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Journal
No worries, as I said before, language learning is just our hobby. It shouldn't affect our work and life, and it shouldn't bring us pressure. So you can reply to me just when you are free.
Last time I checked the word thunderstorm and found it meant 雷暴雨 in Chinese. It usually happens in the summer here. I remember when I was a child, when thunderstorms happened at night. Our parents always asked us to blow off all the oil lights because they said that monsters would run into our house in the lightning thunderstorm at night.
The same as what happened in your place, thunderstorms always bring disasters here, such as destroying crops, trees, electricity facilities, houses and so on. Every time thunderstorms come, our government will carry out some activities to reduce the damage caused by thunderstorms.
It's really hard to live without electricity nowadays. It seems everything can't work without electricity. I remember that we never knew what to do in our office if the electricity was off. I can't imagine how you spend your day on those days without electricity.
This picture is really amazing: a forest wildfire mixed with a strip of Northern lights. It's like a dream you never see in reality, so the photo is very precious.
Natural disasters are everywhere every time, we humans seem to not have the ability to master them well no matter how we do our best.
In front of nature, human beings are just like dust. We should respect and protect nature because it's our mother.
May 21, 2021
Le notizie di oggi 2
<Si può trovare la versione inglese sotto>
Una coppia è stata multata per sottopagare ai lavoratori per 8 anni. L'uomo è DJ e sua moglie è sia mondana sia attrice. Sono arrivati a la corte ponendosi occhiali di sole appena usciti dalla machina, per nascondere i suoi volti il più possibile, probabilmente per l'imbarazzo per aver approfittare i suoi dipendenti.
Le due erano padroni di una catena di negozi che vende tortine. Hanno fondato la impresa molti anni fa con il proposito di vendere prodotti dolci a bassi prezzi. Si dice che per questo hanno avuto bisogno di contare con l'uso di dipendenti stranieri, che erano disponibili a ricevere dei soldi bassi a cambio di la opportunità di ottenere un lavoro stabile.
Ma il piano è scoppiato quando un gruppo di lavoratori hanno deciso di sporgere una denuncia contro le practice degradante. Anche l'aiuta delle reti sociali li ha aiutato a diffondere lo scoprimento ai quattro venti e di allora in poi la coppia non ha avuto luogo a cui nascondersi dei suoi crimini.
May 21, 2021
Ma liste de choses à faire...et l'app que j'utilise
Je dois mettre les utensils de table dans la lave-vaisselle, et ranger les vêtements dans le séchoir, et c'est tout. Je n'ai pas vraiment des choses à faire dans la vie quotidienne, et je n'aimerais pas en avoir non plus. Quand je regarde la liste remplie de choses à faire, ça me fait énormément de pression, ce qui m'embête. Mais j'essaie quand même de réviser des cours de français en utilisant l'appli qui s'appelle «Review Note». Si on enregistre ce qu'on a fait ce jour-là, elle va nous en rappeler le jour où on doit le réviser pour le mieux retenir. On peut changer la date de révision à souhait, et j'ai fixé à le lendemain, une semaine après, 14 jours après, 28 jours après (je crois que j'ai choisi ces dates en faisant référence à un article mais je ne m'en souviens plus...). Je trouve ça très pratique : pour moi cette méthode marche bien. On peut même décaler des dates si on est tellement occupé et n'a pas du temps, qui me soulage de ne vas devoir faire tout en un jour.
*Référence
L'appli dont j'ai parlé dans le texte : https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=jp.kamusoft.reviewnote&hl=ja&gl=US
May 21, 2021
World Tour Video
When I browsing through Netflix, I find out a video clip that is about World Tour.
It was originally broadcasted on a TV channel and my family members really like to watch these video series.
Because of the pandemic, my friends also watch the video series over and over again.
The video series show small cities all around world.
Unlikely the big cities, small cities have their own character and I am blowned away by the charming locations.
I want to travel to the city.
May 21, 2021
May 21, 2021
Profesores de idioma
Si soy principiante, no me importa que el profesor no sea nativo con tal de que su acento sea bueno, porque priorizo la entonación al inicio.
Por contraste, si soy un estudiante que tiene un alto o medio-alto nivel, por lo menos, solo aceptaré profesores nativos. Es una cuestión de conocimientos, tanto los fundamentales como los avanzados, los primeros de los cuales necesitaré una y otra vez durante las clases; los últimos, una que otra vez.
Como ya sé lo preguntón que soy, no me convendría reducir adrede mi curiosidad a causa de una falta de destrezas lingüísticas por parte del profesor por no ser nativo. Eso ya lo he sufrido antes, por desgracia, y no quiero volver a hacerlo nunca más.
May 21, 2021
A1. Some thoughts aloud
Today, I want to write something down by way of introduction.
By now, I pronounce myself fit to learn any foreign language.
But, what sort of English exercises would make me better in English?
I was completely ignorant of it until recently.
My point of view was at odds with the common recommendations for learners.
I realized that it was still difficult for me to formulate my thoughts in English, even in writing.
I miss some important exercises.
That will not do.
In the end, I see that my daughter is right.
I want to find out what to do next. I can't say for sure yet.
Today, I’m considering one fact that is as easy as ABC.
I have a new topic for the discussion: Write down a few sentences with new words to put in your memory with new ways of using them.
So I'll try to refine my old way of learning method with this small change.
Let's see what comes out of this.
May 21, 2021
Non ci posso credere!!!!
Controllavo i miei voti dell'università e ho avuto una sorpresa... =)
Sono rimasta molto felice con me stessa dato che non mi sono impegnata abbastanza dall'inizio dei miei studi.
I miei vuoti sono questi:
Test di grammatica contrastiva di spagnolo 8,00
Test di vocabolario di spagnolo 8,00
Valutazione dissertativa di spagnolo 10,00
Valutazione dissertativa di grammatica contrastiva di spagnolo 9,00
Allora il mio voto generale è 9,00 (fino a questo momento) perché oggi devo consegnare la terza valutazione, che consiste in una traduzione di una ricetta di cucina e un test con 10 domande.
Non è "fighissimo"? =)
Dato che sono fuori dell'università 13 anni fa, è un segno che ancora mi ricordo di molte cose. Non sono così stupida come pensavo... Quello che mi manca è avere tempo libero per studiare di più.
Adesso guarderò il webinar dalla casa editrice Edilingua... infatti mentre sto aspettando per il suo inizio hanno messo una canzone in italiano per passare il tempo ... È quella di Gaio "Cuore amaro" !!! Non la conoscevo!
Oh... sta cominciando... a presto!!!!! Ci risentiamo!!!!
May 21, 2021
May 21, 2021
Stop writing 8 days!
In last 5 years I continuously write daily each day.
Sometime I got nothing to talk about.
I still write some rubbish content.
This week! This whole week I stop write anything!
Because this week was a “heaven and hell” style.
My expensive bicycle was stolen.
Both daily and part time job, I make many huge mistakes!
Even I can cover all the mistakes, I still feel so frustrated.
In my own time I am able to make few internet friends trust me.
We are not closed than before.
My “make friends’ skill got improve that is unbelievable.
Really looking forward to meet them in the actual world.
May 21, 2021
May 21, 2021
Journal
I don't think they are called mopeds or motorized, actually they are electrical bicycles. They are powered by batteries. Yes, nowadays, electrical bicycles are mainly our transportation and every family has two or three of them. Electrical bicycles are very convenient when you go somewhere in the city, because they don't need a parking space and you don't have to worry about whether you violate the traffic rules. Additionally, this is my city and it's a medium-sized city in China. Shanghai is six hundred kilometers away from here and it is in our southeast direction.
To be honest, these past days, I almost didn't see a single day with blue skies. Here in autumn, we can see the beautiful weather with blue skies and white clouds. According to my experience, it does have nice weather during this period, but I don't know why they disappeared.
Living in the suburbs of a big city is the best choice in my opinion, because you can enjoy both the prosperity of the city and the peace of the suburbs. Living in the suburbs can make people feel comfortable because there are no high rise buildings around. You won't feel depressed. Besides, the air quality in the suburbs is much better than in cities because there are fewer cars to pollute the air.
Yes, we also use a star system to rate hotels and the highest star rating is five-stars. The hotel we stayed at is just an ordinary hotel in our city. The standard room costs about 120 RMB per night. In our city, Fuyang, there are about three or four five-star hotels. One of them is Howard Johnson Tianzhu Hotel and its room price range is from 470 to 670 RMB per night.
This picture was taken while we held the theory lessons. Yes, there are fewer women in the class, but it doesn't mean that this field is not popular with women. The students are all farmers, so even if they are all men, each man definitely has a wife, so the fact that fewer women attend this class doesn't mean that women are not involved in this field. There is no company involved in this issue. Our department is a public institution funded by our nation and all the training fees are paid by our local financial department.
Yeah, you could say this. But I am not the only person who organizes and holds the training. We are a team and each one has his own responsibility.
I don't need to pay for my own accommodation because we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities and all the expenses of the training are paid by our government.
That is really my bad. At first I did think about whether it was appropriate to send the room picture including my colleagues to you. I once thought of mosaicing their faces, but finally I didn't do that because I want you to see the original version and I think it won't be a big deal, but I do should get my colleagues' permission first, so I think I shouldn't do that again.
May 21, 2021
溝をどうすべきか
こういう経験があった。
日本人の友達と電話で話していたとき、途中で会話の流れが突然止まってしまった。おそらく僕が何か気に障ることを言ってしまったのだと思い、大丈夫かと尋ねると、彼女は話題を変えて別の話をし出した。そのまま電話は終わったのだが、謝罪のメッセージを送る間もないうちに一方的に彼女にブロックされた。
僕が大丈夫かと尋ねた時に、僕の落ち度をはっきりと言ってくれたら謝ることも話し合うこともできたのではないかと思うのだが、彼女はそれをせず、関係を断つことを選んだようだ。
多くの日本人は恋人であろうが、友達であろうが、極度に争いを避ける傾向にあるように思う。一度できてしまった溝が埋められず、結局関係が破綻してしまうことがよくあるそうだ。しかし、お互いの意見や不満を相手に伝えることにより、その場で解決することができるのではないかと僕は思う。
コミュニケーションをとる上で、相手の価値観を理解しようとする姿勢が一番大切だと思う。分かり合うのをあきらめるようなことは僕はしたくない。
May 21, 2021
Slight enjoyment for the weekend
A spaceflight company which I have invested three times or four times is set to loft its long-awaiting and several setbacks experienced test spaceship into the orbit of our planet on Saturday, tomorrow. Although Cathie Wood and the corporate insiders sold parts of their shares several weeks ago amid growth stocks' relentless selloff, thanks to the news I also sold successfully my holdings at a not bad point at around 23％ surge from the previous day in line with reportedly, although by chance, Cathie Wood' disposing of almost all her shares, who though I don't like as one of critics against her, in terms of overevaluating her positions and making bad and highly risky decisions in many points.
In this company's spaceship, although I don't know whether it lies in this time's spaceship, as a seats material, a product whose company's share also I have now is supposed to be used. Besides, two pilots is said to embark. So I hope this mission will finish successfully with slight enjoyment because I am not a man of enthusiasm about something like this sort of futuristic missions, but rather I am an investing nerd eyeing reality and our healthy lives and society.
May 21, 2021
ПрАкТиКа! (больше)
Пожалуйста, обратите особенное внимание на использование слов и фраз, написанных большими буквами в тексте. Я повторяю именно эти слова и словосочетания.
Я не могу ТАНЦЕВАТЬ ПОД такую МУЗЫКУ. Она совсем монотонная.
Ты когда-нибудь ТАНЦЕВАЛА ПОД эту МУЗЫКУ?
Бездействия ООН ИГРАЕТ РОЛЬ в том, что сейчас происходит.
Он актёр? Какие РОЛИ он ИГРАЕТ?
Я не ВЫПИСЫВАЛ газету. Она скучная.
Нужно принимать участие в сообществе. Поэтому я ВЫПИСАЛ их газету.
Я часто ЛОВЛЮ себя НА МЫСЛИ, что мы не так уж разные люди.
Раньше я ПОЙМАЛА себя НА МЫСЛИ, что он не спроста говорит такие вещи.
Их слова не ИМЕЮТ ЗНАЧЕНИЕ. Ты – прекрасная.
Он сказал, что его жизнь не ИМЕЕТ ЗНАЧЕНИЕ. Мне его действительно жаль.
Тут агрессия нашей страны будет ИМЕТЬ ВЛИЯНИЕ на поведение наших врагов.
Твое желания не ИМЕЕТ ВЛИЯНИЕ на мои
Он РАСПОЛОЖЕН К такой ИМПУЛЬСИВНОСТИ.
Мы не РАСПОЛОЖЕНЫ так действовать.
Ты НАШЕЛ ВЫХОДА НА ЧЕЛОВЕКА для того, чтобы помочь мне в поиске работы.
Извините, я не смог НАЙТИ СВЯЗЬ для того, чтобы помочь тебе в поиске работы.
Он сам не ЗАДУМЫВАЛ это. Он недостаточно смелый для этого.
Мы ЗАДУМАЛИ покушение на жизнь премьера, но в конце-концов нас поймали и посадили в тюрьму.
May 21, 2021
Практика
Пожалуйста, обратите особенное внимание на использование слов и фраз, написанных большими буквами в тексте. Я повторяю именно эти слова и словосочетания.
У нее очень ИЗЯЩНЫЙ подход к нашей работе.
По-моему, он специально выбирает ИЗЯЩНЫЕ слова, чтобы произвести на нас хорошее впечатление.
Нам нужно ОТЫГРАТЬ ВРЕМЯ для наших подкреплений.
Если мы не ОТЫГРАЕМ ВРЕМЯ, то мы никак не сможем удерживаться при нападении врага.
Завтра я поеду к стоматологу на ПЛАНОВУЮ ПРОВЕРКУ.
Пожалуйста, сынок, не забудь о твоей ПЛАНОВОЙ ПРОВЕРКЕ в поликлинике завтра.
Сколько продлится время ОЖИДАНИЯ в аэропорту в Сеуле?
Моё ОЖИДАНИЕ в Шереметьеве длится 3 часа.
Я действительно не хочу такую работу. Я просто ПРОЩУПЫВАЮ ПОЧВУ на рынке работы.
Думаю, он специально это делает, чтобы ПРОЩУПАТЬ ПОЧВУ.
Я надеюсь, что сотрудник сможет ПЕРЕНЕСТИ мой РЕЙС в завтра.
Что ты будешь делать, раз она не сможет ПЕРЕНЕСТИ РЕЙС?
Сначала у нас ПЕРЕСАДКА в Токио, а потом в Лос-Анджелесе.
Давайте будем выезжать из аэропорта во время ПЕРЕСАДКИ. У нас ведь будет ожидание на 10 часов.
Ты лучше не ПРИНИМАЙ ЗА ЧИСТУЮ МОНЕТУ то, что он говорит о своей жене.
Я вижу, как они поступают, но нам нельзя ПРИНИМАТЬ это ЗА ЧИСТУЮ МОНЕТУ.
May 21, 2021
May 21, 2021
さよなら
普通に言葉は英語から日本語に移るけど、「さよなら」の場合は例外だ。英語の辞書や話すとき、「さよなら」がたまに見つける。さよならは「Goodbye」に翻訳されるけど、これは少しイマイチだと思う。さよならはもっと決定的だと思う。「もう一度会えない」とか「もう会いたくない」の意味もあると思う。だから日本語では、普通に丁寧な時は「お疲れ様です」や「お先に失礼します」と言って、ほかの時は「じゃね」や「またね」と言う。英語の言葉は日本語に変えて意味をなくすことは多いから、逆の移動で同じことが起こると驚かない。日本語を勉強旅に、言葉の移動はもっと興味深くなる。でも日本語から英語に、具体的な食べ物と名詞以外この現象は珍しい。
May 21, 2021
Wesentliche Kompetenzen
Was ist in deiner Meinung die wesentlichen Kompetenzen, die jeder haben sollte? Ich habe mir vor ein paar Tagen diese Frage gestellt. Wir alle haben verschiedene Fähigkeiten, aber es gibt ein paar Dingen, die mehr verbreitet werden sollten.
Zum Beispiel nähen. Diese Tätigkeit ist sehr nutzbar, aber ich selber kann nichts nähen: Ich wurde nur einmal unterrichtet, aber ich habe es nicht wirklich gut gelernt. Das finde ich sehr traurig, weil vielleicht könnte ich meine eigenen Klamotten erstellen und meinen eigenen Stil haben.
Außerdem finde ich kochen komplett wesentlich. Oft höre ich viele Männer, die sagen, dass sie es zu wissen nicht brauchen. Ich finde jedoch das komplett irrsinnig. Viele dieser Männer erwarten auch, dass ihre Partner es tun. Ich verstehe, dass Kochen nicht für jeder ist, aber essen ist die wesentlichste Tätigkeit, die wir wie Tiere machen.
Was glaubt ihr, dass jeder auch wissen muss?
May 21, 2021
Eurovision
Eurovision é uma grande competição de música. A primeira Eurovision foi realizada em 1956. Parece ser que as regras foram mudadas muitíssimas vezes, e não consigo descrever a história da Eurovision. O vencedor mais recente, os Países Baixos, é o anfitrião atual. Muitos concorrentes no concurso não-realizado de 2020 voltaram em 2021. Você tem uma música favorita na Eurovision de 2021?
May 21, 2021
La casa de mi amiga
Una de mis mejores amigas de la secundaria y yo vivimos en la misma ciudad y hoy después del trabajo fui a visitarle. Comparte un dúplex con su novio y su abuela y es muy agradable. Hay dos puertas antes de entrar en el patio pequeño, que tiene muchas plantas y una mesa. Adentro, hay una sala, una cocina, un cuarto de baño y una habitación. En la sala tienen un sofá muy cómodo y una pantalla con un proyector para ver películas. A su gata le gusta sentarse enfrente de la puerta para mirar a través de las ventanas. Luego, en el comedor hay cuadros colgados en la pared y unas luces bonitos. No he pasado mucho tiempo en su habitación, pero sé que tiene aún más plantas.
May 21, 2021
einen Test zur Anerkennung des Führerscheins
A: Wenn du deinen Führerschein in Portugal machst, musst du eventuell noch mal einen Test zur Anerkennung des Führerscheins in Deutschland machen. Das ist einer Kollegin von mir passiert. Ich glaube, sie hatte ihren Führerschein in Bosnien gemacht.
B: Echt? Nun ja, ich habe noch nichts darüber recherchiert. Ich bin davon ausgegangen, dass es nicht notwendig wäre, weil beide Portugal und Deutschland zu der EU gehören. Bosnien ist kein Mitglied. Vielleicht war es der Grund, warum deine Kollegin es machen sollte? Ich muss mir Informationen darüber suchen, aber da es noch weit in der Zukunft ist, muss ich mich nicht beeilen, haha.
May 21, 2021
The chain to lock the bike.
【過去にあった話】(It’s an happening I experienced. )
I've come to pick up the bike I left, but I notice that I’ve forgotten the lock's key.
I've come to pick up the forgotten bike, but I notice that I’ve forgotten the lock's key.
置き忘れた自転車を取りに来て、そこで、チェーンの鍵持ってくるのを忘れてきたのに気づいた…。
（”forget”を2回使う方が良い（面白い）のか、避けた方が良いのか…？）
May 21, 2021
Der richtige Mann
(Das ist ein Teil eines Briefes)
Vielen Dank für deine Wörter. Das ist sehr nett von dir. Ich weiß aber nicht, ob es den richtigen Mann gibt. Um ehrlich zu sein, denke ich, dass es keinen richtigen gibt. Nun ja, vielleicht war das nur eine Redensart und du glaubst auch nicht, dass es einen richtigen Mann gibt. Ich bin kein negativer Mensch, aber ich habe schon einiges erleben und ich weiß aus eigener Erfahrung, dass Beziehungen viel komplizierter sind als sie aussehen. Deshalb werde ich mich damit zufriedengeben, wenn ich gute Freunde finde, mit denen ich ins Kino, an den Strand, in den Park, auswärts essen gehen und über gute und schlimme Dinge reden kann. Natürlich wäre es toll, jemanden zu finden, mit dem ich etwas Weiteres erfahren könnte, aber ich will es nicht erwarten, damit ich nicht enttäuscht werde.
May 21, 2021
Writing: Factors of Sports Victory
Some people feel that the The victory in sports lies in the physical superiority of the individual; however, others feel that mental attitude is a more important factor to win games. In my opinion, the psychological condition plays a more important role in the case of individuals with a high level of athleticism.
1. Getting a win starts with having a desire to win and having confidence in yourself.
2. Dark horses and comeback winners are often those who possess a good mental condition.
3. In sports competitions and training, there are many obstacles to be encountered. Often it is not a physical obstacle, but a mental one.