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Aug. 22, 2023
Vacanza
A settembre voglio andare in Toscana. Voglio andare con miei amici. Per cominciare vogliamo andare a la casa. Per la prima stasera vogliamo andare in la cita per cena. Voglio mangiare una pizza. Per un giorno voglio andare a Firenze. Per cominciare voglio un cappacino a un piazza poi voglio forse un museo. Andiamo a Fienze in treno.
Aug. 22, 2023
Writing Challenge, Day 263
Today is Day 263 of my daily English writing challenge. Today, I woke up early . I made two cooking videos. I didn't do another things because I felt tired so I stoped to do it.
I took a shower then I took a rest because my body need it.
In the afternoon, I revised some Spanish lessons. In the evening I'll post one video on TikTok. I hope get a lot of views.
Aug. 22, 2023
Meine Schule
In Amerika das schulsystem ist interessant. Schulen sind entweder öffentlich oder privat. Wir beginnen mit der Vonschule, und enden mit 12 Klasse. Freshman, Sophomore, Junior, und Senior sind die vier jahre in oberschule. Nach die oberschule, du kannst auf College gehen. Für mich, Oberschule war sehr schwer. Ich denke, es war nicht spaß, aber meine freunde schon. Meine freunde denken oberschule war sehr einfach, denn sie studieren nicht. Meine Freunde macht viele party gerne. Ich möchte lieber zu hause blieben und studiere. Jetzt, ich studiere psychologie auf Universitat und meine freunde blieben noch zu hause und haben viele partys.
Um das Schulsystem hier zu verbessern, ich wurde lehren wie wichtig ist es zu lernen. Dann wurden die studenten nicht party, und sie wurden studieren stattdessen.
Aug. 22, 2023
Pas de realtions
Je suis certain que la majorité de personnes aimerait avoir au moins une personne proche d'eux quelq'un sur qui on peut faire confiance et qui nous rend plaisir. Malheureusement quelques gens se concentre trop sur cela, c'est-a-dire ils feront tous pour avoir une relation avec une personne de sexe opposé (généralement), en croieant que ça va resoudre toute leur problème. C'est une idée naive, vraisemblablement la personne qui le souhaite est même pas prêt d'en avoir une. On ferait mieux de se concentrer sur soi même et savoir ce que l'on peut faire pour s'améliorer physiquement comme mentalement. Une relation amoureuse ce n'est pas quelque chose que l'on devrait forcer mais quelque chose que l'on doit saisir au bon moment.
Aug. 22, 2023
Please Review My Essay
Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions vary on the attributes that companies should seek in candidates. Some emphasize innovation and self-direction, while others stress the importance of teamwork and the ability to follow instructions. In my view, all of these qualities are crucial for a company's success.
On the one hand, recruiting innovative and independent employees can bring benefits to a company. These individuals typically require less direct supervision and guidance since they can take ownership of their tasks and projects. This, in turn, lightens the workload of their managers and allows them to focus on strategic planning and higher-level responsibilities, ultimately fostering the company's growth and development. Furthermore, such employees bring fresh perspectives and unique problem-solving approaches to the organization. This creativity often leads to improvements in products or services, helping companies to remain competitive in today's rapidly changing business landscape. Google stands as a prime example of a company that has successfully stayed at the forefront of innovation by valuing creativity and independence. In Google's recruitment process, they conduct tests to evaluate candidates for these specific qualities. This approach enables them to pinpoint and hire individuals who excel in these areas, which plays a significant role in the development of groundbreaking products that originate from the innovative and creative contributions of their employees, such as Google Maps and Gmail.
On the other hand, hiring cooperative and compliant individuals have its own advantages. Their ability to complete tasks in accordance with established protocols and procedures can ensure that products or services meet standardized quality levels. This holds exceptional significance in industries where factors like quality control and regulatory compliance are paramount, such as healthcare and manufacturing. Moreover, when staff members can work effectively in a team. Furthermore, an organization typically includes various departments, teams, and individuals responsible for different aspects of the operation. To ensure its seamless operation, it is essential for these diverse elements to work together in unison and harmony. Hiring individuals who can collaborate effectively can contribute to this internal harmony and smooth functioning.
In conclusion, hiring creative and self-directed employees can reduce managerial workload and foster innovation and improvements. Conversely, recruiting collaborative and compliant individuals can ensure standardized quality levels of products and services and smooth work processes.
Aug. 22, 2023
Journal
I had a nightmare, so I woke up at midnight.
I saw a Skype message which was a notification from my English teacher to inform me that she has opened her lesson schedule for September.
I booked 20 lessons from her immediately. (It is the maximum amount of lessons on her timetable that I can book)
And then, I checked messages in a language learning group. The question was: If I have enough time, I (will / would) watch TV later at night, the words in the bracket which one is correct?
A British woman said both were correct. Her opinion was that "would" could be used in different tenses.
An American man said "will" was correct. I was confused. By the way, which one is correct?
Aug. 22, 2023
La COVID
J'aime écouter des podcasts sur Radio France. Parfois, je réécoute des émissions qui ont été enregistrées pendant la crise de la COVID. On s'y aperçoit de l'espoir des interlocuteurs que le monde puisse se transformer pour le mieux après la maitrise du virus. On pense à son propre désir d'avoir voulu changer sa vie ou au moins quelque chose dans sa vie.
Je n'en ai pas réalisé grand-chose, mais l'énorme volonté que j'ai éprouvé de le faire reste toujours ancrée en moi.
Ce souvenir a peut-être autant changé mon quotidien qu'un changement radical.
Ce souvenir d'avoir été trop lâche pour abandonner le confort dans lequel je me suis installé depuis des années.
Aug. 22, 2023
Budapest (17)
Nyugat-Európa különböző részein már volt. Most jött Magyarországra. A rendszerváltás után azt hallotta, hogy keleten barátságosak az emberek, és azt állította, hogy amikor megérkezett, ezt így is tapasztalta. Lett egy magyar barátnője, és később gyerekük is született. Neki azonban más tervei voltak, továbbállt és Oroszországba ment. És ezt az utat útlevél nélkül meg kellett tennie. A gyerektáborban az egyik este azt mesélte a tábortűznél, amikor már csak a tanárok ültek ott, hogy utazása során vesztette el útlevelét, mindjárt nagy utazása elején. Egy lány lopta el tőle. Oroszországban azonban nem vicceltek vele: nem volt nála útlevél, úgyhogy börtönbe került. A magyar barátnője segíteni akart, a nyelviskola igazgatója is, viszont nem hagyta, hogy segítsenek rajta. Mégis kiszabadult, visszajött, viszont most már a barátnője nem fogadta vissza. Egy idő után megint továbbállt.
A másik srác svájci volt. Azért jött Budapestre, mert Svájcban már nem akart bankban dolgozni. Mást érzett magában, nagyon szeretett írni. Ezért sokszor kávéházakban tartózkodott, miközben mindent leírt. Neki is voltak zűrös lányügyei. Mindig, amikor a lány terhes lett, otthagyta. Az első barátnőjét meg feleségül vette, aztán elvált és az új barátnőjét felcserélte egy másikra, amikor az terhes lett. Nem tudott megállapodni. Időnként visszament Svájcba, de mindig visszajött. Azt mondta, a lánya miatt, mert azt igazán szerette.
Aug. 22, 2023
My day
I got up today and i was surprised because I slept above 10 hours. I should admit that I didn't ever sleep as much as today.
Then my mother cook breakfast and it doesn't beyong question but i need to write it : my mum cooks the best pancakes i ever tasted. We had eaten and gone to bed to relax after breakfast. At that time we are usually read the books : mum her book, i mine. Today shouldn't was an exseption but i had lacked a focus to read that why i just had been scrolling instagram. After that mum go to the market and i started cook lunch for us. I cooked the first dish was springed to my mind : salat with mushrooms, eggs, chees and tuna. Also I prepared meat for tommorow's lunch. I hope it will be edible, hah.
For this moment my mum had returned and her trip to the store was worth it : she bought very tasty plums.
We had been eating when we understood that it time to go to mother's first job and we are need to hurry. We immediately had started to take all necessary staff and run out the flat.
When we got to the office , all employees already left the office. Therefor mum was can start to clean up it. As usual i go to one of the officie's rooms and begin practicing my English.
After all we had gone to the second mother's job. Throughout the trip I had fighted with dad by phone, beacuse my dad thinks that i spare not enought time for him and he lacks our calls (Now we live in different countries). We didn't hang up to each other but we ended our conversetion too fast and in a bad mood.
It was a long day and when we had gotten home, we decided to have an early night.
Aug. 22, 2023
Aug. 22, 2023
Formal letter connected to the World Heritage Committee II.
In my opinion the new site offers habitat for several plants like such as trees, flowers and bushes. Additionally, mushrooms can also occur there.
Besides that, I have a personal memory connected to the site and I would like to share that. My mother's grandmother lived with her husband the neighbourhood of this forest years ago. They liked the birds, especially the owls and they always wanted one. In this way, indirectly, they have now received it.
Thank you so much your selfless movement.
Yours faithfully,
Clara Clein
Aug. 22, 2023
Formal letter connected to the World Heritage Committe I
Dear World Heritage Committee,
let me express my joy connected to the news bulletin below. I am really grateful for your approving.
I consider important issue to provide a home for an endangered species. In this area the specific protected owls can live in safe.
Furthermore, due to huge range of primary forest not only the owls, but also other smaller animals too can live there.
Aug. 22, 2023
Email to my friends about language course II.
Additionally, I think it's easy to learn words by using not by memorizing. Naturally, if the word is more complicated, it's difficult to remember that for me.
In the other hand I've a little problem with the pronounciation and speaking with foreign or native people. I find hard these things, because the Hungarian and English language aren't same at all.
But I try to practice a lot and gain courage enough to speak more.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards
Lola
Aug. 22, 2023
Email to my friends about language course I.
Dear Rob,
I was really happy, when I was read your email. Unfortunately, I didn't have time to answer to you. I hope everything is fine with you.
You won't believe, but I started a new language course a few weeks ago. I really enjoy that, because I've already gotten a lot of successful experiences.
I consider it's easy to read an simpler book in English, because it doesn't consist of difficult words and phrases. Furthermore, I prefer to watch moves in foreign language or listen to podcasts, musics, because these activities improve my skills in the listening and speaking too.
Aug. 22, 2023
Bushaltestelle
Sehr geehrte Herr und Frau Börlach,
ich habe gelesen, dass Sie Ihren Hund verloren haben. Zum Glück habe ich den gestern am Kiosk gefunden! Der Hund sieht genauso aus, wie Sie in Ihrer Suchanzeige geschrieben haben. Sie können mich morgen nach 12 Uhr erreichen. Meine Adresse ist ... Bis bald!
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Timur M
Aug. 22, 2023
Eine Entschulding
Sehr geehrter Herr Weber,
es tut mir wirklich leid, aber ich kann Ihren Kurs nicht besuchen. Ich soll meine Tochter zum Artzt bringen, um eine Impfung zu machen. Leider kann ich den Termin zum Artzt nicht verschieben. Sagen Sie mir bitte, ob ich an einem anderen Tag kommen könnte?
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Timur M
Aug. 22, 2023
Fremdsprachen
Ich kann ruhig verstehen, warum Kevin solche Meinung hat. Er hat Recht. Oft können die junge Erwachsenen nach die Schüle keine Fremdsprachen. Das Studium von Fremdsprachen ist ein langer Prozess, der mehr als ein paar Stunden Unterricht pro Woche verlangt. Man muss jeden Tag mindendestens kleinen fleißigen Schritte machen, um fließend zu werden. Ich stimme natürlich zu, dass jeder Schüler
Englisch lernen soll. Schließlich ist diese Sprache sehr nützlich. Aber was andere Sprachen angeht, bin ich mir nicht sicher. Zurzeit lerne ich Deutsch, aber ich würde Deutsch gleichzeitig mit einer anderen Sprache doch nie nicht lernen.
Aug. 22, 2023
Muriel Barbery : l’élégance du hérisson
J’avais lu la version chinois il y a quelques années, c’était avant que j’apprends le français. L’histoire était un peu compliquée mais en général, la traduction n’était pas bien faite. Ce que j’ai retint le plus, c’était que dans la maison de Kakuro, la musique s’est déclenchée quand qu’on tirait la chasse d’eau au cabinet. C’est très joli et très japonais. Alors, c’est pourquoi j’avais choisi ce livre comme le livre de ce voyage au Japon. En fait, j’avais aussi préparé d'autres livres en espagnol mais au final, j’ai refait ce livre plusieurs fois.
Avec la version originale, cette histoire me plaît beaucoup. C’est beaucoup plus joli et drôle. C’est l'histoire d’une fille très intelligente (Paloma) qui détestait le monde et a planifié à se suicider, d’une concierge très civilisée qui voulait protéger son interieur du monde exterieur et d’un japonais qui a déménagé à Paris. La première partie de l’histoire parle beaucoup de “Qu’est-ce que c’est la vie ?” et la vieille vie de Paloma et de Renée. Le rencontre avec Kakuro et puis Renée a éclairé la vie de Paloma. L’histoire amoureuse entre Kakuro et Renée non seulement apportait la raison de vivre à Paloma, mais aussi illuminait la vie de Renée. Même si l’histoire se termine par la mort de Renée, je trouve que c’est très beau.
J’aime beaucoup ces phrases : “C’est peut-être ça la vie : beaucoup de désespoir mais aussi quelques moments de beauté où le temps n’est plus le même. C’est comme si les notes de musique faisaient un genre de parenthèse dans le temps; de suspension; un ailleurs ici même; un toujours dans le jamais. Oui, c’est ça, un toujours dans le jamais.”
Quand j’étais à Sapporo, il pleuvait tout le temps, et dans le train de Sapporo à Asahikawa, j’ai lu ça et quand je suis arrivée, j’ai terminé le livre. Je me sentais tellement bien parce que comme ces phrases m’ont donné l'énergie de continuer mon voyage et justement, la visite au Zoo Asahikawa était bien passée !
Aug. 22, 2023
Aug. 22, 2023
Aug. 22, 2023
Imdb Review for a series
It was really such a well-made dramaaa! I enjoyed it a lot in so many ways! There are a lot of things to say about this one starting from the amazing actor performances of both the leads, supporters and even sometimes the extra characters...to the plot, costumes... everything was advance in detail and everybody did a great job in acting I must say.
Especially, in our household everybody fell for Gu Dong Mae, I immediately googled the actor's other performances because he was literally lit playing the character.
Eventhough the plot was fictional, it was portrayed in such a realistic way, I may have ended up with my emotions got strongly manipulated towards Japan's role in Korea's history. And this, my friends, is the power&art of Cinema.
And I was expecting the series would end with kind of an happy ending as being exposed to typical romance stories since forever but now I see that we were given all the clue by the very beginning how the story was going to develop and end... Gun, Glory, Love, Sad Ending... it was all there throughout the series, in fact, repeatedly... but maybe i wanted to believe it would go with ordinary screenwriting cliches for a happy ending.
Another thing shocked me that there was not even ONE kissing scene AT ALL(!) despite all that tension of great love and longing between the protagonists.... like how!? I definitely need that much of a cliche please! It burned me out with all that longing... i felt like i was all left high and dry after that last episode. And cried like a river.
If you are a fan of nostalgic scenery, historical plots and -in this case, heartbreaking- romance...go for this one without hesitation. 98% recommended. Cut that 2% for the kissing scene they have stolen from me.
Aug. 22, 2023
FremdSprache im Kindergarten.
"Fremdsprache im Kindergarten" ist ein interessantes Thema, über welches heutzutage oft diskutiert wird. Ich stimme Kinans Meinung zu.
Kinder haben nicht nur zu viel Zeit, sondern auch ein gutes Gedicht und
können sehr schnell eine neue Fremdsprache lernen als erwachsene Leute. Es ist eine Gelegenheit, um die Kinder für die Zukunft vorzubereiten.
Eine zwei Sprache ist eine gute Weise, das berufliche Leben des Kindes zu verbessern, aber nur die Grundlagen der Sprache müssen den Kindern gelehrt werden, um die Muttersprache nicht zu beeinflussen.
Ich finde, dass Englisch zum Beispiel ist, heutzutage eine sehr wichtige Fähigkeit zu haben.
Aug. 22, 2023
Martedì
Mi sono svegliata più presto di ieri, ma mi sono riposata.
Mi sono abituata ad andare a piedi nei vari posti, quindi sono andata da mamma un po'.
Abitiamo vicino a lei, quando non ho voglia di fare una lunga passeggiata, ci vado per aiutarla in casa con le pulizie. È da molto tempo quando non ci vado.
Mi servivano qualche pane, li ho comprati prima di ritornare a casa. Di solito non mangio molti pezzi di pane al giorno, ma lo compro per averne spesso nel frigorifero.
Oggi sono ancora libera, posso rilassarmi senza preoccupazioni. Così domani ritornerò a lavorare sentendomi rinfrescata.
Oggi è la più tranquilla giornata delle ultime, me la godrò.
A domani!
Aug. 22, 2023
Tagesbuch, #1
Am Wochenende bin ich nach Rostock mit dem 49-euro-Ticket gefahren. Der Zug war sehr voll, es gab so viel Leute von Berlin, die dasselbe Programm machen wollten. Ich bin am Strand von Warnemünde eine große Teil des Tags geblieben, faulenzen mit meiner Freundin unter die Sonne. Dann bin ich in eine schönes Viertel in Warnemünde gegangen, das heißt Am Strom. Wir haben frische Fisch gegessen, den echt lecker war.
Danke in voraus für die Korrektur. Bis morgen!