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Freedom of expression.
Nowadays, it is so difficult express yourselves without the risk rude comments. It is difficult finding people with reals arguments about a topic, without the needs of winning a debate at all cost. It is strange finding people that just want to learn more and share knowledge.
Freedom of expression is a right, but some people forget the responsibility whit this one. Many people excuse their misbehavior with the argument of “ The freedom of expression” is their right and everyone should respect that, but, do not matter the feelings and rights of others too?
When I was a child, my school and parents told me that my rights end when the rights of others begin. That means that my rights should not do damage over others unfairly. Yes, you can express yourself and have a different perception, but, you do not have right of imposing your ideas with comments disrespectful that does damage in the integrity of people or stop the free expression of others.
In conclusion. We have to use our free expression for building a better world and it do not to become a hell in the earth with every comment. We need to learn how express ourselves with objectivity and respect for the difference. The internet is not an excuse for forgetting moral and ethics to express ourselves.
Aug. 11, 2021
L'école de langue
Avant que je sois venue en France, je pensais suivre les cours de français à l'école de langue. Mais malheureusement, à cause du COVID, j'ai abandonné l'idée de le faire à ce moment-là. Pourtant, je peux recevoir un certain somme de subvention par l'entreprise de mon mari, et si je ne l'utilisais pas, ça serait un pur gâchis. Il me reste seulement 1 an et demi avant que je sois rentrée au Japon, donc j'ai commencé a chercher l'école de langue aujourd'hui.
Il y en a un que je voudrais bien aller et dans lequel j'avais une fois décidé d'en prendre les cours, mais leurs cours n'auront lieu qu'en ligne en raison de la situation sanitaire, au moins pour l'instant. Je pense que les cours en présentiel sont meilleurs, parce qu'il y a plus d'information disponible quand on est dans un même espace pour communiquer, alors j'ai l'intention de faire plus de recherches pour trouver une école qui me convient. Et si c'est possible, je voudrais faire des visites aux cours pour mieux connaître l'ambiance et les profs de chaque école.
À cause de la limite de mon budget, ça ne durera que trois mois, mais ça me coûte assez cher. Je doit être prudente pour la choisir afin de profiter bien de cette occasion à travailler davantage.
Aug. 11, 2021
Aug. 11, 2021
Aug. 11, 2021
Como agua para chocolate
Anoche vi una película que se llama "Como agua para chocolate". Es basado en un libro del mismo nombre, de una autor mexicana. El libro es uno que mucha gente recomienda para los aprendices de español. Se trata de una familia mexicana que vive en un rancho en México (no sé cual parte). Cuando los eventos de la historia toma lugar, la madre de la familia es una viuda - su esposo se murío repentinamente. La madre tiene tres hijas; y el menor de ellas se llama Tita, la protagonista de la historia. En la familia, hay una tradición en que la hija más joven es forzada cuidar a su madre cuando la madre se hace mayor, y por eso la hija no puede casarse. Tita se enamora con un joven (se llama Pedro), y tiene muchas ganas de casarse con él, pero su madre lo prohibe, y Pedro se casa con una de las hermanas de Tita en vez de ella (él cree que en esta manera, puede estar más cercano a Tita). Ellos tiene un bebe, y se mudan a Texas, pero el bebe muere. Tita pelea con su madre sobre el bebe y el destino que su madre escojo para ella, y se va del rancho, yendo a quedarse con un médico gringo que vive en Texas. El gringo eventualmente le pide a casarse, y ella dice que si, pero luego cambia de parecer y decide que no va a casarse con él. La madre se muere cuando unos bandidos atacan el rancho, y Tita regresa para vivir en el rancho. Tita, Pedro, y su hermana viven allí por muchos años, mientras el amor entre Tita y Pedro nunca se muere. Su hermana se muere de una enfermedad, y después Tita y Pedro toma la oportunidad y hacen amor una ultima vez más.
Aug. 11, 2021
Aug. 11, 2021
二零二一年八月十一號
我的工作越來越累。人際關係很複雜。我開始這個工作以前，我以爲我的電腦科學能力最重要的能力，可是現在我發現了跟同事們一起好好工作比寫很了不起的程序重要。因爲我的隊的工作很重要很緊急，我們最近總是努力。我們有會議的時候，我感覺我們不像隊員一起試著解決問題，恰恰相反我們像敵人試著得到第一名。這件事情讓我很累，可是因爲我注意到了，我就可以找辦法幫助。我跟一個其他的同事正在討論問題。我真的想讓我們在一起美好工作，所以我不想怪一個人。如果我想抱怨我記得幾個我同事們做錯的事，可是吵架不會改善情況。我不關心讓別人道歉我，我只想讓我們再是朋友。
工作外面，最近發生了很多很使我興奮的事。最使我興奮的事是昨天我的新室友來跟我住。我上個室友跟他的女朋友上個星期離開我家搬去他們自己的傢。只有原因他跟我住是他的女朋友以前還沒有畢業了，可是她幾個月以前畢業了，所以他們想要自己的房子。我的上室友告訴我他要離開的時候，我有點擔心。我在格拉斯哥沒有很多朋友，而且我明年打算搬去台灣，所以我不想跟我沒認識的人一起住，而且我想到我已認識的朋友不會願意跟我一起住這麽短的時間。其實，我不要擔心。我問過我最好的朋友，他的工作完全是遠程的所以他不能在具體的地方住。他愿意跟我一起做，所以我現正在這裏有我最好的朋友。：）他還在整理他的東西。昨天，我們跟他的爸爸一起去一家壽司餐廳慶祝。我搬去這個傢的時候，我也去一同的餐廳慶祝，所以我感覺去那裏很特別。
Aug. 11, 2021
Mein Traum von Jessica
Ich hatte einem Traum heute Nacht. Er war über Jessica. Jessica war meinem "crush" in der Gymnazium. Ich habe sie 4 Jähren geliebt. Aber sie hat ein Freund jetzt. In den Traum hat sie mir gesagt, dass sie mit ihm getrennt hat. Sie hat mir gesagt, dass sie mit mir sein will. Sie mag mir. Sie war so hübsch. So hübsch. Sie hat blonde Harre, blauen tiefen Augen und Lächeln als eine Fee. Es war einem Schonen Traum, trotzdem habe ich ein ¨crush¨fur sie nicht mehr.
Aug. 11, 2021
Aug. 11, 2021
Предложения 8/11
Вчера я научила сестру полезной фразей на русском языке: “я ненавижу твою глупую собаку”. (Эта фраза – из текста песни.)
Когда исследователь нашёл Френкенштейн, он был чуть живой.
Когда привезли единственного пережившего катастрофе в больницу, в нём едва теплилось толика жизни.
Собака последовать белок и гоняется за птицами...но она никогда их лоймает!
Я многому учусь благодаря этим книгам.
Я многое беру из этих книг.
Мне никогда не надоест книги Гарри Поттер. Я вернусь к ним вновь и вновь, и всегда нахожу там что-то интересного и нового.
Aug. 11, 2021
Aptis General Exam (advanced level)
Hello, I am going to do an English exam and I have to write a informal email:
Hi Jose,
How are you? I hope you are fantastically! What do you think about the email from cooking club? I am very sad because I looking forward to attend the International Food Party. On the other hand, I don't seem rigth to me that they can't offer a refund on the tickets.
They should give us back money , so we need it because of the actual economy situation.
Let me know what you think about this problem.
Alejandro
Aug. 11, 2021
A wonderful Night
It has been raining for about half a month. It was cloudy and cool at dusk, it was a good time to exercise. To play basketball or ride a bike? I thought a while and decided to ride. I wanted to connect with the nature.
There were a few people having a walk as well. Wind was blowing softly. Birds were either flying in the sky or jumping on the road. Sevaral bamboo branches had been bending down with drops like a rainbow. After I left the town, there wasn't anyone in the field. What I saw and heard were the nature itself. It was so peaceful that I was delighted.
After coming back, I ate a half frozen watermelon when reading novel. I was so full and satisfied. Then I played drums and made a small progress.
What a wonderful night!
Aug. 11, 2021
Forgot to Turn Off a Tap
I sometimes forget to turn off a tap tight and, after a while, I realize water is dripping. This July, a teacher opened a tap to fill a pool for swimming class. The swimming class was postponed because of bad weather, and the teacher didn't turn off and check the tap because he thought another one had done. After seven days, it was found that the tap had been opened. In this incident, water, which corresponds to 15 pools, was wasted and it cost 24,600 dollars extra.
Aug. 11, 2021
Aug. 11, 2021
Trying To Find An One Goal
These days, I happened to come across a book on habit, which is about focusing on one goal for my life.
Actually, I have been trying to do so many things to achieve.
For example, working to make new product, learning English, exercising for preventing my back pain, practicing a musical instrument and so on.
The book said, selecting one goal which is based on my favorite and my pros.
I know what are my favorite things such as reading books, learning something.
However, I don't know what is my pros.
I might not be able to know my strength.
I have to search myself to find out my one goal for my life continually.
Aug. 11, 2021
Aug. 11, 2021
攀岩
Alex Honnold 在没有任何绳子或其他的安全设备的情况下，徒手攀爬了高达3000英尺的垂直山崖，这个高度相当于三个重叠着的埃菲尔塔。 对于一般的凡人来说，即使有绳子，全世界有能力攀爬这个登山路线的人屈指可数，而且在攀爬的过程中，还会手滑抓不稳支点而掉下很多次。Alex 战胜了人类与生俱来的恐惧和生存本能，在凶险的悬崖上保持冷静，每个动作都是好几个月精心预算的成果，执行起来却只用短短几秒钟就过去了，上下的支点连贯起来，Alex 象水一样灵活，但向上逆流让人看着觉得这肯定是违反自然规律。Alex的一位也是精英攀岩者的好朋友解释说，为了成就这种壮举，相当于一个专业运动员在奥运会拿到金牌，需要表现得完美，一旦失手他就死定了。可是Alex有不一样的看法。他说他生活的意义在于追求完美， 《这是你的道路，你要以完美为依据走这条路》。当他的命完全依靠脚下的几粒凹凸不平而产生摩擦力的岩石的时候，他反而觉得他的身体和岩石之间的附着力有增强，也觉得自己有更真切的存在感，好像他的感官都更敏锐了。
Aug. 11, 2021
Kaleidoskop
Wir haben ein Kaleidoskop in der Lab und ich wollte immer lernen wie genau es funktioniert. Es ist eigentlich ganz simpel, du hast wahrscheinlich schon einmal bemerkt wie zwei Spiegel zusammen in einem Winkel viele Reflexionen desselben Bildes zeigen können. Im Inneren des Kaleidoskops befinden sich drei Spiegel in einem Winkel, die schönen Muster, die man sieht, sind das Ergebnis der Reflexion der bunten Steinchen am anderen Ende der Röhre. Der dynamische Effekt war etwas so ein Mysterium für mich, aber es ist wirklich nur das Ergebnis der Steinbewegungen. Es schien nicht so, als ob die Erklärung so simpel sein könnte, weil die Muster so symmetrisch und schöne sind, aber es ist einfach so. Das Wort Kaleidoskop selbst stammt aus dem Griechischen und bedeutet so viel wie "Beobachtung schöner Formen".
Aug. 11, 2021
Un artiste francophone en dehors de la France
Je no connais pas beaucoup d'artistes francophones, ni de la France ni d'ailleurs. Donc, je vais partager une chanson assez connue, qui représente deux (!) pays francophones en dehors de la France.
La chanson dont je parle c'est «Ne Partez Pas Sans Moi» de Céline Dion. Cette chansons représente à la fois la Suisse et le Canada.
Elle représente la Suiss parce qu'elle était écrit par deux compositeurs suisses: Atilla Şereftuğ and Nella Martinetti. En fait, c'est la chanson proposé par la Suisse à l'Eurovision 1988.
Le raison dont cette chansons représente le Canada aussi est plutôt évidant: Céline Dion et une des artistes québécois les plus célèbres du monde.
Le performance de Céline Dion à l'Eurovision 1988: https://youtu.be/w6b7BHGkKQA?t=83
Aug. 11, 2021
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As lojas deveriam vender jogos violentos para os menores?
Os jogos cream um espaço para exercitar a criatividade. Temos visto uma e outra vez como a indústria nos tem fornecido jogos ricos em diversidade ambiental, carácteres e narrativas, deixando-nos escapar do mundo real, ao menos por umas horas.
Não obstante, os jogos violentos têm preocupado muito os pais, que geralmente fazem alusão à banalização dos atos violentos nos tais jogos, que por sua vez têm inspirado os jovens a cometer tiroteios nas escolas. Foi realizado um sem-fim de debates, mas parece que nenhum órgão parlamentário pode acordar numa solução satisfatória.
Mesmo assim, acho apropriada a venda dos jogos violentos para os menores, sempre que houver as medidas preventivas. Por exemplo, os menores devem presentar uma ficha que demostre que têm as faculdades mentais para absorver conteúdo com tal grau de brutalidade. Em termos dos vendedores, devem colar uma etiqueta que separe os jogos com conteúdo potencialmente sensitivo, para os pais fazerem uma decisão informada ao comprar um presente natal.
Tal vez os desenvolvedores devam considerar se a produção dos jogos violentos valer a pena no futuro, visto que a ênfase recente na saúde mental faz cada vez menos rentáveis os jogos que podem causar transtornos mentais. Pode-se observar que, nos últimos anos, a indústria está produzindo mais os jogos "indie", os quais possibilitam um ambiente tranquilo com música ligeira e gráficos simples, para o pessoal puder divertir-se sem estresse.
Aug. 11, 2021
이사
어제는 우리 가족이 새로운 집을 열는 열쇠를 받았다! 어렸을 때는 우리 부모님이 집을 사기 위해 필요한 만큼의 돈이 없는데, 오랫동안 돈을 모으고 있고 마침내는 필요한 만큼의 돈이 있다. 그래서 참 큰 집을 샀다. 이 집 안에 큰 거실, 밝은 온실, 널찍한 부엌과 4개 침실 다 있고 정원이 엄청 커서, 우리 집 개가 뛰어다닐 공간 많다. 커도 잠시 후에 증축 건물 첨가 하겠다.
그런데 꾸미려고 해서 어제 열쇠를 받아도 20일까지 이사를 안 할 것인다. 그리고 이번 주에는 청소하고 페이느트를 칠하고 꾸미할 거라서 이사할 때는 우리 첫 집이 깨끗하며 아름답겠다. 생전 처음으로 자심의 침실이 있어서 무척 신이 난다.
Aug. 11, 2021
Some sentences with new idioms
1) I have to be there tomorrow, rain or shine! My mom was hospitalized two days ago. 2) Nowadays people believe that writing and publishing books are not rocket science. On one hand, it is good, but on the other - how many of those book might interest you? 3) I noticed a girl stealing candies when I was visiting a grocery store. But I let her off the hook. I recalled myself and some of my classmates doing the same just for fun many years ago. 4) So many things have drastically changed since the pandemic hit. I can't wrap my head around it. 5) My sister and her husband are still head over heels for each other. I'm happy that at least some people in the world might experience something like that. 6) Keep me posted on how things will develop in the upcoming days. I can't be with you, but I cross my fingers. 7) Your kids will grow up before you know it. Usually it happens at railway speed. 8) The Chinese language is one of those languages that are really complicated, but I'm trying to get the hang of it. 9) What you say here, on this page, is all over the map. I think, you should review it once again to get it more comprehensible. 10) It ruffles my feathers when my neighbor begins to drill walls. I'm curious how long it will take him to finish his renovation.
Aug. 11, 2021
Jumping rope 1000
Few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.
Actually few weeks ago I tried once.
That time I jumped almost a hour.
I was so tired for next two days.
So, this time I only jumped about half hour.
Because I want to keep doing that for the whole week.
At first I don’t have any “direction”.
I just do some forward jumping than backward jumping…
As long as I can sweat a lot.
Last night I change style a little.
Instead doing both forward and backward style.
I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute berak)
Feels great!
Aug. 11, 2021
He Lost His Temper
He lost his temper and was seething with anger. Everyone was looking down and dared not to say a word. He was bitterly disappointed about this failure in Cuba. There had been amounting disappoint over his performance during the last three months, along with condemnation of him. His mood was a sharp contrast compared with it three months ago when he newly got married. The happy couple enjoyed blissful happiness and everyone wished them lasting happiness. Well, happiness doesn’t last, if he had known it. He had no choice but to terminate the operation. He just didn’t know he had to pay a large amount of money for his impetuosity, which was the first time ever in his family.
Aug. 11, 2021
Heian Jingu
According to the weather forecast, it will rain for a week from tomorrow, so I rode my motorcycle to Heian Jingu in Kyoto this morning.
There will be the autumnal rain front over Japan. Usually, the autumnal rain front appears in September. The summer may be over.
Here are the two photos that I upload to Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CSafeaxJpXy/