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1. I finished my undergraduate studies a long time ago.
2. I have taken professional training in accounting.
3. I would like to work in the field of accounting.
4. How many brothers and sisters do you have?
5. What city do you live in?
6. Do you know Guinea?
7. How did it go at work today?
8. What are you doing right now?
9. What will you do after this?
10. What did she tell you?
11. How do you like it?
12. what do you think?
13. You're funny!
14. What time do you sleep?
15. What kind of activity is this?
16. I think it is not normal.
17. He did wrong!
18. You'd better...
19. It would be necessary that...
20. I manage.
21. I like nature.
22. I play basketball but I'm not very good at it right now.
23. I would like to learn to swim.
24. Right now it's not a priority.
25. He told me.
26. I like girls.
27. What do you like to eat?
28. I like to fly.
29. What did you want to do?
30. What time is it at your house?
31. How are you doing with your work/sport?
32. I think it's...
33. It's better to...
34. I am satisfied.
35. every time I...
36. That's a mistake on your part.
37. In any case I follow my path.
38. It's unfair!
39. It’s fair
40. But not me!
41. Don't even count on me.
42. It's up to you.
43. I'm at peace.
44. Not even!
45. I don't care!
46. In any case...
47. It's ruined!
48. It's not possible!
49. We'll see together!
50. It's well done!
51. It's great!
52. What level are you at?
53. How was your day/sport?
54. Did you have a good time?
55. I'm waiting until...
56. That's okay!
57. I'm looking for...
58. I didn't understand.
59. Next time/next time.
60. Henceforth.
61. I hope everything goes well.
62. I hope it will be ok.
63. There is insecurity.
64. It's enough/It's enough.
65. I do the dishes.
66. I heat up the food.
67. I throw away the garbage.
68. He jokes/he makes jokes.
69. I've had enough.
70. I wanted to say that...
71. Even if you...
72. They'll say that...
73. It's not about...
Aug. 4, 2021
Здраво на сите!
Jac сум Диjана. Живеам во Русиjа. Многу ja сакам Македонската култура. Сакам да започнам пишувам овде. Лошо знам Македонска граматика, ама посакувам исто така научам повеќе зборови. Учам Макидонски jазик пред 6 месеци.
Се надевам дека го наjдам помошта овде. Исто така би сакала ги наjдам другарките од Македониjа. :)
Aug. 4, 2021
二零二一年八月四日
今天的工作十分累了。我們的任務很複雜，每一個同事覺得他們知道我們應該用什麽辦法，可是因爲問題這麽複雜沒有人理解每一個問題的方面。因此，我現在花我完全的時間在會議跟同事們討論複雜的東西。我很喜歡寫編碼，如果我有很清楚的任務我可以做的話，我很快樂。很複雜的任務很有趣，我喜歡成功很難的任務，可是經常跟同事討論比寫編碼重要，而且我的討論能力比寫編碼不好。這些天讓我很累。然而，跟同事的討論是一個很重要的能力，所以我要改善。這個經歷對我很好。
除了工作，我的生活很幸福，可是我昨天發現了我學了中文比在香港住了多時間，那個想法讓我有點不安。我很喜歡學中文，別誤解我的意思，可是我住在香港的時候比學中文的時候有意義。因爲香港這麽不同這麽激動，我有比較多的當時記憶。
無論那個考慮，我還很期待這個周末。本月是愛丁堡節發生的月。我星期一告訴你了我每年喜歡去愛丁堡節，昨天我跟我的朋友們預定了幾個很令人興奮的表出，所以我現在有具體的活動能期待。這個周末最令我興奮是又看我的從伯明翰的朋友，可是愛丁堡節也會是很好玩。
Aug. 4, 2021
La situation du COVID au Japon
Je regarde les infos à la télé presque tous les jours, mais je ne pense pas que la situation actuelle de COVID au Japon s'y fait bien couvrir. En tant que japonaise qui suis les nouvelles françaises et japonaises, je voudrais essayer d'écrire sur la catastrophe qui se déroule maintenant au Japon.
Récemment, le premier ministre Suga a annoncé que les patients du COVID au niveau moyen devaient rester et se rétablir chez eux. L'annonce signifie qu'il n'y a plus de lits pour les patients japonais du COVID, surtout dans la région Kanto dont l'une des départements est Tokyo. J'ai précisé que c'était les patients « japonais », parce que les athlètes qui sont testés positifs ici au Japon sont hospitalisés sans problème, quel que soit le niveau de gravité des symptoms. Que veut dire alors la gravité au niveau moyen ? Selon les explications du ministère qui s'occupe du domain de la santé, il désigne les symptoms qu'on se sent fatigué quand on respire, qu'on a besoin d'oxygen pour respirer et qu'on observe le pneumonie léger. En plus, La saturation du sang est en dessous de 96%.
Ce qui est effrayent, c'est que la vitesse de dégradation de cette maladie. Plein de patients, les médicines et les infirmiers ont déjà fait des témoignages que l'état se dégénère très rapidement, ce qui explique la raison pour laquelle il doit y avoir des personnes qui occupent les patients. Après être passé par ce niveau, on atteint le niveau le plus grave du COVID, ce qui nécessite le traitement à l'unité des soins intensifs. Si on reçoit des traitements appropriés au niveau moyen, il est plus envisageable qu'on peut échapper à la forme grave. Portant, le gouvernement a décrété qu'il ne préparer rien pour les patients à ce niveau-là. Si leurs symptoms progressent, ils ne peuvent rien y faire mais mourir.
Autre aspect du problème est le nombre de testes à repérer le COVID. Tokyo, où ont lieu les Jeux Olympiques actuellement, recense environ 4.000 patients par jour, ce qui représente environ 40% des patients au total au Japon. Toutefois, le nombre de teste PCR et du teste antigénique est 17.000 au maximum, alors qu'en France 300.000 à 500.000 des tests sont effectués tous les jours. Bien sûr que la France compte plus de patients du COVID, mais c'est bien normal compte tenu du nombre des testes. Quand on considère la taux de positivité à Tokyo, la situation est vraiment grave que ce qu'il paraît.
Il y a des journalistes français qui habitent au Japon et essayent de faire passer ces faits, mais ça a l'air insuffisant vu le contenu de presse actuel à Paris. Je redoute cette situation, surtout à propos de ma mère. Elle a environ 60 ans mais elle travaille tous les jours en prenant le train pour aller au bureau. Si elle contractait le COVID et devait rester chez elle soi-même ? Heureusement elle a déjà fait vacciner avec le schéma complet, mais ça n'assure pas l'immunité à 100 %. J'espère que la situation va s'améliorer, mais ça sera difficile sous la condition que le gouvernement japonais me semble provoquer des cauchemars soi-même afin de ne pas résoudre des problèmes.
Source:
https://www.mhlw.go.jp/content/12404000/000672044.pdf
Aug. 4, 2021
Have you ever been stuck in some terrible weather?
Yes. It's a big rain while I was on the road to go home. The rain came fast. I rode fast to a yard to avoid the rain. A wind blew strong. It thundered. The trees made a sound. The road flooded. I looked at the sky. It was grey and black. I thought about going home early to be safe.
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Aug. 4, 2021
The Carsickness
There were few private cars in my town when I was a child. There were few bus to transport from town to town as well. Therefore, I seldom took a bus. I was carsick when I took a bus occasionally.
I can remember clearly that I visited my little anutie who lived in the near town. I went there by bus with my mother. I vomited in the bus. When I came back and got off the bus, I heard that my mother spoke aloud to remind me that I had lost my way to home. I was about 8 years old at that time.
When I was 14, I got the chance to take an English contest in the city. My headmaster drove a van to carry us there. In case of being carsick, I took a pill before getting on the van. The headmaster drove very fast, but I felt nothing uncomfortable. I thought the pill had woeked. The contest began soon which would last two hours. I kept answering the paper when I suddenly woke up in the halfway. It was so weird that I would fall asleep when I was taking the contest. What was worst that I hardly stayed awake in the last hour. As a result, I couldn't complete my paper. I had no idea why this would happen. A few days later, I realized that it was the pill. I had never taken the pill before. Some people told me that the pill would work, so I took it. I forgot to ask when to take the pill and how long it would work. So I fell asleep in two hours after taking the pill. Without surprise, I failed in the contest.
Sooner, I went to high school. I began to live in the dormitory and went home by bus about once a month. Several months later, I got rid of carsickness unexpectedly.
As there are more and more cars in the town, I seldom take a bus. Thus when I went to the city by bus, I got sick again.
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Aug. 4, 2021
13/30 Hong Kong et Le Grande Bretagne - 1940 - 1997
Pour comprendre le Hong Kong aujourd'hui, il y a une période qu'il faut absolutement connaître : c’est la période entre 1841-1997 où Hong Kong était la colonie britannique. C'était le moment où Hong Kong est véritablement entrée dans la modernité. Auparavant, Hong Kong n'était qu'un petit porte de pêche mais elle est désormais devenu une des villes qui ont les plus grandes PIBs du monde. Alors, on va voir comment la tutelle britannique a changé le visage de la société.
Dès la colonization britannique, Hong Kong était devenu un port de commerce important dans l'sud-est d'Asie grâce aux avantages du site et à l'ouverture du marché. Ensuite, pendant le guerre civil en chine (1948-1949), beaucoup de chinois s'est évadé du continent avec leur argent à Hong Kong. Donc, il y avait une énorme quantité de l'argent et de la main d'œuvre coulant dans le marché locale. Par conséquent, les industries se développaient rapidement dans les années 50-70s.
La provision d'éducation gratuit et d’appartement à bas prix, l'amélioration du système santé... ont démarré après les émeutes de 1967. Ces émeutes avaient commencé sous l'influence de la révolution culturelle du continent. Aggravant par les traitements inégaux entre les occidentaux et les locaux, ils ont lutté contre le capitalisme du gouvernement britannique. Mais comme le mouvement a recourt à la vraie violence, la perception des Hongkongais envers les communistes est devenu tellement négative et les émeutes s’arrêtaient au fur et à mesure. Cependant, le gouverment britannique réalisait que pour résoudre les conflits de la societé, il faut d'améliorer la vie quotidienne de citoyens. C'est pourquoi qu'il a pris ces mesurés et Hong Kong est enfin entré dans la modernité.
Grâce à l'avantage du site, l'argent d'immigrés et le capitalisme, au sortir de la colonisation britannique de 1997, HK est devenu une de villes asians les plus riches.
Aug. 4, 2021
Changing My Exercise
I really liked hiking, so I used to go to the mountains once a month when I was at 30s.
After getting injured, my backbone has not been good condition.
That's why I don't go to mountains anymore.
Instead, I have been learning swimming for training my back muscles.
I try to go to the swimming pool every day, and it is now my daily routine.
By swimming, I don't need to consider my back pain anymore.
Additionally, I don't get a wet during exercise.
Now I like swimming than hiking.
Swimming is not an exercise, but it is for survival.
Aug. 4, 2021
Véhicules à Karpilovka
Le choix de véhicules est un peu particulier à la campagne. À part des automobiles, on y trouve des tracteurs et des moissonneuse-batteuse. J'espère que je n'ai pas besoin de vous expliquer la fonction de chaque machine. Je veux juste ajouter qu'on utilise jamais un tracteur tout seul mais surtout avec les accessoires comme "un seau", "un chariot" et des autres outils quels noms je ne connais pas même en russe. Demain je vais vous emmener dehors de la ferme pour vous montrer la nature autour de chez moi.
A plus !
Aug. 4, 2021
Diary
My grandmother fell this morning. She is in her 80s, and she couldn't get up. Only grandpa lives with grandma, so he called us. I rushed over with my uncles and aunts. One of the uncles carried her to the bed. Luckily she was conscious. But she didn't say a word that morning. She was old, deaf and speechless, but she could talk before. We were very worried about her. But since no one had time to take care of the elderly, we sent her to the nursing home first. I hope she will get better soon.
Aug. 4, 2021
Ein gruseliges Experiment
Jeder hat schon einmal über das Gedankenexperiment von Gehirn im Tank gehört. Wenn unser gesamtes Wesen auf die elektrischen Impulse in unserem Gehirn reduziert werden kann, könnten dann nicht alle unsere Erfahrungen nur eine Simulation sein?
Und unser Körper eine Illusion, die sich ein Gehirn vorstellt, das elektrische Impulse von einer äußeren Quelle empfängt?
Schwer zu glauben? Es wird einfacher, wenn wir selbst das Experiment zu replizieren scheinen. Im Jahr 2019 entdeckte ein Wissenschaftler in Kalifornien namens Alysson Muotri (fast ein Namensvetter) Gehirnwellenmuster in im Labor gezüchteten Gehirnorganoiden. Diese Arten von Mustern werden bei Säuglingen mit dem Gedächtnis oder dem Träumen in Verbindung gebracht. Das Experiment ging weiter, bevor es heruntergefahren wurde. Ich denke, es ist sehr beängstigend, wie diese Art von im Labor gezüchteten Organen diese Muster aufweisen können.
Aug. 4, 2021
Aug. 4, 2021
Lettre
Ttire: Écrivez une lettre à votre employeur pouor l'informer de votre désir de démissioner, expliquez-lui les raisons de votre décision.
Je regrette de vous informer de quitter cette entreprise. En effet, je dois quitter la région pour visiter ma mère parce qu'elle est malade et elle est trop vielle de prendre soin de lui-même. Cette entreprise m'a donné beaucoup des souvenirs joyeux, et j'espère qu'elle aura une bonne future.
Aug. 4, 2021
Deal Breaker
The other day, I learned "a deal breaker" which means a critical disadvantage on negotiation. At first, I thought a deal breaker is an agent who underhands in order to break a deal down. Besides, this word reminded me of "Imagine breaker" which is the name of special ability in a light novel.
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Journal
Wow, you are so careful. My bike does have a small timer and it looks cute. It can show speed, total riding time and mileage and so on. So far I have ridden nearly 600 kilometers and the maximum speed is about 25 kilometers per hour. You mentioned the handlebar. Yes, it looks very strange to ordinary ones. It's called butterfly handlebar because my bike is a travel bike. The benefits of butterfly handlebar are that you can change your hand to different positions so that you don't get tired easily.
I took videos with my left hand holding a handlebar and my right hand holding my phone while I was riding. You may get scared when you hear that, but no worries because I always slow down the speed and take it more carefully. You know what? When I was a teenager, I always didn't handle handlebar while riding, and that was so exciting. Even now I still can do it, but not the butterfly handlebar. This kind of handlebar is not suitable for doing that. It should be ordinary handlebars.
Do you dare to do that?
Aug. 4, 2021
Journal
I do think that cities in China at the same level as mine are all manicured. After more than forty years' reform and opening up, China developed rapidly, no matter whether cities or countryside, they changed a lot. Of course, there are special city management personnel to do that. I don't think there are many English names under Chinese names in every store, apart from a few famous brand chains. My city is just a normal prefecture-level city with about 1,500,000 population. We almost can't see foreigners on the street, but I don't think that stores without English names could affect foreigners getting around my city because if they come to my city they will have their translators or they may know some simple Chinese, so we don't need to worry about that too much. By the way, Anhui Province has sixteen prefecture-level cities and China has 333 prefecture-level cities. My home city, Fuyang, is just one of them.
Aug. 4, 2021
Journal
Speaking of the Chinese education system, there have been many arguments about it for a long time. Some people think that education in China is exam-oriented education and it has many disadvantages, especially for people who are not good at taking exams, but they have a strong practical ability or create ability, but they can't give a set of selection systems that are better than 高考. Although 高考 really has certain disadvantages, in contrast, it seems that it is still a fair system for selecting talents at present, so we have been using it all the time. In fact, I do hear some different opinions on the Chinese education system. They were like: although Chinese students could get the best score in many exams, they wouldn't do invention and creation in their life, not like some West Country students, especially in the US. They may not have a good score in their examinations, but they are able to make great achievements in their rest of life and the number of Nobel Prize winners can support this.
Aug. 4, 2021
Aug. 4, 2021
私の国の有名な人
ソン・トゥンM-TPはベトナムでは一番有名な歌手です。
彼が作った曲には、有名なものがたくさんあります
音楽、特に本物の空を愛する若者にとって、ソン・トゥンM-TPという名前は間違いなく見知らぬ人ではありません. ソン・トゥンはまだ25歳ですが、ベトナムの音楽市場で多くの有名な曲で彼の能力をすでに示しています. したがって、この男は本当に才能のあるベトナムの音楽アーティストと見なされるに値する
わずか25歳ですが、このハンサムな歌手はすでに一連の有名なヒット曲を作成しています .これらの曲に言及するだけで、人々はすぐにソントゥンM-TPを想像するでしょう .特に知られているのは「Nơi này có anh ] です. 古いですが、老人が聞いてもきれいな曲です。
自分の才能できれいな曲を作成するだけではなく、いろいろな音楽賞を受賞しました。
2014年にChàng trai năm ấy という映画に参加した時に映画の分野をチャレンジしました.
この映画はメディアやファンから大きな注目を集めました。ソン・トゥンM-TPは、歌への情熱に加えて、作曲、ピアノ演奏、ダンスも非常に得意です。彼は多くのファンに愛されているです。ベトナムのファンだけでなく、外国のファンも彼をとても気に入っています
Aug. 4, 2021
The Second Dose of Moderna Vaccine
I'm suffering from mild fever coming from the second dose of Moderna vaccine. Our company allows employees to take a special leave so that I stay at home today. All of my colleagues who got vaccinated yesterday also seem to be absent from work. Some people could have severe side effects such as headache or dizzy which realize me how potent the vaccine is. However, we have to keep taking care of ourselves because the vaccine are less effective to delta variant. Even so, two doses of vaccines are able to neutralize COVID-19 symptoms, if not prevent infection itself.
I'm really worried about my father having been coughing all day. Given his age and unhealthy lifestyle, he would be vulnerable to infection and should get vaccinated ahead of me. The sudden rise of COVID-19 cases in Tokyo are depriving residents of opportunities to receive healthcare in a hospital. Even if you were suffer from common diseases other than COVID-19, you have to stand the pain and fear for getting worse. What all of us hope for must be the end of COVID-19 pandemic.