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April 27, 2021
关于Langcorrect
我觉得这个网站是一个非常不错的网站。除了让学外语的人写故事和文章，在这里读者也可以发现其他人的句子和帮助别人。
你在LangCorrect也可以跟别人聊聊天儿。你有这个机会因为“Messenger”。一个其他的优点是这个网站有许多人。我之前写了故事在Journaly，但是在那里帮别人的人真少。因为学习中文时有点儿奇怪，所以这个问题更大。
LangCorrect的样子也不错。什么颜色都好看——吸引眼睛。图片也有意思。
不幸地，这些星期我几乎每个天需要做考试，所以我写得越来越少。但是，星期四后来我没有考试啊！然后，我能更用LangCorrect，这会让我更开心——我再说，LangCorrect真的不错。
April 27, 2021
Ещё один вопрос о музыке
У вас есть песня, которая заставляют вас чувствовать эмоции?
Первая, что пришло в голову – это песня "Аллилуйя". Первоначальная версия была написана исполнителям Leonard Cohen, но я предпочитаю кавер, который выпустил музыкант Rufus Wainwright. Я слушала эту песню во время очень тяжёлого момента из своей жизни, поэтому песня по-прежнему ассоциируется с этим моментом для меня.
Если подумать, я пела много печальных песен в детстве. Эти классики американская детской музыки часто касаются очень серьёзных и взрослых тем, включая смерть, эпидемий и т. д. Например, я давно выучила песню "Oh My Darling Clementine", где музыкант поёт о том, что дочь шахтёра умерла во время золотой лихорадки в Калифорнии. Зачем мы поём такие мучительные песни с маленькими детьми?
April 27, 2021
Korossol into the Ring 28
I don't think I'll ever learn Arabic. I wish I would because it has a beautiful script. Also, I heard that arabian poetry is wonderful. But it seems so terribly complicated! And I'm not sure I can work with a language tant isn't roman. The fluidity of the script fascinate me. It scare me also. What I'm trying to say is that, with roman languages, I can alway guess, at lest a little, what it is about. Our words have commen roots. With Arabic, Greek, Russian and many asian languages, I can recognize anything. I used to want to learn Japanese - as most of my generation - but... kanji! katakana! I don't understand it at all!
I have to say that foreign language teaching is - as much as I could see - very bad in France. We quit high school with years of English, Spanish, German and Latin behind us. Most of us can't speak any of these languages or understand them. Saying "Oh, nowadays, you have to know English to work" is not helping anyone learning it. I don't understand why the Ministry of National ducation doesn't change things. because it's clear htht the system isn't working. We're wasting time - years off our lives - and money on something that never worked.
That is actually why so many people use confinment for learning a foreign language; it's because school failed to teach them.
It's also why distant education is so appreciated. Sometimes, their teachers are really good.
April 27, 2021
April 27, 2021
Movie: Sound Of Metal
Today I watched another Oscar-winning film, Sound Of Metal. I think the title is a pun, one referring to the fact that the lead character was originally a drummer in a metal band. The other is the sound of metal after the cochlear implant. Of course, there is also the possibility of suggesting the inner cacophony of the lead's voice. The cochlear implant will destroy the residual hearing, and the latest equipment can only reach the level of understanding the conversation, but there is no way to listen to music. The background music will feel like some of the frequencies are missing and the vocals are robotic. It does get mentioned later in the film as well. I know this well because I found out in elementary school that I had lost some of my hearing in my left ear. The music listening experience was almost mono. I love music and am even studying music production, but I am most afraid of panning.
There is a line in the movie that stuck with me. "Being deaf is not a handicap. Not something to fix." That's true. Just like birds see people, they see our lack of wings as a handicap. But for us humans, it's not. My original graduation thesis would have been a library for the hearing impaired if not for the fact that my advisor did not choose my course paper.
April 27, 2021
Why I like Japanese
I'm trying to learn Japanese and have been in the last five-six years. I love the language. I'm fascinated with the culture. And I love the fact that it is an Asian country which isn't necessarily extremely warm.. Since I'm really not good at warm temperatures. I also really like the Japanese flavors.. I'm generally really picky with food, but my new interest in Japan has made my courage for tasting new stuff bigger. Because I feel like the overall tastes that they use are really fascinating and delicious, it makes me feel braver in their kitchen than I feel in my own Danish kitchen. My husband and I even sleep on a futon on the floor. It's really good for my back especially being so tall. (1,76 m) I also love that they have their own characters when writing and that it's almost like drawing every time you write something.. It's small drawings. I have always been drawing since I was a little kid. And I also love the logic that are found in the small drawings/characters. And the logic in the grammar.. In contrast to my own, very illogical language, Danish.
April 27, 2021
História sobre um bombeiro
Hoje eu leu uma história sobre a vida dum bombeiro. O vocabulário tinha muito a ver com diferentes animais que o bombeiro tinha salvado na sua carreira. Evidentemente eu estudou muitas palavras sobre o trabalho cotidiano dum bombeiro, como: pegar fogo, incêndio, corpo de bombeiros, mangueiras de água, etc.
April 27, 2021
Schneewittchen
Ich habe heute die original Schneewittchen Geschichte von Bruder Grimm gelesen. Ich bin sicher, dass ich als Kind die Disney Version mit meiner Schwester schon gesehen habe und deshalb hatte ich eine Idee wie die Geschichte laufen sollte. Es war aber ein bisschen anders. Die Geschichte ist etwas brutaler, sozusagen. Wenn der Jäger ein Tier tötet und zu der Königin die Lunge und Leber bringt, isst sie es, weil sie denkt, dass sie aus Schneewittchen stammen. Dann, vor dem giftigen Apfel versucht die Königin, Schneewittchen mit einer Band zu ersticken und sie mit einem Kamm zu vergiften. Das Ende ist wahrscheinlich der verrückteste Teil der Geschichte, weil die Königin wird bestraft und muss zu Tode tanzen.
https://www.grimmstories.com/de/grimm_maerchen/sneewittchen_schneewittchen
Manche Worte, die ich nicht kannte waren:
Gemahlin
Unkraut
Zwerge
Krämerin
Schnürriemen
stolperten
April 27, 2021
A minha infância
Quando eu era criança, vivia em uma cidade pequena. Ia a escola a pé, e jogava com meus amigos na estrada. Eu gostava muito de escola, gostava de estudar história. Na minha casa tínhamos uma cachorra e muitos gatos e eu brincava com eles e com meus irmãos. Eu estudava muito: ia a lesões de inglês, computação e esportes.
Eu visitava os meus avós e passeávamos pelo jardin. Os fines de semana, comíamos assado com toda a família, meus primos viam também. No verão, íamos ao rio e brincávamos na água. Eu acho que a minha infância foi muito tranquila e feliz.
April 27, 2021
April 27, 2021
Deutscher Kurzfilm
Ich habe einen Kurzfilm auf Deutsch gesehen, der hieß Stockmann - Kleines Stöckchen auf großer Reise. ich glaube, es ging um Familie. Ein Holzstock namens Stockmann wird versehentlich von seiner Familie ferngehalten. Wie die Spielzeuge in Toy Story muss ein Stock namens Stockmann vermeiden, dass man herausfindet, dass er sprechen kann. Dann macht er sich schließlich die Mühe, dem Weihnachtsmann nach Hause zu folgen.
April 27, 2021
I can't stop to hunt monsters.
Have you play Monster Hunter? This is a game and my youth. When I was middle school student, I always play it with friends in their houses or school , hiding from teachers.
And recently, it was released the new series, "Monster Hunter Rise".
At first, I didn't have a interest in it, but my co-workers recommended to buy it hardly, so I bought it.
Then, I actually enjoy to play it and I can't stop to play. Last day-off, I played for a hall day.
It was a disaster, because I couldn't study English well.
How do you study to avoid your desires?
If you'd like, please give me good advises and help me…
April 27, 2021
Во снах
Мне приятно было бы жить во своих снах.
В них всё возможно: я могу лететь, быть непобедим или невидим. Вообще у меня бы было власть над том, что снюсь.
В реальной жизни я часто чувствую, что я - во власти событий. Неважно, что я делаю, потому что я не умею ничего контролировать. Всё случайно, а во снах это я решаю то, что происходит (более или менее).
April 27, 2021
Midnight Express
I read "Midnight Express 1" by Kotaro Sawaki. The title means prison breaking in Turkey but the story doesn't relate to it. This is a travel novel from Hong Kong to London. In the first volume, the author visited Hong Kong and Macao. His description is quite nice, and It made me want to travel abroad. I know I can't in the current situation, but I'll go in the future.
April 27, 2021
经典 - 三个标准
语文必修的选读，每一篇算是经典？不会。那么古人撰写的每一本书怎么可以称作经典？更不是。“经典”的意义与标准，正是以下探讨的问题。
“经”字一个意思是指持久不变的，如经常、经费。“典”字一个意思是指标准或法则，如典型、典范，古典等。由此推论，“经典”等同于一个让我们深入了解人生某一方面的书籍、电影、讲座等。说通俗一点，“经典”是最值得看的书、电影等。经典的定义不局限于文学，不过本论只有拿书来作例证，下文才讨论书籍。
书本的价值来自其作用。有些书要帮你解决问题，有些书要让你想象另一个世界，还有些书要记载史实。合格与否的根本问题在于作者能否完成目标。完成目标的书总算值得读一遍，不会让读者白看。不过经典的标准在于书能否超越本来的目标—读《史记》你能学秦汉史、提高表达力、思考许多人生问题；读《西游记》你能探索刻画人物笔法、欣赏故事、研究明代作者对世界的观点。换句话讲，这些书对目标不同的人都是万能，每一本经典如此。
经典使用多，还有很多层次的意思。数十年来，多次阅读鲁迅小说，你对作品的理解肯定会变了。即便作品的意义和第一次阅读时一样，至少味道不同。书籍的内容显然不会自发改变，自然，是你自己改变了。经典好比大海、天空，无边无限，经典的内容能使我们认真思考根书籍具体内容没有直接关系的其他生活方面，内容越深，可能的联系越广。最近学的什么知识，都似乎跟经典的字词密切相关。假如一个人多次读一本书，味道好像跟过去一模一样，有两种可能：要么他本人草率一点，要么书的内容浅薄。纵然缺乏深度的书籍有时有使用，我们也不要天天看。看起来很浅的内容不一定不深，不过一般读者都会迅速分别出那几本有所挑战。
经典之作的最后条件是跨越时间，跨越时代限制。除了研究人员，过去写作的文字大部分都是废纸。他们描写的景色、叙述的行动、争辩的问题都只是墨纸而已，在时代的循环中失去了与我们生活的相关性。
April 27, 2021
April 27, 2021
April 27, 2021
Le weekend
Je vais expliquer comment je passe le temps le weekend. En fait j'ai toujours du mal à répondre à cette sorte de question. J'aime bien parler ce que je pense (c'est-à-dire mes opinions) à des sujets, mais je ne sais pas trop comment décrire ma vie quotidienne. Même en japonais je me sens toujours mal à l'aise quand j'ai besoin de le faire. Bon, je verrai si ça marche !
En weekend, j'aime me promener avec mon mari. Ça ne change pas depuis que l'on était encore au Japon. On peut faire beaucoup de découvertes en juste marchant, tel que des nouveaux magasins et des nouveaux chemins. C'est amusant aussi de voir des changements de paysage et de plantes selon les saisons.
J'aime bien aussi regarder les documentaires. J'ai écrit avant que je n'aime pas trop regarder les films et les feuilletons parce que les histoires me rendent toujours stressée, mais quand il s'agit des documentaire, je peux les tenir et j'ai même hâte de les voir. Je dirais que c'est parce qu'ils racontent les faits plutôt que les sentiments, mais peut-être il y a des autres raisons dont je ne me suis pas rendu compte.
Je joue au jeu vidéo qui s'appelle <<RingFit Adventure>>. C'est un jeu vidéo qu'a sorti Nintendo, et je le met en français pour entraîner ma capacité à l'écoute. Et ça me permet de faire des exercises à domicile, ce qui est très important durant cette période de COVID19.
Pour finir, ce n'est pas un passe-temps, mais je cuisine avec mon mari. On cuisine tout pour la semaine prochaine en deux-trois heures, alors on se concentre vraiment pour tout finir. C'est parfois dur, mais j'aime bien le sentiment après que l'on tout termine et regarde ce que on a préparé en pile.
April 27, 2021
Balloon of Happiness
While reading an essay book, I found an interesting story about happiness.
Let me translate the story.
Childred have their balloons in class.
Following their teacher's guide, they write their name on the balloon and throw it away.
The teacher asks them to find their own ballon for five minutes.
The childred try to find it but it is very difficult.
Some kids argue for better position to find.
After five minutes, only small number of children success in finding.
The teacher gives another instruction, that picking up a balloon nearby and handling it over to its owner.
Then everyone has their balloons for short time.
The teacher teaches them that these balloons are like happiness.
"If you find your own happiness, it will be very hard to have.
However if you are interested in someone else's happiness, it will help you find yours."
April 27, 2021
We will start long holiday.
4/29~5/5, we have holidays. The name is Golden Week in Japan. Why the name is Golden Week, it comes from long holidays. Businessmen only two holidays per week, nonetheless the week is all holidays for them. Now, my friends are work at different places. But, they come back to the place where the university is. So, I have a lot of schedules that I will play with my friends. I'm looking forward to playing with them. But, because of COVID-19, the government issued rock down. So, we will not be able to go out. We are troubled with that problems.
April 27, 2021
April 27, 2021
Dark
Heute bin ich mit dem TV Show Dark fertig. Ich habe drei Saisons dieses TV Shows ferngesehen. Ich habe es aus Netflix auf Deutsch ferngesehen. Es wurde auf Deutsch gefilmt, so habe ich die ursprünglichen Stimmen gehört. Ich habe den TV-Show meistens ohne Untertitel ferngesehen, um mein Hörverständnis best zu üben. Da ich bin mit "Dark" fertig, muss ich einen anderen deutschen TV-Show finden. Kennst du einen? Kannst du mir einen empfehlen?
Dark ist die Geschichte einige Familien, die in Villen leben. Im Jahre 2019 wurden ein Paar Jungen vermisst. Was außerordentlich ist, ist, dass dreiunddreißig Jahre zuvor würde auch einen Junge vermisst und dass er 2019 wieder gefundet bist. Der Körper ist noch jung als hätte er durch die Zeit gereist. Die Polizisten verstehen nicht, was geschehen ist.
In Villen gibt es ein Atomkraftwerk, der 1986 gebaut würde. Nach dem Bau des Atomkraftwerks ist etwas mit Radioaktivität passiert, der einen Weg durch die Zeit geschafft hat.Einige Jugendlichen decken die Passage auf. Sie werden Zeitreisenden ud reisen nach der Zukunft und der Vergangenheit. bei Sprungen von dreiunddreißig Jahre. Sie versuchen, die schlechte Ereignisse, die in Villen geschehen, zu verhindern. Insbesondere versuchen sie die Apokalypse zu meiden.
Ich habe die erste Saison sehr gemöcht. Aber leider sind die zwei letzte Saison nicht so gut wie die erste.
April 27, 2021
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¿Qué haremos mañana? Tenemos el día libre.
Mañana no es hoy. No sé lo que querré.
Tendras que llamar a Roberto y estoy casi seguro que pasaréis el día en estudiar.
No me acordaba que yo lo había prometido para preparar los exámenes juntos.
¿Crees que está a la casa en este momento?
No lo sé. ¿Por qué lo preguntame?
Porque acabo tener una idea.
¿Qué te parece de ir de picnic?
Tú y Roberto podréis estudiar si queréis y yo, jugaré con los hijos.
Me gusta tu idea.
Habrá que levantarse temprano para profitar todo el día.
Voy a llamar a Roberto para ver si acuerda.
April 27, 2021