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Gerônimo
Gerônimo foi um importante líder Apache. Nunca foi chefe, mas é bem conhecido por sua habilidade militar. Quando sua família morreu num attaque em Sonora, Gerônimo tornou-se guerreiro. Foi capturado pelos exércitos dos Estados Unidos e México três vezes, mas ele escapou. Anos depois, foi preso como prisoneiro de guerra.
Gerônimo ainda é reconhecido nos Estados Unidos por sua coragem. Quando paratropas saltam do avião, dizem "Gerônimo!"
March 20, 2021
Demand for Data Scientists
There is a large demand for data scientists and students who have majored machine learning at universities. Regardless of the kind of industries, Japan's companies want to obtain artificial intelligence (AI) technologies. However, I guess that most employers aren't sure what AI is all about and how the technologies create profitable outcomes. They have to figure out them before the companies invest on recruiting data scientists.
If you intend to predict future trends of the market accurately or derive personal preferences from order histories, enormous amount of data is required. Though some companies assume that AI robots automatically collect and organize the data by itself, the company should have accumulated large amount of data for long time. Apart from the case of big companies, the quantity and the quality of the data which companies possess is insufficient.
I infer that some problems facing the companies can be solved by conventional statistical methods. Especially, physical phenomena such as chemical reactions and manufacture error rates should be adapted by statistical methods because machine learning models are prone to make it's process black box. In addition, it deserves to be known that some of machine learning models are developed by conventional statistical methods.
March 20, 2021
le dernier voyage au Japon: la préparation et le première jo
L'année dernière, j'ai eu le chance de faire un voyage seule. À cause de l'instabilié sociale à ce moment-là, l'école a été suspendu. Alors, j'avais deux mois de vacances. Et le billet d’avion et le frais de logement étaient bon marché au debut de décembre car c’était la basse saison. Avec tout ça, c’était un bon moment pour partir en vacances!
C’était la premiere fois que j'ai parti seule à l’étranger. C’était très excitante ! J'avais fait beaucoup de recherches sur le route de bus, les destinations touristiques, les cuisines renommées et etc. J'avais même préparé l'itinéraire pour le beau temps et le mauvais temps car j'avais lu
qu'il y avait de chance de pluie. Je sais que je dois faire tous les préparations pour bien commencer le voyage. Personne peut me guider, sauf mon portable :p
J'ai seulement prévenu ma mère cette decision une semaine d'avant. (Attention ! Je n'ai pas demandé de sa permission !) Même elle n'était pas contente, et elle était très inquiète, j'ai déjà décidé de le faire ! (Ah, je l'ai dit à ma meilleure prof, elle croyait en moi :)
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Le grand jour était arrivé. Je me suis levée tôt parce que l'avion serait partir à 7h du matin. Ma mère m'a accompangé à l'arrêt de bus, et puis, j'étais tout seule. C'était très bien de regarder le réveil du soleil lors que l'avion a été décollé ! Bon voyage !
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Quand j'ai arrivé, il pleuvait. Le système de bus locale est un peu compliqué et le moyen de paiement est different de ce qu'on a au Hong Kong. Heureusement, j'avais fait de recherche et avec l'aide de carte, j'ai arrivé à la chambre d’hôtes sans grand problème Le moment que j'étais sur le bus, je m'ai dit, « Enfin, je suis là. Je suis dans la scene de Doreramon. (Un dessin animé très célèbre qui vient du Japon.) »
L’enregistrement n'a pas très bien passé parce que on avait de difficulté sur Léa communication : je parlais pas Japonais et l'hôtesse ne parlait pas bien anglais. Mais, au final avec l'aide de « google translate», je me suis installée.
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La pluie n’arrêtait pas. Mais je sais que mon temps était limité, alors j'ai quand même sorti et exploré les endroits au ville à pied. J'aime bien me promener. C'est juste qu'il pleuvait vraiment fort et je dois trouver un café pour rester et lire le livre que j'apporté.
La nuit fut sombre et pluvieuse. Les toilettes, le lit de l’hôte ne sont pas si confortables compare aux miens. C’était le première moment que ma chambre m'a manqué. Juste un peu. Après, j'ai réfléchi mes expenses de la journée et écrit qu'est-ce que ce passait dans mon journel. Et j'ai même discuté un peu avec une fille japonaise qui aussi partait seule en vacances !
Jusqu'à demain !
March 19, 2021
Los idiomas tonales
Por todo el mundo, hay lugares donde se hablan lenguas tonales. Para muchos de Estados Unidos o Europa, nos pone miedo la idea de tener que aprender todos los tonos distintos. Sin embargo, incluso en los idiomas indoeuropeos hay elementos tonales. Si has intentado aprender sueco o griego antiguo, es probable que los hayas experimentado antes. Aunque es discutible si son lenguas tonales de verdad o no, los elementos se acentúan mucho.
Además, los idiomas tonales son relativamente comunes. Alrededor de una mitad de los que se hablan en este mundo, o alrededor de 2500 idiomas, son tonales. Así que en realidad no hay nada de temer. Muchas personas los hablan cada día, sin problemas. ¡El chino mandarín, el idioma más hablado del mundo, es tonal! Al fin y al cabo, lo único que nos aplaza es nuestros miedos. Pero, como nos ha mostrado, son tontos, porque cualquier persona que quiere aprender un idioma tonal lo puede.
Dos oraciones con "de + infinitivo".
1. De decirme, habrías podido evitarlo.
2. De abandonarse, quizá se rompa la maldición.
March 19, 2021
Reflesh
I watched the movie on the Netflix last night. My favorite actor “Ryuhei Matsuda” was on that film. It was really interesting story and I enjoyed it a lot. Usually there are tons of things to do after I come home. Cooking, finishing up dishes, doing laundry, playing with my daughter and so on. My husband and my daughter were at my mother in law’s house. Spending time alone makes me reflesh but also notice how much I need my family.
March 19, 2021
Juni
Min mamma berättade för mig att hon kommer att komma till Sverige i juni. Hon saknar mig mycket, ibland för mycket enligt mig... Den sista gången såg vi varandra var i december 2019. Inte ens två år. Jag älskar min mor men jag är inte säker att jag tycker om henne som en person, om du förstår? Hon är lite manipulativ mot mig och gillar inte att jag är vegansk och feminism. Hon gillar min partner men gillar inte att han är också vegansk, och hon skulle föredra om min partner inte var vegansk. Hon säger att vi stänger oss själv i ett veganskt fängelse... Om det är logiskt??
Jag är glad över att sig henne igen snart men jag är REDAN stressad över alla våra bråkar. Jag vet inte än hur många dagar hon ska stanna, hon bara sa om den just två timmar sedan. Vi ska se.
March 19, 2021
March 19, 2021
Short mystery story
Hello, so I wrote a short mystery story which was basically for school, but I finally didn't use it, so I would like that someone read and correct it. I know it's very long, and it can be a bit boring as I was pretty restricted for the storyline but please, if you have a bit of time, I would be extremely grateful if you could read and correct this. If you don't want to correct this as it's too long, then I would appreciate simple feedback of the story or any writing advices. Also, could anyone approximately guess my English level with this text ? I know it's hard to guess a language level just with one simple text so if you can't, don't worry, but it would help me a lot. I just think I have more than A1 level.
I know I'm asking for a lot of things and I kind of feel bad for that, but I'm really motivated to learn English, so even the smallest help would be appreciated.
Thank you in advance for your time and consideration :)
‘-You’re Sadie, Jack’s best friend, right ?’ asked the detective.
‘-Yes I am.’ answered Sadie.
‘-Perfect. So, I briefly heard about what happened last night. Would you mind explaining the story in detail ?
-Sure. Yesterday, Luke and I were invited to Jack’s house. Luke is a best friend of Jack. It was a bit awkward as I had never seen him before. But we talked and he seemed nice.
Jack is very rich, maybe you have already seen his house, it’s just huge. Besides, he has one cook and two servants just for himself. So, Jack, Luke and I were talking in the kitchen while eating dinner. It was probably around 10:30 in the evening. Suddenly, Jack said he wanted to go outside to smoke. I was surprised because the weather outside was awful. It was raining and storming. From the inside of the house, we could hear the loud noise of the lapping rain hitting the ground, and we could see big scary but impressive flashes appearing in the sky through the window.
Therefore, I was left alone with Luke. We started talking, and he told me he had met Jack just recently. I said at my turn that Jack was a friend from my childhood but that he was becoming a bit weird these times. Luke replied that there was nothing to worry about. I frowned, because I am supposed to know him better, but I decided to not worry that much about it.
After 30 minutes, I started to get worried as Jack hadn’t returned yet. When I asked Luke what we should do, he said ‘Stay here. I’ll go look for him.’ I didn’t want to stay alone but as Luke insisted, I finally let him go. I waited, for more than 30 minutes. I started to become really anxious about them. What if something very bad had happened ? I decided to go out of the kitchen and go outside to search for them. After walking just a few steps, I noticed that there were blood marks on the ground. I immediately panicked and went back to the house. I opened the door leading to the common room, and then I saw… a body. Slowly, I got closer to the body and realized that my best friend Jack was actually laying on the floor, covered with blood. I screamed. But no one came; it seemed that everyone had suddenly disappeared. I continued to scream louder and louder, in vain. I was sobbing more than ever. It took me some time to realize it was meaningless. I then decided to call the police. And they came and stayed about an hour. I asked them how their research was doing, and they just answered me that they had found meds in his bedroom. But they still haven’t found the murderer. That’s why I decided to reach you.
-Well thank you, that was an interesting case.
-What do you mean by “that was” ?
-Oh, I just found the murderer.’ He said calmly.
‘-Really ?
-Isn’t it obvious ? Luke killed your best friend.
-But that’s not…
-Well, finding murderers is my job. So, who should we trust ?’
Sadie didn’t know what to answer.
March 19, 2021
Never give up
Hi guys, today I'd like to say how the situation is in Ecuador with the weather. Currently it's raining a lot. People with low resources have a lot of inconveniences because the water is entering the houses. At the same time, it is most difficult to work. That's a pity. I almost forgot that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruption which caused the sky to be black in the morning. I'm fine, but always I remember these news. I know that are difficult days, but we never gave up.
March 19, 2021
Leben und Wetter
Ich habe schon seit zwei Jahren in Deutschland gelebt und ehrlich gesagt, habe ich diese Zeit kaum gefühlt.
Das liegt wohl daran, dass wir mehr als ein Jahr mit dem Coronavirus in unserem Alltag gelebt haben, deswegen fühlt sich die Zeit gleichzeitig langsam und schnell an.
Ich kann es kaum glauben, dass März fast vorbei ist. Das Wetter scheint jeden Tag, wegen der niedrigen Temperaturen, Winter zu sein.
March 19, 2021
Kardioide
Ich hatte heute einen komischen Traum. Ich erinnere mich nicht viel, aber wenn ich es beschreiben würde, würde ich sagen, dass ich fast auf einem Bild von Escher war, voll mit geometrische Objekten. Eines dieser Objekte war etwas ähnlich wie eine Kardioide und ich konnte eine Stimme hören, die etwas zu mir beschrieb. Die Kardioide ist eigentlich eine sehr interessante mathematische Kurve, sie wird durch die Flugbahn eines Punktes in einem Kreis gebildet, der entlang eines anderen Kreises rollt. Einige coole Eigenschaften von ihr sind zum Beispiel, dass sie ihre eigene Evolvente ist und auch die Kaustik eines Kreises. Diese letzte Eigenschaft heißt, dass wenn deine Kaffeetasse in Bezug auf das Licht etwas geneigt ist, können die reflektierten Lichtstrahlen eine Kardioide schaffen, eine herzförmige Muster, die du vielleicht schon einmal bemerkt hast. Menschen, die Fraktale mögen, werden auch wahrscheinlich schon wissen, dass die Kardioide auch im berüchtigten Mandelbrot-Set erscheint.
March 19, 2021
Frühling Reinigung
Ich bin heute meine ganze Wohnung gründlich aufgeräumt und gereinigt. Na, die Boden habe ich noch nicht gewaschen, aber ich habe noch eine freie Woche, das zu erledigen. Heute habe ich auch rund eine Stunde Klavier geübt. Das hat natürlich viel Spaß gemacht. Schritt für Schritt lerne ich, wie man das Musikinstrument spielt. Aber ich weiß, dass bald ich nichts mehr haben werde, an zu konzentrieren oder zu erledigen. Was dann, wenn alle die Hausaufgaben schon getan sind? Mal sehen...
March 19, 2021
ไดอารี่ของเด็กไม่เอาถ่าน [หน้า 75]
[1] เราลืมพ่อซ่อนอยู่ในพืชไปเลย แล้วก็พวกเราต้องจ่ายราคาสูง
[2] (พ่อ) อุ๊ย ฮาๆ
[3] พอเรากับราวลี่เข้าไปในบ้าน พวกเราก็วางขนมทั้งหมดของเราบนโต๊ะห้องครัว
[4] สิ่งเท่านั้นที่ไม่ได้เสียจากน้ำก็คือ มินท์ที่ถูกห่อในพลาสติก และที่แปรงฟันที่ หมอฟันการิซอน ให้พวกเรา
[5] เราว่าวันฮาโลวีนหน้าจะอยู่บ้านแล้วก็แอบเอา บัทเทอร์ฟิงเกอร์ บ้างจากชามขนมที่แม่เก็บไว้บนตู้เย็น
March 19, 2021
March 19, 2021
Samuel
Samuel es mi amigo. El vive en Madrid. Es abogado y trabaja en una oficina. No le gusta el trabajo, pues tiene que despertar muy temprano para llegar allá. Todos los días el sale de su casa a las ocho. No va en coche, pues las calles ya están llenas. Entonces el va en bici, con su ropa de ciclista. Cuando llega a casa a las diez en la noche, está agotado de energía y no tiene más fuerza.
March 19, 2021
Why are so many people angry on social media? (pt. 5)
The third reason is that social media algorithms are also encouraging the spread of toxic content. Now, traffic is the target of almost all social platforms, which is the main way to bring profits. It leads their algorithms particularly favor those content that can bring traffic. More and more platforms prefer to rank posts by algorithm rather than in chronological order.
The algorithm choose the most forwarding and like content for more people to see. As mentioned above, emotional and angry content has been forwarded more often. Now with the blessing of the algorithm, more people will see these. And the content that can't stimulate people's emotional response, the algorithm will not like it, and fewer people will see it.
So, the product design of social media itself is stimulating us to publish more angry and toxic content, and then helping to spread it. To put it bluntly, it's a machine that makes and spreads anger.
March 19, 2021
2000
In Japan, there are four types of paper money. They are 1000, 2000, 5000, and 10000 yen. However, 2000 yen is rarely used because the trading volume is so small that you can't use it for vending machines or ATMs. On the contrary, someone was suspected that he tried to use counterfeit money when he used 2000 yen at checkout. I think it's more convenient to make 4000 and 7000 yen instead of 2000 and 5000.
March 19, 2021
Besuchen das Rathaus
Wir haben heute das Rathaus besucht, um ein bürokratisches Problem zu lösen. Der Beamter war sehr nett und erfahren. Ich hatte vor dem Meeting Angst, weil meine Sprachkenntnis nicht die besten ist. Aber ich hätte Angst nicht haben sollen. Alles ging so schnell. Auch in Ungarn, wenn ich etwas erledigen musste, war ich ein bisschen aufgeregt. Dort geht es langsamer, ein Problem erledigt zu werden. Man bekommt einen Brief vom Finanzamt zum Beispiel, 5 Seite lang, und es ist wie ein Rätsel, weil sie eine komplizierte, bürokratische Sprache nutzen.
Ich hoffe dass ich bald auf Deutsch telefonieren kann. Ich bevorzuge per Email kommunizieren, man kann seine Aussage durchdenken. Ich höre viele deutsche Podcasts, sie entwickeln mein Gehör. Doch lebe ich in Bayern und verstehe manchmal nichts was man sagt. Aber Übung macht den Meister.
March 19, 2021
Question
“When I went for the police, five people, four of them accepted, I was the only guy they didn’t”
This paragraph was picked from a speech of Jack Ma. I think there may be something wrong with this sentence, but I am not sure. At least, I think “four of them accepted” is wrong, shouldn’t it be “four of them were accepted”? Shouldn’t this sentence be in passive voice? And the first sentence “I went for the police” is a bit off. Shouldn’t it be “I went to the police station to apply for a policeman”? Because my English is limited, I asked for your help.
March 19, 2021
자기소개 + 제 취미
안녕하세요! 제 이름은 Winter이에요. 저는 17살고 고등학교에 공부하고 있어요.
이젠 저는 한국어과 스페인어를 배워요. 왜냐면 저는 이 언어들도 너무 아름다운 것 같아요 그리고 언어학이 아주 매혹적인 과목 생각해요. 이건 저는 대학에 언어학을 시도하고 싶은 이유예요. 저는 아직도 한국어과 스페인어로 잘 못말하지만 이 언어들을 공부할 때 너무 행복해요.
저는 취미를 많이 있어요. 예를들면 저는 책을 읽기 너무 사랑해요. 영어문학은 제 가장 좋아하는 과목. 책을 읽면 우리는 세상의 모두 장소에 여행할 수있어요 그리고 상상의 세계를 꿈꿔요. 읽으로 역사를 알 수 있어고 많은 정부를 알아요.
March 19, 2021