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Comment j'ai commencé à aimer le français
Je n'ai jamais aimé la façon dont sonnait le français.
Je ne comprenais pas pourquoi tant de gens pensaient que le français était une belle langue d'amour.
Mais ensuite, j'ai décidé de visiter Paris avec ma petite amie.
J'ai pensé apprendre le français pour faire une expérience.
Deux jours à écouter des vidéos en français et j'étais amoureux de cette langue.
Mais ce n'était pas très facile, à cause de la prononciation étrange.
Au début, j'ai utilisé Duolingo et Anki, mais c'était plus un divertissement qu'un apprentissage sérieux.
Puis j'ai décidé de mémoriser mille mots français les plus courants en dix jours.
Je l'ai fait, même si c'était extrêmement difficile.
J'ai été surpris de pouvoir enfin comprendre certaines des nouvelles françaises.
De toute façon, en ce moment, j'essaie de parler en français, mais ce n'est pas une tâche facile.
Dec. 9, 2022
一人であることの怖さ
私が本当に一番怖いことは何かわからないが、一人であることかもしれない。
人間という動物は根から社会的な生き物であるものだ。つまり、生きるためには、他人に愛されることが重要だけであるというより、必要だ。それは心理的な原因だからと思う。昔は、世の中で生き延びることに、人間は集団で生きる。食事を摘むことや、敵から守ることや、病気になるときに治すことなどは集団で一人よりしやすいだ。そのため、人間の脳では「一人である」という概念が怖くなってきた。
現代に生きている私にとって、「一人であること」が恐ろしい理由は食事や病気などに関係ない。怖い理由は、多分心理的であるだけかもしれない。それでも、他人が私を愛しなく、私についてあまり考えなく、私が亡くすとしたらあまり気にしないという発想は、本当に怖いだ。
Dec. 9, 2022
Mielipide
Minä ajattelen, että tällä hetkellä ruoka on niin kallis, että eläkkeellä oleva ihmiset eivät pystyvät syödä kuin aikaisempaan tapaan. Ja tämä minun mielestäni on huono asia koska sitten ikääntyneen ihmisten terveidentila huononee, sitten maksetaan enemmän raha terveydenhuollon kustannukseen.
Dec. 9, 2022
Les robots
De nos jours, les robots sont partout. En effet, ils nous entourent : au début, ils n’étaient que dans des hôpitaux et des usines mais peu à peu ils ont devenu omniprésents. On les trouve dans des banques, au travail dans des entreprises, même chez nous. Ce dont je me souviens, ce sont des robots que j’ai vus dans un film de science-fiction. Dans cette histoire les robots ont conquis le monde et emprisonné tous les humains. C’était horrible !
J’admets que j’en ai peur. Alors, mettant mon cauchemar de côté, les robots peuvent nous rendre service, dans des hôpitaux, dans des écoles et dans la communauté. J’ai lu un article dont on parle de diverses sortes de robots. Apparement, la compagnie franco-japonaise, qui s’appelle SoftBank Robotics a créé plusieurs types de robots. Le premier, c’est le robot Pepper qui est utilisé dans certains banques pour aider et pour divertir les clients. Le deuxième, Roméo est un robot humanoïde qui ressemble à la humain. Il a un tête, un corps et deux bras. La fonction de Roméo est d’aider les personnes plus âgées et handicapées. Le troisième robot de cette entreprise s’appelle Nao. Et Nao est utilisé pour l’éducation. Nao travaille avec les enfants autistes et il leur encourage à s’exprimer. Il faut mentionner que tous ces robots ne sont pas donnés et coûtent au moins de 1500 € plus un abonnement chaque mois.
Bien qu’il y ait certains avantages d’avoir un robot, il faut que je mentionne aussi des inconvénients. À mes yeux, l’inconvénient le plus grand, le plus dangereux sont ceux qui sont utilisés dans les guerres : les armes autonomes comme les drones. Sur ce sujet, il y a beaucoup d’associations scientifiques qui veulent que ces robots soient interdits parce qu’ils représentent une menace. On verra ce qui se passera.
Dec. 9, 2022
My new friend
It’s a little crazy, but I do believe that friendship would occur in some place that you cannot believe. And people are really different when you stay with them and when you hear them from others.
My new friend has a easy remember name, and he is experienced(I would love to describe that he is as old as my uncle, how to write it in English polite? Thanks for your help). In some ways I could see some similarities between him and my father: popular and love to make new friends, don’t hesitate to spend money when staying with friends, has an excellent memory, also know much about how to play romantic tricks in life.
When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of the energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world more.
And the trip to the Indian street with his guide really means a lot for me. I would write it in the next article.
Dec. 9, 2022
Undertale (3/3)
This game was created by one person, Toby Fox.
Эта игра была создана человеком, Toby Fox.
He created the story, the characters, programmed the game, and composed the music.
Он создал историю, персонажи, запрограммировал игру и сочинил музыку.
This makes me love the game even more.
Это заставляет меня любить игру ещё больше.
I find it impressive that one guy is able to do something that multimillionaire companies can't do, or, better said, don't want to do.
Я нахожу это удивительным, что один человек иметь делать что-то, что многомиллионный бизнес не сможет, или, лучше говорят, не хочет сделать.
Also, Toby used free programs.
Плюс, Toby использовал бесплатные программы.
By the way, the game is so popular in Russia, that even Burger King Russia made an ad about this game.
Кстати, игра так популярная в России, что Бургер Кинг России сделал реклама об этой игре.
Dec. 9, 2022
Schreib 5.
Korrigieren Sie bitte. Danke sehr!
"Teil 1
Du bist nicht gut in Mathematik und schreibst nächsten Dienstag eine Klassenarbeit. Du schreibst an deinen Freund Philipp eine SMS.
- Schreib, wo und warum du Hilfe brauchst.
-Frage, ob er dir helfen kann.
-Nenne einen Tag und die Uhrzeit."
Hallo Phillip,
kannst du mir helfen? ich bekomme wieder Note drei im Mathematik. Lernen wir uns zusammen in meinem Zimmer? Am Dienstag um 15 Uhr? Bis bald.
______________________________________
"Teil 2
Du musst bis morgen einen Artikel für die Schulzeitung abliefern, schaffst es aber nicht. Schreib deinem Klassenlehrer, Herrn Wolf, eine E-Mail: -Schreib, was das Problem ist.
- Sage, warum der Artikel nicht fertig ist.
- Frage nach einem neuen Abgabetermin."
Sehr geehrter Herr Wolt
leider soll ich Ihnen mein Problem sagen. Der Artikel ist sehr schwierig für mich. Ich mache das nie. Ich weiß nicht, wo und wie finde ich die Informationen, um den Artikel zu erledigen? Ich brauche mehr Zeit. Könnte ich nächste Woche am 20.12 meinen Artikel abliefern?
Viele Grüße
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Dec. 9, 2022
IELTS Writing Practice 2
I’m not sure if the last reason is suitable or even reasonable to support my view point but I can’t come up with any other idea. Please give me some advice on the essay or even refine the sentences. Thank you!
(Topic: The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?)
As the technical improvements in vehicles, automobiles have become more and more common in the UK. Some people may consider it an issue that needed to be monitored and controlled by the government, while others suggest that we encourage different means of transportation to lower the congestion. From my viewpoint, I agree with the legislation imposed on the cars to limit the amount of driver and develop more ways of transport to enhance the efficiency of traffic.
First of all, the rising wealth makes the vehicles become more affordable to every household, which means the number of cars are getting higher. To protect the rights and safety of the increasing drivers and pedestrians, the well-rounded laws and restrictions are needed.
Secondly, to achieve the concept and meet the main stream of the environmental protection, government should invest more in the instruction of, for example, bus stops, MRT stations, trains, etc. This policy may reduce the emission of fumes and lower the burden of traffic on the road by raising the willingness and making the transportation system more convenience for the residents and commuters.
Last but not least, the number of death and injury cases caused by car accidents remains high. This could be a reason why we should reduce or set an upper limit of cars running outside since other approaches of travelling, such as bus and trains, are relatively safer.
In conclusion, I consider the total amount of vehicles on the road should be overseen by the government to enhance traffic efficiency and reduce the car accidents. Also, more public transport should be built so as to slow down the global warming process and contribute to a way more sustainable society for our ancestors.
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Dec. 9, 2022
Frases 47
Nota: quiero usar el pronombre "ustedes" con el dialecto de América Latina. Quiero sonar lo más auténtica posible, por favor, siéntanse libres de dejar cualquier corrección.
1. During the summer, my house gets a sea breeze.
- Durante el verano, mi casa experimenta una brisa marina.
2. It is a clear sky.
- Es un día despejado.
3. During the morning there was a downpour (of rain).
- Durante la mañana, había un chaparrón.
4. It was a frosty night.
- Era una noche de helada.
5. We do not get many hail storms here.
- Aquí no experimentamos muchas granizadas.
6. I beat/whisk the eggs (cooking).
- Bato los huevos.
7. I had to peel the banana.
- Tengo que pelear el plátano.
8. I have known her since kindergarten.
- La conocí desde que jardín de infancia.
9. I am in my second year of university.
- Estoy en segundo de universidad.
10. I was early to work for once.
- Por una vez estaba temprano a trabajo.
11. Have you ever been to Australia?
- ¿Alguna vez has estado en Australia?
12. I drank it all in one go.
- Bebí todo de una vez.
13. Whenever I drive home I always want to eat McDonald´s.
- Cada vez conduzco a casa, quiero comer McDonald´s.
14. She lied to me time and time again.
- Me mintió una y otra vez.
15. On the odd occasion, my neighbour says hello.
- Una que otra vez, mi vecino dice hola.
16. Once upon a time…
- Érase una vez…
17. My sister is one year older than me.
- Mi hermana me lleva un año.
18. I have been year for two days.
- Llevo dos días.
19. It took me two hours to get home last night.
- Anoche me llevó dos horas volver a casa.
20. She took me by the hand.
- Me llevó de la mano.
Dec. 9, 2022
Play Tai Chi
December 9, 2022
I'm a freshman now. In this term, we learned 24 style taijiquan in PE class. We will have an exam soon. The content of the exam is to play 24 style tai ji quan to the teacher. This is too difficult for me to play it. I hope I can pass. There are so many moments that I must renew them immediately.
中文：我是大一新生，在这个学期我们在体育课上学了24式太极拳，我们很快就要考试，考试的内容就是给我们的老师打一遍，24式太极拳对我来说很难去做到它，我希望我可以过关，有很多的动作，所以我必须马上就去复习它们
Dec. 9, 2022
The City in which I Live (6)
Let's back to the year around 1985 when I was a kid in elementary school student. I have a strong memory of the charged escalator in a local department store till now.
The escalator is omnipresent nowadays, but around the year 1985 in Chongqing, most of us including me had no idea of it until I paid 0.1 Yuan to step onto it. At that time, my father who was a common engineer in a local institution, his salary was 100 Yuan (US$ 15) a month.
One weekend, my parents took me went shopping in downtown of Chongqing, in the Chongqing Dept. Store, a steel-made escalator connects the ground floor to the 5th floor. When people stepped onto it, then it would auto-transfer them up to a higher floor. Many local citizens were amazed, what an advanced technology it was! One saleswoman standed by, speaking loudly: "Anyone who wants to go to the higher floor must pay 0.1 Yuan each time! Or it's free to go by the walk stairs on foot over there like before."
My father quickly paid 0.5 Yuan for 5 of us and was in the queue.
The picture which was attached below was I found on the net. Actually, my experience was more crowded than it.
Dec. 9, 2022
Los impactos de las redes sociales sobre la sociedad
Últimamente escuché diferentes podcasts tratando del mismo tema: las redes sociales y sus impactos sobre la sociedad. Creo que es interesante ver todas las opiniones que hay.
Por un lado nos permiten conectar con personas de todas partes del mundo. Pueden ser amigos antiguos, familiares lejanos o extraños con quien tenemos intereses comunes. Pero, por otro lado, en realidad pueden alejarnos de los demás y de la vida real. Pueden también crear cámaras de eco y polarización en la sociedad. La circulación de información falsa no ayuda la situación.
Además podemos perder mucho tiempo en el Internet, en particular en las redes sociales, mientras que en teoría deberíamos ganar tiempo usándolo. Por ejemplo es más rápido buscar algo en Wikipedia con su celular que ir a la biblioteca para buscarlo en una enciclopedia.
Entonces no creo que sea posible decir si las redes sociales tienen un impacto positivo o negativo sobre la sociedad. Lo importante es aprender a utilizarles de una manera positiva.
Dec. 9, 2022
Mi noche
Hoy, despuese tocamos la cena, sentado en mi silla favorita a veo la tele. Cuando yo veo a la guia de television, vi que mi hockey favorito equipe fue jugando el hockey en St Louis a los siete de noche. Mi hockey favorito equipe es la Jets de Winnipeg. Despues del periodo fue terminado, hice las palomitos para mi esposa y yo.
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Dec. 8, 2022
Tagebuch 12.08
Ich freue mich sehr darüber, dass jemand meinen ganzen Text echt durchgelesen hat und sehr ernst nahm, mir meine alle Fehler Zeile für Zeile korrigiert hat.
Heute ist alles bei mir sehr gut. Ich habe schließlich angemeldet (nach Anmeldungsgesetz) dann kann ich ein deutsches Bankkonto öffnen. Toll!! Was noch? ich habe einer sehr netten Freundin von mir über meine schlechte Erfahrung erzählt.
ich glaube, wenn man Mut hat, schließlich mit anderen über etwas Trauriges zu reden, fühlt man immer besser als bevor. Sie ist sehr nett zu mir und hat mich gut getröstet. Wir teilen unsere Begegnungen miteinander. Sie sagte mir, dass sie einmal Glück hatte, dass der Busfahrer das gesehen habe und einen Mann rausgeworfen habe, der sich sexuell belästigen wolle....
Ich muss jetzt nicht zu viel Kopf darüber machen.
Jeden Tag fühle ich mich todmüde. Zum Glück habe ich Freuden, die immer für mich da sind.
Dec. 8, 2022
Redacción 5
¿Qué país quieres mudarse? ¿Por qué?
Todas las personas tienen un país más favorito y también quieren moverse a ese país. Para mi tengo también el país favorito y quiero moverse, el que es Japón.
En primer lugar, creo que Japón es muy ordenada. No puede ver nada basura por la calle, y sus edificios también se constituyen con bien cuidado. Me siento muy cómodo cuando camino por la calle.
Segundo, los japoneses son muy educado. Siempre dan un saludo educadamente y dicen：¿En qué puedo ayudarte?". Además, te ayudarán cuando parecen ser que tenga dificultades.
Por último, creo que la comida japonesa es muy delicioso. No solo se parece muy bonita sino que también el sabor es muy bueno. Además, me
me gusta mucho sushi, y el sushi en Japón es muy refresco.
Sobre todo, son las razones de que quiero mudarse a Japón. Quiero comprar un edificio en Japón en el futuro y vivir allá para divertir y sentir la vida en Japón.
Dec. 8, 2022
Why We Compare Ourselves To Others?
Let’s be fair, we compare ourselves to others all the time. When we see someone who is driving an outstanding sports car, or we find out that our college friend have bought a luxurious apartment, most of us start thinking “Gosh, what a lucky man.” Frankly speaking, we also compare ourselves to others in more prosaic circumstances: when we see our friend's new clothes or notice how easily our coworker builds a friendship with others. Immediately after we find out that someone is funnier, richer, or smarter than we are, we start to compare ourselves to them. Unfortunately, most of the time our conclusions aren’t in our favor. Comparing creates negative feelings and causes us to feel jealous, envy, and frustrated. We began asking ourselves, why don’t we achieve the things other people have, and why everyone looks happier then we are. However, should we really compare ourselves to others?
When Have We Started to Compare Ourselves to Others?
Indeed, people have compared themselves to others in the past. Nevertheless, at those times there were no Internet and TV, so people counted more on their intuition when they set their goals and create expectations from life. However, with the development of TV and internet, comparison have become the non-stop activity. TV ads amplified consumeristic crave, so people learnt longing for things they don’t actually need, whether it is a new pair of jeans or a sumptuous apartment. Media created a perfect trap that till now have been successfully provoking in people irresistible desire to have.
With the coming of Internet, this craving for better looking or having better things became enormous because of the very nature of social media. On Instagram, we every day see numerous profiles of wealthy millionaires cheerful bloggers, and pretty models. As a result, even if we don’t want to, we inevitably compare their lives with ours, which leads to negative feelings about ourselves.
Is Comparing Bad?
The fact is, comparing is not that bad. It’s true that it’s part of our nature which helps us to make sure we do things correctly in life. It’s also in our nature to strive for achievements and crave for something what we want to obtain. These features help us to become a better person and gain satisfaction from life, whether through aspiring career goals, learning new skills, or travelling to new places. Comparing becomes a problem when we place too much attention on it and when we think that others are better than we are. Comparing causes envy, jealous and dissatisfaction; it’s a tedious process that places a great pressure on our feeling of self-worth, and makes us vulnerable and insecure. Someone begins thinking about their imperfection, others start analyzing their so called “flaws.”
Comparing ourselves makes u believe that we should change and obtain things that we necessarily don't need. Thus, our disappointment and anxiety push us toward new goals, and we strive to become a better version of ourselves: smart enough, beauty enough and so on. We go to the gym, change careers, go on a diet, thinking that it’ll help us to be the best. It seems that our accomplishments should help us finally feel satisfied. However, when we achieve something, we don’t really feel any different.
Why does that happen? The problem is, the rush for something better is a never-ending process, known in psychology as a “hedonic treadmill.” Once we reach something, we return to the stable baseline of happiness, raise our expectations, and, again, want more. A new state of being soon thereafter becomes a new norm, so we start expecting more from the world: more luxurious apartments, more attractive body, or a successful career. Indeed, after getting what we want we again begin comparing ourselves to others and never feel grateful for what we already have. As a result, comparing never stops and leads only to bigger dissatisfaction in life. Struggling with mental illnesses, food disorders, depression, and anxiety are the results of the rush for the so called “better version of ourselves.”
How To Stop Comparing?
The idea that other people have better life is probably an illusion that creates our own minds. In fact, when we envy an attractive model, or a guy in an expensive Ferrari, we don’t really know what we jealous for, because we don’t see the reality of others life. Who knows, maybe this model is struggling with a food disorder, and this guy have no friends because of his wealthiness. The same is true for social media. When we see famous bloggers on bounty islands, or our cheerful friends on their holidays — in posh environment and in luxurious dresses — we compare their “top moments” with our average, day-to-day life. We think their lives are easy and free from worries, forgetting that nobody is willing to show their exhaustion, sadness, or loneliness online. We forget that wealthy businessman probably has an enormous burden of responsibility and, perhaps, works so much that he doesn’t see his family and children. Probably, he also has no weekends or holidays.
We don’t know what it is, what we are jealous of, so it’s better to be jealous carefully. It would be better to keep in mind that all of us have our own unique circumstances, talents, and personality. Every single person has their own advantages and problems, so it’s just incorrect to compare ourselves with others. Instead of comparing, let’s concentrate on something what we really can control, namely our life. We can’t control others, but we can see who we were yesterday, who we’re becoming today in order to get what we want tomorrow. We can accept ourselves and live our unique lives in authentic ways. Marcus Aurelius said that the best way to live is by accepting other people and ourselves, and learn to live well regardless on the circumstances. If we accept who we are, we liberate our minds from the buzz of social judgments and comparing. Therefore, get the chance to become truly happy.
Dec. 8, 2022
Комментарий для Николас
Привет Николас! Рада, что ты вернулся. Я испанка и учу русский язык. Первый раз, что я тебе встретила был на видео на канал называется 'Genia y caballo'. Тогда, я захотела начать изучение русского языка, но была побоялась потому, что я слышала, что русский один из самых сложных языков в мире. Женя была одним из немногих каналов изучении русского, когда русский не был так популярный, как сегодня. Я тебя нашла одно из её видео и я была впечатлена, что ты имеешь свободно говорить русский, особенно зная, что ты говорящий по-испански, как и я. Ты был моей мотивацией, чтобы начать учиться годами. Я была очень грустная, когда ты забросил свой канал. Я твой канал забыла а я продолжала учиться. 4 дня назад, я тебе вспомнила и подписался ещё раз. Какое совпадение! На следующий день ты загрузил это видео. Я не могу быть счастливее. Можно записать видео, где говоришь как выучил русский?))) Спасибо за всё!!!
Dec. 8, 2022
Challenge, Day 68
Today is the 68th day of my daily English challenge. At noon, my sister and I went out by her car, and she had listened a song by Céline Dion in French is ' Je voudrais parlais à mon père.' I think in English it means ' I'd like to talk to my father' to honor our father. It's a strong words and a song.
Dec. 8, 2022
Día 38 de mi reto
Hoy es el día 38 de mi reto de español. Ahora quiero escribir algunas oraciónes.
-Estás engordando, necesitas perder peso y evitar de la comida chatarra.
-Estás engordando, necesitas dejar de comer dulces.
Creo que es diferente decir entre ' dejar de' y ' evitar de' ? ¿Me puede ayudar por favor?
-Ayer, compré una camisa. No me queda muy bien. Mañana, voy a devolverla.
Estoy agradecida por este sitio web y todos los que me han ayudado.
Dec. 8, 2022
The difference between people who loves cats and who loves d
When I was a child I noticed that all people around me were divided on two parts. There are the part who loves cats and the other one, who loves dogs. In the same period of time I made a conclusion that it depended on a character of the person. For instance, more independent people like cats more than dogs. These people don’t need to have a permanent connection with their pets. And we can say the same thing about cats. This sort of pet doesn’t need to spend a lot of with people. They can find an activity by their own. Food is only one thing they really want to get from owners.
The situation with dogs is the totally opposite. Usually dog’s owner is a person who likes to be active, talkative and in the moving all time. Such people prefer to have a pet like a partner, a companion for them. Also, I have heard one interesting moment about the difference between owners of cats and owners of dogs. First people are people who need to love, but seconds are people who need to be loved. I think there is something in this.