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May 28, 2021
Agree or disagree:
Agree or disagree: Overseas outsourcing contributes to the sustained development of global economy
It is true that overseas outsourcing is cost-effective, but I disagree that it contributes to the sustained development of the global economy. That is because it causes the unfair treatment of workers, the decline in employment and the uneven distribution of wealth.
When companies hiring people overseas, their aim is to reduce labor costs, and they try to produce their productions in developing countries. It is said that the workers in developing countries work more, being paid little. The reducing prices may benefit consumers, but it means workers somewhere are forced to work in a poor condition.
Outsourcing means cut down the employment in the country in which a company has headquarters. The bigger the company is, the more employment will be lost if the company produce their products overseas.
The most important aspect of this problem is the uneven distribution of wealth. The economic gap between developed countries and developing ones are expanding dramatically. Outsourcing is one of the biggest factors. The multinational companies in developed countries are hiring cheap labor in developing countries and making a huge benefit. For example, Apple in the U.S. does not produces any iPhone in the U.S.
For above reasons, I strongly believe outsourcing cannot help sustainable development.
May 28, 2021
Use present continuous where it correct
1. How are you feeling yourself?
2. Do you know what he is reading?
3. I don’t understand what she is saying.
4. He doesn’t see what the problem is.
5. He is sleeping now. He likes sleep after diner.
6. She is saying she hearing nothing.
7. Are you seeing the man who is standing near the window? He wants to speak to you.
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May 28, 2021
Agree or disagree: Electronic voting should be promoted
With advancing information technology, the system of society has changed slowly but steadily. Now, the conventional voting system should be replaced by electronic one. That is because it is superior to the conventional one in the ease of counting votes, the credibility of results, and the cost efficiency.
Firstly, counting votes is one of the most demanding job in voting system. No matter how a man takes effort to count votes faster, it is impossible to beat a computer. Computers can count votes in a moment, and they make no mistakes.
Secondly, anyone makes mistakes, but computers not. Computers will not miss a vote or count one twice. Moreover, it is possible to buy people who count votes, but not computers. Therefore, the results are more credible when computers count the votes.
Finally, electronic voting system can save money. It is true that it costs a lot to install it, but labor costs when hiring people again and again are obviously more expensive, especially in developed countries in which manpower cost has increased year by year.
For above reasons, I strongly believe that electronic voting should be promoted. Election is the heart of democracy. Therefore, we should pursue to improve the way of it.
May 28, 2021
髭について
日本には髭が人気ですか。そうではないと感じしますが、古い写真の中で日本人の男の人はよく髭があります。その物は流行らくなるの方法が面白いですね。アメリカでは面白い髭に関して話があります。最初の８０年間アメリカの大統領は髭を伸ばしませんでした。それから、１８６０年にグレース・ベデルという１１歳女の子はアブラハム・リンカーンという大統領候補に髭を生やしたら、もっとかっこくなって、当選するの見込みが高くなると言って手紙を送りました。意外にリンカーンは助言に従って髭を生やして、当選されました。次の５０年間大多数の大統領は髭を伸ばしました。しかし、１９１３年から、大統領は全然髭を伸ばしません。いつかまた大統領の髭が流行るでしょうか。
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May 28, 2021
ポルトガルの方がブラジルより安心
もうちょっとしたらポルトガルに引っ越すと、知り合いに言いました。こんな時期なので、体調には気をつけてくださいねと、言われましたが、今のところはポルトガルの方がブラジルよりずっと安心ですと、説明しました。6月20日から僕の年齢の人が予防接種されるようになります。ブラジルだと、あわよくば８か9月からです。もともとヨーロッパに引っ越す予定でしたが、ポルトガルではなくて、ドイツです。
ただ、いろいろあって、しばらくポルトガルに行ってから、ドイツに行くことにしました。ちなみに、皆さんはどうですか？日本でのCOVID19の予防接収は進んでいますか？チャンスがあれば、されに行きますか？日本はもともと衛星に気をつけている国なので、今回のコロナ禍にそんなに悪影響を受けていないようですが、本当ですか？
May 28, 2021
May 28, 2021
Journal
Reply
The first video was taken on my way cycling to my apartment. All the greenery along the road you saw in the video is all managed and responsible by our municipal engineering company. The residential community developers don't have the responsibility for those greeneries and they don't have the financial ability to afford that. They are only responsible for the areas in their commercial apartment communities.
The plumbing and electrical wires are already built and you just can't see them because they are hidden in the grounds and walls. Yes, there are no outlets or light fixtures, but they are easy to do when you hire decoration workers to do it.
I don't have enough time to watch your videos right now and I will leave my comments after I fully watched them.
Thank you for communicating with me in English. I am very grateful for all you have done.
May 28, 2021
Keine Dates
Seit Corona habe ich keine Dates gehabt. Ich wohne mit meiner Mutter jetzt und ich wollte kein Risiko eingehen, sowohl ihretwegen als auch meinetwegen. Es sind schon 14 Monate ohne Dates. Überraschenderweise bin ich immer noch am Leben! XD Ich habe auch nicht vor, ein Date zu haben, bevor ich mich impfen lasse. Nach 2 oder 3 Wochen, dass ich die zweite Dosis bekommen habe, dann werde ich nochmal an Dates denken.
May 28, 2021
A Normally Good Day
I cannot go shopping because I am asleep at the day. I want to use shareholder's tickets and cards, but I can't. The U.S. market is enjoyable, but as a humanish life in a classical meaning, it might be questionable. Despite many analysts' coverage to upside, Nvidia was down today as I had expected. Already high price, potential exacerbation of supply and demand caused by a stock split, Arm's acquisition, global chip shortage, stay-at-home to reopening shift induced gaming industry's short term potential demand drop, uncertainty of a sustainable growth to crypto mining (There was also a news, but may not so deeply relevant to the aforementioned, that Iran was temporally ban crypto mining because of electricity) etc. might be and might be going to be weighing on the stock. But entire market in the U.S. was second straight extremely hilarious day which led my buying positions largely to positivity. So the daily result of mine was also positive from a day earlier despite my hedge dragging behind.
Good night.
May 28, 2021
Tocca a te: la scuola
I professori
1. Come sono i professori della tua scuola?
I professori della scuola sono buoni.
2. Com’è il tuo rapporto con gli insegnanti?
Con degli insegnanti, ho un buon rapporto, ma altri no.
3. Quanto influisce la simpatia o l’antipatia di un professore nel tuo studio della sua materia?
Non molto.
4. Pensi che il ruolo dell’insegnante sia facile o difficile?
Penso che il ruolo dell’insegnante è difficile e stressante.
5. Se tu fossi un insegnante, c’è qualcosa che faresti e che i tuoi professori non fanno?
Si, non metto i miei studenti in difficoltà o faccio li pressione.
I compagni
1. Come ti trovi con i tuoi compagni?
Trovo i miei compagni buonissimi. Ho un rapporto stretto con i compagni di classe d’italiano, e mi piace la classe italiana.
2. Ci sono dei compagni con cui esci durante il fine settimana?
Si, esco con dei compagni di Italiano dopo scuola.
3. Com’è il tuo rapporto con gli studenti degli altri anni?
Ci sono delle genti conosco degli altri anni, ma non parlo a loro tanto.
4. Cosa ti piace fare durante la ricreazione?
Durante la ricreazione, mi piace per sedermi e parlare con i miei amici
5. Quali argomenti affronti quando parli con i tuoi compagni?
Qualcosa. Di solito parliamo di scuola, cose divertenti o l'attualità.
Le strutture
1. Com’è la tua scuola?
La mia scuola è un po vecchia e alcune classi sono sporchi. Ci sono graffiti, ma la biblioteca è bene. Lo spirito scolastico direi è morto.
2. Quanti studenti ci sono?
Forse un mille studenti.
3. Quali strutture sono presente?
Un sacco di aule, c’è una biblioteca, una cappella, le aule di musica, un centro benessere e uno stadio.
4. Ci sono campi da gioco?
Si c’è un campo da gioco, ma è solo erba.
5. Quali laboratori ci sono?
Ci sono cinque lavoratori di scienza.
6. La tua scuola è nuova o vecchia?
MOLTO molto vecchia.
7. Le aule sono grandi e luminose o piccolo e buie?
Le aule sono grandi ma noioso.
8. Ci sono giardini? Se si, quanto grandi sono?
La scuola ha piccoli giardini intorno alla scuola.
9. C’è qualcosa che cambieresti nella struttura della tua scuola?
Si, forse le aule particolarmente le aule vecchie, la mensa e gli armadietti.
May 28, 2021
When young meet old!
To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends from internet.
Danger? Sure 100%.
Today I made a new female friend.
She send me a video about how to distinguish man’s intention.
Whether he is really wants to learning or just try to tease woman.
I watched the video. (ナンパ目的のユーザーの見極め方)
It has some good points but I give her a lesson.
You should protect yourself.
But you should take the risk trust that I am a safe person.
The more trust on me the more you can explore.
Because I am doing the same to you.
May 28, 2021
Pensieri casuali
Comunque, eccomi un'altra volta. Non so nemmeno che scrivere, però la mia intenzione è riuscire a migliorare il mio italiano.
Fa un anno che imparo questa lingua, ma molto di questo tempo imparando è stato speso solo ad ascoltare musica italiana (in particolare, il rap). Mi pare molto dello mio vocabolario ne sia una conseguenza. Anche se l'italiano non è una lingua nuova per me, ho smesso di impararla sei mesi fa. Ho studiato ed imparato molto ma, nonostante, so che ho molto da fare e molto da imparare e forse la migliore maniera sia cominciare dal zero di nuovo. No, anzi, mi ricordo di alcune cose basiche però la sua maggioranza me ne è già scordata.
Insomma, quello che voglio dire è: non mi sento degna di tutto che ho imparato fino ad ora. Ho detto che sono livello intermediario però non mi sembra che il modo come scrivo ne sia adeguato. Pure, ad ogni volta che ricerco dei temi su cui scrivere, sembra che mi sono scordata di tutto quello che ho imparato finora. la mia creatività? Se ne è andata. La mia abilità di fare delle frasi? Subito, è scomparsa.
Non sono mai stata una scrittrice oppure qualcuna che scrive qualcosa e ci mostra agli altri - pure questo spiega perché non sono riuscita a scrivere degli testi lunghi sui temi proposti su LangCorrect. O magari sia un'altra cosa mai stata trovata da me.
In ogni modo, cercherò scrivere qui di più e di postare degli testi più lunghi. Può essere in po' difficile - infatti, l'ho detto adesso, sarà effettivamente difficile per me - all'inizio, ma non sarò riuscita a migliorare (la ragione al di ciò, il mio primo obiettivo) se non trovo di uscire dalla mia zona di comfort.
Ecco uno sfogo diventato un articolo. Non so neanche se ho scritto molto oppure se quello che ci ho scritto ha un qualche senso.
Allora, tutto che ho voluto era sapere se sarei riuscita a scrivere qualcosa e mi sa che, in un modo o nell'altro, ne sono riuscita.
May 27, 2021
May 27, 2021
Diary: Cheating Time
I posted two articles on one day, then the day after that I didn't post any articles, then the next day I was shocked to find that the streak disappeared. I have to admit that it was my mistake. Then I was going to write a Journal about how I was going to firmly practice what I wrote in my German diary - focus more on learning results than on the data presented. But then I suddenly remembered that the two posts were written in the morning and in the evening, so I might be able to recover by adjusting the time zone. Then the streak resumed...😅
May 27, 2021
"Do you mind me asking …?"
【 Do you mind me asking …<wh clause>…? 】
I'll try to make sentences:
-- Do you mind me asking how old you are?
-- Do you mind me asking what your name is again?
-- Do you mind me asking what you mean?
-- Do you mind me asking if you are married to him/her?
-- Do you mind me asking what your religion is?
May 27, 2021
La etimología
Desafortunadamente, no fui capaz de escribir ayer puesto que había un apagón. Sin embargo, ya que la electricidad ha regresado, puedo escribir otra vez. Si parece que esto es redundante es porque sí es. Voy intentando escribir lo más posible para mejorar. Sin embargo, no quiero perder todo el tiempo que tengo, así que supongo que debería empezar.
La etimología es una área de ciencia fascinante. Usándola, los científicos han sido capaz de reconstruir muchos idiomas antiguos, como lo indoeuropeo. ¡De hecho, sí puedes comprar libros que te enseñarán el idioma indoeuropeo! (En realidad, sin embargo, es importante tener en cuenta que ese es solo nuestra mejor suposición de cómo era). Siento si la oración pasada no era comprensible, estuve teniendo problemas expresándola incluso en mi idioma nativo. Otro beneficio de la etimología nos ayuda aún más. Puedes usarla para memorizar vocabulario. Pues, no puedes usarla para aprender todo tu vocabulario, ya que toma mucho tiempo buscar y leer la entrada por solo una palabra. Sin embargo, como una herramienta suplemental, es fantástica.
Una oración retadora/desafiante:
1. Durante toda la vida, he de dárselas setecientas libras cada mes.
May 27, 2021
May 27, 2021
手紙の一部
（手紙の一部です。あまり堅苦しくならないように訂正をお願いします。）
返事遅れてすみません！
浜松市は豊橋の隣なので、何回か行ったことがあります。
初めて行ったときは、駅の外に「横断禁止」を日本語とポルトガル語で書かれた看板というか、あれはなんといいますか？それを見て、びっくりしました。笑
それって、まだ駅の外にありますか？
浜松市に新しいブラジル総領事館ができるから、社員募集していますというときにも申し込んで、試験を受けましたが、あの時は採用される限定されていた人数に入らなくて、悔しかったです。13年前の話ですが（苦笑）
うん、確かに日本の政治は変なところがありますよね。子どもを増やしてほしいなら、それなりの対策をとらないとね！
そうです。今のブラジルの大統領は最悪な人間です。普段は誰に対しても悪いことが起こるように願いませんが、彼の場合は難しいですよ。。。
ああ、12月に生まれるんですね。あっという間に経ちますよね？まあ、お母さんはそう感じませんかもしれませんね。現在、僕の妹も妊娠です。6月末まで生まれます。初めての子どもですし、僕も第一姪になります。わくわくです。現在ポルトガルに住んでいますが、僕ももうすぐ引越しします、実は。今歯医者さんで治療をしてもらっていますが、それが終わったら、すぐに引っ越します。へへ
May 27, 2021
Sentences 121: Rift, To Be Spoken For, Dark Horse
After the row on last weekend, there is a huge rift between my former best friend and me.
(At the flee market) Sorry, I cannot give you this toy, it is spoken for someone who dropped by earlier.
The manager is a dark horse: even though he has been with the company for six months, barely anyone ever spoke to him let alone worked with him. But he made a surprising proposal yesterday that would benefit all employees.
May 27, 2021