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Stereotipi sui francesi (continuazione)
Ho già pubblicato un testo in italiano su questo argomento in italiano, perciò, vado a cercare altri stereotipi sul proprio paese.
1) I francesi fanno sciopero tutto il tempo
È vero che i sciopieri sono frequenti, per ragioni che sono più o meno buone. Sia qual che sia, la gente è attaccata al nostro modello sociale, e questo non le posso rimproverare. Gli ultimi scioperi non hanno fatto il governo cambiare idea per niente, ma nonostante tutto, sono un buon modo perché il governo sappia che il popolo è arrabbiato.
2) Discutiamo spesso di Napoleone
Ho visto molte domande da stranieri del tipo "che pensano i francesi di Napoleone oggi?". In realtà, Napoleone non importa molto nei dibattiti publici di oggi. Ci sono individui molto più controversi, como il maresciallo Pétain: eroe della prima guerra mondiale, ma responsabile principale della collaborazione nella seconda...
3) Amamo tutti Jerry Lewis
Un stereotipo che hanno gli americani, perché sembrano credere che tutti i francesi amino Jerry Lewis. È totalmente falso. Di fatto, la maggior parte dei francesi non lo conoscono nemmeno!
4) I francesi sono eleganti (ma puzzano)
Bene, al tempo dei re di Versailles, lo stereotipo era abbastanza vero, ma oggi, credo che ci laviamo ni più ni meno del resto di Europa. Quanto all'eleganza, dipende molto dal posto: nei centri città ricchi, si trovano molte persone vestite in modo chic, ma altrove, si vedono tutti tipi di tenute, abiti normali o "casual". Nella mia generazione, direi che ci sono situazioni estreme: ragazze vestite e truccate come Donatella Versace all'uscita del liceo, e al contrario persone vestite in modo trasandato, kitsch o originale, il cui obiettivo non è essere alla moda.
Oct. 23, 2023
please review my essay
Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you a agree or disagree with this opinion?
A number of people think that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. I do not completely agree with this opinion
The government should support spending on school facilities. The government helps 50% school fees for families have a disadvantaged. Education is very important there are other sectors that the government also needs to pay attention to. The government should support spending on school f facilities. A typical example is medical universities students have always earn expensive school fees than students the other universities. Because the facility, the machine, the equipment is very high, when the government can do this, may be help a part for students and their families. The government should support 50% school fees for families have a disadvantaged, by reason of schooling is the most important tool in unemployment, there are people who are truly talented but just because of tuition money, they cannot go to college. The government can know that by creating a survey to help. Education is very important but there are still other sectors that the government must pay attention to, the tourism industry in Vietnam this year contributed 13,9% GDP to Vietnam GDP, brining great income to Vietnam. The import-export industry rank second in Asia. We can see that these two industries alone can bring abundant economic resources to the country, and that is why the government must pay attention to their development.
In short, the government should support facilities and those who want to go to should but have difficult circumstances,
Oct. 23, 2023
Day six: weekends - part one.
I skipped a few days of my "everyday diary" because of quite eventful weekends.
Tip for the future: prepare 2-3 texts ahead in case there won't be enough time to write anything.
Anyway, I had to tell you about a girl I usually hang out with, so this weekend wasn't an exception. She found a thrift shop nearby and wanted to check it out. We met in the morning with a plan to eat at the coffee shop across the street but on that street was a Ferrari parade. You can imagine how loud and crowded it was and all the cafes were fully packed.
We are not into cars so we went to another coffee shop with less variety of food but excellent coffee and friendly workers.
Luckily for us, the parade was done when we returned to the thrift shop. The unlucky part is the amount of clothes was even less than in my wardrobe.
It seems, that she was determined to buy something which is why we went to the nuts shop where she bought a big bag of everything.
Around 7 p.m. we went home, I had an invitation from a local guy to get a drink with him and his friend late in the evening.
When I agreed to meet him in the company of 3 unknown guys I was a bit scared. My friends were joking it wouldn't finish well but the Cypriots are so friendly!
We had a really nice chat with all of them we discussed differences between our cultures, what words in Greek or English sound funny for Russians because of similar pronunciations, we talked about jobs and snow and food and bars and even a little politics. The best part I felt free to talk about everything and wasn't tired to the end.
Later on, some of them said goodbye and went home and my local friend suggested attending a techno party in the club.
That was a completely new experience and a culture shock.
Oct. 23, 2023
ma ville
Elche est la ville où je suis né et où j'ai grandi. Elle est située en Espagne, près de la côte méditerranéenne, où l'on peut profiter du soleil et de la chaleur presque tous les jours de l'année. Aujourd'hui, Elche compte environ 235 000 habitants et ne cesse de croître.
Elche est généralement connue pour ses sites inscrits au patrimoine mondial : tout d'abord, la palmeraie, qui est une zone pleine de palmiers où il est très facile de se perdre si l'on ne la connaît pas bien. Deuxièmement, le Misteri d'Elx, une représentation religieuse de la vierge, en plus, le chantier est accompagné de chansons et de performances. Pour finaliser, le musée de Pusol qu'est un lieu crée pour connaître l'histoire et comme les gens vivaient dans le passé.
C'est une ville magnifique si tu aimes les espaces vertes, les endroits nets et surtout si tu aimes la bonne ambiance et la nourriture savoureuse et bon marché.
Oct. 23, 2023
Idees pour amèliorer ma ville
Elche c’est la ville où je suis née et où je suis grandi. (Et j'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à améliorer ma ville). Actuellement la petite cité compte environ 235.000 d’habitants et ne cesse de croire. Malgré le fait que la ville a de beaucoup d’espaces vertes, c’est nécessaire nettoyer autres endroits qu’ils sont négligés. Il y a mesures que nous pouvons utiliser pour trouver à Elche un second souffle.
D’abord, nous pouvions installer un système de nettoyage qui fera un tourner pour les endroits plus négligés avec l’objectif de maintenir la cité nette. En plus, avec le suffisant d’argent sera possible l’installation des bus hybrides et électriques pour aider l’environnement. Enfin, pour donner une image plus moderne à Elche, la peinture et rénovation des hangars, usines et bâtiments effondrés est essentiel.
Oct. 23, 2023
please review my essay
Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. why is this happening> do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
These days, families have a lack of bonding in relationships as compared with the old days, and this situation is largely accepted by society. The busy schedule and exercise use of digital platforms are the core reasons for demonizing the closeness. There are some cases for this and examine the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
One of the first motives why families are no more closer is tough routing work on a diurnal basis. The nature of the jobs force people to word longer hours, thUs eventually, they fail to spend quality time with blood relations. In Pakistan, for instance, bankers completely live a robotic life, as they never meet family members for the months. Another point to consider is that the high usage of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, and WhatsApp is also contributed to this trend. People are more keen on their online life than interacting with a family in their leisure time.
This trend has numerous good points. The primary merit is that everyone can pursue a career without minimum distractions and enhance the living standard. Another positive aspect is that people turn into mature early and easily adopt decision making skill. Because the exposure of new avenues shapes their personality in an advantage way. In other words, they became independent and seek opportunities to establish themselves. However, there is a drawback as well of this approach. The most pivotal factor is that they benefit from emotional security and support. Consequently, it will fatter difficult to cope with the challenges of contemporary life. In addition, it will also rise a mental health issue.
In conclusion, the busy modern lifestyle and social media are resulting in families to become less close. Therefore, those have more negative than positive outcomes.
Oct. 23, 2023
Oct. 23, 2023
Une Liste
Si l'on se fait une petite liste avec des tâches il est plus probable que l'on va le faire. Surtout si l'on fait avec un morceau de papier à cause de cela on se souvient plus facilement à les tâches qu'ils nous restent. C'est aussi un moyen de se motiver quand on les ecrit c'est comme on fait une promesse à soi une quelle on ne veut pas rompre. De plus on se sent heureuse quand on arrive à l'accomplir les tâches que l'on a donné a soi.
Oct. 23, 2023
Stressi ja kiire
Stressi ja kiire ovat täydentävät käsitteet eli jos kiire tulee teidän elämään, siis ahdistus ja stressitila tulevat todennäköisesti myös.
Me elätään ajassa, kun me ollaan jatkuvassa juoksussa. Meillä on runsaasti velvollisuuksia, omia menoja, suunnitelmia ja haluja. Me aina pyritään parempaan elämään, ilman nykyhetken huomiota. Tämän lisäksi meidän elämä täynnä melua, kaikki ovat aina kiireessä, he haluaisivat ehtiä enemmän, ansaita yhä enemmän ja pärjätä paljon paremmin. Nykyisin ihmiset yrittävät jopa käyttää mahdollisimman vähän aika ruoanlaittoon, jotta heillä on vielä aikaa uppoutua töihin. Meidän aivoilla on aina liikaa ajoituksia menneisyydestä tai tulevaisuudesta. Surullisinta on se, että ihmiset eivät tajua miten sellainen elämätapa voi vaikuttaa heidän hyvinvointiinsa.
Me kohtamme monenlaisia seurauksia elämällä sellaista elämää. Me emme keskittyä riittävästi huomiota meidän perheisiin ja sen jälkeen me törmäämme ongelmiin. Perheissä syntyvät tuskallisia riitoja. Myös elämä kiireessä haittaa sekä fyysiseen, että henkiseen terveyteen. Ahdistus, uupumus, masennus ja psykosomaattiset sairaudet voivat yllättää täysin. Siksi nykyään kiire on todella vakavaa ongelmaa.
On monia keinoja taistella seurauksien kanssa, mutta kukaan ei halua kohdata niitä. Siis mitä me voidaan tehdä, jotta estää negatiivinen lopputulos etukäteen?
Tärkeintä on nykyhetken oleminen. Se on paras tapa hidastamaan. Voi aloittaa harrastaa joogaa ja kokeilla itseäni erilaisissa hengitysharjoituksissa. Jos on mahdollista, työtauoilla mene ulos hengittämään raikasta ilmaa ilman musiikkia kuulokkeilla. Yritä kuulla erilaisia ääniä, esim. lintujen laulua tai lehtien kahinaa. Suunnittele aikaa, jonka voi viettää perheen kanssa, omistautua harrastukseen tai rentoutua yksin. Sen lisäksi voi pitää kiitollisuuspäiväkirjaa, johon kirjoitetaan asioita, joista olette kiitollinen tänään. Nämä ovat vain muutamia juttuja, jotka auttavat olemaan hetkessä tässä ja nyt.
Meillä on vain yhden elämän ja se on tosi lyhyt. Meidän pitää nauttia josta hetkestä ja elää joka päivää kuin viimeinen. Älä anna kiireen olemaan halussa teidän elämää. Älä unohda olla nykyhetkessä ja se ehdottomasti parantaa teidän elämänlaatua.
Oct. 23, 2023
Better late than never!
When I was a schoolgirl, I luckily had a wonderful English teacher. She was the kind of teacher who never screams, speaks politely, but has such authority that it’s quiet in the class and all have prepared for the lessons (naturally, our boys didn’t like Mondays because every weekend they had been doing their English homework).
She lived for several years in London and taught us how to speak. The teacher had told us that speaking is the most important skill if you want to survive abroad.
Apparently, she was very surprised when I didn’t go to study languages. In fact, I liked her lessons very much, but I never wanted to be a teacher. Unfortunately, I thought neither about the career of a translator nor about opportunities that might give me knowledge of the languages.
Many years have passed, and now I think that it was my biggest mistake in life.
But never say never!
So, two years ago, I eventually retired and started to prepare for exams.
It was a long way, but finally, I’m here and trying my best to study. Occasionally, it can be physically painful for me, yet it is nonetheless interesting.
This saying “better late than never” will become a real truth after my first salary as a translator.
Oct. 23, 2023
Lunedì
Oggi non è una giornata qualsiasi, è l'inizio della settimana lavorativa. Sono già stanca, ma tutte le mie giornate sono stancante e lunghe.
Mi sono rilassata nel fine settimana. Ho letto tutto il libro "1984", in inglese. In realtà è un libro che ho letto molte volte, ma talvolta mi manca leggerlo. Credo che il mondo sia così come nel libro, almeno recentemente. Sono certe persone che leggono quel libro e lo utilizzano in modo sbagliato, seguono solo il loro benessere. Orwell era un visionario avanti al suo tempo. C'è tanta gente a cui consiglio leggere questo autore.
Quando è possibile, preferisco leggere un libro senza traduzione. Alcune traduzioni sembrano male e non possono mostrare il vero significato.
Ho più forze dopo il weekend e spero di avere una settimana tranquilla al lavoro. Niente potrà arrabbiarmi, vorrei essere una persona più tranquila la quale controlla i momenti difficili.
A domani!
Oct. 23, 2023
Задумываюсь о посещении России
Разумеется, теперь неправильный момент для путешествий по России. Но, к сожелениую, эта война может продолжаться ещё годы... и я не хочу ждать так долго.
На мой взгляд, сама Россия, скорее всего, безопасна, если избегать границы с Украиной. Поэтому я решил, что хочу посетить Россию когда-нибудь в следующем семестре.
Мне всё ещё надо строить полный план, но сейчас я думаю о следующем:
Сначала я полечу в Гданьск, а там уеду на автобусе в Калининград, где я могу улетать местным пролётом в Санкт-Петербург. Не знаю как долго длиться проезд поездом с Санкт-Петербурга до Новосибирска, но мне кажется, ездить поездом - уникальный и классный способ открыть Россию. Пока я не решил какие города я хочу посетить между ними, так что если у кого-нибудь есть рекомендацию, я бы любил её слышать. Чтобы вернуться, я собираюсь лететь домой из Новосибирска через Турцию.
Возможно, этот план не имеет никакого смысла. Мне ещё надо собрать инфо про визу, билеты и так далее. Но я уже с нетерпением жду этого.
Oct. 23, 2023
NHL Game Notes
Pittsburgh Penguins – Calgary Flames – 5:2
1) Alex Nedeljkovic was a goaltender the Penguins and Jacob Markstrom had been defending gates the Flames.
2) The first NHL goal is scoring by Matt Coronato. For right wing American it was the 3rd game on this level. He scored in power play when teams hadn’t yet opened match score by the end of 2nd period.
3) The Penguins got a score tied in 18 seconds after start of 3rd period. Sidney Crosby had saved a puck into the Flames’ zone and after pass from behind the gate Bryan Rust scored.
4) The Penguins scored the 2nd goal in 23 seconds after the first. Evgeni Malkin took part in a scoring combination again. He gave the pass. Russian forward scored 4th Penguins’ goal too. These are his 5th and 6th points at first 3 games of new season.
5) All of their five goals the Penguins had scored at 3rd period. By the way, there wasn’t penalty last 20 minutes. All of three power play game the Penguins have got at 1st period, but they hadn't realized it. Two of three penalties were earned on Evgeni Malkin.
Oct. 23, 2023
NHL Game Notes
Winnipeg Jets – Florida Panthers – 6:4
1) At the beginning 2nd period teams exchanged goals within 10 seconds of 1st minute. The Panthers scored first and after The Jets made it too.
2) The hosts had been dominating in 2nd period except 1st minute. They could score right away after 2nd goal, but Bobrovsky made some huge saves. Only in the middle of period they had led. Statistic argues their advantage. The Jets shot 16 times and their opponents only 10 times.
3) The Jets scored in the minority at 15th minute of the 3rd period. It made center Adam Lowry. It became 5-2.
4) The head coach of Panthers had removed the goalkeeper 4 minutes left. His decision helped. The guests scored twice since 3:29 till 2:24 left of 3rd period. They reduced the gap to one goal. The Jets eventually won by scoring the 6th goal into an empty net.
Oct. 23, 2023
NHL Game Notes
Ottawa Senators – Philadelphia Flyers – 5:2
October 14, 2023
1) In the first two periods, the Senators' attack had been leading by a right wing Vladimir Tarasenko and an attacking defender Jacob Chychrun. The first one gave two passes and the second one scored twice.
2) In the 2nd period the Senators conceded a goal in 18 seconds after they had scored 3rd puck when 3:48 left and had been leading 3-1.
3) By 17:15 left of 3rd period The Flyers had been shooting on target only 9 times.
4)At the end of the game the Senators had relaxed and allowed guests to shot more, but goaltender Anton Forsberg saved them.
Oct. 23, 2023
Les crêpes au chou-fleur
J’adore les crêpes et pendant mon enfance, je les ai mangé avec du citron et du sucre. De nos jours, ma fille les mange avec le Nutella. Nutella est une pâte à tartiner au chocolat avec des noisettes. Il y a un marché en plein air à proximité où on peut goûter des crêpes délicieuses avec sauce au chocolat ou au caramel et crème glacée. En y pensant, j’ai l’eau à la bouche !
L’autre jour, je suis tombé sur une recette de crêpes avec du chou-fleur. Elle me semble d’être très facile à préparer et en plus beaucoup plus sain que les crêpes sucrées. Voila la recette. Il n’y a que des 3 ingrédients principaux : 100g de chou-fleur cru, 2 œufs et un peu de flocons d’avoine. Les instructions culinaire sont très simple. D’abord, mixer tous les ingrédients avec de l’eau et une pincée de sel afin d’avoir une texture bien. Après ça, cuire à la poêle à feu moyen.
Je n’ai pas encore essayé la recette mais selon le clip de YouTube, les crêpes sont moelleuses et souples. J’ai une amie végétarienne et j’ai l’intention de l’a inviter au dîner et nous pourrons préparer ces crêpes. Si elles sont bonnes, je les préparerai de nouveau. A mon avis, nous pourrons passer une bonne soirée ensemble.
Oct. 23, 2023
Les charity shops
En Australie, on trouve les charity shops partout et j’imagine qu’il en existe beaucoup en France. Quand je parle des charity shops, je parle des boutiques caritatives où on achète les choses à seconde main. Les choses les plus populaires sont les vêtements suivi par la vaisselle et les couverts. J’admets qu’on a l’opportunité d’acheter les immeubles comme les lits, les chaises et les canapés.
La majorité des articles sont d’occasion mais toujours en très bon état. J’ai entendu dire que si la ville ou la région est riche, les offres sont de meilleure qualité. Quand j’ai déménagé et je me suis installée en Australie, j’étais étudiante n’ayant beaucoup d’argent. J’ai fréquenté ces magasins de charité et j’ai acheté les vêtements à porter à l’université et en fait, j’ai même meublé ma chambre : un tapis rouge, des rideaux blanc et des draps.
Parfois, on a de la chance et on tombe sur les articles neufs, non utilisés. Un conseil : le meilleur moment pour parcourir ces boutiques, c’est après Noël. Les magasins charité débordent et j’imagine que ce sont les cadeaux inattendus. Une année, j’étais aux anges puisque juste après Noel j’ai acheté un manteau et des bottes : tous neufs.
Oct. 23, 2023
Les voyages forment la jeunesse
Je suis d’accord avec cette affermation. À mon avis, voyager est l’un des façons le meilleur pour ouvrir l’esprit et faire connaissance avec d’autres cultures.
Quand j’étais petit, je n’ai pas eu beaucoup d’opportunités pour explorer d’autres pays. Pour cette raison, mon point de vue était plutôt limité et je n’arrivais pas à comprendre comment apprécier les traditions d’atrui.
Par exemple, j’étais convaincu que la seule bonne cuisine était celle italienne. Par contre, après mon démenagement à l’etranger, je me suis aperçu qu’il y a d’autres cuisines autant bonnes et riche que celle italienne.
Si seulement j’avais eu la possibilité d’explorer le monde quand j’étais plus jeune, je suis sûr que j’aurais pris des decisions différents dans ma vie!
Donc, j’espère que les parents s’efforcent pour que ses enfants aient ces opportunités.
Oct. 23, 2023
Oct. 23, 2023
Att prata om vädret. Lätt svenska med Oskar avsnitt 4
Det har varit varmt på sistone, ungefär 32C varje dag. Men idag var det molnigt och fint, bara 22C. Temperaturen i oktober går ofta upp och ner. Ibland känns det som sommar och ibland känns det som vinter. Snart ska det bli kallt och regnigt när vintern kommer.
Jag kommer sakna solen och värmen. I kalifornien får vi igna snö, bara regn. Ibland det regnar för mycket och det blir flod. Det hände så förra året.
Oct. 23, 2023
長安三萬裏
今晚是我第二次看《長安三萬裏》。那篇電影好讓我感動！電影的細節是關於大唐的氣勢。看電影時候感覺古文的悲歡離合，友情和詩意。主角是高適，他是敘述者。但是電影另外一位重要人物是李白。李白，那位謫仙！那位風流瀟灑的遊子！有一次，我在中文學校讀過了他的《靜夜思》。這是我童年的懷念，一個神秘秘的纏綿感情。
我高中時候，我姐送給我了一本關於李白的傳記，哈金寫的《The Banished Immortal: A Life of Li Bai 》。有一次，我有一位很重要的考試。考試之前，我再讀了那本傳記。有些人会觉得这很奇怪，应为李白活的时候非常倒霉。那位可憐的詩人沒機會考過行卷當一位重要的官人。不過，對我來說，這本書像一個魔米奇妙的福氣。我覺得太白兄鼓勵我考過這門考試。我稱呼他為太白兄因為我對他有點親切的感情。
我是一位美國二代華裔。如果我跟土生的中國人比漢語水平，我的距離差很多。
但是文學是我最大的愛好，我的一刻野心是學文言文。我的專業是教育，畢業之後要去一個美國高中教文學。我可以分析美國和英國作者，但是我好想了解中國的唐詩和宋詞。
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