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La nature à Karpilovka
Le paysage à Karpilovka est représenté par des champs et des forêts. Récemment, les forêts commencent à reprendre le terrain grâce à la diminution de l'activité agricole. Les forêts sont composées principalement par des espèces du sapin et du bouleau. À part des champs et des forêts, on a des étangs comme celui-ci. Quand j'étais petit, j'y ai pêché avec mon père mais malheureusement, ce n'est plus possible. Après la chute de l'Union Soviétique, personne a pris soin de cet étang et donc, aujourd'hui il ressemble à un marais avec une végétation dense et une couche de la boue très épaisse.
Aug. 5, 2021
Messi
Je viens d’apprendre que Messi, le meilleur jouer en football, ne va pas signer un nouveau contrat avec le club catalan. Je suis absolument étonné d’en entendre. La rupture de Messi de FC Barcelone n’effectuera pas de cette équipe tout seul, mais la ligue d’Espagne aussi n’arrivera pas à entretenir le même chiffre des spectateurs du foot. Ça va évidemment abîmer les revenus de cette ligue.
En tant que le supporteur fidèle à FC Barcelone pendant pas mal des années qui était témoin de grandes victoires et échecs humiliants de cette équipe que j’adore, il y avait toujours Messi dans la composition de Barcelone. Il n’y a aucune saison que l’équipe des catalans joue pendant grosso-modo 15 ans sans Messi. Messi réfléchit l’espoir de cette équipe. Quand on même pense la ville Barcelone par soi-même, Messi avec le maillot bleu-bordeaux de Barcelona apparaîtra dans les têtes. Je suis très déçu maintenant et rien ne décrit mes sentiments.
Adieu Messi, adieu…
Aug. 5, 2021
Hi guys!
Hi, guys!
I'm here to find language exchange friends.
Here's my self-introduction.
I'm a Korean guy who lives in Seoul.
I work for an internet security company.
I grew up bilingual.
My native languages are Korean and Japanese.
I was born in Korea but spent
most of my childhood in Japan.
I can kind of speak English but I'm always wanting to improve.
And I hope to speak Chinese as well one day.
I like to hang out with friends from overseas
and travel in foreign countries.
I have traveled to Australia, New Zealand, Thailand,
Malaysia, Singapore, Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos,
and the Philippines so far.
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Aug. 5, 2021
Je pars encore en voyage
Je suis en train de préparer pour partir en voyage. Cette fois-ci, moi et mon mari avons prévu d'abord d'aller en village et ensuite d'aller à la montagne, et ça rend le préparatif compliqué parce que plus l'altitude est élevée plus la temperature est basse, et on doit changer de vêtements. En plus il va probablement pluevoir selon la météo, donc on a besoin des vêtements supplémentaires au cas où on est trempée de la pluie. En tous cas, je vais poster quelque chose ici pour garder la suite de la publication.
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Brother Daxiong (one)
Eventhough we had met each other for two summers, I don't know his name. I just heard his friends called him brother Daxiong or maybe Dahong. Every time I go swimming, I will think of him, because it was him that taught me how to swim patiently and professionally without asking for anything.
We met in a community pool. I wanted to learn swimming and have no idea how to start. I asked a few swimmer, an uncle recommended another uncle next to him since he was good at swimming and went swimming here everyday. So I went toward to him and asked him whether he could teach me. He and his wife answered me together that I should learn how to change my breath first. Furthermore, they demonstrated personally and watched me practice for a minute. Then, they swam away. A few minutes later, they came back and were amazed that I was still practicing. They said goodbye to me and left.
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Aug. 5, 2021
Korossol into the Ring 33
I didn't realize she was white before. That what hurts the most, I think. We had been friends since we were twelve; her parents were expats who were trying to find a new way to live, far away from France. I was local, and she was a guest; that how I thought of things. She was my friend. I never had a friend before.
We grew up together, lived in each others house and shared everything. We loved one another. Of that, I'm sure.
When we were fifteen, her parents decided to keep searching their way around the world. She went to Africa. I went to highschool. Alone.
I don't remember anything about this first year except a crushing despair. Life went on.
When she came back, I couldn't go back to the girl I had been. My trust had been betrayed. Never before had I been hurt that much. I was afraid and I think now, kind of feral.
She tried. Oh, how she tried. But we weren't the same girls anymore. Even our lives were separate. She went to a different school, had different friends, talked differently. She still loved me and I her. I was just afraid.
One day, she invited me to her house. Her new home was far from everything, in a neighborhood filled by rich, white people. I never had a reason to go there. Her friend's parent took me, I think it was her birthday and I met her new friends.
They were all white. Rich, white girls, with that drawl that I only knew how to avoid.
I was the only black girl at her birthday. Her guests - and her parents guests - looked at me, wondering what I was doing here.
I never went back. She lived in a world that I hated. I stopped trying and so did she.
Aug. 5, 2021
Diary
Twitter shut down Fleet due to low usage. To be honest, almost no one I follow has used it in the last few months. The people I follow still like to post Stories on Instagram. I have to say that Instagram is indeed better at sharing pictures and videos, while Twitter is better at posting text. But it's true that people now prefer visual information. But Twitter recently added Spaces. Well, it's a function pretty much the same as Clubhouse. Voice Transformer will be added to Spaces in the future. But I'm really curious if there will be many people using Spaces?
Aug. 5, 2021
Día 2- La importancía de los árboles
Basado en un estudio de dos mil quince, tener diez árboles en tu jardín o cerca tu casa te hace sentir siete años más jovén, porque mejora tu salud. Los árboles limpian el aire que respiramos, y nos animan a salir más al exterior. ¡Tenemos tres árboles en nuestro jardín!
Aug. 5, 2021
고쳐주세용 ~~ *하트*
청소년기는 유아기에서 성인기로 넘어가는 아주 중요한 시기이다. 이 시기의 중요한 많은 점 중에 하나는 청소년이 자기가 누구인지 깨닫는 점이다. 자아정체감을 가지려는 마음이 청소년의 성격을 발전시키는 데에 도움을 준다. 자아성찰을 하면서 스스로 가지는 약점과 강점을 알게 되고 더 좋은 사람이 되려면 어떻게 해야 할지를 깨닫게 되는 아주 중요한 시기이다. 또, 앞으로 나아갈 길은 어떤 길인지 결정하기 때문에 청소년기가 중요하다고 할 수 있다. 청소년들이 누구의 말을 잘 듣지 않고 내가 알아서 하겠다는 특징이 가장 흔하다. 자신에게만 의존할 수 있는 믿음에세 부모 말씀과 명령을 그만 따라한다. 그것 뿐만 아니라 새롭고 위험할 수도 있는 경험을 자주 거친다. 그것은 꼭 나쁜 게 아니고 사람 성격에 발전하는 데에 필요하다고 생각한다. 청소년이 될 때까지 들었던 조언과 받았던 교육을 실제로 실천하다고 할 수 있다. 이 시기에서 틀리고 실수하기 마련이다. 이럴 때에는 청소년들이 성인의 도움이 필요하다. 필요해도 도움이 필요하다는 말을 하지 못하는 사람이 많기 때문에 주변 사람들 눈치가 빨라야 한다. 중요한 시기를 거치고 있다는 사실을 알아두고 청소년을 돌보고 하는 행동을 살펴보는 것이 청소년이 잘 성장하는 데에 효과적이라고 생각한다
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In Rainbows
In Rainbows ist das siebte Studioalbum von Radiohead. Es ist etwa lustig, wie wenig Leute über dieses Album zu sprechen scheinen, selbst wenn es Teil einer Pay-What-You-Want-Kampagne war. Lass uns ein bisschen in der Zeit zurückgehen. Radiohead begannen als außergewöhnliche Rockband, sie hatten ihren ersten Hit, "Creep", gleich auf ihrem ersten Album namens "Pablo Honey". Ihr zweites Album namens "The Bends", mein persönlicher Favorit, setzte die Rockwurzeln fort und produzierte viele Songs, an die sich die Leute bis heute erinnern. Dann begann ihre Arbeit ein bisschen experimentell zu werden. "Ok Computer" wurde 1997 veröffentlicht und erhielt viel Aufmerksamkeit für die schrägen Texte und elektronischen Sounds, es war eine neue Ära für Radiohead. Ihre Karriere sah von da an einige Höhen und Tiefen mit der Veröffentlichung von Alben wie "Kid A" und "Amnesiac". Als "In Rainbows" nach einer langen Pause veröffentlicht wurde, sollte es ein großer Erfolg werden. Trotzdem niemand scheint sich an bestimmte Songs von diesem Album zu erinnern. Vergleichen Sie dies mit der letzten Veröffentlichung "A Moon Shaped Pool", die ebenfalls nach einer langen Pause kam, und es gibt einen großen Unterschied. Songs wie "Daydreaming" brachten die Leute wochenlang ins Gespräch. Genau wie "Burn the Witch", obwohl beide Songs viel von ihrem Erfolg eigentlich mit ihren faszinierenden Videos zu tun haben.
Aug. 5, 2021
My Close Friend
My close friend returned to Korea yesterday.
He worked in Italy for 4 years and he gets more higher position in our company.
Since he has the best performance and selected the important employee, I was jealous of him.
But not I deeply cheer him his loyal way that he has the possibility to become a board member.
I also do my best for my own way which is not shiny but it is also a brilliant career.
Aug. 5, 2021
A Gold Medal
Now, a mayor is blowing up because he bit a gold medal without getting permission from a softball player. First of all, it's out of the problem to bite other's property, and it's against the infection control under this situation. He apologized but he is criticizing again because the excuse was "it was my display of affection" and his attitude was dishonest. What a foolish move!
Aug. 5, 2021
戰意：第二部分
我昨晚先想要跟朋友一起玩戰意，但他沒小心睡覺了，所以沒來玩。22:00到了，他不在，所以我就登出去洗澡，但我分心想應用屏幕保護，但沒辦法讓屏幕保護好看，所以我修理很久。大概00:30修好，所以去洗澡，然後看一點YouTube。
我01:30想睡，很愛睏，但外面有一間檳榔店用閃光燈，太亮的，所以我不會睡著，到底就關窗簾，睡好。
因為關窗簾讓歐房很黑，所以我10:00起床了！這麼晚吧！我起床時先覺得時間大概08:00，但是…看手機就會看到了時間真的到10:00，天啊。
我先去洗臉、戴眼鏡片、幫朋友懂一個寫英文email內容什麼意思、還有吃昨晚炒的牛肉花椰菜飯，以後登入戰意、吃昨晚買的芭樂檸檬冰沙、還有跟朋友聊。
在今早玩戰意的會議我累了及頭暈，所以我不知道我在做什麼 哈哈哈 我玩一個野战夺旗是15v15 PVP。我帶大太刀，因為用大太刀會讓我同時亂砍很多人，也是因為我的大太刀提升多次，所以我人物的大太刀技能等級很高。
今早玩過的野战夺旗贏一個金色動章獎勵、五個銀色動章獎勵、還有五個鐵色動章獎勵，因為我有十個討將數、l26討兵數、還有七個助攻。
Aug. 5, 2021
Autour de chez moi à Karpilovka
Ma maison se trouve dans la rue principale du village. Quand on sort de chez moi dans la rue, on ne voit pas de grande chose : la route, quelques maisons et le petit jardin des prunes. À mon avis, il y a plus de choses intéressantes à l'arrière-cour, suivez-moi. En traversant, on voit les traces des activités agricoles. Et voilà, il y a le champ où des tomates, des concombres etc poussent comme des champignons. Et après on a une forêt avec une petite rivière. J'y ai pêché quand j'étais petit. Incroyable, n'est-ce pas ? Par contre, des moustiques et des mouches sont omniprésents.
Demain, on va se balader encore plus loin pour découvrir l'environs.
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