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중고품 거래
경제적인 형편이 나빠지는 것과 물가가 점차 올라감으로서 비싼 물품을 구입하기 어려워졌다. 이미 부족한 돈을 많이 들여야 하기 때문이다. 따라서 중고 물품 거래를 하는 식으로 소비하는 사람이 많아졌다. 똑같은 물품을 원 가격보다 훨씬 싸게 살 수 있는 등의 중고 물품 거래의 장점 중에 하나이다. 또, 품질 좋은 브랜드 제품이 비싸세 팔리기 때문에 어떤 사람에게 살면서 사기 힘든 일일 수도 있다. 사람이 갖고 싶은 어떤 상품이든 싸게 구입할 수 있게 해주는 중고 물품 거래의 장점으로 볼 수 있다. 그렇지만, 장점이 있는 것처럼 문제 점도 당연히 있다. 사기를 당하거나 예상과 다른 물품을 받게 되는 경우가 비일비재다. 특히, 중고 가전제품을 살 때 며칠 이용했다가 고장이 나는 경우가 많다. 그래서 중고품 거래를 할 때 주의하는 것이 좋다. 또, 온라인으로 사기를 치는 사람들을 막도록 법적으로 규정이 생겨야 하고, 소비자도 믿음직스러운 웹사이트만 활용해야 한다. 그래야만 안전한 중고품 거래가 이루어진다. 뿐만 아니라, 똑같은 웹사이트 활용한 경험ㅇ, 있는 사람의 후기와 평가를 먼저 확인하는 것이 중요하다. 사기를 당하지 않은 데 도움이 되기도 하기 때문이다. 물품을 싸게 구입하는 것도 좋지만, 주의해서 거래를 하지 않다면 오히려 돈을 낭비하게 된다. 그러니 중고품 거래를 할 때 조심스러운 자세를 역시 취할 필요가
March 6, 2022
March 6, 2022
polly and the cow
Polly live with her family of a farm .They are three generation in her family. Every morning she wakes up on 5 clock and works by the farm on the weekend .After the school make she her homework or plays with her girlfriends. She loves all animals and treats them good . In her free time feed she the rabbits and brushes the horse and the ponies. Especially like you her cow bella but than she new milk to fetch was she gone she could bella found anywhere . She looks really of the whole farm . After she go to her parents and mother found bella in the rascal but she look bad his belly was red and rare . Polly Mother call a doctor and she get babies to the world she was postilion. Polly love the babies from his favourite cow and they give great milk.
March 6, 2022
Video Conference
when is a video conference needed ？
Video conference needed to be started in defferent places, it depends that who we would talking to .
If we were talking to our boss,than the conference started in the meeting room of second floor, if we were talking to our partner ,than the conference started in the meeting room of third floor, when we were talking to our customer , the conference started in the meeting room of forth floor.
We always make sure the camera and internet connection are going well before the conference
It's inevitable that there are mistakes. I hope someone make a wonderful sentence.
Thanks a lot.
March 6, 2022
O dia de hoye
Hoye é domingo e é um dia nublado e frio.
Eu tenho esquipado perto do rio há uma hora, com a minha namorada e com nossa cadela. Nós moramos num bairro rural, perto da minha cidade, Teruel. Somos muito afortunados porque é um bairro tranquilo qui tem muitos caminos para passear. Podemos faze-lo entre las arvores o perto do rio, mas sempre na natureza.
Mais tarde vamos comer a casa da minha mãe. Pizza!! À tarde iremos beber alguma coisa com os nossos amigos e falaremos um poco. À noite, de novo à nossa casa, olharemos alguma serie e jantaremos antes de ir dormir.
Um dia tranquilo. Um dia bon.
:)
March 6, 2022
030601 - A Spring Jaunt
Yesterday I went to a new park and had fun there. There was a big lawn near an artificial lake, where people were flying kites. Many flowers were full in bloom, and various birds were singing. I love the motto: Carpe diem (especially in spring).
The park was so large that I walked for an hour to cover a small area. Next time I would rent a bicycle to hang around with my friends.
March 6, 2022
The project
Are you in some new project at work ?
What are you responsible for ?
I'm in a new project, our customer is related to vocational education, the marketing department spent three years to get this contract.
This project had finished research stage, as an engineere, it's time to show our technology.
It is inevitable that there are some mistakes . I hope someone make a more wonderful sentence.
Thanks.
March 6, 2022
March 6, 2022
L'impression
Quand on voit quelqu'un on a déjà un avis de lui, c'est automatique sans que les gens remarquent. Même si c'est vrai que on ne doit pas juger quelqu'un sans savoir sa personalité, on va déjà avoir une impression de lui. Par exemple, imagine que tu es un etudiant et tu rencontres un autre pour la premiere fois. De plus il ne parle pas francais très bon, peut-être tu veux avoir l'impression qu'il n'est pas intelligent à cause de ca. C'est probablement pas vrai mais tu veux avoir l'impression. J'éspere tu arrives de comprendre que je veux dire.
March 6, 2022
Myself
Hello, Good Morning, I am Md Alamin. I live in Bangladesh. I love to read book and helping people. I would love to be software engineer at Google. Currently I am studying at International University of Businesses Agriculture and Technology under computer Science and Engineering Department. I am learning C plus plus for competitive programming.
March 6, 2022
확인하고 갈 걸 그랬다
어제 남편하고 같이 서울에 갔다. 우리는 원래 나의 동료가 알려준 문구점에만 가려고 했는데 우연히 또 다른 갈 곳이 생겼다. 금요일 밤 인스타그램을 보다가 내가 좋아하는 모던 한복 브랜드가 서울 매점이 토요일에 오픈한다는 소식을 알게 돼서 가 보기로 했다. 그래서 토요일 아침 일어나고 준비하는 대로 집에서 출발하였다. 서울은 우리 집에서 멀지도 않고 가깝지도 않은 거리다. 버스를 탄 다음에 지하철로 갈아탔어야 우리의 첫번째 목적지인 한복 가게에 도착할 수 있었다. 나는 한 시간 동안 아름다운 옷을 보고 또 보고 고민 했고 그 다음에 사고 싶은 것 하나를 겨우 선택할 수 있었다.
옷을 산 다음에 지하철을 다시 타서 2번째 목적지로 향했다. 지하철에서 내린 다음에 한 7분 동안 걸어간 뒤 동료가 알려준 문구점을 찾을 수 있었다. 그런데 문이 닫혀 있었다! 나는 토요일인데 문이 왜 닫혀 있는지 궁금했다. 특별한 이유가 있나 싶었는데 문구점 웹사이트를 확인하다 보니 원래 주말에 쉰다고 써있었다! 나는 어이가 없었다. 당연히 사람들이 여기저기 잘 다니는 토요일에 문을 열 줄 알았으니까 미리 확인하지 않은 거였다. 다행히 한복 가게 때문에 나와 남편의 시간이 완전히 낭비돼지 않았는데 그래도 좀 안타까웠다. 집을 떠나기 전에 확인할 걸 그랬다!
March 6, 2022
疲れています
今日はとても長かったので、大きな作文を書きました。今この作文を終わってしまいました。でもちょっと悪いけど考えませんでした。もっと時間がありたいので、いい作文が書けます。実は終日に頭が痛い。とても大変ですね。それではラメンが欲しいから、おゆがわいてあります。辛いラメンが大好きですので、私の母はスパイン人でたくさん辛い食べ物を作ります。
今少しラメンがあて明日はアジアのマーケットでラメンを買うつもりです。私の一番のライブは韓国のラメン。hwaというラメンを知っていますか。とても辛いです。私はスノーラックスのように食べ物を食べたいです。全貌の食べ物をたべられます。
今晩に不安な人になるとを夢見ていた。大学は本当に難しいと思いますから、先生はたくさん宿題を上げて,私の手がいたいな。
じゃあ、明日はいいといいんですが。
March 6, 2022
もっと上手になりたいです！
残念だけど、私は日本語の授業に行ったことがありません。日本語がずっと興味があったけど、今まで一人しか勉強していませんでした。
パンデミックのときの前に真面目じゃなかったから、能力の進歩はあまり速なかったです。独学がたくさんモチベーションと規律が必要ですね。だから、私はただ初心者みたいな感じがずっとありました。
でも、永遠に初心者になりたくないことにしました。そのため、ここ２年間ぐらい、毎日２時間ぐらいに勉強していました。
聴力のために３０分ぐらい、いろいろなポッドキャストを聞きます。それも日常とか異世界のアニメを３０分ぐらい見ます。ときどき、特に難しいアニメは単語の学ぶのために字幕を使います。
読解のために３０分ぐらいも小説と漫画を読みます。たまにもっと口語の会話のためにツイッタも読みます。読むのが好きだから、２時間に読める日もあります。
漢字と単語は「Anki」と「わにかに」というのSRSのシステムを使います。今、１５００ぐらい漢字を覚えて、８０００ぐらい単語も覚えたけど、使うのほうが難しいですね。毎日これらのシステムは４５分ぐらいをかかります。
アウトプットは今の所、私の欠点です。毎日１５分ぐらい発音を勉強しようとして、最近Italkiの家庭教師と話し始めました。もちろん、このサイトにも書き始めました。まだまだだけど、頑張り続ければ、だんだん上手になります！
March 6, 2022
March 6, 2022
El primer idioma
Recrear el primer idioma - la razón por la que no vale la pena intentarlo
Aún no sabemos la fecha en que creamos nuestro primer idioma. Por supuesto que nunca sabremos la fecha exacta, pero lo que quiero decir es que no sabemos el periodo de tiempo en que los seres humanos empezaron a desarrollar la habilidad de hablar idiomas complejos. Algunos científicos creen que lo empezamos a hacer desde el primer momento, otros creen que otras especies, como los Neandertales, lo desarrollaron antes de nosotros. No obstante, al fin y al cabo, es muy improbable que lo averigüemos.
Hace unos años, se publicó en una revista científica un artículo por dos personas que decían que habían recreado algunas palabras del primer idioma hablado nunca. Un gran logro para los seres humanos y la ciencia ¿no? Desafortunadamente, aunque usaran un montón de largas palabras y demostraran sus métodos "científicos", sus resultados son equivocados. ¿Cómo lo sabemos? Pues, incluso las predicciones más cautelosas ponen la fecha en que los seres humanos empezaron a hablar hace más de cien mil años. Y los idiomas son como seres vivos: crecen, cambian e incluso mueren. Así que nunca sabremos cómo suena ni cómo era el primer idioma ya que hay tantos idiomas y familias lingüísticas que han desaparecido. Sencillamente, no tenemos los datos para recrearlo.
March 6, 2022
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
Voyage en Alsace
Je suis allée en voyage dont la distination était l'Alsace. C'est une région pas comme les autres, car elle avait été longtemps le territoire plutôt germanique. Elle est entrée sous le contrôl français pendant le régime de Napoléon, puis a été à nouveau annexée à la Prusse après sa victoire dans la guerre franco-prussienne en 1870. La défaite de la Prusse dans le cadre de la Première Guerre Mondial a rendu cette région française. Ensuite l'invasion du nazi l'a fait tomber dans la main de l'Allemand. Actuellement, elle fait partie de la France, abritant des particularités qui proviennent de la culture mélangée de deux pays.
Je vais raconter demain ce qui m'a marquée le plus après avoir fait quelques recherches à ce sujet : c'est l'exception de l'application de la loi de laïcité.
March 5, 2022
IETS Writing Task 1 - Cambridge 12 - Test 5
The bar chart illustrates the informations about the Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 in percentage.
If we look at the chart closely, we can see that women are more active in almost every age groups. The only exception is the group of "15 to 24". 52,8 percent of men and 47,7 percent of women do regular physical activity. The gap between two genders is not dramatically large, it stays usually at 10 percent.
The group of "35 to 44" has the biggest gap. 35 percent of men and 52,2 percent of women exercises regularly, this gap decreases to 10 percent for the group of "45 to 54". The smallest gap belongs to the group of "65 and over", the difference is almost one percent and approximately 47 percent of all of the senior Australians do regular physical activity.
Overall, we can say that Australians have a pretty active life style and they do not give up on it even if they get older. This is a feature that all other cultures should inspire of.
March 5, 2022
The Spy and the Traitor - 15
Summary no. 15.
This is a real story.
When his posting* in Copenhagen was nearing its end, Oleg received an unsettling telegram from Moscow. The KGB had instructed him to cease any operational activity and limit himself to paperwork until he was back to Moscow. This sudden change, as the KGB explained, was a damage limitation* move. As it seemed, PET, the Danish Security Service, had been taking too much of an interest in Oleg. He had been on PET’s radar for too long. Hence the KGB had grown particularly concerned. The thought of a diplomatic case put Moscow at unease. So that was how the KGB had decided to deal with it for the time being. As Oleg digested** the full implications of it all, he felt a sense of deep unease flooding over him.
It was customary for diplomats to hold parties and invite colleagues at other embassies. At one of this party, held by a West German diplomat, Oleg fell into conversation with a charming Danish guy. One was a Soviet, the other was a Danish, yet they fascinatingly seemed to have a lot in common. They shared the same tastes in music, art, literature and so forth. Perhaps it was just as well that Oleg had no idea what lay behind that charming, appealing facade, for the Dane was a PET agent in mission. The Danish Security Service had laid a trap for Oleg, who unwittingly avoided it.
* British English.
**Assuming that the original sentence is correct, can I also say, “As the implications sunk in....”?
March 5, 2022
I Joined an ENGLISH Online Course
I joined an English online course yesterday. I hope the course will help me to improve my English. If I get the certificate of this course, I will get a lot of job opportunities. I don't know why I still have grammar mistakes, though, I've studied so many grammar rules. I hope after I have finished the course my English level will be more advanced.
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
First day here
This is my first day on LangCorrect. Before started using this service, I was not sure why people would be willing to spend time and correct other people's writing. However, once I got started and the system showed passages of my native language for me to correct, I found reading those passages interesting! It was like meeting new friends who shared their thoughts that you usually wouldn't hear. So I hope that the thoughts I will share here will also interest people so that they will feel worth the time reading.
March 5, 2022
030501- Saturday Sidelights
This week I usually spent one hour each day on LangCorrect, one third of time to amend my entires, twenty minutes to correct others' Chinese journals, and the other time to write a new one. Today I was so tired to review my Friday writing, but tomorrow I would do it. Thanks for all people who have helped me strengthen writing capacity.
Today I submitted my homework for business English course. I am delighted to have a chance to share my thought with the classmates by oral presentation next Wednesday. It also meant that I finally had time for a gentle stroll. The new park was so incredible that many people were flying kites and various flowers were also blooming. I love spring.
March 5, 2022
Ma chambre
Ma chambre est mon endroit préféré. Je vis dans la même chambre depuis presque huit ans. Là, je me sens en sécurité. C'est tranquille et je peux faire ce que je veux. Je peux écouter de la musique sans que mon père me dise que ma musique soit de la merde. Là, je peux être seule, sans me sentir seulet. Dans ma chambre, j'ai tous mes choses que j’aime : Mon chat, mon lit, des dessins que j'ai reçu de mes amis, des cartes que ma famille m'a envoyées. J'ai aussi tous les choses dont j'ai besoin pour mes loisirs : Mon ordinateur, mon clavier, mes couleurs et mes livres. J'aime tous ces choses beaucoup, mais la chose qui me plait le plus dans ma chambre, c'est ma fenêtre. Ma fenêtre a une vue sur tout le canton. Je vois les montagnes, les villages et le lac. Beaucoup de la lumière solaire peut entrer dans la chambre grâce à ma fenêtre. La nuit, je vois toutes les étoiles et même la lune depuis mon lit.