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April 13, 2025
Someone in the attic
Oggi vi parlerò del libro che sto leggendo, l’ho cominciato da poco ma mi sembra abbastanza buono!
La storia comincia con una donna che si sta rilassando nel suo bagno bevendo un bicchiere di vino, quando ascolta un rumore, come se qualcuno stasse camminando nella casa. È ritrovata uscita il giorno seguente, si sarebbe annegata « per colpa del alcol ».
Dopo, seguiamo una donna che si è traslata da poco nella stessa casa con I suoi bambini. Si chiama Julia. È « l’amica »della vittima, anche se in realtà si odiano. La figlia di Julia gli mostra un video in cui si può vedere un uomo in casa loro che si nasconda nella soffitta. Julia non ci crede, all’inizio non ci presta attenzione e pensa che è un montaggio. Poi, succedono delle cose strane, in notte, il bambino ascolta rumori strani come se fosse un uomo dietro la porta, come se qualcuno lo guardasse mentre dorme.
Il libro si chiama : someone in the attic di Andre Mara :)
April 13, 2025
My favorite seasonal dish
Well, to be honest I don't really have a favorite seasonal dish.
I don't even have a favorite dish if I think about it.
But what I do have is a favorite fruit, and fruit is seasonal.
I do love strawberries and raspberries.
I believe that they not only look incredibly delicious but the also taste fantastic.
April 13, 2025
Something I would never wear
If I ask someone, what a piece of clothing is, that this person would never wear, many would take a moment to think about.
Then, they would listing items of clothing, that they percieve as unflattering, and ugly.
Things, that once were worn by many people around the world, because they were considered pretty, and trendy at the time.
But trends change.
That, what was once considered cool is now uncool.
However, I would take a different take on this question.
Let's look at an example.
If you would wander the streets, and would ask a random person what they think about skinny jeans, it is likely that the answer will often times be the same.
That they are ugly.
I would disagree with this statement.
I don't believe that anything is necesserally ugly.
There are people out there, who can wear them and look absolutely stunning.
Even though it is not something for me, and I would never wear them, I don't judge people who do.
Also, I don't wear them not because I think that they are ugly, I don't wear them because I have fat legs, and don't want to highlight them.
This is why I never wore them, even while they were trendy (Yes, I was a child. Yes, I was a really self-conscious child).
Still, I don't judge people for what they are wearing, and I would never say that a piece of clothing is ugly.
I would just say that it is ugly on me.
April 13, 2025
What do you usually do in your free time? (relaxing/ active)
please correct me, I would be grateful sa much :))))
I usually go for a walk to park. I tend to read a lot of books. I'm really into garden. I like plant new flowers or trees. I prefer study than work out. I hardly ever listen to podcast. At the weeknd I loveeee sleeping in. I always binge-watch in my free time or when I must study. I scroll social media every day. I don't like clean up. So I usually relax in my free time.
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Vritras Legende
In der indischen Mythologie ist Tvashta der Schmied der Götter und auch der Erfinder vieler Künste und Techniken. Er hatte sich einen Sohn namens Trishira („Dreiköpfig“) gemacht. Ein anderer seiner Namen war „Vishvarupa“ („der Vielförmige“). Vishvarupa war höchst mächtig. Einer seiner Köpfe trank den Soma (das heilige Getränk der Götter) und ein anderer wollte nach dem Universum selbst fressen. Alle glänzten stärker als die Sonne. Die Götter befürchteten die Macht dieser Kreatur, also benutzte Inda, der König der Götte, seinen Vajra (den Blitz), um Trishira niederzustrecken. Ironischerweise wurde Indras Vajra von Tvashta geschmiedet.
Tvashata, voller Kummer, wurde rachsüchtig und führte ein Ritual aus, um einen zweiten Sohn zu machen. Er machte aber einen Aussprachefehler in den Beschwörungsformel und statt um einen Sohn, „der Indra besiegt“ zu bitten, bat er um einen Sohn, der „von Indra besiegt wird“. Im Deutschen sind „Sieger“ und „Besiegte“ zwei Wörter mit unterschiedlichen Phonemen aber im Sanskrit liegt der Unterschied in der Betonung: „indrashatrU“ (mit betonten Endvokal) bedeutet „der Zerstörer/Sieger von Indra„ aber „indrashAtru“ (mit betontem <a>) bedeutet „von Indra besiegt“.
Der kreierte Sohn hieß Vritra und war eine Art riesiger Schlange. Er war trotzdem mächtig genug, um das Wasser der ganzen Welt zurückzuhalten. Sein Schicksal war aber schon geschrieben, oder eher, ausgesprochen, und Indra tötete ihn, um eine Dürre zu vermeiden. In diesem Moment fing das befreite Wasser an, als Ströme und Flüsse überall auf Erde zu fließen.
Vritras Legende illustriert es, wie wichtig eine richtige Aussprache in religiösen Ritualen ist. Die wedische Religion (eine frühe Stufe in der Entwicklung des heutigen Hinduismus) umfasste viele sehr komplexe (manchmal tagelange) Rituale, und der kleinste Fehler konnte ein ganzes Ritual wirkungslos machen.
April 13, 2025
Altre frasi sul calcio
Il difensore si è impegnato nel contrasto.
Questa squadra giocano bene sotto pressione.
Ha messo un gran cross in area.
Pure l’altra squadra ha pensato lo stesso.
Forse possiamo ancora vincere.
Quell'attacco li ha confusi.
Esso è il nostro punto debole. (So che “esso” è letterario solamente, ma voglio communque impararlo.)
Non vedo l’ora di guardare la partita.
Quanto tempo ci vuole per arrivare allo stadio?
Hai guidato la scorsa volta, vero?
Allora, sto guidando oggi.
April 13, 2025
Ein imaginärer Tag in meinem Leben
Ich möchte um 7 Uhr aufstehen. Dann ese ich ein leckeres Frühstück während schaue Youtube Videos auf meinem Laptop. Danach dusche ich. Ich dusche gerne mit heißem oder warmem Wasser. Ich bin ein Stubenhocker. Ich will den ganzen Tag zu Hause sitzen. Ich liebe die Website "free4talk" zu benutzen. Dort kann man mit anderen Deutsch lernenden sprechen. Es ist viel spaß. Später esse ich mein Abendessen. Ich esse zwei Mahlzeit. Deshalb habe ich mein Abendessen ziemlich früh. Ich schlafe gerne spät gegen um 2 Uhr in der Nacht. Ich weiß, dass es ungesund ist.
April 13, 2025
Wenn ich in einem Supermarkt arbeite
Verschiedenen Typen Leute kommen im Supermarkt. Sie sind verschiedenes Alter. Der Supermarkt hat am meistens Kunden am Abend vielleicht um 19 Uhr. Denn die Menschen, wo beim Büro arbeiten, sie enden ihre Arbeit. Man kann die Milchprodukte am Ende auf dem Supermarkt finden. Normalerweise sind die Kunden hoflich, aber manchmal gibt es auch unhöflich Kunden. Viele Menschen kaufen gerne Snacks und Mahl.
April 13, 2025
Mr. Raji's Daily Life
In the small village at the corner of the forest, there lived an old farmer named Mr. Raji. Every morning, he went to the farm with a hoe and a rattan basket on his back. Although he was archaic, his spirit never faded. He always believes that diligence will lead to a good result. Village children usually came to listen to his stories of past life.
One day, it rained extremely, and Mr. Raji's farm was flooded. Yet, he didn't sigh. Instead, he took advantage of that time to repair his farm tools and planted vegetables in the backyard. His neighbors were impressed by his perseverance and started following his lifestyle. Slowly, the village became more prosperous and harmonious because of the spirit of mutual cooperation.
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Something that annoyed me recently
To start this little post of, I would like to say that this is probably something I should post on Reddit or something.
However, I kinda need to learn and practice my English for school, since I have my final exam soon.
To give some background information, I am not only majoring in English but also in physics.
My physics class is full of guys and I am to only girl there.
They all knew each other before I joined the class.
This is why I do not have many friends there.
When I joined the class, one guy was nice enough to sit next to me, and we started to befriend each other.
We are friends during school, but outside of school we had basically no contact.
This changed recently.
I feel like he hints at wanting to be more than friends, and I am trying my best to nicely tell him off.
I am his type, and he has a long history of ruining his female friendships because he develops a massive crush on them.
This is incredibly annoying for me, because I just want to pass physics and want to have some friends there.
A few months ago he started following e on Instagram and he added me on snapchat, which is totally fine by itself.
However, he developed the habit of constantly writing me, and especially when he is drunk, which his concerningly often, telling me how much I mean to him, that I am nice and pretty, and that he "wants to take our friendship to the next level". (I was like "Ohhh, so you wanna be best friends?")
Additionally, he is constantly snapping me, constantly updating me about his life.
This is something I do not really mind.
However, he also started updating me about every single girl he is talking to. Not even in the sense of him liking this girl and hitting on her, but just like normal talking. Every half an hour or so, I get a snap saying "I just talk to *name of a random girl*".
And in the politest way possible. I really could not care less. Why would I want to know what girls you are talking to?
I feel like he is trying to make me jealous, but I just really do not care.
I do not know how to tell him that I do not want anything from him, but I also do not want to lose my friend.
This really annoyed my, because why can't he just be friends with girls and why does he have to ruin everything?
April 13, 2025
My favorite thing about myself
What is my favorite thing about myself and why?
I believe that there are two types of people answering this question.
The first types starts of saying "Well, my favorite thing about myself are my eyes. They are pretty and shine in the sun in different colors." or they say "I like my smile." or "You know what? I have pretty teeth.". This type of person thinks about how they look and how they are perceived by the people around them. How they perceive themselves.
However, the second type of person does not think about their appearance. When they are asked this question, they think about what they like about their personality, about whatever charactertrait they like about themselves. Maybe they say "I am always nice to others and try to help them as much as I can!". Or they start of by saying "I am passionate about the things I do. That is what I like about myself!".
The way a person answers this seemingly easy question tells a lot about the person and about how they see themselves.
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April 13, 2025
The best thing about learning English
I believe that the best thing about learning English is the way it opens up new doors for you.
English is one of the most spoken languages in the world.
By learning and mastering English, one can communicate and connect with all kinds of people around the world.
This is not only helpful for making friends, but it can also help you to receive new job opportunities.
Language and communication are important, and learning English can help with that.
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Mein Traumhaus
Ich möchte meinen Traumhaus nicht so viele Leute in der Nähe sein. Er sollte nicht zu außerhalb von der Stadt liegen. Ich lieber einen schönen Ausblick. Vielleicht auf der ganzen Stadt. Es ist mir egal über Parkplatz, weil ich kein Auto habe. Ich mag meine Möbel häufig umräumen. Ich mache es, wenn die Jahreszeit wechseln. Ich denke, dass hellen Vorhänge wunderschön sind. Ich liebe sie mehr als dunklen Vorhänge. Abstellräume sind sehr nützlich, wenn mann viele Dinge hat. Natürlich die Miete sollte nicht zu hoch sein. Es ist einfaher, ob man einen netten Vermieter hat. Ich habe kein Problem mit Kaution bezahlen. Man muss den Mietvertrag sorgfältig lesen. Ob man Frage hat, dann muss man den Vermieter fragen.
April 13, 2025
Kids and Smartphones
Thanks to technological advancements, the world has become more connected than ever. In many ways, it’s amazing. But at the same time, we can’t ignore the downside—especially when it comes to children.
I've seen it way too often. Not just a few kids, but many of them, standing in elevators (and let’s be honest, adults too), mindlessly scrolling through short videos. No expression. No awareness. Just the thumb, swiping.
About a week ago, I saw a toddler—maybe three or four years old. Still too young to even read. Yet there they were, watching one short video after another. Their little finger was likely trained, instinctively swiping to queue up the next one. And I couldn’t help but wonder: how many times have they repeated that motion?
Instead of learning how to speak properly, or picking up basic manners, today’s kids are learning how to… scroll.
April 13, 2025
Sobre las dietas milagrosas hoy en día
Recientemente buscando alguna información en el internet es muy común encontrar las publicidades invitándonos a conocer un nuevo método de perder el peso y finalmente lograr su objetivo físico según las fotos en Instagram. Ahora cuando estamos sobre la presión baja de los redes sociales es fácil perderse en todas las informaciones que nos hacen creer que basta solo seguir una dieta milagrosa sin deber reducir las calorías y hacer el deporte regolarmente de intensidad moderada.
Según el estudio de Navarra, si elegimos la dieta equivocada y non personalizada a nuestras necesidades y cuerpo, es decir, que nos faltara algo esencial por el funcionamiento del cuerpo, la podría causar: los desequilibrados nutrientes, los transtornos alimentares, los alteraciones gastrointestinales y ,en caso de las dietas menos de 1500 kcal, la falta de micronutrientes suficientes.
Hay mucho mitos sobre el proceso de adelgazamiento: el pan y agua engordan, los productos integrales no engordan etc.
Es necesario mantener el enfoque multidimensional sobre el tema, porque es más complejo de lo que parece. Por eso, podemos clasificar los factores en tres categorías:
- dietético: el número de calorías consumido, elección de los productos
- psicológico: reducción de ansiedad, percepción de su cuerpo
- médico: analizar la causa de sobrepeso como los cambios hormonales, otras enfermedades
Por esta razón, se aconseja seguir la dieta personalizada que es non solo eficaz pero tambien mas facil de entender y mantener. Además, vale la pena considerar otros aspectos del estilo de vida como el sueño, el nivel del estrés cotidiano y el bienestar mental.
El chirurgia debería ser considerada como la última solución donde todos los tratamientos tradicionales no ha obtenido un buen resultado y también el empeoramiento del peso del paciente.
Se pone hincapié en la educación general sobre la alimentación, el planteamiento de la dieta y el conseguimiento de la vida saludable que tiene que ser personalizada a el estado actual de salud, la edad y el género.
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