para volver a aprender la lenguaje y ahora he estado tomando esas clases desde octubre. Desafortunadamente no he aprendo mucho en ese tiempo porque mi profesor es terrible. Solamente hacemos ejercicios de gramática. No hacemos muchos ejercicios de hablar (quizás una vez a la semana) y nunca hemos hecho ejerecicios de escribir, leer ni oír. No me gusta su método de enseñanza para nada porque necessito volver a aprender como hablar y escribir bien en español y no puedo hacerlo cuando solo aprendo la gramática.
May 12, 2021
MY FAVORITE DRINKS.
This weekend I made some PDFs from my library.
How did you make them?
It is a long story, I think I'll talk about them next time.
Ok, today's topic.
Let me talk about my three favorite drinks.
First one is sport drinks. Made especially for good health.
I always make this myself.
Recipe is fairly simple.
First of all, You put a little sugar and a little salt in the glass.
Prepare little water that is boiled by the electric kettle in order to dissolve them.
And you pour cold water in it.
Finally, you squeeze lemon to make lemon drops.
It is called a hypotonic drink that makes you water easily.
makes you absorb water easier since it was made in the same condition as your body.
Second one is coffee.
I know, coffee causes diuresis, so it exudes water from your body.
I like it anyway, though.I tried to make one especially professional do it every time.
For example, latte art is very hard to make.
Third one is smoothies.
Cutting fruits and putting them and blending them.
It sounds simple, but it is also hard work.
I do not like cutting fruit because it takes me an hour or more.
Therefore, it is a little bit difficult to make.
May 12, 2021
My everyday run
Last summer I ran for about a month. I started in July and finished in August. It was hard for me at the beginning because I ran out of the breath too soon and I had to take breaks and walk. Then after a few attempts I could ran around the block where I live and it became easier after some time.
This year I started running in April when the weather was getting warm. I decided to run for longer distances and try different routes across my city. Now I could run 8-9 kilometers without getting very tired and I feel that I can do more. I try to keep the slow pace most of the time but sometimes I have to quicken at the traffic lights while it is green. Other times I may speed up when I feel like it if I the road is straight and there are no cars.
I just like running and I didn’t have any particular goal when I started doing it. Now I think maybe I could run a marathon in the future. However I know it will take some time to train myself to run such a huge distance.
May 12, 2021
Дистанционная работа
У меня есть опыт на удаленной работе начиная с прошлого года. Я писатель, и после того как я получил представление агента по печатной литературе, он познакомил меня с редактором в издательстве в Англии. От этого редактора я получил первое поручение на рассказ уже в 2019-ом году. Тем не менее я бы сказал, что не стал регулярно получать проекты до середины 2020-го года.
Судя по всему, удаленная работа – для меня. По-моему дистанционная работа хороша тем, что можно сам определить, как ты будешь тратить свое время на работе. Да ездить на работу тоже не требуется, и я лично могу сказать, что я экономлю, когда завтракаю, обедаю, и ужинаю дома. Кроме того, на удалёнке нет нужды встречать начальника, чтобы обсуждать всякие дилеммы во время работы или получать конкретные задания. В целом сообщения о поручениях сокращаются до абсолютного минимума. При этом, тут скорее всего имеет значение то, что я работаю фрилансером, а не в штате компании.
Несмотря на всё это, есть и минусы о дистанционной работе. Раньше я никогда не хотел общаться с коллегами, но в условиях пандемии, работав уже больше года в доме, я сильно скучаю по такому повседневному, непринужденному общению. А с другой стороны часто бывает такая противоположная проблема. Я ведь работаю в том же доме, в котором живут моя жена и ее родители, и семья – это штука совсем не похожа на рабочую тусовку. Коллеги обычно понимают, когда ты чем-то занят и лучше не беспокоить тебя. Однако дома, порой жена хочет общаться именно тогда, когда я сосредотачиваюсь на задаче. К тому же, в другие поры тесть или теща приглашает меня на обед или на ужин. В таких порах мне всегда приходится отказаться, тем самым причиняя им обиду. (Кстати, вот такая странная фишка азиатской культуры, насколько я понял. Народ всегда ест в больших группах.) Вот такой род излишнего общения дома в принципе мешает даже больше, чем в офисе.
В ближайшем будущем я надеюсь устроиться на работу, связанную с русским языком. С надеждой это будет в офисе, в штате компании. Мне уже хватает дистанционной работы на всю жизнь, наверное.
May 12, 2021
May 12, 2021
5월 11일의 문법 복습
1. 실례합니다! 문을 열어 주세요.
2. 소유는 울기 때문에 영화를 아주 슬펐어요.
3. 저는 춤을 출 줄 알아요.
진짜요? 지금은 보여 주세요.
아니요. 식당에 춤을 출 수 없어요.
4. 왜 아침을 안 먹었어요?
배가 아팠으니까 안 먹었어요.
5. 반려동물들이 아파트에 있으면 안 돼요.
6. 오! 진영 씨! 오랜만이에요.
그래요. 만난지 두 년 돼요.
7. 오늘 우리 어머니의 차를 운전해도 됐어요.
8. 매일은 일어나마자 세수해요.
9. 제 언니가 옷을 접는 동안 저는 설저겼어요.
10. 생선찌개를 요리해요.
생선을 좋아하지 않아요.
그럼 생선찌개를 먹지 안하도 돼요. 김치찌개도 요리해요.
May 12, 2021
En la bibliotecá
La Biblioteca Nacional de España es un lugar lleno de actividad. Ahora, estoy leyendo mi novela favorita, “La sombra del viento” de Carlos Ruiz Zafón; cuando estoy aquí, necesito leer al menos una página. Los niños de allá se están luchando para tener el juguete de tren. Está ruidoso entonces creo que sus madres deberían dicer algo pero se están hablando. Los ingenieros están trabajando junto de nuevo, ellos vienen todos los viernes. Hoy mi hermanito está a la casa pero cuando ello está a la biblioteca, rompe los libros los lanzando. La bibliotecaria, Maria, ayuda el hombre buscando sus gafas. Después de leer la novela, me levanto para me sentarse al lado de mis compañeros de clase y nosotros empezamos trabajar sobre nuestro projeta escribiendo una descripción. Actividad en la biblioteca continúa desde las ocho de la mañana hace las siete y media de la tarde que repetí cada día.
May 12, 2021
Yacón
Yacón é um vegetal da cordilheira andina. Faz parte da família de dálias e girassóis. As folhas de yacón são comestíveis como espinafre ou borragem. Os grandes tubérculos que crescem em torno das raízes são comestíveis crus, como jícama. Tem um sabor doce mas não é uma boa fonte de nutrientes. É difícil cultivar Yacón nos Estados Unidos, por causa dos invernos frios.
May 12, 2021
Phrases pour un E-Mail aux Parents d'Accueil
1. Encore une fois, des grands changes suivant notre dernier e-mail!
2. Toute ma famille est complètement vaccinée, sauf pour moi -- j'ai reçu la première dose de Moderna en avril, et j'attends ce vendredi pour la seconde. Patrick, peut- être nous recevrons la seconde dose même jour?
3. Je suis promu au travail à compter du 1er juin, alors mon titre sera simplement "audit senior". "Audit senior", c'est la première grande promotion pour les auditeurs chez Deloitte car 'à partir de maintenant, je vais passer en revue le travail des autres principalement, plutôt que de faire le travail moi-même.
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May 11, 2021
May 11, 2021
L’avenir selon moi
Selon moi ce ne sera pas possible d'arrêter le réchauffement climatique. Malgré l'utilisation des voitures électriques et la diminution de la pollution produite par les pays industrialisés, je crois que le réchauffement climatique sera une réalité.
Et ça va se passer pour l’intervention des humains mais aussi pour des causes naturelles.
En premier, tous les combustibles fossiles qu’on utilise vont laisser sa marque. C’est inévitable que la stabilité climatique reste intouchée avec la quantité de fumées qu’on envoie vers le ciel tous les jours. On aurait dû s'imaginer que ça pourrait se passer mais apparemment la pollution de l’air a été bizarrement négligée depuis des siècles. Bien sûr on promouvra l'utilisation des voitures électriques et on diminuera les émissions de CO2 aussi tant que possible, mais ce qui est fait est fait, même avec un reboisement massif les arbres ne pourront pas empêcher le réchauffement climatique à court terme.
Et en ce qui concerne les causes naturelles, la Terre a des cycles de refroidissement et de réchauffement qui se produisent de manière constante. Alors cette période climatique relativement stable va changer. Et les causes sont multiples et imprévisibles.Par exemple: parfois parce qu’il y a trop d’arbres la terre va refroidir toute de suite, parfois c’est un volcan qui a été la cause de la congélation de la planète, parfois la neige elle même va commencer à refléter la lumière et ça va produire plus de froid, ce qui produira plus de neige, et plus de neige reflétera plus de lumière, et comme ça jusqu’à l’infini. C'est pour ça que je pense que l’intervention des humains pourra renforcer la direction un peu ou la ralentir un peu, mais pas l'éviter.
Tout ça pour dire que je suis pessimiste envers la possibilité de limiter une variation de température. On aura un changement de température plus tôt que tard. La chose la plus raisonnable à faire c’est se préparer pour le changement. Peut-être qu'on sera capable de développer une technologie qui puisse nous aider à gérer les problèmes écologiques ou peut-être on pourra partir vers la planète Mars pour échapper de la catastrophe.