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Taller de la gastronomía
Para: [email protected]
Asunto: Taller de la gastronomía colombiana para mayo de 2025
Estimado directores de la asociación de la comida internacional:
Me llamo José Arcadio Buendía y soy el chef ejecutivo de Bogotá para el restaurante “Pan Comido.” Me gradué de la Academia de Cordón Blu en París bajo la tutela de chef Michelle Paté con una especialidad en los postres. He sido un honor ser una parte de la asociación de la comida internacional. El mayo será un mes en honor de America latina y no hay un país con más riqueza gastronómica que Colombia.
Les solicito una propuesta para preparar la bandera paisa, un plato típico colombiano, a través de un taller digital. Además, crearía algunas actividades interactivas para las redes sociales para generar interés antes del taller. En TikTok e Instagram, me gustaría grabar un video de “una vida diaria de un chef” para inspirar la próxima generación de los cocineros mundialmente.
Les agradezco de antemano su atención. Estoy disponible para cualquier consulta que tengan. ¡Espero que podamos trabajar juntos para presentar las delicadezas colombianas con todos!
Saludos cordiales,
José Arcadio Buendía
April 15, 2025
Keep my streak
Anyone's life journey is varied. Sometimes, any problem that we consider trivial maybe it's a hard problem for others. This thing should be able to make us mindful that we cannot look down on people who try to overcome the problem. We don't know how much effort they have put into solving the problem. This thing too can be the reason we don't have to collapse, because when we really can't complete it by ourselves, there is a chance someone will help us to overcome it. I know that is only a probability; however, if we always try to conquer the problem, although we fail again and again, I believe help will come. Don't give up.
One example is what I am facing right now. At first, I didn't want to write anything because I feared that I would make a mistake, I am too much of a perfectionist, and in the end, I chose not to move one. Yet, I am trying to change my mind, for this moment, I am going to write as much as I can, although I know my first paragraph is still not structured by writing, the message that I want to tell is not connected to each other, the translation is not completely correct, but I have to focus on my purposes, they are not to make a great writing, but to consistent making writing and the English translation version, because the more I try, the better I will be, I believe this. If I try, there are two probabilities I will get, the first one is successful and the second one is failure, but if I don't try, there is only one probability, it's failure.
April 15, 2025
My Career
I suddenly realized that it has already been forty years since I started working. Knowing that, I am a little scared.
I was born and raised in a small village, in a farmer’s family. When I was fifteen years old, I was admitted to study in a specialized technical secondary school because of my good performance in the graduation exam, which meant I would be allocated a job by the government when I finished my studies in that secondary school.
My major was agricultural machinery management. After graduation, I was assigned a job in an agricultural machinery training center in a county, which was about 200 kilometers from my hometown.
I worked there for four years. In mid - April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and I worked in the same department as the first one.
I worked in that department for eight years. In the summer of 1997, I was transferred to a department in the same city, which was responsible for promoting new agricultural machinery.
I worked in this department for 19 years. In the summer of 2016, I was transferred back to my second department. I worked in this department for four years this time.
In June 2020, I was transferred to my current department, which focused on training farmers in my district.
When I started working, I was eighteen years old, but now, I am already fifty - eight years old. Time flies; I feel like it’s only a blink from eighteen to fifty - eight.
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
Was habe ich letztens gemacht?
Seit ein paar Tagen habe ich viel über meinen Tagesablauf nachgedacht und habe entschieden, dass ich zukünftig viel organisierter werde. Unter der Woche kann ich jeden Tag eine deutliche Routine aufrechterhalten. 90 Minuten zum Deutschlernen am Morgen und 60 Minuten am Abend. Erste sechzig Minuten schaue ich manche Videos auf Deutsch an. Dann schreibe ich einen Aufsatz und versuche, neue Wörter zu benutzen. Wenn ich am Abend lerne, erste halbe Stunde analysiere ich meine Fehler aus einem Aufsatz. Danach spreche ich mit Leute und versuche, meine mündlichen Fähigkeiten zu verbessern. Ich würde gerne mehr Zeit mit dem Deutschlernen verbringen, wenn ich mehr Freizeit hätte! Am Wochenende lerne ich 5 Stunden pro Tag.
Ab morgen werde ich mit meinem neuen Tagesablauf anfangen!
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
Review of the film "Arrival"
The movie "Arrival" is one topic my final exam will be about, which is why I will give you a quick overview over the film and its topic.
The film starts by showing the arrival of 12 unknown vessels. The vessels land all around the world, not showing any pattern or any logic in their locations.
The US military starts investigating a vessel that landed in Montana while the rest of the country starts going into lockdown.
They make the first contact with the aliens inside of the vessel and record an audio, which they bring to Luise, a professor who specializes in languages, to decipher.
Luise declines the job offer to decipher the message and is adamant that she needs to see and hear the aliens in person to be able to decipher their language.
And that is exactly what happens.
With the help of the physicist Ian, Luise starts to get in contact with the aliens and starts teaching them English to get a better understanding of why they're here.
This is a rather long process, since the vessel only opens up for 15 minutes every 2 hours.
Also, their supervisor pressures them into working faster.
This is because other countries like China do not share the same strategy as the USA and are preparing to go to war against the aliens.
Luise health seemingly declines, she gets visions of a child dyeing of cancer.
She starts building a bond not only with Ian but also with the aliens.
She starts to understand their language without the help of technology.
The aliens keep on talking about a tool they want to give Luise.
At the end of the movie Luise understands; it is not a tool they want to give her, their language is the tool they gift her.
Their language doesn't see time as something linear like we do , but rather as a complex matter.
With the help of the language, Luise has the ability to live the future (for whoever is correcting this: I actually mean live the future and not live in the future :) ) and she sees what she has to do to stop China from starting a war against the aliens.
After heroically stoping the war by phoning the Chinese general against her supervisors orders, the audience can see her visions becoming reality. She's in a relationship with Ian, even though it won't last, has a kid that dies of cancer, she starts teaching the language and gets internationally recognized.
Now to my personal review of the movie.
Overall, the movie is very dark, you constantly see your own reflection on your screen instead of the actual movie. Also, the plot is really confusing for first time watchers, it's not clear if the visions that Luise has are flashforwards or flashbacks. Also, 90% of the visions are not relevant for the movie.
Additionally, when reading through the description of the film, one expects much more out of it.
There is not much action going on, it's a film that basically just consists of dialogue.
I tried watching it multiple times in full (including in school) and fell asleep.
It is really boring and I wouldn't recommend it to anyone, even though it received an Oscar (nor sure about that though, but I think I read it somewhere).
Maybe I am biased because I need to watch it for school but nevertheless I think that it's just not a good movie plot.
April 15, 2025
Kennt ihr das Videospiel genannt "Harvest Moon"？
Mein Lieblingsvideospiel heißt "Harvest Moon", auf Japanisch "牧場物語".
Ich habe viel Zeit mit dem Videospiel verbringt, als ich ein Kind war.
Das Spiel hat auf dem Game Boy angefangen und es gibt so viele verschidene Versionen bis zur Nintendo Switch.
Mir gefällt die Version mit Nintendo 64.
Ich habe viele Spiele mit dem gespielt. Nintendo 64 ist so nostalgisch.
Ich habe kein Switch, aber meine Mutter hat es.
Sie spielt jeden Tag immer noch "Animal Crossing", auf Japainisch "どうぶつの森".
Heuzutage spiele ich gar keine Videospiele.
Ich habe meine Arbeit und ich muss Deustch feißig lernen. Ich habe keine Zeit für Videospiele.
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
diary 04/15
hello, friends now I am going talking about my family, my parents are from Maranhão and Espirito Santo, today we lives in Pará, in total we have 4 brothers, 2 sisters and 2 brothers, in my case I 'm the yonguest between mens, my brothers is a mecanic, my sisters is recepcionist, my older sisters is a street food vendor, I have many people in my family this is the true, but I also have family in Minas Gerais and my family is easygoing.
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
Vielen Dank für Ihre Einladung
Sehr geehrte Frau Schneider,
ihre Einladung nehme ich gerne an. Ich komme gerne mit meinen Kollegen ins Restaurant "Annalisa". Ich schlage vor, dass wir uns am 17. April um 19 Uhr treffen könnten? Sagen Sie mir bitte, ob Ihnen es passt. Dürfte ich den Weg zum Restaurant wissen? Könnten Sie mir bitte die Richtung schicken? Ich bedanke mich im Voraus für Ihre Antwort.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Ishika
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
El Japón y Colombia
Me gustaría visitar el Japón por qué estuve allí el verano pasado y fue exceptional.
Me encanta la cultura, los numerosos templos, los bonitos trajes tradicionales, la increíble comida, el respeto por el silencio (incluso en las grandes ciudades), el impecable servicio personal... Además, aunque la cultura es completamente diferente a la de Francia, me sentí muy bien allí como una turista.
Por otro lado, si hablamos de un país que no he visitado, me encantaría ir en Colombia. Hay una chica en las redes sociales que nació en Francia de padres colombianos y peruanos y viaja por toda América latina. Su experiencia en Colombia me dio ganas de visitar este país. La gente parecía muy acogedora y festiva. La cultura también es muy diferente de la francesa, lo que me atrae. Parece haber muchas tradiciónes y muchos aspectos diferentes en su cultura. Es un país que no conoce pero que quiero descubrir.
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
Languages I tried to learn
I tried to learn many languages.
Usually, I give up after a short time.
It's not that I loose interest in the language itself but rather that I don't have the motivation and time to keep up with learning it.
I have a hard time keeping myself motivated and engaged for a long time.
I hope that someday I will let go of this habit bit but for the time being it seems like something that will keep following me.
For instance, I learned French in school.
Even though I learned French for about 5 hours a week, I didn't really pick anything up. Today, I can barely introduce myself.
Another language I tried to learn was Italian. This also didn't really work out for the reasons listed.
Korean was or currently is a language I am trying to learn. I wouldn't exactly say I gave up on that, however I notice how I slowly lose my motivation. The reason I started learning Korean was because I will move there next year and will study there for 6 months before moving back. One might think that this should be motivation enough to learn the language but somehow I notice that I am starting to care less and less about learning the language.
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April 15, 2025
A day with me
Yesterday , was Monday , and how we are in Holy Week In Spain , everybody got out with both friends and family for watching the procession in the street.
I hung out with my friends to watch it . It was such a beutiful procession that i was crying for a long time , even my friends were crying too.
I can´t to understand the people that come away to abroad for Holy Week Holiday , since , in Spain , we have a amazing week for standing here .
In spite of I can understand that you don´t like the procession of your town , for this reason , I can apologize with you .
On the other hand , I can´t wait to be this noon , because , today there are procession too , and it´s going to continue the rest of the week .
It´s a pity that this week will go so fast , i don´t want to finish with this .
April 15, 2025
April 15, 2025
（小学生の掲示板向け）ポケットモンスターアニメキャラクター：ロイ
去年フリードが行方不明となり、ライジングボルテッカーズ団が解散した後、ロイとキャプテン・ピカチュウが冒険を続けて、ドットと一緒に残ってしまったラクリウムを探し始めました。ロイはカロス地方で新しい相棒の色違いルカリオもできた他に、新しいライバルのウルトも無理に連れてきています。ルシアスとの約束を守ってラクリウムをすべて消滅するために、ロイがリコとパゴゴに手伝ってもらいにセキエイ学園に行きました。残念なことに、スピネルはニュース番組で世界にうそをついて、ラクリウムの事件がライジングボルテッカーズ団のせいだと言っているので、ロイもリコも嫌われることがあるみたいです。
April 15, 2025
My Profile
Hi, I'm a 20-years-old Japanese university student, and I'm aiming to study abroad in Taxes, USA to learn the latest Engineering. However, I'm actually not good at English that I currently have only 90 score in duolingo test and 500 score in TOEFL itp. These tests' limited time is so hard for me, and especially in writing and speaking sections, I have low proficiency, making my entire score spoiled. I'll post a essay-style writing written on time pressure and a diary or a murmur sometimes. I hope I'll continue to doing this for a long time. Nice to meet you guys!
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