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Trois paradoxes sur les habitants de mon pays (l'ÉU)
1. Ici, la science médicale est extrêmement avancée et les personnes qui ont de l’argent peuvent recevoir un niveau des soins médicaux que d’autres pays ne produisent pas. Pourtant les services de santé pour la population générale ne sont pas assez disponible ni de grande qualité.
2. Aux États-Unis, le travail rythme la vie quotidienne pour tous. Les américains doivent y donner la priorité donc ils se sentent toujours stressés. Le secteur de « self-care » fait gagner beaucoup d’argent pour les entreprises qui en profitent.
3. Pas mal de gens s’opposent aux avortements et pensent que le gouvernement doit les interdire. Pourtant la loi ne donnent aucunes bénéfices que les parent pourraient utiliser pour payer la garde d’enfants ni aucuns jours de congé pour donner naissance.
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thanks for showing my mistakes
Would you prefer to take courses taught by instructors with you have already had other classes or would choose to take courses with teachers you have never taken before?
Increase their knowledge is essential to achieve goals. Attending school is the best way to do it. Professors have a great responsibility with each of their scholars. Selecting the best educator for each person is an important decision. Some people preferred to choose classes with usual teachers. Others like to attend classes with different instructors. From my perspective, I disagree with the statement. I think it is more significant to pick classes with other teachers rather than with known ones because bodies can adapt to modern styles and motivate to develop their knowledge.
First, taking subjects with other educators can be challenging. It takes time to learn and readjust to their rules and teaching style. Each faculty member is unique, so having an open mind personality helps students. For instance, when I was in my first high school year, most of my tutors were unfamiliar. My friend told me, my chemist instructor was a very demanding professor. I was scared about that class. Moreover, I decided to concentrate on all the rules and each part of the projects and assignments. Consequently, this helps me adjust well and follow the requirements. I learned that even with a strange teacher, I can learn a new technique. Therefore, I suggest taking classes with other professors can help to adjust to different situations in life.
Second, attending a group with a different instructor motivates individuals to make their best. Students want to leave a good impression on the tutor. Usually, this can strengthen the incentive in most of the undergraduates. For example, when my sister was at college, she likes to give their best to keep her scholarship. When she takes a subject with a strange instructor, she introduces her to the educator to show an interest in the subject. When she doesn’t follow something, she always requests the lecturer a second explanation. All these actions support and gain her incentive to develop their knowledge. As a result, teachers value her effort and recognized it. Thus, I advise that keeping a constant effort can motivate people to gain knowledge.
In essence, I strongly disagree that it is better to choose groups with familiarized tutors rather than subjects with different instructors. This is because of two reasons: one, scholars can learn to readjust to new teaching styles and other is that mantain motivation can enhance their education.
Sept. 9, 2021
Cibo: fattore culturale e sociale (tradotto dallo spagnolo)
Il cibo, come la lingua, esprime la cultura di chi l’utilizza, è depositaria delle tradizioni e dell’identità di un gruppo. È un fenomeno molto diffuso oggi, che si verifica nel panorama alimentare ed è un processo tipico del postmodernismo a cui il cibo è soggetto.
I piatti servitti non sono solo “ buoni da assaporare”, ma diventono “deliciosi da mangiare e belli da vedere”, e questo accade attraverso tecniche di preparazione che rendono il loro aspetto particolarmente sorprendente e meraviglioso.
Un esempio è quello delle sculture di cioccolato, o quello delle salsicce o del burro che dominano i cibi freddi delle grandi catene alberghiere. La tavola diventa, quindi un luogo di godimento estetico oltre che di gusto.
Il cibo, perciò, più che essere gustato con la bocca e la lingua, si apprezza con gli occhi e con l’anima. L’antropologa Mary Douglas, ha sottolineato l’analogia tra il cibo e il codic comunicativo, che coinvolge tutti i 5 sensi, dal gusto, che è il senso implicito alla vista con tecniche di rappresentazione del cibo (come la fotografia) che si stanno diffondendo sempre più nella nostra società e adatto al consumo.
Come codice, il cibo ci fornisce informazioni sul suo ruolo, stato sociale, età, clase e ordine nella gerarchia sociale. Il cibo, infatti, ha parole quasi come un sistema linguistico fatto di prodotti e componenti.
Queste parole sono organizzate secondo regole grammaticali molto precise e con lo stesso ordine seguito nelle ricette e nei menu.
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6 Millionen
Wusstest du, dass mehr als 6 Millionen Deutschen nicht richtig lesen und schreiben können? Der Zahl hat mich wirklich beeindruckt. Man würde erwarten, dass den europäischen Ländern fast ein 0% erreichen würden. Glücklicherweise sinkt der Zahl dank der Politik der Bundesregierung. Nicht richtig lesen hat große Wirkungen in Analphabeten. Sie sind zuverlässig und finden leider große Barrieren, wenn sie ein Job suchen. Man nimmt wirklich diese kleinen Fortschritte als gegeben an.
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Greeks and Buddhism
Is Buddhism still a major religion in Japan? There are many statues of Buddha in Japan. It is quite interesting that the image of Buddha everyone recognizes is of Greek origin.It's known that the Greek settlers that came with Alexander the Great built the Bactriam Empire in what is today Afghanistan. Many of them converted to Buddhism and blended their culture with their new religion. So they madee the first human representation of Buddha using the likeness of the Greek god Apollo as model. That could mean that Greeks have indirect influence over Japan as this country would embrace buddhism years later.
I guess it'd be far-fetched to conclude that the Buddha statues in Japan are , in a way, depictions of the Greek god Apollo.
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09/09/2021 La casa de Leo
Mi amigo, mi alma gemela Leo Messi me invitó a su casa para el fin de la semana. La invitación era un regalo para mi 14 cumpleaños. No podía rechazar la oportunidad para ver esta lujosa casa.
La casa estaba situada en la riviera francesa, a 8 kilómetros de Marsella, en las afueras. Necesitábamos 5 minutos para caminar a la playa con arena blanca. Leo tuvo un yate muy lujoso aquí.
El edificio tenía 2 plantas muy amplias. Había 7 habitaciones de otros tamaños en cada planta. Las habitaciones de lado del mar tenían terrazas grandes con tumbonas y sombrillas. Además, había una azotea muy moderna en el techo del edificio.
Todas las paredes estaban decoradas con otros cuadros de Picasso y Rembrandt. Había grifos de oro en todos los cuartos de baño en la casa. Estaba verdadero chocante.
Me gustaba la casa de Leo porque la ofrecía vistas del mar muy maravillosas. Además era diferente a todas las casas que he visto.
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Sept. 9, 2021
Promise is Nothing
Although it is the seventh day of this term, I've found out four boys students in my class smoking. Three of them were smelled out by me, while the other was pointed by his calssmate. One of them named Bai were caught by me twice. I asked him to write a note to garantee that he would never do it again, otherwise he would go home for a week. But his roommate told me that he smoked a lot in their dormitory. I smelled the cigarette odour from him in the evening class. I aksed him whether he smoked, he said no. I didn't believe him, he told me the reason why he smelled like that was he had gone to the public toilet in school where many boys smoking there. I didn't believe a word and was so disappointed at him, so I just ignored him.
His promise is nothing.
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09/09/2021 Un e-mail a Pedro
Hola, Pedro:
Que tal? Espero que estés bien. Gracias por contactarme.
Mi casa actual es muy pequeña. Está en las afueras de Bilbao. Está situada cerca de la autopista.
Soy carpintero y tengo muchas herramientas. Ahora no tengo bastante espacio. Además la instalación eléctrica es muy alta y no puedo instalar el aire acondicionado.
Necesito una casa más moderna. Debería tener una habitación con al menos 25 m2. Voy a hacer un taller allí. Las ventanas grandes serían muy buenas porque la luz natural es la mejor para trabajar.
Podría gastar 2 millones de euros. Mi hermana Shakira me ha dado dinero.
¡Gracias por un mensaje! Seguimos en contacto!
Un saludo,
Bob
Sept. 9, 2021
Solo
Cuando viaje solo quiero estar con amigos, pero cuando viaje con amigos quiero estar solo. Fue el tema constante cuando viajaba en Latinoamérica. Antes me fui de mi casa no tuve la dirección por mi vida. Hubiera esperado que un viaje me cambiaría por el mejor. En verdad, no puedas viajar de te. En ecuador vagué por las calles solo en busca de no sé qué. Es muy interesante estar en un lugar tan diferente de tu casa. El tiempo se mueve tarde porque todas las cosas son nuevas y raras. Aunque senté solitario y tuve miedo, no quise volver a Canadá aún.
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Моя работа
Я закончила университете уже две год и начал сей работа уже один год. Я не люблю моя работа, потому думаю, что ета немного крупная и тяжёлая. Я мечю сосдавать своя работа, но знаю, что это не простой. На следующий год, я хочю путешествовать на Европе, даже сейчас это не хороший момент сосдавать компания.
Мне есть много идей а компании. Например, крутое кафе или ресторан или маленкая компания, чтобы поможет мир (environment). Мне есть время решить.
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Sept. 9, 2021
Changing Gatherings
Frankly, gatherings and celebrations have changed a lot these days.
This is caused by COVID-19
Before the pandemic, we generally met my friends at a local bar, and drank beer and Soju without no restriction.
But now, the virus is the major problem, and many people are drying around the world.
That’s why our government makes strict rules to control spreading the virus.
We can only meet less than 4 people, we must wear a mask everywhere. Restaurants and bars should close before 10 am.
As a result, we are unwilling to have any gathering now.
I hope the pandemic cones to an end soon.
Sept. 9, 2021
Wortweise!
In den letzten Monaten habe ich am Aufbau einer Website gearbeitet. Es ist ein Blog über Etymologie, was ich ein spannendes Thema finde. Die Idee begann mit einem Gespräch mit einer Freundin über Blogs in Deutschland und wie es scheint, dass es noch keine Etymologie-Blogs gibt. Ich habe französische und englische Blogs über das Thema gefunden, aber keine deutschen. Deshalb habe ich mich entschieden, mein eigenes zu erstellen!
Für die Nerds, die das interessant finden könnten, hier ist, wie ich es gemacht habe. Ich habe Django verwendet und da der Aufbau von Blogs ein weit verbreitetes Thema ist, gab es viele Tutorials online. Ich verstehe HTML und CSS, und damit konnte ich ein schlichtes minimalistisches Design erstellen. Meine Herausforderungen waren nur: Paginierung (Anzahl der Beiträge pro Seite), ein Kommentarsystem und das Rendern von Bildern auf Beiträgen. Es gab auch große Kopfschmerzen mit "Responsive Design", ich benutzte px-Maßeinheiten und es sah schrecklich aus auf dem Handy, also musste ich absolut alles auf vw (Ansichtsfenster-Maßeinheit) umstellen. Schließlich habe ich das meiste geendet und die Website am Montag mit sechs ersten Posts bereitgestellt, die Sie unter wortweise.online nachlesen können. Ich korrigiere noch einige Dinge in der Datenbank und manchmal ist die Site down (Server Error 500), aber sie ist größtenteils funktionsfähig. Gestern habe ich noch ein paar letzte Designsachen repariert, hauptsächlich was Sprache und Grammatik angeht. Ich finde, es sieht jetzt ganz gut aus.
Vielen Dank an Lena für die Hilfe bei den letzten Details!
Sept. 9, 2021
L'importance de l'argent
L'argent est le plus important chose dans ce monde. L'argent peut nous aider à survivre, par exemple, on doit acheter de la nourriture avec l'argnet pour prévenir de la faim. Pour des sans-abris, ils n'ont pas de l'argent pour avoir un abri pour eux-mêmes. L'argent est notre vie, notre coup de main. Même si vous ne pouvez pas obtenir ce que vous voulez mais avec l'argent, tout ça serait plus facile. En conclusion, l'argent est très important dans notre vie et la société.
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