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Ma vie sans l'internet
Si j'avais vivrais ma vie sans l'internet, beaucoup de choses serrait changer. Si le même chose qui n'est pas dans ma vie, mais j'ai un ordinateur encore, ensuite les chose sera plus inconvient. Je ne pourrais pas faire quelques mes devoirs et je ne pourrais pas remettre toutes mes devoirs à mes professurs.
À part l'université j'aurai les problems en ma vie personelle. Je n'ai pas beacoup de distraction car je n'ai que de plus de facile distractions comme sérises TV, films, et vidéos maison ont enregistré sur ma externe disque dur. Si j'ai téléchargé les chose avant l'internet a disparu, au moin j'ai mes jeux vidéos, mais maintenant je ne les joue pas beaucoup, alors, peut-être je devenirai plus du joueur pour ne pas mourir d'ennui.
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Writing Challenge, Day 189
Today is day 189 of my daily English writing challenge. Before yesterday, I sent an email to my friend but I recieved this not : Delivery failed for recipient. I did no understand about it. That's why I have just sent a text from my phone to ask him if he has a problem with his email.
April 8, 2023
Journal 08/04
Joyeuses Pâques !
C'est samedi le 8 avril aujourd'hui. J'ai un petit dîner avec mon mari à Nice. Nous mangeons un plat traditionnelle pour le region. Ils s'appelle << pissaladière niçoise >>. C'est très délicieuse, avec oignons et huiles. C'est similaires des pizzas mais plus de goût.
Bon soirée !
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April 8, 2023
Schönheitsoperationen bei jugen Menschen (Forumsbeitrag)
An alle,
auch ich möchte heute in unserem Blog etwas zum Thema ,,Schönheitsoperationen bei jugen Menschen" schreiben.
Viele jugen Menschen interessieren sich heutzutage für Schönheit und Schönheitsoperationen, einige sind davon besessen und das finde ich gar nicht gut. Ich habe nichts gegen Schönheitsoperationen aber für jugen Menschen bin ich dagegen. Man kann sagen, dass Social Media der Hauptgrund für die Zahl von solchen Eingriffen ist. Viele Menschen auf Social Media zeigen, dass sie das perfekte Aussehen haben. Die junge Menschen vergleichen sich mit ihnen, da sie jung und leicht zu beeinflussen sind und entscheiden sich für eine Schönheitsoperation. Aber solche Operationen sind nicht die einzige Weg schön auszusehen, darüber gibt es viele Alternativen, die bekannste ist ,,Make-up". Mit Hilfe von Make-up kann man sein Aussehen viel verbessern. Es hilft auch eine Hautpflege-Routine zu haben. Aber die Schönheitsoperationen sind besser zu vermeiden, da sie viele Komplikationen haben können. Außerdem ist es möglich, dass einem das Ergebnis nicht gefällt und alles bedauert. Zusammenfassend möchte ich sagen, dass alle Menschen gut aussehen und man braucht keine Schönheitsoperation sondern braucht sich selbst zu akzeptieren.
April 8, 2023
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It's 12:44 o'clock right now, and I'm just lie down on my bed and thinking about the future.That's too many unknow for me about tomorrow.I have to find a way to improve my English cause for my jod, but I have no idea how can I do.English was so difficulty......By the way have any one suggest some way for me about how to improve the English.
April 8, 2023
Education
Would you prefer to learn at home rather than to go to school? Why?
I'd prefer to learn at home to go to school. I used to go to university by bus, so I had to get up rather early in order to have time to have breakfast, get dressed, and get to the bus station on time. Moreover, the university was nearly fifty minutes away from the bus station, so I also got home too late. For this reason, I didn't have enough time to do homeworks and much less to unwind. I didn't sleep well these days that even I couldn't focus in class either, so my academic performance ended up decreasing.
When it comes to learning at home, I don't have those problems. To begin with, I don't waste endless hours of time going from your home to university. Having more time, I can also study better for my exams. Then, I feel less exhausted and overwhelmed as I can programme my time more efficiently. Of course, studying at home has its problems. For example, you are more likely to get distracted by your computer or mobile phone than in class. Plus, if you want to study at home, you must have a computer and access to the internet. This means that only the families that are able to afford to pay for internet can study at home.
In conclusión, I view positively learning at home and I believe that it is an interesting issue that institutions must discuss, and consider how to integrate it with the current academic system in order to have a more inclusive education.
April 8, 2023
An Analysis of College Enrollment Expansion
The table illustrates the number of college enrollment each year from 1997 to 2005, while the line graph compares the number of three categories of university enrollment in the course of those years.
The table outlines that the enrollment of college enrollment changes every year. The most enrollment of the first-category universities in the course of those years is 700 000. And the most enrollment of the second-category universities in the course of those years is 1, 670, 000.
In 2003, the third-category universities started enrolling students.
The line graph shows that three categories universities enrollment varied during those years. The first-category universities had a slight growth from 1997 to 2000. Starting from 2001 the number had increased slowly. The number of second-category universities increased at a quicker rate from 1997 to 2005. In 2005, the third-category universities enrolled students and increased at a uniform fast rate.
Generally, in order to continue reforming reasonably, we should make unremitting efforts.
April 8, 2023
Journey to the Peach Garden (2)
Hello everyone! Today, I tried to translate a classical Chinese article called "Journey to the Peach Garden". I will translate the original text in three parts. This is the second part of this article, and the first part can be found on my homepage.
They were very surprised when they saw the fisherman. People asked him where he was from. He answered the questions in detail. Then they invited the fisherman to go their home and made a big meal. The whole tawn came to visit and ask him some news when they heard that. They said that their ancestor came to this isolated place to escape from war in Qin Dynasty with his wife, his children and his neighbor, and they didn't go out anymore. Thus they began to isolate themselves from society. Some of them asked the fisherman what dynasty was there outside now. To his surprise, they didn't know that there had been a dynasty named Han, not to mention the Wei and Jin Dunasty. The fisherman told them what he had heard outside in detail, they all lamented. Each of the other people invited hin to their own home, they all took out a big diner to entertain him. The fisherman stayed there for a few days, then he said goodbye to the villager, but they all told him that this place wasn't beneath to the people outside the forest.
April 8, 2023
Schmigadoon Short song
喬什，口語]听著，Betsy，我覺得是時候就我們今晚將要發生的事情制定一些基本規則
[貝西，口語]為什麼是 Skinner 博士，是什麼讓你認為我們之間會發生什麼事？你知道嗎，我認為你對我的看法是錯誤的
[貝琪]所有的女孩調情和談浪漫
很快他們就看到了一條褲子
当太陽下山時，他們讓道德滑坡
但我要等到我成為新娘
[喬什，口語]哦，很高興聽到你這樣說，貝琪，因為，事情就是這樣——你太年輕了。
[貝琪]其他女孩喜歡展示自己的皮膚
男孩們試著看，他們想犯罪
願意做我從未嘗試過的事情
因為我要等到我成為新娘
[丹尼，梅麗莎]寶貝，你太過分了（失去理智）希望你還有那種特別的感覺（我的防禦消失了）寶貝，不要假裝，看看裡面有什麼（是的）
[丹尼和梅麗莎]現在是時候享受旅程了
April 8, 2023
Vida cotidiana 28
Esta mañana me estaba reflexionando sobre la diferencia entre Minneapolis y Austin, y me puse un poco sentimental al pensar en todos los lugares geniales que descubrí mientras vivía en Minneapolis. Aunque viví allí por alrededor de seis años, el tiempo realmente pasó en un abrir y cerrar de ojos. Me gustaba poder andar en bicicleta y llegar a cualquier parte de la ciudad en una cuestión de treinta minutos. Algunas veces, pasé horas en la bicicleta, pasando por prácticamente toda la ciudad. Era realmente interesante y divertido. Hasta ahora, no se siente lo mismo aquí en Austin. Una gran parte de eso es que vivimos relativamente lejos del centro, y no hay manera de llegar en bicicleta, a menos que queramos pasar muchas horas de ida y vuelta.
April 8, 2023
Clase de spinning
Esta semana quise ir al clase de spin porque parecía que sería muy divertido y es gratis para los miembros del gimnasio. Estaba nerviosa porque era mi primera vez en una clase como esta. Cuando llegué no sabía qué hacer pero le pregunté a la recepcionista y ella me dijo que podía pedir prestado zapatos y entrar dentro de la habitación hasta que comience la clase. Entré en la habitación y elegí una bicicleta. Cuando comenzó la clase me perdí en la música y la luz y el tiempo pasó muy rápido. Al final me sentí muy bien y feliz. Ahora quiero volver.
April 8, 2023
Emprisonnée par la routine
J’ai toujours vécu ma vie avec un esprit libre, sans vraiment organiser mes journées, je suis allergique aux calendriers.
Malheureusement, la vie en cette période est difficile pour moi, beaucoup de choses sont arrivées et je suis en train de les apprendre à gérer. Un des conseils les plus donnés et faciles à réaliser, c’est créer une routine, et je l’ai fait, mais elle est devenue une prison. L’impossibilité de finir quelques tâches est une pensée vraiment stressante pour mon cerveau. Je n’ai rien écrit hier, mais j’ai vécu l’acte comme une violence.
Je sais bien que prendre des pauses est une bonne chose, je suis la première à donner ce conseil à mes amis, parce que je dois vivre mon humanité avec tellement difficulté ?
April 8, 2023
N2021 P1 Q3
（今年假期，你想找工作，你的叔叔可以帮你。告诉他你什么时间有空，你能做什么，还有喜欢什么样的工作。）
亲爱的李叔，您好！
非常感谢您这次帮助我！作为一个中学生，找工作真不容易，所以这对我来说是一件天大的好事情。
废话不多说，我知道您十分忙，所以今天就来简单地描述一下我的工作能力和时间。先说时间。我从本周的星期五到下个月底都有空，每天能从上午八点半到晚上十一点左右打工。然后，至于我能做什么：基本上什么都可以，比如打扫、跟客人聊天、给您按摩等等。但是如果非要选的话，我就最想做一名兼职程序员，帮大家保护好网站，发挥自己的编程能力。
期待您的回信。
祝好！
您的侄儿，小文
2007年12月22日
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Empire vs Republic
I just read the definitions of 'Empire' and 'Republic,' which have left me with some thoughts. The former is ruled by a single person, while the latter is ruled by an elected representative, so I suggest the name of the People's Republic of A (a big country name) should be changed to "the Holy A Empire".
Also according to the definition of "president", the ruler in A should not be titled president, Your Majesty is the right name.
April 8, 2023
Une Personne
Il suffit qu'une personne pour faire une grande différence. Aujourd'hui de plus en plus gens se disent qu'ils ne feront aucune différence, par exemple sur le sujet du recyclage, rien ne changera quand je fais le recyclage moi aussi, alors il ne faut pas que je commence à le faire, ceci est probablement ce qu'ils se disent, ce moyen de penser est une part de la raison pourquoi les problèmes se remplier. Une différence est une différence peu importe à quel point grande ou petite. C'est stupide d'arrêter de faire ce qu'il faut à cause de taille de l'accomplisement. La plus important chose est de faire bien parce que c'est le mieux pour tout le monde, l'environement et nous mêmes. Quand la majorité de gens se feront des efforts cette petite différence se transforme sur une grande différence.
April 8, 2023
Sabato
Che bella giornata! Ci siamo svegliati tardi e abbiamo fatto colazione. Poi abbiamo fatto una lunga passeggiata con 13 ( uno dei miei gatti ).
Molta gente lo guardava con affetto e facevano domande su di lui. Gli piacciono le persone e ha anche conosciuto la mia amica dagli Stati Uniti. Mi manca già un sacco, ci siamo sentite su Whatsapp ieri sera.
È già arrivata a Roma in cui studierà dal ottobre. È partita da Bucarest per Roma. Secondo me, è molto più velocemente volare dalla Romania invece dagli Stati Uniti. L'Europa è meravigliosa.
La passeggiata era piacevole fino a quando un gran cane si è avvicinato troppo a 13. Fortunatamente l'ho preso in braccio perché il cane era una razza pericolosa, era un Amstaff. Il suo proprietario non sembrava gestirlo abbastanza bene. Sono felice che 13 sta bene adesso e non gli è successo niente di male.
Sto preparando il pranzo, e dopo che avrò mangiato potrò fare un pisolino.
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Kyoto is famous for its bamboo. Iwashimizu Shrine is located in Yawata, Kyoto. Yawata is also famous for its bamboo. Edison once used Yawata's bamboo as a filament for an incandescent light bulb. Right now bamboo shoots are in season in Japan. This morning, I bought some bamboo shoots near Iwashimizu Shrine. I'm looking forward to eating them with beer for dinner.
京都は竹で有名です。石清水八幡宮は京都の八幡にあります。八幡も竹で有名です。エジソンはかつて白熱電球のフィラメントに八幡の竹を使ったことがありました。今、日本は筍のシーズンです。今朝、石清水八幡宮の近くで筍を買いました。今晩、ビールと一緒に筍を食べるのが楽しみです。
April 8, 2023
How to Read in your Target Language
It was in the morning and, just like usual I was taking notes in my notebook. I was having fun learning while listening to his voice (which sounded a bit high-pitched by the way). The teacher wrote some syllables and pronunced them. I wrote them and repeated after him.
In that moment I never thought I was learning wrong how to read in Japanese.
When I was in kindergarten, I learned the vowels and the consonants. Then, learned some words and finally how to read them out loud, but is that the best way to learn how to read?
Recently I've been learning how to read and I want to teach you how to use this information to reading faster in your target language.
Glenn Doman was a physical therapyst who worked with children with cerebral injuries. He wrote a book called "How to teach your baby to read" in which he explains his method. I collected some useful information from this book to create this journal.
But his book is about babies and we're definitely not babies so, why should we learn by following his method?
You see, if you start learning syllables or the alphabet, you'll read letters, not words. Thus, your speed reading as well as comprehension will be diminished.
Letters and syllabals are abstract. We don't fully understand them so, in order to remember them, we associate with words.
For instance, if we read the word "law" using an old technique, we would do this:
L stands for Lamp.
A stands for Ant.
W stands for Water.
What meant that word? I don't know, I just imagined a lamp who brightened an ant who was searching for water. That's why learning alphabet or syllables at first makes reading comprehension even harder.
So, what about learning complete words? What could happen?
Rather than giving you the answer, I encourage you to learn how to read in your target language.
Back to Glenn Doman's book, he mentions how to use his method:
At first, give yourself 10 second to watch each word.
Once you've identified them, watch them for less than one second. Start by reading common words including parts of the body and following these phases.
1. Words.
2. Word pairs.
3. Phrases.
4. Sentences.
5. Alphabet.
Who's learning how to read mustn't pronunce the words in order to stop subvocalization. In a nutshell, subvocalization means repeating in your mind what you read. This is a bad habit we learn as a kids and it slows your reading speed as well as comprehension.
And now you may ask, "how can I use this?"
These are a few examples:
Flashcards
In the best case, a native speaker teach you words by showing you flashcards for less than one second and pronunces them. However, if this isn't possible there are other options you can choose from to read faster in your target language.
-Teach
Teaching is learning twice.
Teach someone else how to read in your target language by using Glenn Doman's method.
Personally, I like teaching my mom how to read Japanese kanjis.
-Use technology
Here's an example about how you can do it: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ZF2zuZvyk08
April 8, 2023
Mon ami virtuel
Je manquais beacoup ce site, merci à tous que m'ont corrigé, quan même sont tous des inconnus je me rapelle du nom d'utilisateur de la plupart, et tout les conseilles. Desolè je n'arrive a tout mettre en practique mais j'ai amélioré énnormement mon écriture, j'ai obtenue le plus élevée scores à l'université et au travail. Tous ici sont comme mes amies virtuels. J'espère que tout va bien dans vos vies.
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