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How should I talk to my partner.....
How should I talk to my partner about me not feeling comfortable in my relationship because I’m completely out of my comfort zone? Details in notes.
Seriously， I feel very worried after watching your story with your boyfriend. There is a golden rule for relationships:” You should leave if you feel you are not yourself when you are in your relationship. “ We are independent all the time whatever happens because we feel comfortable and happy when we are real and free. From your story， I believe you have lost yourself when you are with your boyfriend together， and you are unhappy and stressed.
Dear, we can’t spend 80% of the time of our lives with others except ourselves because this is not a balanced mode of our lifestyle. We will feel resistant and uncomfortable when we spend so much time with others no matter who they are. Human beings are certain ones who love solitude but can’t without social. Furthermore, we need to find the most suitable model and lifestyle for being people who can enjoy life. Just leave the people who make you feel uncontrolled and uncomfortable all the time. On the other hand, you should leave your boyfriend and say “bye-bye”.
Here are three suggestions for you:
1. leave the man as soon as possible. You should be yourself rather than a girl who sacrifices herself for the man all the time. You will feel comfortable and peaceful even if you will feel so sad and emotional after you broke up with the man.
2. Adjust your lifestyle and match it with your goals. From your story, I can tell you are a nice girl with full goals. You should exercise more if you enjoy working out in the gym. You should study more knowledge and spend more time in the school if you want to focus on your education. Maybe you will get a chance to get into a Top university. At least you will broaden your view and think of things with more perspectives.
3. Spending more time with your parents because they are getting older accompany with you are getting mature. Don’t ignore those people you really should cherish and care about.
The above are my suggestions. I hope you are doing well and it can help you.
Thank you for reading and have a nice day!
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April 16, 2022
Por qué estoy aprendiendo español?
Estoy aprendiendo español por que yo querio visitar todas los partes de Latinoamérica. Yo empezó a estudiar cuando vistaba Baja California con un amigo, teniamos un viaje muy disfrutable y los Mexicanos son muy amable. Mi solo arrepentimiento fue que yo supe nada de español para hablarlos. Asi que, yo pensaba que la proxima vez yo voy a hablar al menos a poco.
He tenido dos años de estudiar y pienso que puedo hablar lo suficientemente bien para mi viaje, pero la ultima pregunta es "a donde?".
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April 16, 2022
April 15, 2022
내 방을 자세히 묘사하고 있다
안녕하세요! 난 희주고 오늘은 내 방을 자세히 묘사할 것이다! 난 Lindie Botes의 웹사이트에서 이 주제를 받았다. 시작할까요?
먼저, 내 방이 넓고 보통 깨끗하다. 더러울 때 공부하는 게 어려워지니까 일주일에 내 방을 한 번 청소한다. 내 방의 벽이 하얗고 벽에는 사진 한 개밖에 없다. 사진은 내가 대학교 입학 전 나와 여동생이다. 사진 옆에 외할머니께서 드린 달력이 있다. 달마다의 사진이 다른 동물이다. 이번 달 사진의 퉁퉁하고 회색 고양이이다. 달력 아래에 내 책상하고 노트북이 있다. 집으로 할 일 많이 있으니까 모니터 한 개나 있다. 내가 학생이면서 영어 선생님이다—그래서 할 일이 많다.
책상 옆에 검정 책장에서 놓은 책들이 많이 놨다. 있잖다, 펜타지하고 로맨틱소설을 읽는 걸 좋아한다. 어렸을 때부터 항상 책을 읽고 있었다. 읽는 걸 너무 좋아하기 때문에 내 생일마다 내 가족은 나에게 많은 책을 준다. 쉬운 선물 주는 것 같다.
책장 위에 식물이 있다. 내 방 안에 식물 3 개나 있다. 식물을 더 구하고 싶은데 한국에 곧 갈 거기 때문에 키울 수 없다. 캐나다에 다시 들어올 때 더 구할 것이다~~! 내 침대는 내 책장의 왼쪽에 있다. 내 이불이 올리브 그린이다! 베개 커버 두 개의 색깔이 똑같다. 침대 위에 더 편한 베개들이 회색 커버가 있다. 침대 위에 노란색 담요도 있어 놨다. 이 담요는 엄마께서 준 선물이다.
사실 다 된 것 같다! 당신의 방이 어떻다? 읽어 주셔서 고맙다!
희주 올림
April 15, 2022
April 15, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 64
Summary no. 64
Constable Twitten wanted to know more about the Middle Street Massacre, in particular what had let to it. Mrs Groynes explained that both planning and execution had been easily enough. All she had to was make sure no one would get out alive and that Inspector Steine would come out as a hero. Twitten and Mrs Groynes agreed that Inspector Steine was always oblivious to what really happened around him. Whenever Steine made considerable progress in his investigations, he would blindly believe and boast that it was his own doing. The truth was that she had always exploited him. For example, she’d occasionally drop information, under the guise of idle chatter, about other criminals’ activity or whereabouts. Steine would then act on these promising leads, but without bothering to enquire about Mrs Groynes’ source. As she always expected him to do, he would dismiss her knowledge as mere female chatter. And that was how Steine had unwittingly helped Mrs Groynes take over the criminal world in Brighton.
April 15, 2022
Музеи
Уважаемый д-р Иван:
Музеи-неотъемлемая часть распространения культуры страны. В их корпусе есть документы, которые заявляют её независимость. Есть многообразие экспонатов, которые рассказывают её историю. Замечательное творчество художников на стенах отражает наши коллективные мысли, мечты и надежды.
Тем не менее, есть недостача музеев, которые учат более практические аспекты. Например, многие люди не знакомятся с тем, как действует система рециклирования или на чём оснуёт наша экономика (то есть экспорты пищевых продуктов). Несмотря на то, что такие темы кажутся отдалёнными от нашей повседневной жизни, знание этих нам помогают понимать лучше наш город. Может быть, что наша признательность к работникам, которые занимаются этим секторам, увеличиться после того, как у нас будит есть возможность понаблюдать процессы в действии.
Смотря на это, правительству не нужно создать полностью новые специальные музеи, из-за того, что они могут планировать интеграцию, чтобы объединить как культурные аспекты города, так и процессы, которые содержат её в исправности. В частности, выставка может описывать детально историю канализационных очистных сооружений, с учётом улучшений осуществлены на протяжении последнего века.
Я надеюсь на скорый ответ на мое предложение.
Искренне Ваш,
Джон Джеймс
April 15, 2022
Hotel
Ich mag nicht in Hotels übernachten. Ich mag nicht in einem unbekannten Ort schalfen. Andere Gäste können nachts laut sein. Deshalb kann ich schwierig finden zu schlafen.
Ich übernachte nicht oft in Hotels. Ich übernachte etwa drei Nachts pro Jahr in Hotels. Ich bleibe normalerweise in Hotels zum Urlaub.
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April 15, 2022
15 avril 2022 - HKD 5000
Comme le gouvernent veut stimuler l’économie locale après la 5ème vague de Covid, il nous a donné HKD 5000 chacun pour dépenser aux commerces locaux. C’est à chaque citoyen qui a age de 18 ans ou plus, et donc moi, j’en a un. Je vais faire une liste de choses que je pouvais ou voudrais acheter : un nouveau camera, un programme de langue, un nouveau iPhone, un séjour à l’hôtel de Disneyland, des nouveaux vêtements …
En fait, la dernière fois que j’ai reçu HKD 5000 de gouvernement (c’était pendant les vacances d’été prétendants), je l’ai dépensé peu à peu sans me rendre compte où cet argent allait. Alors, ce n’est pas très utile de planifier comment le dépenser. Tant pis.
April 15, 2022
Proposition d'un concours d'art
Madame Principale,
Je m'appelle Irry et je suis dans la classe NS. Je vous écris parce que j'ai une bonne idée que j'ai besoin votre aide pour la réaliser. Maintenant nos murs hauts et corridors grands manque de l'art. La solution est un concours d'art pour décorer notre beau l'école. Je propose que nous travaillerons avec l'organisation d'art local pour trouver un thème, des règles et un jury. Le final de concours finira dans un vernissage où nous pouvons inviter le peuple de la municipalité. Je crois que ce concours peut être une chance pour l'école de frimer et aussi pour les élèves de développer ses côtés artistiques. Qu'est-ce que vous en pensez ?
Avec mes remerciements,
Irry
April 15, 2022
April 15, 2022
Toys For My Kids
I bought some Lego toys for my kids.
Because I have been very busy these, there was a little chance to see my kids this week.
Today, I was also late to come home.
For playing with them this weekend, I bought the toys.
Two kids have never assembled Legos from parts.
I expect that we will have fun tomorrow.
April 15, 2022
April 15, 2022
15, April, Freitag, sonnig.
Von 8 bis 13 April war ich im Italien, das war das erstmal, dass ich in Europa außer Deutschland war. Diese kurze Reise haben wir uns ganz spontan und plötzlich entschieden. Ich habe mich fast keine Dinge auf die vorbreitet. Deswegen ist auch das erstmal, dass ich nur mit einem Rucksack einen Urlaub angefangen. Trotz des schnellen Anfangs war ich auch sehr aufreget.
Zurück blick auf diesem Tagen haben wir folgendes erlebt. Glücklicherweise war das Wetter in Italien super schön, die Sonnen schien und der Himmel war immer blau. Mit schönem Wetter schien der Milane Dom sehr majestätisch und imposant. Ich habe vorher noch nicht so größer Dom gesehen, deshalb hat der mir besonders Eindruck hinterlassen. Vielleicht wegen des beendenden Corona Maßnahme war dort unglaublich viele Touristen. Deswegen waren wir von dort nach ein paar Fotografieren schnell weggegangen. Zwischen zu viele Menschen durchgehen ist sehr stressig für uns, und hatten wir keine gute Laue ruhig zu genießen.
Danach haben wir einige andere Sehenswürdigkeit besucht. Allmählich habe ich bemerkt, dass je beliebter Ort desto mehr Menschen. Dagegen gaben es in mancher Pärken ganz selten Leute, auch wenn sie auch superschön sind. Die Manchen möchten die bekannteren Sehenswürdigkeiten nicht verpassen, Und nur die beliebteren Gebiete unter geschränkt Zeit besuchen.
Nach drei Tagen in Italien möchte ich schon zurückfliegen. In einem fremden Ort fehlt mir mehr oder weniger Geborgenheit. Besonders wenn in einer Situation, dass ich italisch sprechen muss, fühle ich mich nicht Wohl und sogar Verlegenheit.
Als ich auf dem Flugzeug eingestiegen war, fühlte ich mich erleichtert, als ob ich schon in meiner Komfort Zone wäre. Vorher habe ich niemals gemerkt, dass ich schon an Deutschland gewöhnt, und hier in Deutschland ist unbewusst schon meine Komfort Zone.
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April 15th 2022
a It's cool and comfortable today.
How about you?
b Isn't it a little cold?
a Really?, this much is just right for me.
It's the kind of temperature that I just barely don't miss the blankets.
b You have a point. if it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.
aYeah,that's right.
b But if it gets hotter, you won't need more blankets.
a That's just different. I don't like hot weather.
Do you prefer hot to cold?
b Hot!
a Yeah, I figured.
There are more people who like hot than people who like cold, absolutely.
b Yeah, I think so, but Around me, there are more person who say they like cold.
a You have good friends.
b Yeah, maybe, haha but You can't judge someone good or bad by liking hot or cold.
a I can.
Guys who like hot are bad guys.
Cause Cold areas have less crime.maybe.
I suppose.
sigh... How I wish I lived in country that Is cold all year round.
I am dreading the coming season and really want to escape.
I'd like to know common colloquial phrases！ 🙇♂️
As a side note,a and b stand for people❗️
April 15, 2022
April 15, 2022
When someone say "i don't know how to feel"
When someone say "i don't know how to feel" what should we do or how to respond?
This question is a little bit general that needs to be clarified. I only can answer your question based on my imagination because your response is multiple which depends on the situation.
I would like to imagine three situations you may meet”
1. You are in a bad feeling and want to ask your friend to comfort you but your friend said “I don’t know to feel.” and nothing. It means your friend is not your true friend and he is not an understanding person. You can kick him out of your life and tell him:” you hurt me, bro.”
2. You are in a good feeling and share something with your friend and he is like this. It means your friend just cannot get your happy point. That’s fine. Don’t blame him and explain why are you so happy which can have a deep connection between you and him.
3. You are in a good or bad feeling and you get a response like you said from a stranger. You just tell yourself that don’t do this again. You don’t need to share something with strangers and want to make them understand. That’s hard and hurtless sometimes. Just be the strong one who can ignore others’ eyes.
The above are my imaginations and suggestions. I hope you are doing well and escaping from bad emotions.
Thank you for reading and have a good day.