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May 2, 2023
Answer 1
Honestly, I don't have a clue. I don't cotton summer, even most of my acquaintances love it. I dislike summer mostly because of its torridity, too long days and insects. Also, summer means holiday, so that means my parents stay at home much more often, and it equals to punishments for slightest reasons and stress. Most of the teenagers like me love summer because of free time and ability to hang out with their friends. Do I have such opportunities? Not really, I can't go outside because I get punished or I have a lot of work. Summer is horrible and I'll never understand people who romanticize it. Autumn is a bit better, it's not that hot as in summer and I just adore how I look with an overcoat, berete and scarf. Same is for spring. What's next? Next is winter. In truth, winter in my country sucks. It looks so bad, there is no snow, only puddles, mud and slush. That's so disgusting. But at least I can wear warm clothes, my parents don't stay very much at home and I have free time. Winter is not really my favourite season, but it's just less stressful.
May 2, 2023
May 2, 2023
Mi viaje inesperado
El fin de semana pasado fui a Oregon y me reuní con mis amigos para una media maratón. El sábado mi primer vuelo se retrasó y perdí mi segundo vuelo. No hubo más vuelos el sábado. Fue muy malo porque la media maratón era el domingo por la mañana. No quería perderme la carrera, así que compré otro boleto y llegué a Oregon ocho horas después de la hora original. Después del tiempo en Oregon, mi vuelo a casa también se retrasó y perdí mi segundo vuelo. De nuevo, no hubo más vuelos ese día, así que me quedé en un hotel en California y mi vuelo fue por la mañana. Sin embargo, este vuelo también se retrasó. Llegué a casa dieciocho horas después de la hora original. Bueno, fue un mal fin de semana de viaje pero podría haber sido peor.
May 2, 2023
May 2, 2023
Ways of looking after your children (Essay)
Stressful rythm of life in which adults are often involved in could imply they have not enough time to participate in their children care. In this regard it is necessary to reconsider how well kids are taken care in order to assure a proper development and education.
One of the alternatives that comes into parents’ thought is hiring a professional so as to save some free time for themselves. Of course, nannies are highly qualified and often experienced enough to put up with any kind of issue. Still, this is not the proper way in which children should be grown, since there is not a natural relationship between the person put in charge and them. Furthermore, the personal interest of this worker does not frequently go beyond their working time, as in the end, it is just job.
According to the explained above, the best option to raise a child up comes from parents‘ and relative’s hand. They should be the people responsible for this task, which would strengthen their relationship. Family has a main role in son education, that is the reason why they must take part in all aspect of their children daily life, even though they seem tiny or worthless, such as going to the playground, getting involved in extracurricular activities like sport and so on.
To sum up, parent should raise awareness about the importance of building a family, setting aside their egos in pro of their children benefits. Therefore, they should find spare time to spend with their sons, or, whenever it is not possible, a relative‘s help.
May 2, 2023
Review of unusual leisure activities
Nowadays, climbing is not probably such an unknown activity as it was a couple of years ago, especially since its arrival in the Olympic games. Although, it still remains as an unusual one, given the fact that there are very few people interested in this sport.
At first, before deciding me to take up climbing, I thought it was the typical activity for children to play in an indoor playground. I had the impression that an artificial rock wall was unsuitable for youth or adults. That was till I watched some spectacular videos of Adam Ondra, one of the best athletes in this sport, when I came to realise how wrong I was. After such a prominent revelation did I become interested in and searched for the closest climbing wall to my village. I found one in Marchena, just 10 kilometers away.
There I fully realised why climbers get so obsessed for this activity. It is hard to explain, contrary to popular belief, it leads you to a kind of Zen or meditation state in which you are highly concentrated on present. Thereby any intrusive thought disappears while you are managing to go up, hold after hold.
Regarding the sort of people linked to this sport, it is frequently associated with fearless and outgoing personalities, yet I would say there is not such stereotype. Fortunately, I have found very different people in this sense, sometimes with just a common feature: their passion for climbing.
May 2, 2023
Martedì
Ho iniziato a leggere alcune scritture facili per i principianti. Ho fiducia che tutto andrà bene.
Ho già fatto una passeggiata stamattina e ho appena finito di studiare per oggi.
Ho studiato la grammatica di base solo per un'ora, trovo che mi viene meglio così. Se studio piano piano, non mi sento stressata e posso raggiungere i miei obiettivi.
Nel passato ho voluto raggiungere a un livello più alto entro il 2025, chissà che succederà. È comico - capisco abbastanza bene quando leggo qualcosa in italiano, ma ho ancora problemi con cose più semplici. Forse questo succede perché ho sempre voluto imparare di più anche se non capivo bene alcune cose difficili, ma sono quel tipo di persona curiosa. Adesso so benissimo che posso essere migliore a che cosa faccio ( in generale ) solo con lavoro duro e pazienza. Devo dire a me stessa di nuovo "Sii paziente!"
La scorsa notte mi sono addormentata velocemente e sono riuscita a svegliarmi senza problemi.
Fra qualche ora inizierò a lavorare, che felicità! Ovviamente sono sarcastica, ma il tempo passerà velocemente.
May 2, 2023
May 2, 2023
La civilisation maya
Quand on parle de la période de la civilisation maya, on parle des années 100 avant J.-C jusqu’à des années 600 après J.-C. C’était vraiment une civilisation extraordinaire et magnifique : une civilisation avancée et on peut dire presque moderne. En considérant ces anciennes civilisations comme les égyptiennes et les aztèques, on pose la question : comment ont-ils accompli ces exploits inimaginable à cette époque.
Voici quelques exemples des exploits mayas. J’ai déjà parlé de la domestication de fruits et de légumes comme des maïs, des piments et du cacao. Le deuxième exemple : la civilisation maya étudiait les étoiles. Ils étaient des astrologues et leur astrologie était exacte. Grâce à leurs connaissances supérieures, ils ont développé un calendrier : très similaire du calendrier que nous utilisons maintenant. Un autre exemple : ils avaient un système de l’écriture et de la numérotation très sophistiqué. Ils écrivaient soit sur la pierre soit sur le papier et leurs histoires étaient très détaillées. Heureusement, aujourd’hui nos historiens ont la capacité de les déchiffrer.
Alors quoi d’autres ? On dit que les mayas ont créé les produits de caoutchouc comme des balles. Ils jouaient un sport ressemblant au basket-ball avec ces balles. Mon dernier exemple : ils étaient des bâtisseurs accomplis, construisant les pyramides énormes, les temples majestueux et les palais splendides. C’est incroyable de croire qu’ils ont fait tous cela sans l’aide d’animaux, de chariots ou d’ordinateurs !
May 2, 2023
Éducation
Je suis convaincu que l'éducation est un des plus important points d'un pays. Si un pays a une bonne éducation accesiblé pour son peuple il va en profiter. Compreniez pas mal je parle de "bonne" éducation pas d'une aussi difficile que possible. Malheureusement beaucoup de gens ont commencé de melanger "bon" avec "difficile" à propos d'éducation. Une bonne éducation signifie d'apprendre autant de choses que possible de meilleure manière. Personne est vraiment "stupide" peu importe à quel point tu es intelligent si tu n'a pas l'information pour résoudre une problème tu ne vas pas arriver. De plus c'est aussi une faite que quelques pays préférént donne leur peuple un éducation minable pour qu'il puisse le mieux manipuler.
May 2, 2023
Translation
This green island is like a boat rocking in the moonlight.
Girl, you are floating in my heart, too.
Let my song follow the breeze blowing open your curtains.
Let my heart follow the running water keeping talking to you.
The long shadow of coconut trees can't hide my affection.
The bright moonlight illuminates my heart even more.
This green island night has been so quiet.
Girl, why are you still silent?
May 2, 2023
Yaz tatili e-postası
"Yaz tatilini ülkenizde geçirmek isteyen yakın arkadaşınız Zeynep'den bir e-posta aldınız. Arkadaşınıza ülkenizde geçireceği tatille ilgili önerilerinizi içeren en az 125 kelimelik bir e-posta yazınız."
Merhaba Zeynep,
E-postanı okumaya çok sevindim. Beni yazmak iyi yapmışsın yani çevrimiçinde bol bol bilgi olması rağmen yerel bilgi gibisi yok. Neyse, önerseyim sana.
Madem klasik eserler heyli beğeniyorsun, Madrid'de varır varmaz mutlaka Prado müzesine git. Orada kolayca yarım gün harcacaksın. Sonra Reina Sofia müzesine giderken El Brillante'de uğrayıp güzel yerel yiyecek ye. Reina Sofia müzesinde de muhtemelen yarım gün olacaksın.
İkinci gün kuzeyindeki dağlara git, manzalara bambaşka bir şey! Yalnız uygun ayakkabılarını getirmeyi unutma çünkü yağmur yüzünden bata çıka yürüyerek uğraşacaksın.
Son olarak Toledo'ya git, en sevdiğim şehridir. Orada birtakım kale var bir de yahut, hıristyan ve müslüman alanları da var. Onlar arasında farklılıklar görmek bayağı seveceksin!
Neyse, herhangi bir sorun varsa bana bir mesaj at, yine de burada seninle görüşemem üzgünüm!
Kazasız belasız gidip gel!
Saygılar,
Alex
May 2, 2023
休日のとき
4月に私と家族は両親の生まれた場所に行った。あそこに車で2日かかったが、ひこうきならたしか2時間だけ。両親の生まれた場所は村にあるしみどりもたくさんあるんだ街にちがう。道の途中でいろんなことがあった、例えば車がぶっつかった、あのときお兄さんが運転した、お兄さんはあまり急がしいかったんだ。でも私達はぶじだってよかったこしょうも少しだけある、その後お兄さんが父にしかられて助言をしてあげた。
到着したとき私達はおばさんにあいさつされたおばさんは祖父母の家に住んでいる、私たちは祖父母の家に9日たいざいした。
家に戻った前に父が病気だった、本当に心配したんだ、明日はもう大丈夫だ、それで私たちは家に戻った。
読んでくれてありがとうございます
May 2, 2023
١ مايو ٢٠٢٣
(يرجى ملاحظة: أنا مبكتبش بالفصحى علشان أنا عايز أزاول الكتابة بالعامية، بالتحديد بالمصري.)
كان اليوم ممطر جدا جدا. أخذت الأتوبيس إلى المكتبة وكنت تبلل جدا ولو كنت في الأتوبيس معظم الوقت. ممكن شمسيتي صغيرة جدا. رحت المخبز لشرا الخبز كمان. عندما عدت إلى شقتي، صنعت رز ودجاج بالتوابل على العشا.
May 2, 2023
Could u pls help me revise this thanks letter？Thank you
Hi P,
I really appreciate your professional coach and insightful sharing in the past 8 months of my 1st rotation.
With your coach, I gained much experience in collecting our competitor’s intelligence, analyzing new product’s development strategy, digging insight from GlobalData, etc. These works truly enhance my capabilities in structure thinking, storytelling, and presentation skills. Most important, I’ll keep it in mind that we should highlight key messages in each presentation.
In addition, you’re always willing to share what you’ve learned and thought with us. For example, you’ve shared 4 segments of CVS’s merchandise, as well as your findings from market visit. These provide us new perspectives to rethink the whole thing and will expand our way of thinking.
All in all, thanks for your help and influence in the very beginning of my career. And I’ll keep building up my aspiration, capability, and engagement level in the future.
Sincerely wish you a healthy, happy, and balanced life.
Best Regards,
E
May 2, 2023
연습 3
내 인생에서 행복했던 하루가 많이 경험했습니다. 근데 최근에 특히 한 하루가 기억났습니다.나는 대학교에 용인되습니다.모든 지방에서 사람이 왔습니다.
그래서 대학입학의 경쟁이 엄청 힘들어습니다.나는 걱정해서 입시 합격이 말까 이었습니다. 오랫동안 열심히 시험 준비 했습니다. 하지만 시험을 중에 스트레스 많이 받았습니다. 시험에 어려운 질문 많이 대답해서 정답을 선택할 걱정했습니다.그리거 시험에 끝나서 인터뷰를 했습니다. 나는 인터뷰에 전행에서 잘 했습니다. 시험에 끝나자마자 기분이 너무 안심했습니다.며칠 후에 나는 메시지 받아서 입시의 시험 합격했습니다.난 엄청 행복해서 눈물이 난다 있었습니다. 그 대학교 입학의 경험을 큰 도전 있었습니다 .입학전에 할 수 있을까?라고 생각해씁니다.자주 포기하고 싶어서.하지만 내 부모님 포기 안돼한테서 라고 이었습니다. 이 큰 도전 때문에 대학교에 입장해서 가장 행복했던 하루가 있었습니다.
May 2, 2023
"Good Doctor"
First of all, I want to say this tv-show for people with a big scale of patience. You know, not every person is ready for 6 seasons and 20 episodes in each season, and the length of each series is one hour. If you are a big fan of "Desperate Housewives" I can say for sure you will like "Good Doctor".
This is a big and long story about a young, intelligent boy who suffers from a mild autistic disorder. He just finished medical university, his informal guardian was the director of one of the departments in the hospital and he tried to help Shon (the main character of the tv-show) to get work at this hospital.
Every season shows how much effort Shon makes to be a part of society. He is smart and knows many ways to cure patients, but he doesn't know and cannot understand how to be gentle and correct with them. He always wanted to say the truth, but the real world is different, and sometimes you should lie to save people's feelings. Sometimes colleagues and patients were rude to him and he was on the edge of the decision to cut off all his efforts to be a doctor.
Of course, I do not know any tv-show without a love story and this one is no exception. Shon met one cute girl who wanted to be with him just friends, and for the first time, it was like she planned. Then, after a time, she catches herself on the thought she felt for him. They did a big work to be together and assure everyone that they are the same family as others.
May 1, 2023
May 1, 2023
羅平粉絲
我上一篇的日記的題目是亞森羅平，這一篇日記講的也是亞森羅平！我16-17歲的時候，我每天吃午飯的時候會去我最喜歡的英文老師的課堂去借一台筆記本電腦去陪我親愛的讀羅平一起冒險。我每天在”Project Gutenberg網站上讀那些羅平小說. Project Gutenberg有很多故事屬於公有領域。在那個網站上面，你可以找到10-11個亞森羅平小說。Persona 5，一個日本角色扮演遊戲，給我介紹亞森羅平这个人物。
我對亞森的感情很深。而且，我給他取了一些外號。“倒霉郎君”，“我親愛的黑貓”，“诺曼底的野花”，“陸布朗的奇怪飞贼貓咪”，”森森“，”森郎“，”岩柱的少主“。。。那時候我真的有點傻！高中时候，我是一位肉麻的书呆子。
現在我正在寫一篇关于羅平的同人文。我覺得他很像我喜歡的武俠英雄，所以我就寫一篇交叉同人文。我把羅平變成一位遊俠，因為我想看他浪跡江湖的四面八方。羅平穿越到中國古代去冒險，好酷啊！很有帥氣！好浪漫！<333333
為了研究這個題目，我正在讀金庸的小說。有时候，亞森会用一些文绉绉的说法，我就覺得我需要跟了解古文才能寫出來罗平侠客的對話。
May 1, 2023
May 1, 2023
Tagebucheintrag - 30.04.2023
Seit Wochen wollte ich eine Freundin treffen, aber sie hatte wegen ihrer Arbeit niemals Zeit dafür. Und gestern haben wir sie beim Zufall in der Straße getroffen. Sie war mit ihren Eltern in der Stadt unterwegs und sie wollten an einer besonderen Stadtführung teilnehmen. Aber die Führungsgruppe hatte keine Platz mehr. Deswegen haben sie ganz spontan entscheidet, zunächst mir uns an einem Café zu sitzen, und danach mit dem Auto zu einen Freizeitpark zu fahren. Sie haben uns nett eingeladen und da wir keinen bestimme Planen hatten, sind wir mitgekommen.
Der Ort ist wunderbar! Es geht um einen Park mit verschiedene Gebäude aus Holz, die man besuchen kann. In den Gebäuden gibt es Treppe, Kletterwände, Rohre und Tunnels. Es gibt ab und zu andere Spiele, die aus Holz gebastelt wurden. Um zwischen die Häuser zu gehen, kann man normale Wege, Wege die in der Baümen sind oder sogar Tunnels nehmen. Auch wenn es kein richtiger Tierpark ist kann man auch verschiedene Tiere beobachten. Am meisten haben mir die Pfauen, die total frei in völliger Freiheit herum spazieren, gefällt. Der Park ist ein Kinderparadies und war auch für mich begeisternd.
Da die Eltern meiner Freundin nur Polnisch sprechen konnte ich meine neue Kenntnisse für einen realen Fall probieren. Es hat geklappt: Ich konnte sagen, dass sie beide nett und cool sind, dass ich Pierogi und Katze mag... Ich habe auch "Wo ist dein Papa? Dein Papa ist im Baum. Dein Papa guckt an Tiere. Dein Papa will im Tunnel gehen" viel zu viel gesagt. Außerdem habe ich gelernt, nachdem wir aus einem Haus mit einem Toboggan gerutscht hatten, wie man "mein Po ist kaputt" in Polnisch sagt, was man übrigens in meisten Lernbücher nicht lernt!
Ende des Tages war es Zeit für das Feuer, da es Hexennacht, oder Walpurgisnacht, war. Leute haben mit Feuer in den Händen getanzt und den Haufen aus Kieferholz angezündet. Die Sicherheitsordnung war sehr locker und wir könnten sehr nah vom Feuer herankommen. Ich hatte Aschen in der Haare und eine rote Asche ist auf die Tasche meiner Freundin gefallen! Im Moment war es mir ganz egal: "Die Nacht der Hexen ist nicht für vernünftige Leute", so habe ich gedacht. Normalerweise achte ich aber darauf, dass man nicht im Gefahr ist, besonders wenn es Kinder in der Nähe gibt.
Allerdings ist alles gut passiert und wir sind nach Hause zurückgefahren. Heute ersten Mai habe ich einige Muskelkater: Während eines Tages habe ich mich vorgestellt, das ich ein Kind sei!
May 1, 2023
May 1, 2023
Proposal for the creation of a local communitary center
Introduction and reasons for the project
There is a neighbourhood in the south of Seville called „3000 viviendas“. It is not renown a place positively in the city, so as to life there. It is commonly associated to drug use, prostitution and crimes. Although that is not entirely true, it would be necessary to cooperate in this location, particularly, in order to prevent childhood from following the wrong path. In this regard, it is an interesting idea the creation of a center, where it could take place any sort of healthy activities in a controllable environment.
Activities and benefits from the project
The center could be split into two areas: one for leisure activities and another linked to academic and professional purposes.
- Leisure: It is recommendable to place a big room where children and young could socialize and have fun, for instance, playing billiar, watching movies or even reading. That could help them to realise there is a different positive reality far beyond what they are accustomed to see.
- Studies and orientation: this room could be similar to a class where volunteers help students from this part of the city to pass their exams or get higher scores, with the aim of gaining access to better scholarships. Furthermore, we could offer professional orientation services for those who are still, in order to discover what is their vocation.
Conclusions
This project would require funds so as to build the center, though after this initial contribution, the project would be in charge of volunteers and some social workers (whose salaries could come from public institutions). Your company’s contribution could significantly improve the life of childhood and youth in this neighbourhood, not to mention indirect effects in their families.
May 1, 2023
Ways of using free time effectively
Most of one’s life is spent sleeping and working in such a way that it is not often considered what to do in our free time. That is the reason why people usually prefer relaxing or hanging out.
Nevertheless, opting for a more practical approach instead of leisure activities is a rare avis. In this regard, the aim of this essay is to show other alternatives, such as: doing physical exercise or getting involved in communitary projects.
Given the fact that technologies are intrinsically linked to lack of exercise, it would be advisable to practise some sport in order to keep in shape and more importantly follow a healthy way of life.
That is true, yet it is an individualistic point of view, since its benefits does not go beyond our own interests and are frequently related to competitiveness rather than cooperation. Therefore, taking part in altruistic activities, especially, when possible, those which take place in our neighbourhood, could be a more effective way of using our spare time. Apart from the social satisfaction of helping other people, it is worthy noting, one can contribute to the place where people live and become more familiar, which would noticeably improve coexistence. That would have positive effect in our mental and, indirectly, physical health.
To sum up, participating in local projects has both positive effects in our own and the community where one life. This feedback is overall more significant and practical than exercising. Furthermore, both ways are not excluyent and could be associated in activities like a local marathon.