March 3, 2026
Appearance
From my point of view, people’s appearance is more important that it seems to be especially if we’re talking about a career. If you’re attractive, slim and pleasant-smelling, reaching the desirable position will be easier for you than for other people. It’s life and everyone should enhance one’s best features to achieve the goal. But the appearance is not the only key to success. The level of communication skills and emotional intelligence are also essential. The saddest thing I’ve ever seen is when really smart people behave themselves with the others in a very hideous way. That’s why kindness and the ability to be cheerful are vital too.
Appearance
From my point of view, people’s appearance is more important thatn it seems to be, especially if we’re talking about a career.
If you’re attractive, slim and pleasant-smelling, reaching thea desirable position will be easier for you than for other people.
"The desirable position" is not technically wrong but it is referring to only one specific position, while "a desirable position" is more general.
It’s life, and everyone should enhance one’stheir best features to achieve the goal of looking their best.
Their goal of what? I have specified here.
But the appearance is not the only key to success.
No need for "the" here as you are talking about appearance as a general concept.
TheA person's level of communication skills and emotional intelligence are also essential.
You could also say: "Your level of communication skills...", as in the general "you"
The saddest thing I’ve ever seen is when really smart people behave themselves with the others in a very hideous way with others.
I'm not 100% sure what you mean by "hideous way" here - as in rude, or cliquey, or something else? "Hideous way" is a bit vague.
The others = a specified group of other people
Others = other people in general, not specified
That’s why kindness and the ability to be cheerful are vital too.
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From my point of view, people’s appearance is more important that it seems to be especially if we’re talking about a career. From my point of view, |
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If you’re attractive, slim and pleasant-smelling, reaching the desirable position will be easier for you than for other people. If you’re attractive, slim and pleasant-smelling, reaching "The desirable position" is not technically wrong but it is referring to only one specific position, while "a desirable position" is more general. |
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It’s life and everyone should enhance one’s best features to achieve the goal. It’s life, and everyone should enhance Their goal of what? I have specified here. |
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But the appearance is not the only key to success. But No need for "the" here as you are talking about appearance as a general concept. |
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The level of communication skills and emotional intelligence are also essential.
You could also say: "Your level of communication skills...", as in the general "you" |
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The saddest thing I’ve ever seen is when really smart people behave themselves with the others in a very hideous way. The saddest thing I’ve ever seen is when really smart people behave I'm not 100% sure what you mean by "hideous way" here - as in rude, or cliquey, or something else? "Hideous way" is a bit vague. The others = a specified group of other people Others = other people in general, not specified |
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That’s why kindness and the ability to be cheerful are vital too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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