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Tourismus
Ich habe Deutsch für Tourismus studiert. Ich möchte in der Tourismusbranche arbeiten. Vor Covid habe ich als Praktikantin bei einer Reisefirma gearbeitet. Alles ist sehr gut gelaufen. Meine Kollegen sind nett. Ich habe viel Neues gelernt und viele interessante Leute getroffen. Ich war sehr aktiv. Aber wenn Covid-19 gekommen ist, musste ich stoppen. Dann musste ich meine Berufsorientierung ändern. Ich bewundere die Leute, die im Tourismus arbeiten, weil ich denke, dass sie weite Kenntnisse und besondere Eigenschaften.
March 5, 2022
5 mars 2022 - Faire du yoga
J'ai commencé à faire du yoga dans le parc il y a trois jours parce que j'en ai eu mal de m'assoir toute la journée sans bouger. Faire du yoga lui-meme, ça me fait déjà très plaisir et le faire dans un parc, c'est mieux. Quand je suis entourée par les verres, la brise et le soleil, je pourrais me concentrer mieux sur mon respiration et les postures. Cependant, il y a eu un petit moment que je n'écrit pas alise : c'est quand je faisais les postures que je ne maîtrisais pas très bien parce que je me suis inquietée si les passants se moquaient de moi. Mais je me suis dit quelques sécondes après : «Je m'en fiche de ce que les autres disent. Ce n'est pas leur affaire.»
March 5, 2022
Mes investissement en bourse
En Norvege c'est interdit à investir en bourse avant d'avoir 18 ans. J'ai maintenant 18 ans donc j'ai deja commencé à investir en bourse, mais malheureusement j'en n'ai pas encore profité. (j'ai investi fonds d'index.) Je n'avais pas des chance parce que je me suis mis à investir juste avant l'arivvée d'omicron et quand la situation covid a commendé à s'amelioré la russe a envahi l'ukraine. Donc, mes investissements ont beaucoup baissé depuis que j'ai commencé à investir. Mais je pense que le bourse augment au fur et à mesure de temps, parce qu'il y a normalement une augmentation aprés une crise international. Il y a aussi des côtés positifs: maintenant que les fonds sont faibles et le fait que les fonds vont probablement s'enforcer. Donc je profiterais plus de mes nouvaux inverstissement, en plus j'ai une idée de celles fonds dont je devrait investir puisque quelques fonts sont plus faibles que d'autres et il vais pourtant augmenter plus que les autres. La raison pour laquelle il vaudrait investir dans celles fonds est que tout les fonds se stabeliseront avec le temps. En tout cas il vaudrait mieux d'investir maintenant et j'aurais 10% plus d'argent.
March 5, 2022
Ways to Reduce My Stress
These days, I was depressed from stresses due to work.
Before COVID-19, I used to exercise and play my instrument to reduce my stress, but it isn't possible.
As my friend's advice, I write the journal and meditate.
From the journal, I can discover my true feeling and find out the reason.
With meditation, I can spare my time and avoid heavy-stress.
Overall, I will go the extra mile to make them habits handling my stress.
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 2
TASK:
The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
ANSWER:
Mobile phone usage is increasing dramatically and there is a belief that the use of mobile phones are just antisocial as smoking therefore it should be banned in some places like smoking. I do not agree that cell phones are antisocial as smoking however thay should be restricted in some areas.
First of all, smoking is the source of some biggest health problems such as lung cancer and tumours. It is not just harmful to the smoker but also to people nearby considering they also breath in the smoke that hangs in the air. While cigarettes, in fact, disturb everyone at any circumstances, mobile phones do not cause a problem or irritation on indiviual use. It is possible to put a phone on a silent mode but impossible to block smoke from a cigarette.
On the other hand, there are some circumstances where even a phone on a silent mode can be disturbing such as cinema or theatre. There is no doubt that they are essential to comminication and emergencies. However the light of the screen will glow in the dark even though it is on lowest setting and irritate other viewers moreover disturb the actors. To overcome this problem mobile phones must be banned in these places.
To sum up, smoking is not only antisocial, but harmful to people's healths therefore should be banned in indoors, while mobile phones can only be identified as antisocial in some areas under specific circumstances. That being said, restriction in certain places could be acceptable and must be encouraged.
March 5, 2022
Online Ordering
Do you know how to order food online ?
First of all , I used to prepare the inventory what I was going to order .
Than ,I visited the onine store website , meanwhile , entered correct username and password , clicked the submit button , if everything went well , the commodities will appear on the screen .
All food is fresh , I picked the food I need directly into trolley in terms of the inventory I prepared before, settleed account after picking, waited the express .
The whole precess is easy and fast
March 5, 2022
地球温暖化のためいろいろな問題が出ている
地球は過去より暖かくなりましたが、ずっと暖かくなっています。それでいろいろな問題が出ています。地球温暖化は農業と漁業に悪い影響を及ぼしています。あるところでは、過去に植えた植物はもうこれ以上よく植えられません。そして海の温度が上がったので死んでなくなってしまった魚も多いです。地球温暖化は人間の健康にも悪い影響を及ぼします。国連のIPCCによると、世界で３０億人以上は地球温暖化で被害を受けています。
私たち何をしたらいいですか。環境保護を重んじる会社を応援してそんな会社の製品を使うほうがいいと思っています。ある会社は環境を汚しますが、地球のためそんな会社がなくかければなりません。そして車の代わりに自転車や地下鉄に乗ったり歩いて行ったりするほうがいいです。落ちで水や電気を節約ことも大切です。
March 5, 2022
making a reservation for a table
I ate out with my friends who is also my collegue last weekend , but it was a pity that I couldn't use the discount coupon at that time ,it is famous restaurant ,but we needed to make a reservation for a table ,
the restaurant is non smoking , so there was a view of fine ,we choose a table next to the window ,my friends prefered to have a view of cityscape
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
A Reply
No. Anhui is a province in the east-central part of China, and Hefei is the capital. It covers an area of 140,100 square kilometers and has a population of 61,027,200.
It governs 16 prefecture-level cities, 9 county-level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. The famous scenic spots are Huang Mountain and Jiuhua Mountain.
My city, Fuyang, is a prefecture-level city, which is located in the northwest part of Anhui province and covers an area of 160 square kilometers.
It governs 3 municipal districts, 1 county-level city, 4 counties and has a population of 11,000,000.
The Fuyang area is a big plain, which is a part of the Huabei Plain of China. Farmers here mainly grow wheat, rice, corn, soybeans and so on. So my city is an agricultural city.
In my opinion, you already have a decent job. Of course, if you can be a columnist, that will be nicer. You can give it a shot.
One thing before the pandemic I miss the most is that we could travel anywhere we wanted without any worries, but now, it's very different, and we even eliminated the thought of traveling.
Here are some photos of Fuyang city. Hope you enjoy them.
March 5, 2022
the experience booking hotel
when do you usually book hotel rooms
I usually book hotel rooms for business trips on the website ,sometimes on app , rarely on phone call.
when it is for a business trip, I always book a twin room ,
because I go to business with my collegue most time.
sometimes, I was lucky ,I can booked a breakfast included hotel, or got a discount coupon to book the hotel ,
sometimes ,I was upset, I could only book a bed for sleeping
March 5, 2022
the experience booking plane ticket
when was the last time you booked a plane ticket? how did you book it
two year ago , I booked a direct flight for a business trip on website named Ctrip which is one of the biggest travel business related company . I didn't book through travel agency as it is more expensive than Ctrip, Ctrip is also supply other booking services like app,phone call,
since I didn't sure when would return ,so I booked a one-way tickets instead of round trip ticket .
the flight take off punctually at 6 PM
March 5, 2022
Paid family leave in China
Paid Family Leave, a long forgotten term in China, has regained attention recently after a draft law aiming to protect the interest and rights of elderly people calls for the younger generation to spend more time with their parents.
Paid Family Leave was first brought up in the 50s, and it was only available for employees in the public sector. It has not been well honored nowadays.
People have been calling for revising the rules to give it more attention; some even argue that it should be codified into law. Some experts argue instead that, considering that Paid Family Leave was introduced when people worked 6 days a week and when there were no annual PTOs, reenacting it now would be problematic.
March 5, 2022
오늘 금요일이에요!
1. 안경이 깨었다. 글쎄 곧 고쳐야지.
2. 환대도 줄 겸 교환학생들이 환영을 느껴요.
3. 병에 걸을까 봐 마스크를 늘 입어요.
4. 아침에 급행열차가 고장을 나고 해서 지금 너무 짜증이 나요.
5. 비가 오는 바람에 집에 가야 했어서 우산을 가져와요.
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1. 요즘 식물의 성장이 느려요.
더 햇살고 물을 주지 그래요?
2. 다음 달 태국에 처음 여행하려고 해요. 그 곳에 뭘 할까요?
사원에 다녀갈 만해요. 진짜 예쁘네요.
3. 남주와 함께 이야기하도록 하는데 오해를 풀어요.
알겠습니다. 이제는 풀도록 하겠습니다.
4. 수술을 했다고 하던데 현재 괜찮습니까?
사실 등이 아파습니다. 쉬고자 집에 갈 겁니다.
5. 정거장에 이상 남자가 쳐다보니까 집에 걸어갔겠어요.
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여러분 좋은 주말을 보내세요! :)
March 5, 2022
Mein Tag
Hallo.
Ich möchte Sie über meinen Tag und meine Gefühle erzählen, um meine Deutsch zu üben.
Vielen danke für ihre Korrektur im voraus
Heute habe ich nicht so gut gefühlt, ich war ein bisschen von mir selbst enttäuscht.
Am Morgen habe ich eine Konferenz mit meinem Arbeitgeber gehabt, er hat mir viele Fragen auf Deutsch gefragt, dann habe ich sehr nervös geworden. Wegen meines nervös hat meine Deutsch sehr schlecht geworden. Das war lustig
Deshalb werde ich mich bei Deutsch Anstrengen und ich habe einen Tagbuch geschrieben zu entscheiden.
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
コンビニ人間
最近、コンビニ人間という小説を読み上げました。読み始めるのとき、1時間４ページだけを読めたけど、最後に１時間１２ページを読めたから、すごい読解の練習だったと思います。
小説のストーリはかなり変だけど、とても面白いでした。主人公は普通じゃなくてロボットみたいな性格で、まだアルバイトをしている中年の女です。店の外で行動を理解できないから、よく困ります。でも、主人公はアルバイトが大好きで、問題がない感じがあります。店で厳しいルールがあるし、やっと生き甲斐が得ます。
アルバイトを働きながら、新入社員の男が会いました。この男のほうがずっと変で、世界に怒っている人です。二人は分かりづらい絆を作って、ことはだんだん猛烈になります。
この本は私にたくさん深い事を考えさせました。社会のルールとか普通は何かなどです。たぶんいつか、本についてもっと詳しい文章を書きますね。
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
El acadio (parte 1)
Recientemente leí un artículo que trata del uso del idioma acadio en "Eternals", una nueva película de Marvel. En la película, un grupo de seres que se llaman "Eternals" llegan a la Tierra para proteger a los seres humanos de depredadores que les llaman "Deviants".
En la película, los Eternals llegan primero al Medio Oriente, donde afincan la ciudad de Babylonia. Durante esta parte de la película, los personajes hablan al acadio a los habitantes indígenas. Para conseguir que fuera auténtico, el director empleó a un experto del Medio Oriente antiguo que ha trabajado antes para crear guiones en este idioma.
Lo que me interesa no es el artículo ni la manera en que el experto llevó a cabo tal logro, sino la semejanza entre árabe y acadio. Por ejemplo, en el artículo, el autor (la persona que escribió el artículo es el mismísimo experto) menciona que la palabra para "puerta/verja" en acadio es "bābu", que es semejante a las palabras باب (bāb) y بوابة (bawāba) en árabe, a pesar de que apartan los dos idiomas más que mil años (ya que técnicamente el árabe moderno es muy relacionado con el árabe clásico pero no con los dialectos, pero eso es otra historia).
Creo que lo que me asombra no es la semejanza entre las palabras, como dije antes, sino que hay tal semejanza después de tanto tiempo. Por ejemplo, durante el tiempo en que se hablaba el acadio, los idiomas indoeuropeos acabaron de empezar a dispersarse.
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
Motivación
Muy raramente me falta motivación para aprender el español porque de hecho, no tengo la impresión de hablar una lengua "estranjera". Quizás vea las cosas así porque estoy aprendiendo idiomas muy diferentes de mi lengua materna (como el ruso), pero el español siempre me ha parecido como una forma desfazada y muy refinada de francés.
Por ejemplo, siemple se usa el imperfecto del subjuntivo en español, mientras que en francés, es un tiempo muy literario que por desgracia no se usa más. Entonces, hablar o escribir español me da la impresión que estoy mucho más elegante que lo estoy en realidad. ¡Me siento como un gentilhombre!
El placer que hallamos en una lengua es una gran motivación. Sé que nunca no podría aprender algunos idiomas, porque sé que no hallaría ningún placer en el aprentizaje, ¡pero no es el caso del español!
March 4, 2022
A Reply
Writing is so simple. You can write anything you want as long as you are interested in them. For example, when you were young, there would be many unforgettable things. You can write them. You said you want to learn Cantonese, so you can also write it; why? Or anything interesting with Cantonese.
The pandemic situation in Anhui is very good because so far there’s not a single case. But in Hong Kong it’s really the worst. The new infection has increased by over 50000 a day.
No one knows the origin of the Covid, even what stuff it is. I worry that we are not able to eliminate it, and it will exist with us. So stay safe and stay healthy.
March 4, 2022
Ma Mauvaise Habitude
La pire habitude que j'ai, c'est mon indécision. Tous les jours Je réfléchis trop, peu importe où je suis, j'ai l'impression que je pense trop à tout. Même les choses insignifiantes. Ma famille peut vous dire que c'est la vérité, cela les dérange depuis ma naissance et moi aussi je m'agace parfois.
Je sais que c'est un problème pour ainsi dire mais j'sais pas comment la vaincre. Si je prends la mauvaise décision je ressentirai des regrets et ça c'est difficule. Le temps est définitif alors il faut que je prends la bonne décision. Oh là là je pense bien trop encore.
March 4, 2022
Un jeu mauvais
Aujourd'hui je suis allé à l'université et je essaie de travailler en mes projets du informatique. Je dois faire un jeu qui s'appelle «Keno» quel est un jeu mauvais. Dans ce jeu, les gens achètent une carte et choisissent des nombres. Il y a une chance que on choisit un de les vingt numeros gagnant, mais c'est une chance vraiment petite. Donc, c'est probable que les gens perdront l'argent à cause de ce jeu. Je n'aime pas les jeus ainsi parce que la chance de gagner est trop miniscule et ces jeus peuvent créer une addiction si une personne n'a pas contrôle.