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Bonsoir!
Salut, tlm :) aujourd'hui, je suis très fatiguée! Ce matin, j'ai entendu que vendredi, je vais chaperonner le <<prom>> pour mes étudiants. Je vais chaperonner avec une amie, mais je me sens trop vieux pour prom mdr! Mais c'est requis pour tous les profs.
J'ai acheté une nouvelle robe noire ce soir pour le prom. C'était seulement $20, yay! Aussi, j'ai acheté beacoup des stylos colorés pour étudier. Maintenant, j'ai besoin de dormir, parce que dans le matin, je vais enseigner encore.
April 6, 2021
Lernen Deutsch
Hallo!
Ich heiße Bruno. Ich habe letzten Monat die Niveau B1 angefangen. Ich lerne gern Deutsch mit einem Kurs beim DeutschWelle (DW), der Name „Nicos Weg“ ist.
Ich lerne fast jeden Tag, weil ich immer mehr besser in Deutsch werden will.
Ich habe Deutsch am März 2020 angefangen, um alle Musiken von Bach ohne Übersetzung zu verstehen. Die Verbindung zwischen Musik und Text in Bachs Musik ist sehr stark. Er ist mein Lieblingskomponist. Ich bin Musiker und spiele gern Orgel und Cembalo! Ich mag auch Mozart sehr, und ein bisschen Beethoven.
Manchmal ist es zu kompliziert einer von ihnen mich zu entscheiden. So, wie ich liebe die Kultur von deutschsprachigen Ländern, entschied ich mich Deutsch zu lernen! Manchmal ich fühle mich jedoch nicht so gut, weil ich wieder in Fehler gehe. Es ist nicht einfach. Deutsch ist so anders, wenn man die mit Portugiesisch oder Englisch zum Beispiel vergleicht. Aber es ist auch ok und auch fasziniert mich. Wenn man eine neue Sprache lernt, muss er immer weitergehen.
April 6, 2021
Novelas románticas vs fanfiction
Hace tanto tiempo que no he leído ninguna novela romántica que haya olvidado esa formaba parte esencial de la adolescencia de mi generación. Cuando era joven, las novelas románticas eran siempre los libros más vendidos. Además, tanto en las bibliotecas públicas como en las bibliotecas de la escuela había estanterías dedicadas a este género, y para las obras más picantes estaban las tebeotecas. Como los tebeos, pasabamos las novelas románticas de una amiga a otra y las comentábamos casi todos los días.
No recuerdo cuando dejé de leer novelas románticas comerciales pero estoy segura de que me enamoré con fanfiction desde que empecé a leerlas en internet. Harry Potter abrió mis ojos respecto a la cantidad y la diversidad de fanfiction en línea. Me asombré también de la calidad de las obras, que, aun siendo gratuitas, son a veces superiores a las novelas comerciales. La despedida a las novelas románticas solo era una cosa de tiempo.
No había pensado ni un momento en las novelas románticas hasta que un día oí un podcast donde comentaban sobre la diferencias de las novelas comerciales y las fanfiction. Dio en el clavo cuando dijeron que los lectores que aman un argumento de una obra de fanfiction buscan directamente tras leerla otras obras con el mismo argumento, y las disfrutarán aunque solo cuenten con variaciones mínimas. Lo entiendo completamente porque me he encontrado en la misma situación muchas veces. La euforia que me ha dado una obra provoca un deseo, una sed, una ansiedad para más. El vacío que dejó es quizás parecido a las drogas, y no lo experimento con frecuencia con las novelas comerciales.
Tal vez la razón es que muchas fanfiction conectan sin rodeos con nuestras emociones, dado que los autores escriben fanfiction precisamente porque aman los personajes, y como los lectores aman los mismos personajes, las emociones que las obras generan se duplican en efectividad. Las novelas comerciales no gozan de esta ventaja y al mismo tiempo tienen que construir un mundo y unos personajes de nada. Asimismo, ser repetitivo es poco aceptable para un autor comercial pero no es un problema grande para un autor de fanfiction. Los lectores de fanfiction están más inclinados a aceptar la repetición porque ellos activamente buscan contenido que es una extensión de lo que aman.
April 6, 2021
私が一番好きなテレビ番組
実は、私はテレビをよく見る人いません。アメリカに住んでいた時、個族はテレビを一緒に見たとき私は絵をかきたりインタネットで友達とチャットしたりしました。家族と一緒に座っていましたが、テレビにあまり集中しませんでした。
今、韓国に住んでいます。そしていまでもテレビをよく見ません。夫は時々テレビを見ますが、然るべき一緒に見ます。普通ご飯を食べながらニュースを見ます。私がニュースが好きな理由は、手話通訳士がいますのです！去年9月から韓国手話を習うことを始めました。とっても面白い言語だと思います！ニュースを聞きながら手話通訳士を見るのなら世界の重要なニュースもわかるになるし、手話練習もできます！
April 6, 2021
Scanner
Trabalho em uma oficina. Às vezes tem que desligar o escâner e ligá-lo de novo. Não sei por que ele para de funcionar, mas não sei como prevê-lo. O escâner coringa ri na cara de seres mortais. Vale a pena aprender como funciona, a fim de consertar o escâner?
Eu desfruto do meu trabalho, mas não gosto daquele escâner.
April 6, 2021
Las dos torres
Mi película favorita es El Señor de los Anillos: Las Dos Torres porque tiene una banda sonora impresionante, me encanta imaginarme en ese mundo y el pueblo de Rohan es mi favorito de toda la Tierra Media.
Voy a usar Rohan como ejemplo para explicar por qué me gusta esta película tanto. Primero, su tema musical me cautiva por el sonido puro del violín y me transporte instantamente a su valle. Los ciudadanos me parecen humildes y en mi opinión Éomer es tan trabajador y desinteresado como Aragorn. Todo es más simple en Rohan y uno puede enfocarse en la vida y no la busca de la riqueza.
April 6, 2021
Frustated
I feel frustrated right now. What's the point of write here? I'll never be enough.
In Spanish there's a lot of ways to say the same, in English I can't do it. Why do I write here?
I must to learn basics first.
I'm angry, I'm disapointed. Can I just write one sentence fine? Can I do something fine?
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Fragile bottle
There was a little jar inside a house,
inside it was a little bell,
singing and ringing,
silently hearing eveything with her ears,
touching a little heart with her hand
loving in silence until the end.
Leave me alone!
she screamed a day,
closing her eyes
crying songs and poems.
Singing to the moon
she said "leave my heart alone,
I can't hold so much love,
leave me suffer alone,
I'm not enough,
I can't caught you
so please go away"
Dancing with the stars,
in circles she heard
whispers from the leaves,
and gossips that escaped from her eyes.
Little bell, jumping over stones
smiling alone,
flying to home.
"Where should I go?,
I don't have a bottle
to float over my tears,
maybe if I became a turtle
I can swim the seas"
Sang the little bell
trapped in a jar.
The stars above her head
with the blue sky of her eyes,
crossed a imaginary world
inside her cage.
There's no song about you
just a sad page inside this dark book,
I said to myself, once again.
Sadly in the hell
is living a little bell,
demons dance around her
screaming the pain
that she never said.
"Give me your heart"
a devil said
"I'll cure your wound
blessing your pain
with a sunny day,
I'll hug you,
I'll love you my darling"
She doesn't care
and doesn't want to choice
between a flying life
or die with hate.
Under this beautiful world
of demons and wolfs,
it's a sad hell
where a bell sings her last day,
she rings,
drinking it,
drinking all,
is the pain of the world
that she created long ago.
"What's is going on?
Calistea, my love,
leave me clean your little face"
"You don't need to cry,
there's no more shadows under your bed,
look what I made for you
under this piece of earth
is my heart
giving life to this little plant,
there is two shiny suns
shinig for you"
That warm hell
healed the cold paradise
from where she cames.
A disguised God
with an egoist wish
gave to her the life,
breaking her
from the foots to the head.
"This is a paradise
you can't go out,
you can't cry
sing for me,
silent please,
why do you cry?
I'm giving to you the best life"
He said punching the chest,
throwing a bottle to an inocent soul.
As a free slave
empty and bored,
she saw a sparkle
that burned for a moment
all the world
and gave to her a dream.
"I want to be free,
I'll fly to the sun
burned I'll fall to the sea.
Swimming I'll touch the earth,
living in the hell, living in the hell"
Sang a little bell, crossing the earth,
smiling and ringing
with her loved love.
Every sad tear is now a sunny day,
a sunny shiny plant with two suns
lighting the hell, lighting the earth,
healing her sky, healing the pain.
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So, whatever, I want to sleep.
April 6, 2021
일기 #1
솔직히, 오늘은 저는 좀 지쳤다고 힘이 없는 걸 느끼기 때문에 벌써 생산적인 없어요. 어젯밤에는 저는 잠을 자지 않는 걸 모르겠는데 오늘 아침 동안 너무 피곤했어요. 그렇지만 저는 아침을 편하게 지냈어요.
저는 드디어 철학에 관한 책 한 권은 끝 읽었어요. 이 책의 작가 로마 철학자 세네카이에요. 그리고 인생의 의미와 좋게 사는 방법 대해 책이에요. 책을 읽는 후 저는 생각이 많이 있어요.
가족하고 점심을 먹는 후, 저는 영어문학 숙제를 해봤지만 집중을 못했어요. 그런데 이 힘들던 일이 시작해서 자랑스러워요.
저는 “어린이동아” 웹사이트에서 한국어로 블랙홀에 관한 기사를 읽으면 새로운 단어를 배웠어요. 저는 기사의 대부분 내용을 이해해서 행복해요.
내일은 더 좋은 날 되기 믿어요!
April 6, 2021
छठा दिन: आजकल मुझे सिर्फ़ एक अच्छा नौकरी चाहिए
मैं छात्र हूँ । मेरी पढ़ाई करने के अलावा मैं काम नहीं करती हूँ । आमतौर पर मैं इस के बारे में नहीं बोलती हूँ । मुझे लगता है कि कभी-कभी कोई लोग इसके लिए मुझसे ईर्ष्या करते हैं । लोग सोचते हैं कि मैं अमीर हुई होगी इसलिए मैं काम करना नहीं चाहती हूँ । यह ऐसा नहीं है । असल में में बहुत नौकरी करना चाहती हूँ । मुझे नहीं चाहिए कि मैं हमेशा अपने माता-पिता के पैसे खर्च करते रहेंगे । काश कि मैं जल्दी ही अपनी यूनिवर्सिटी की पढ़ाई के साथ खतम करती होगी ।
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April 6, 2021
April 6, 2021
Day 5: Favorite TV show
I have a lot of favorite TV Shows, when I was younger I spent a lot of time watching series on my computer, I really liked Gossip Girl, Vampire Diaries, The Originals, and Pretty Little Liars.
I also like to watch Grey's Anatomy, I always cry with that TV show, I still cry when I remember the death of my two favorite character, they were in a plane accident and their dead were really horrible.
They were a couple, and they were angry with each other’s, but when the time of the dead came, they forgave their selves, it was very, very sad.
I can’t believe they had died like that, they didn’t deserve it. But well, writers do whatever they like most.
Is annoying.
Mark and Lexie deserve better, and I’m sure that everyone who had seen the series agrees with me.
April 6, 2021
Review 2132
The country are much more rigid about immigrants, by strictly dividing them into 2 categories: legal and illegal, a division that has somehow undermined the immigration system. Many talented people prefer immigration to pursuing their calling, which will contribute to the prosperity of immigrant countries. That is why managing immigration today requires multiple paths and multiple outcomes.
April 6, 2021
Travelling abroad helps to understand your own country
Training essay
Nowadays many people travel all over the world. Many of them say that travelling helps them to understand their own country better. At that time others people believe that understanding of your own country doesn`t require travelling abroad; on the contrary, it may impede to person love and appreciate his own country.
In my opinion, comprising of two things always helps to understand better every of them. So, if a person go abroad, firstly he can see differencies between his own country and another country. For example, something the person took for granted in his own country may be absent in another country, and this fact may provoke thinking about reasons in history and culture of his homeland. Second, talking about foreing culture with habitants of foreing country may make one ponder what he could tell about his one.
At the same time some people believe that a person can learn more about his own country without traveling abroad. On the contrary, travelling will distract him from the motherland. Because one must visit all regions of his country before he going somewhere else.
I am not agree with this opinion for particular reason: nobody can learn something quite deeply without comparison with different versions.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is impossible to enrich one's knowing about his country without traveling abroad. It is the most effective way to get that knowledge.
April 5, 2021
Review 2131
Being average just won't earn employers what they used to. New technology has been eating jobs forever, and always will. In a world where average is over, there are many things we need to do to support employment, but nothing would be more important than passing some policies that ensures everyone has access to post-high school education.
April 5, 2021
April 5, 2021
Coses per mirar
La pandèmia de la Covid-19 ha sigut una bona occasió per descobrir coses per mirar en la televisió. Des del començament de la quaratena, he anat probant noves sèries que els amics m’han recomenat. La sèrie que he gaudit més és Gran hotel, una història en castellà de tres temporades que té lloc al nord d’Espanya al 1905. Es tracta d’un pagès que ve a un hotel de luxe per buscar la seva germana, qui ha desaparegut. Acaba fent-se “cambrer” per tenir una raó per quedar-se a l’hotel. La família rica que opera l’hotel té els seus propis secrets que posen en joc l’herència de l’hotel… Aquesta sèria m’ha ajudat molt a fer creixer el vocabulari i la gramàtica en castellà.
En general, no solc mirar pel·licules. Per a mi és difícil reconèixer cares noves, i quan consegueixo tenir en compte qui és qui, la pel·licula ja s’ha acabat. Prefereixo les sèries perquè amb vàries temporades tinc temps per aprendre les cares i els noms dels personatges. Però si hagués d’escollir una pel·licula preferida, diria Ferris Bueller’s Day Off. És una comèdia amb un estudiant de secondària a Chicago que fingeix estar malalt per no anar a l’escola, i passa el dia amb la seva xicota i el seu amic fent (líos) per tota la ciutat. Però el director de l’escola no creu res i intenta agafar-los les mans en la massa.
April 5, 2021
2021-04 Challenge Day 05
Em inglês, temos uma expressão que significa um jeito para defraudar outra pessoa. Mas tem vários equivalentes em português: “Ele me limpou as contas”, “Ele me deixou sem um tostão”, mesmo “Ele cobrou couro e cabelo”. São criativas! Imagine o sentimento quando percebe que alguém fez isso com você (lembra-se do Bernie Madoff). Um senhor perdeu $13 milhões de dólares por causa dele.
April 5, 2021
Rhycce - Challenge Day 5 - Cual es tu pelicula favorita
Mi película favorita es la trilogía de ¨Lord of the Rings¨. Es sobre un grupo de amigos que tiene que viajar por vastas tierras, montañas, cuevas y bosques para destruir un anillo. El anillo fabricó en secreto y contiene gran mal. Si llega a su maestra, muerte y destrucción caerían en el mundo. Así que los amigos tienen que ser valiente y viajar lejos al lugar donde lo fabricó para destruirlo. Por el camino, ellos conocen a unos amigos nuevos y se enfrentan muchos enemigos y desafíos.
Algunos de ellos mueren, sus amistades están probados y rotos. Pero finalmente, ellos trabajan junto en caminos diferentes para destruir el anillo y salvar el mundo.
Me gusta esta pelicula porque me enseña que está bien no estar de acuerdo con tus amigos. Lo que importa es superar esos desafíos y seguir adelante.
April 5, 2021
Day 4: Favorite Food
I don’t know if I had an actually favorite food because I like some many types of food that I can’t even count them.
I like mostly Italian food, I guess, I like pizza, pasta, and lasagna, my favorite one could be Lasagna, is so good that I will never get tired of it.
What I don’t like? Well, this list is also very long.
I don’t like pig or Chinese food, I don’t like sushi or liver, neither I like Paella or seafood, I’m bad mouth with seafood.
My favorite recipe, it will be lasagna, if I had to choose one but I’m not good at kitchen so I don’t know how to make it. We have to prepare the meat, and the salsa, to buy cheese and ham, is a little bit complicated for me.
April 5, 2021
April 5, 2021
Los libros
Aunque la escritura ha existido durante miles de años, los libros son muchos más recientes. ¡Incluso los griegos antiguos no los usaron! Solo se inventaron durante el imperio romano, donde empezaron a extenderse. Este proceso fue ayudado por las ventajas que libros tienen sobre rollos. Se ven especialmente en los libros con tapas duras, como es más difícil dañarlos. Además, los libros usan menos espacio que los rollos, lo cual los hace más económicos.
Sin embargo, los primeros libros eran muy diferentes de los de hoy. ¡De hecho, el papel actual no se usaba durante mucho tiempo! En lugar de eso, se usaba pergamino. Y porque no había manera de impresión, todos de ellos se tenían que escribir a mano. Se solía hacer por los monjes, así que los monetarios eran las bibliotecas de antigüedad, especialmente durante la edad media. Puesto que eran tan difíciles crear, los libros se valían muchísimo. ¡Incluso eran conectados a cadenas para protegerlos!
Dos oraciones con "cuando + el imperfecto de subjuntivo".
1. ¡La leería cuando me la dieras!
2. Se acabaría cuando lo dejaras de jugar.
April 5, 2021
My family
In my family we are a lot of people, my family is very big, I have a lot of cousin from my mom's family. In my first family we are six people, my mother, my father, my two brothers, my sister and I.
So I have three brothers, two older than me and one younger, the younger hast sixteen years old and the older hast twenty-nine, we live in a house in a centric zone, we have managed to have a great relationship between all of us, despites our differences and our character.
My family is very important to me, I really care for them, specially my mom, she has sixty years old, and my father has sixtytwo and because all this Covid things, we take more prevention when we go outside because they can get sick and be in a bad situation.
We also have a dog and a cat, whose we rescued, they both have a good relationship also.
We rescued the cat a year before, she was in the street, very little and with hungry and thirsty, now she is very beautiful and lovely.
With the Dog, we rescued him two months ago, he is still little, he has like four months of being born, the doctor said, he was so skinny, but now he seems very happy in the house.
So, in total, we are eight at house, counting our animals.
April 5, 2021
Série/filme favorito (30 Day Language Challenge, Day 5)
Primeiro queria dizer que eu realmente tenho dificuldades com estes superlativos: comida/série favorita, livro favorito etc. Para mim depende muito do momento em que eu tenho de escolher para poder dizer qual é minha coisa preferida... Então acho que eu simplesmente vou mencionar alguns filmes/séries que assisto com frequência.
Para mim assistir a filmes/séries é uma forma de relaxamento e normalmente preciso de algo simples e não muito complicado. Gosto de filmes de ação, comedias e às vezes também musicais ou dramas.
Adoro alguns filmes com Bruce Willis como por exemplo os séries “Die Hard” e “RED”. Também gosto dos filmes de ação “Bond” e “Mission Impossible.” Uma comedia que tenho assistido frequentemente é “Love, Simon” porque na época pude identificar muito com o personagem principal e sempre terá um lugar especial no meu coração por as muitas memórias feitas em conexão a este filme. Outros filmes preferidos da minha família e de mim são os filmes "Ice Age". Quando estão no televisor, toda família está assistindo e temos muitas piadas internas que tem de ver com todas as personagens e comentários nestes filmes.
Entre minhas séries de comédia preferidas estão "How I Met Your Mother", “One Day at a Time”, “Modern Family”, “Love, Victor” e “The Bold Type”. Além disso gosto dos séries mais dramáticas como “Good Trouble”, “Party of Five”, “Tales of the City” e “The L-Word Generation Q”. Recentemente eu também assisti a uma série chamada “It’s a Sin”. Esta série passa nos anos 80 em Inglaterra e é sobre a vida de um grupo de pessoas LGBT+ e como experimentam o surgimento e a crise em torno do VIH/aids. Foi bem legal saber mais sobre esta época e chorei algumas vezes porque é um pouco triste.
Especialmente por ter estudado ciências políticas eu às vezes assisto a séries que falam sobre a política de modo fictício. Alguns exemplos incluem “Madam Secretary” e “Designated Survivor”. Tentei assistir a “Narcos” e a “Ingobernable” porque quise consumir conteúdo em espanhol/da América Latina mas foi real demais e tinha as imagens na minha cabeça o tempo tudo (em livros suporto violência, abuso, etc. mas não nos filmes).
Por último três séries mais vêm à mente, e que não posso por em outras categorias, são “Queer Eye”, “Game of Thrones” (a parte da última temporada) e “Killing Eve”.
April 5, 2021
How yo doin'?
If I said: "So no one told you life was gonna be this way", would you already know what TV show I mean? I think so, because we're talking about one of the most famous and greatest shows in television history. The one and only "Friends".
In case that you are from another planet, I will talk about the plot. "Friends" follow the adventures of six New Yorkers who live in big apartments, don't seem to work too much, and spend a lot of time hanging around at a coffee shop called "Central Perk". I remember thinking that life would be that way when I grew up, but it didn't turn up exactly this way. However, I still adore watching this old TV show; maybe it's because each character has a strong distinctive personality that makes them special. When you see a couple of episodes, you get to know them and you can predict their behavior. It's funny to see! Besides, friendship is one of the most important things in life and I like TV shows that highlight that.
I love all the characters, but probably Rachel, Phoebe, and Monica are the ones I enjoy the most.
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