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Träningen
Idag ville jag inte träna min kropp eftersom jag tränade så mycket igår och min kropp är så trött och gör mycket ont.
Jag gick till Stockholm för att göra mitt jobb med Sonja och Sander och innan att gå hem lekte vi i en stund i en park. De gick trötta jättefort och de tog mycket tid för att gå hem. Det slutade med att jag bär Sonja i två kilometer och hon väger sjutton kilogram. Mina armar och ben är båda döda.
Jag ville inte träna, men tränade i alla fall. Så, bra antar jag?
May 18, 2021
Rester sain
J'ai parlé en français aujourd'hui en ligne avec une professeur. On a parlé de la obésité qui devient de plus en plus problématique dans le monde entier. La cuisine japonaise impressionne souvent les gens de son image d'être équilibrée, mais cette malade n'empêche pas ce pays asiatique.
Après la seconde guerre mondiale, le style de repas a énormément changé en le style de pays occidentaux, surtout celui des États-Unis, et ça favorise la propagation du diabète parmi les Japonais. Selon le sondage mené par le ministère de la Santé, de l'Emploi et de la Protection social, en 2017, il récence 3.28 millions de personnes qui en souffre, qui a battu un record à ce moment-là. On estime que ce chiffre continue d'augumenter chaque année, ce qui montre l'aggravation de la situation de la santé des Japonais.
Que peut-on faire contre cette dégradation de notre santé ? D'abord, il faut faire de l'exercice. À mon avis, les japonais sont doués pour rester à la maison : on joue aux jeux vidéos, surfe sur Internet etc. Mais il voudrais mieux qu'on bouge, marche ou coure pour améliorer notre état de la santé. Mais ce qui est le plus important, c'est de manger sain : les légumes sont chers au Japon, mais il faut qu'on mange plus de légumes. Le poisson est cher aussi dans les départements qui ne sont pas bordés par la mer, mais il diminue l'absorbtion des calories, qui est aussi bon pour notre corps.
Pour conclure, on doit faire beaucoup plus attention à notre corps qu'avant à cause du changement de notre mode de vie. On devrait en être conscients pour rester sains.
May 18, 2021
Sentences 112: On The Off-Chance, Highly-Strung, Put Down To
I just came over on the off-chance and he was actually available.
He's too highly-strung for this stressful job, I guess he'll resign soon.
The bad visitor numbers for the shop last month can be put down to the high amount of public holidays.
May 18, 2021
PREPOSITIONS with the word LESSON
1. What happens AT / IN / ON your maths lessons?
2. AT / IN each lesson, first the teacher reads and fills in the attendance list in the electronic register.
3. IN / ON the next lesson students will present some of their back/ overdue pieces of work?
4. If he tried harder ON / IN / AT the biology lesson , he would get 2 'pluses' for (active) participation.
5. If he hadn't broken a desk AT/ IN the history lesson , he wouldn’t have got a written reprimand from the form teacher for (mis)conduct.
6. If he hadn't slept 3 hours (IN biology, IN PE, and IN computer studies, he wouldn’t feel bored now.
Which of these prepositions are correctly used?
Is there a rule on when to use AT, IN and ON with the word LESSON?
May 18, 2021
18. Mai
Heute bin ich früh aufgewacht und habe ins Bad gegangen, mich die Zähne geputzt und dann mein Gesicht gewaschen. Danach habe mir ein paar Videos auf YouTube angesehen und habe mir eine Tasse Kaffee gekocht, vor der Arbeit. Ich habe um halb 9 Uhr angefangen zu arbeiten und hatte um 12 Uhr Mittagessen. Am Feierabend bin ich in die Optik, wo ich meine Brille gekauft habe, gegangen, damit den Messwert der Gläser wieder messen könnten.
May 18, 2021
Как и почему учусь венгерский язык! Часть 3.
[Этот текст - перевод этого видео: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zX_egzo3FkU]
Так, почему я изучаю венгерский? Первый, язык действительный красивый. Второй, мне очень нравится музыка и действительно наслаждаюсь вызовы. По-моему, венгерский язык - это хороший и большой вызов для себя.
Как учусь этот язык? У меня есть учитель. Он венгерский. Потому, что он смешной человек, когда я понимаю его шутки, я чувствую себя хорошо. Я очень счастлива.
Моя мотивация - когда понимаю слова, и думаю "ого, я делаю лучше, чем вчера".
May 18, 2021
Was könnt ihr besonders gut?
Es gibt einige Menschen, die sehr gut in einem Bereich sind. Beispielweise spielen manche Menschen sehr gut Klavier, andere können gut Fußball spielen. Meine kleine Schwester kann sehr gut zeichnen. Als Kind konnte sie besonders gut zeichnen. Das Zeichen ist ihr Hobby. Vor drei Jahren hat sie die Entscheidung getroffen, Grafik Design zu studieren. Ich glaube, dass, wenn man durch sein Hobby Geld verdient, man auf dem richtigen Weg ist. Dann ist die Arbeit nicht stressig, und man ist niemals besorgt, wann das Wochenende vorbei ist.
In meinem Fall kann ich sehr gut Chicken-Curry kochen. Ich lebte vier Jahren in Indien und lernte dort, indisches Chicken-Curry zu kochen.
May 18, 2021
May 18, 2021
其他的问题语法修改
你好！这些都是我要给学生提问的问题。 麻烦你们再修改一下。谢谢！
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每个国家对媒体的看法怎么样？两个国家拍的电影，电视剧一样的地方在哪里？区别在哪里？媒体在我们日常生活中扮演什么样的角色？
中国文化里如何看待医疗？中国人不舒服时一般会忍着还是看医生？中国文化里西医和中医扮演什么样的角色？
在青年人生活里，手机扮演什么样的角色？社会里手机有什么好处？有什么坏处？
我如何准备既好吃又健康的菜？地道的中国菜怎么样？买新鲜的菜一般在哪里？准备菜的方法，中国，西方有什么差别？
我们对钱的看法怎么表示我们个性？在日常生活中，理财方式扮演什么样的角色？华人如何看待钱？关于对钱的看法，青年人和老年人有什么擦别？我们找工作的时候，什么最重要：满意，长知识还是赚钱？
我们购买东西的习惯如何表示我们性格？购买东西的经验国外，国内有什么样的差别？网上的购买和面对面的购买要注意什么？这两个购买方法有什么差别？
May 18, 2021
May 18, 2021
问题语法修改
下面是我要给学生提问的问题？我问题的语法怎么样？谢谢你修改！
我的祖先是谁？祖先的性格和样貌如何？他们一般做哪些事？ 祖宗会带给我什么样的影响？我们如何尊重祖先？我的祖先留下了哪些遗产？ 我们的家庭有什么样的传统？传统为什么重要？在我们的家庭里遗产和传统分别扮演什么角色？
我们美感来自哪里？美感普遍吗？大家都有同样的美感吗？美感演变过程怎么样？注重美感跟健康有关系吗？
我的朋友是谁？他们外表，个性怎么样？生活中跟别人建立什么样的人际关系？健康的人际关系怎么样？不健康的人际关系怎么样？
旅游的目标是什么？旅游跟我们工作文化有什么样的关系？其他的文化中，旅游扮演什么样的角色？中国大陆和台湾，我们有什么样的旅游选择？
世界公民有什么样的特点？为什么我们移民？我家人怎么移民到美国来？世界公民有什么样的义务？世界公民有什么样的义务？
日常生活中，地球暖化是一个严重的问题吗？还有什么其他的环境问题很严重？环境问题跟我们日常生活有关系吗？环境问题跟日常生活的行为有关系吗？
May 18, 2021
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Alle mijn kleren behalve pyjama's zijn zwart. Ik draag wel wit of blauw in het werk (typisch bedrijfskleding van een arts..). Ik vind de zwart het elegantst en het sierlijkst van alle kleren. Alle kleren zijn daan ook op elkaar onmiddelbaar ingespeeld. Je kan wel op de sonnige dagen verschiellende tinten onderscheiden. De kleur zwart is de weelde zonder uitspatting.
May 18, 2021
A or B
Japan has been begun the rainy season.
I like the rain-sounds whose sounds make me relax.
By the way I don’t like its substance.
I don't like it because it's damp and humid.
Japanese people often ask which person are you?, a science person or a write person ？
I didn't graduate from university, but I can say both are important.
Many people like that type of question.
For example, are you a coffee person? or not.
I try to answer some of them.
Shall we get started now.
01.Mac or Windows?
100%, I can say Mac person.
I like apples as food and as a computer.
I used windows when I was a child. I don't use them now.
02.Cat or Dog?
The reason is crealy and simple: I have a cat allergy.
I like watching cat videos, but unfortunately if I'm in direct contact with them, I might die.
My allergy comes from animals with thin hair.
Now I'm an adult, even better than I was. However, I had breathing difficulty when I first met the cat.This is called cat crisis…
I had had a dog before. He had short hair and didn’t make me sick which seems like an asthma attack.
He was a type of dachshund classified as a miniature dog.
He was naughty and shy, I really liked him.He was a good dog. That is why I am a dog person.
03.Doctor Who or the Walking Dead?
I like science fiction, both are ok. I’m not completely watching them.
Both series are so long running that I can’t watch all of them.
Norman is one of my favorite actors. Blade2 and The Boondock Saints are also my favorite movies.
I have known him before he became famous.
Doctor Who isn’t common in Japan. I like eleventh. He is the youngest of them.
and so, I can say I'm a Walking Dead person because Doctor Who is a little bit boring for me. I love thrilling one.
What person are you? What are things into?
May 18, 2021
Как и почему учусь венгерский язык! Часть 2.
[Этот текст - перевод этого видео: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zX_egzo3FkU]
Сначала, я хочу рассказать почему изучаю венгерский. Это трудно отвечать, потому что, я правда не знаю почему. Когда я услышала венгерский в первый раз, я подумала: "Венгерский так красивый, может быть самый красивый язык в мире."
Я очень люблю венгерскую музыку. Моя любимая группа - Bagossy Brothers Company. По-моему, их тексты действительные красивые. Действительные хорошие. Я очень хочу понимать тексты музык.
Один день, хочу поехать в Венгрию. Я бы хотела идти на Bagossy Brothers Company концерт. Ах, это бы было хорошо. Но, сейчас нельзя пойти из-за коронавируса. С надеждой, вскоре после всего этого.
May 18, 2021
May 18, 2021
Wrong-Way Driving
In Japan, decreasing birth rate and an aging population are big problems. Related to it, there are many accidents caused by a car with old people. The driving ability weakens as people get older. They tend to mistake accel as brake or overlook traffic signs.
Driving in the wrong direction on highway is not rare. I heard a story that I thought it's a joke at first. An old man was driving on highway, and the news said there was a vehicle driving the wrong way, so you should drive carefully. His family worried about him and phoned him. He said "It's alright, but all cars are going the wrong way! " In fact, the dangerous car was his one. He believed he never made a mistake.
May 18, 2021
May 18, 2021
Daily Dairy 1 (2021-5-18)
Hi everyone!
Today, I have made a major decision that I firmly determined to write a daily diary frequently to practice my writing skills in English. I would also like to utilize this diary to keep my memory and unique feelings of every day. I have decided to write my diary here because I believe that this exchange learning platform can help me to become a better English writer and I would like to communicate with those people on this platform.
I am a student and I am on summer break now. In order to make my holiday more meaningful and memorable, I have participated in a four-week English and culture program organized by a Canadian university. I have joined this program via zoom on account of the virus outbreak. I have expected that I will improve my English and meet folks from different backgrounds.
To be honest, I was quite nervous since rarely I do speak English in daily life and then I was worried that I could not handle this course very well. However, today is the first day I meet my teacher and classmates. All of them are very nice. Most of the students in my class are from Janese and the rest students are from Hong Kong just like me. When the teacher asked questions in Zoom, none of us answered her because we were a little shy and did not immerse in the new environment. I hope I will be braver and more proactive in the next few days and do more cultural exchanges with my classmates.
That is all.
May 18, 2021
The movie, Back To The Future
Recently, I am reading a book about making stoires of "Back to the future".
I really like the movie, so I have watched more than ten times.
The book is about how to create the idea of the movie and which behind the stories are.
For example, the main actor is changed during making half of the movie.
The time machine was powered by nuclear instead of lighting on the first draft.
I didn't know that there was no plan about the sequels.
I am very happy not only to read interesting stories, but also to see pictures of making the movie.
I will watch the animation of Back to the future as well.
May 18, 2021
May 18, 2021
Summer is comming
In Japan, hot weather continues. The temperature is around 25 degrees. It is so hot compared with last year. I can't stand the weather, so I wore a tank top. But my mother persuaded me not to wear it because people haven't worn a tank top. I cannot wait for the coming summer. I love the season. For the season, I tan my skin and do weight training. Last Sunday, I went to a tanning salon. After I went there, I always feel better. But the salon is very expensive. It takes 25$ per once, and I have to continue to go there, so my money will be gone. If I skipped going there, my skin couldn't keep the brown color. I have to make money for keeping brown skin.
May 18, 2021
Journal
The tourist area of Mammoth is located in the Zhalainuoer District, Hulunbeier City, Inner Mongolia. It covers an area of 1 square kilometers and gained the honor of the biggest statue group of mammoth in the world from Shanghai Guinness head office in 2013. The tourist area has 93 paleontological sculptures in total. Among them, there are 87 mammoth sculptures. I remember I sent you some pictures taken there. The blue skies are like washed and the white clouds are very low. It looks really amazing. Besides it is very near to Manzhouli port, you can see a great national gate bordering Russia. So if you have time, welcome to China, which is a beautiful country worth visiting.
May 18, 2021
Journal
You are right, Manzhouli is located in the Hulunbeier prairie, with vast land and sparsely populated areas. I noticed that when you read the words "满洲里", it sounded perfect, as if you were speaking in your mother tongue.
The primary industry of Manzhouli is animal husbandry, because it is in the grassland.
Yes, each lightning is unique and, like each of us, can't be copied.
Through your description, I can imagine the color and the appearance of the Northern Lights. When you talked about the beliefs of the locals about the Northern Lights, I suddenly felt it was mysterious and sacred, and I felt awe.
I know the Dead Sea, because of its high salt content, people won't sink in it, but I never knew that there was a mineral pool similar to the Dead Sea in Canada. If I were there, I think I would definitely try it out because it would be very interesting.
I checked some information and found that there were three "dead seas" in China. One is the salt lake in Yunchen, Shanxi, and it is formed naturally. The other two are semi-artificial, that is, excavating the underground salt water hot spring to form the effect of the Dead Sea. One is in Suining, Sichuan, and the other is in Sanshui, Foshan, Guangdong.
Yes, you sent a picture of this place last winter and it looked icy and snowy, very depressed. Now it looks much better: the ice has melted, the water flows and you can smell the breath of spring.
Spring is always beautiful. It means warmth, hope and life. Let's embrace the spring tightly.
May 18, 2021
May 18, 2021