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Do We Need Emotional Support Animals?
A pig saved its owner when she fell down in the kitchen and lost consciousness. There was no one except the house pig in a house. Suddenly, the pig went to the street and lied down to be payed attention by cars. A car stopped and noticed that something happened inside of the house. They called an ambulance immediately and could save pig's owner's life. As I heard this story, I couldn't believed it. How could the pig act such a wise behavior to help her owner?
Recently, many people keep their pets as their emotional support animals. A person who own his small alligator take it to anywhere with him like his family. Another man said that he has been loving a goat in place of his precious son after his son died because of cancer. An animal give comfort to us and heal our psychological wounds. So that we need animals as our healers.
However, those owners take their pets on a street, train and even an air plain. Naturally, it cause of many troubles, such as their animals bit or scared other people. Nowadays, air plain companies prohibited that no one can take any emotional animal in an air plain.
July 26, 2021
7月26日
どうして私にとって日本語で書くのがとても難しいですか？
読むことはできますが、書くことはありません。
練習して、日本語で書くのが上手になりたい。
国語辞典が使えるようになりたい。
今日、Duolingoでゲームについて練習しました。
伝説・でんせつ・legend
息子・むすこ・son
得意・とくい・good at
苦手・にがて・not good at
倒し・たおし・defeat
勝つ・かつ・win
負ける・まける・lose
国語辞典・こくごしてん・Japanese dictionary
最初はグー、じゃんけんポン！
グーはパーに負ける。
彼らのチームは試合に負けましたか？
チョキはパーに勝つ。
このボスのレベルは高すぎる。
私はフランス語が得意ではない。
彼の日本語のレベルはまだ低いです。
July 26, 2021
My Grandma
Last night, I sent jackfruits to uncle W and had dinner with his families. They told me that they would do some snack by themselves today, and invited me to had lunch with them.
Y is uncle's son, who is also my friend since we were child. His son is about 8 months old. His grandma lives with them, who has some difficulty with her listhing. She would give some food to the little. It scared the baby's mother X a lot and X would speak loudly and nervously immediately to ask the grandma not to do so. Grandma just smiled and said: I am tricking him actually.
I am thinking that if my grandma was still alive, what she would do to her great–grandson? But there is no answer to the "if" question.
My grandma died when I was in my twenties. It was the first time I attended a funeral. Before she died, she had been ill for about 3 years. I think she developed Alzheimer disease, because she couldn't remember anything about us in her last year. My brother is a medico at that time, he had the same thought as well.
I was working in another city when grandma was ill. So I had seldom visited her. When I saw her was suffering from the illness, I was so sad that I even was able to watch her for a long time. She couldn't eat anything in her last few months, so she was skeletal. I even wished that she could die soon so she didn't have to suffer from pain any more.
When I heard that she was dead, I was in relief. Months later, I felt sad from time to time. I realised that I don't a grandma any longer. Before I went to school, she took care of me. Then she went back to ancenstral home to live with my grandpa. Did we have a deep relationship? I don't think so. But I would visit her on weekends sometimes. She would tell me something when my grandpa was young and something happened in the small villaged. In the small town, sons or grandsons are always more important than daughts or granddaughters. Some girls are treated badly, they have to do all the chores and are not encouraged or banned to go to school. Because their families think that they will marry finally, then then won't give a pence to their parents any more.
But my grandma was peaceful to everyone, she didn't quarrel with anyone, or I never saw her show her appassionate love to anybody specially. Nevertheless I know that she loved my cousin and brother because they are male. But she didn't hate me like other traditional grandmas did.
As time flies, I miss her less and less. Death means gone, physically and mentally. Memory will fade as well. But hard life never stops.
(I wish that the entry wasn't confused. )
July 26, 2021
10/30 Le petit boulot
Pendant les deux premières années de l'université, j'ai fait un emploi à temps partiel chez mon ancien lycée comme une assistante enseignante. C'est un travail qui consiste essentiellement à modifier ou même écrire les manuels, faire les photocopies et les bureaucraties, et parfois corriger les devoirs. Malgré toutes les bureaucraties répétées, je trouve que c'est un travail génial parce que j'ai appris comment arranger les choses d'une manière organisée et rapide. Cette compétence est très important pour mon pratique dans le domaine odontologie. J'ai aussi découvert d’autre côté de mon ancien école d'un vue d'initiée. En plus, comme j'ai travaillé d'un environnement familière et je pourrais donc voir mes anciens profs très souvent, ç'a soulagé beaucoup de mes inquiétude pendant la première année de l'université. Je pouvais toujours raconter tous mes soucis à ma prof préférée et elle m'a donné beaucoup de conseils utiles. Comme ça, on développait une amité durable.
De plus, comme je devais faire ce boulot une ou deux jours par semaine, j'avais moins de temps pour étudier, mais c’est comme ça que j'ai valorisé plus de mon temps et j'étais plus concentrée sur mes études. Et à la fin de semestre, j'ai travaillé plus dur en préparent l'examen pour monter à l'autre que ce boulot ne m'a empêché pas d'avoir de bonne note. Et ma prof a toujours confiance en moi.
Je continue ce boulot cette année-là mais en ligne parce que ma prof préférée a changé son place de travail. On ne se voit plus si souvent mais je suis contente qu'on garde toujours un bon contact.
July 26, 2021
Über mich
Hallo Freunden, Mein name ist Sanya. Ich bin Indien und seit drei Jahren lerne ich Deutsch. Du könntest denken, dass ich auf dem Niveau c1 oder c2 dürfte. Aber das ist nicht Wahr. Ich bin noch auf niveau B1 und das ist auch nicht Perfekt. Ich mache noch sehr viele Fehler. Aber das behindert mich nicht zum Deutsch zu lernen. Deutsch ist ein sehr shöne sprache aber da ist nicht nur, Deutsche ist die meistens gesprochene sprache in Europe. Es ist mein Traum, die European kultur zum erkunden. Jeden Tag werde ich hier schreiben und ich hoffe das der person, dem meine schreibung liest hatte, werden mir korrigirert. Ich kann sehr gut Englisch sprechen und also Kann ich eure shreibung korrigiert.
July 26, 2021
Traduction d'une chanson
Pardonnez-moi père parce que j’ai vécu tellement de douleur et de souffrance. Est-ce qu' il y a de l'espérance pour moi? Pardonnez- moi père parce que je suis perdue parmi tous les problèmes que j’ai causés. Alors, qu’adviendra-t-il de moi?
Je suis allée à la rivière. Je suis descendue, mais la rivière était sèche. Je suis descendue à la rivière. Et quand j’ai fermé les yeux je vis un démon qui marchait en plein jour. J’ai vécu un démon. Un démon en plein jour. Et il chante Hallelujah à moi.
Je m’allonge jusqu'au matin. Je m’allonge. Je m’allonge jusqu’au matin pour m'emmener. Je vois le démon vêtu de blanc. Il est tombé des cieux cent fois. Sa tristesse ramène telle joie quand il chante Hallelujah à moi. Laissez lui chanter.
Je vis le démon marchand en plein jour, mais il ne m'a pas vécu.
July 26, 2021
Quiet Place 2
I watched the Quiet Place 2 on saturday evening.
The Quiet Place movie is about there are lot of monsters what kill people and the only possibility to escape from that the people have to still in quiet.
The first part was final that on of a man recognised that a specific frequency hurt the monster and they can be killed by it.
According to the second part's trailer I thought this parts will about the previous activities where came these monster from etc. The first section of the movie was about this but this is a sequel for the first part.
July 26, 2021
Hausaufgabe
Umsetzung von Aktivsätzen
Die Jury ehrte die Schriftstellerin mit dem Georg-Büchner-Preis.
Der Georg-Büchner-Preis ist (von der Jury) an die Schriftstellerin geehrt worden.
Viele junge Leute verstehen Ausdrücke aus der ehemaligen DDR nicht mehr.
Ausdrücke aus der ehemaligen DDR sind (von viele junge Leute) nicht mehr verstanden worden.
Polizeibeamte sicherten die Unfallstelle und sperrten die Straße ab.
Die Unfallstelle ist gesichert und die Straße abgesperrt (von der Polizeibeamte) worden.
Die Galerieleitung sicherte die kostbaren Bilder durch ein besonderes Alarmsystem.
Die kostbaren Bilder sind durch ein besonderes Alarmsystem (von der Galerieleitung) gesichert worden.
Der Direktor kündigte dem Sicherheitsbeauftragten nach dem Diebstahl.
Dem Sicherheitsbeauftragten ist nach dem Diebstahlt (von dem Direktor) gekündigt worden.
Ein unbekannter Künstler malte das Bild im 17. Jahrhundert.
Das Bild ist im 17. Jahrhundert (von einem unbekannten Künstler) gemalt worden.
July 26, 2021
О книгах 2
Вы любите читать?
Я обожаю читать! Я получаю огромное удовольствие от книг, и как правило, я читаю каждый день перед сном, и обычно читаю две-три книги одновременно. На выходных, когда уроков нет и у меня более сводного времени, я читаю ещё больше. Иногда я даже прочитаю три книги за два дня.
Какая последняя книга, которая вам понравилась?
Ну, сложно выбрать только одну, но мне очень нравится "Слепой убийца" канадской писательницы Маргарет Этвуд, потому что эта книга очень увлекательная, она передаёт человеческие чувства, и вообще она произвела на меня большое впечатление.
Мне очень нравится "В лесной чаше" ирландской писательницы Тана Фрэнч, потому что сюжет очень запутанный, совсем не предсказуемый, а ещё, персонажи правдоподобные. Книга произвела на меня больше впечатление, и на самом деле, я уже прочитала её от корки до корки три раза.
Какие у вас любимые жанры книг?
Ну, в-первых, я читаю художественную литературу. А во-вторых, в последнее время я читаю очень много книг о психологии, потому что эти отчёты о неврологических заболеваниях восхищают меня. Я всегда заинтересована в мозг, в человеческий разум. Это является огромной тайной, несмотря на научного прогресса этого века.
July 26, 2021
Mono No Aware
Ich mag dieser japanischer Ausdruck. Es bedeutet sowieso "das Pathos der Dinge", was ich eine schöne Idee finde. Es ist wie ein Gefühl der Existenz oder des Erkennens der Vergänglichkeit von allem im Leben. Aber anstatt traurig darüber zu sein, akzeptiert man es und findet Schönheit darin. Ich glaube, es ist ähnlich das Gefühl, das wir haben, wenn wir am Ende einer langen Reise angelangt sind und uns fragen: "Was jetzt?". Oder wie wenn man in tiefer Betrachtung der Natur und all ihrer Veränderungen ist.
July 26, 2021
Irrationality (pt.2)
The description of irrational life in the previous post reminded me of the episode Zima Blue of Love, Death & Robots. Some passages from the original were cut from the episode. Kylie relies on the little robot she carries around, the "Memo Assistant," to save her memories and rely on the robot to make decisions for her according to the parameters of her memories. Kelly forgets to take her robot when she meets with Zima. When Zima asks her if she wants red or white wine, she doesn't know what to do. Zima said, "Doesn't your whole life become a series of predictable feedbacks? Unless you ignore its suggestions." Zima then described the hypothetical Kelly defied the machine and chose red wine instead of white, but unexpectedly found it delicious. This experience of tasting red wine, this conversation, the beauty of the sunset, and the feeling of being slightly drunk brought a very good feeling. Then Zima told to her, "The Memo Assistant certainly will not take such a delightful misadventure as a special case, and should record this special case separately for next time's reference. Such a small deviation does not have any significant impact on its prediction model. Next time, it will still let you choose white wine. But the human memory remembers this exception to the joy of drinking red wine, and marks it as significant." So Zima believes that the unknown and uncertainty of life is more important than being "absolutely right".
July 26, 2021
Babi visite chez moi
Babi est ma grand-mère. Est a quatre-vingt-dix-sept ans. Elle habite à Iowa, mais elle est originaire de Czechoslovakia (maintenant le Czech Republic). Elle est venue me voir pour quelques jours. Nous sommes allés au festival de Czech. Le festival a des danseurs, la musique, et les Kolacky (un type de pâtisserie).
July 26, 2021
July 26, 2021
Combine reading with learning
I really like to read books that I read more than 100 books last year.
I also like to learn English and enjoy finding new ways of studying.
One day, it hit me.
I can combine learning English and reading books at the same time.
It is the way that reading English books in their original language.
I decide to read more than one Englsih book per a month.
It is not easy for me because I haven't read more than four English books per a year.
But it will help me improve my English skill.
July 26, 2021
July 26, 2021
Judo
I watched an Olympic judo match last night. Uta Abe advanced to the women's 52Kg class final. Her match results with foreigners is 59 wins and 1 loss. The only opponent who lost was the opponent in the final match. However, she won the gold medal. After that, her brother, Hifumi Abe, advanced to the finals in the men's 66 kg class. He also won the gold medal. I was really impressed.
July 26, 2021
便法練習２０２１年7月26日
１．部屋は暑いからエアコンをつけてください。
２．図書館は静かだからあそこで勉強しましょう。
３．このコンピューターが高いから買いません。
４．今日は忙しいから明日会いましょう。
５．あの人はきれいから人気があります。
６．明日は試験があるので学生たちは勉強しています。
７．友達がパーディーへ来なかったので木村さんは悲しかったです。
８．バスが来ないので歩いていきます。
９．約束があるので明日は中村に会わないです。
１０．小野さんはテレビがないのでテレビを見ません。
１１．彼は頭がいいのに成績があまりよくないですね。
１２．天気がだいぶ暑いのに、山田さんはエアコンをつけません。
１３．日曜日なのに銀行が開いていますね！
１４．あの人は懸命に働くのに、給料は低いです。
１５．松本さんはお金が多くないのに、高いかばんをよく買います。
July 26, 2021
Mein erste Urlaub mit freunde
Vor dem zwei jahren habe ich mit Daanial, Rifa und Chetan nach Delhi gefahren. Das war meine erste Urlaub mit Freunden. Das war nicht so super aber eigentlich vergesslich. Ich habe meiner zeit mit Daanial genossen. Wir haben nach Delhi mit dem Zug gefahren. Der Zug war am 8 Uhr morgens und wir haben am halb acht auf dem Bahnhof erreichten. Wenn wir im Delhi erreichtet, das wetter war unglaublich heiß. Trotzdem, haben wir einine Sehenswürdigkeiten besuchen und auch leckeres Essen gegessen. Am Ende der Urlaub haben wir sehr müde bekommen.
July 26, 2021
July 26, 2021
0626. Om jag skulle uppfinna en sak,
…skulle det vara en ”all-Weather” tröja. Med min tröja kommer du aldrig att vara kall eller varm längre! Tröjan kan spara varme och kyla, och när du känner dig kall kan du slå på den varma tröjan. Om du känner dig varm kan du slå på den kalla tröjan. Den skyddar dig mot vädret.
July 26, 2021
Archery Men's Team
I'm watching the Olympics, archery men's team matches. The Japanese team defeated the U.S. team, and I was so excited about the game!
When I was doing archery, I studied and tried to improve my archery style based on the representative players in each country. I respected Brady Ellison and Jake Kaminski in the U.S., or Rick van der Ven in the Netherlands. (Does someone know one of them?)
Specifically, I really liked Jake Kaminski. I thought his shooting form was the most beautiful and coolest, and I bought the instruction book that he wrote. Of course, it was written in English and there was no Japanese edition. Thus, I made up my mind to translate it by myself. Because I wasn't good at English so much at that time, I could translate only a part of the book as I was helped by English teachers. Also, I couldn't be a competitive player like him. However, I'm positive the experience motivated me to learn English hitherto.
July 26, 2021
Dia vinte e seis de julho
No inverno de próximo ano, nós viajamos para O Japão outra vez.
Desta vez nós viajamos para região de Kansai, de Osaka, Quioto, Nara e Kobe.
No meu caso, eu gosto de região de Kansai mais do que Tóquio.
Tem muitas culturais tradicionalis.
No inverno aqui, é não muito frio, e não neve.
O tempo estive seco e não choveu.
Em Osaka há muitas lojas e barraquinhas locais e tradicionais.
Tem muitos comidas locais, não é possível comer em outras lugares.
Nesta cidade fui cheia de pessoas e turistas.
Em um dia, nós visitamos o Castelo de Osaka.
No parque exterior do castelo, eu vi flor de ameixa. Fui bonita!
Eu nunca via flor de ameixa real antes.
July 26, 2021
July 26, 2021
Some examples
He is discouraged now. He is getting more discouraged because she keeps intimidating him.
She discouraged him today again. So I said to her, don't intimidate him never again. If you do that again, then I should intimidate you.
Don't let him be discouraged.
And you, Don't be discouraged by the first failure
His mother is trying to discourage him to be a farmer.
I tried all my best to discourage her eat so many sugar.
I am intimidated cause I feel I'm useless in this society.
I keep intimidating myself. I keep discouraging myself.
July 26, 2021