July 5, 2026
Our Family Travel : One-day Tube Pass
After finishing our modest lunch, we stepped out of the cafe and realized that my one-day Tube pass was gone.
I searched everywhere, checking both my pockets and my bag, but couldn't find it.
We had been walking around London for hours, completely exhausted, and I knew my fatigue had dulled my attention. I assumed I must have dropped it somewhere along the way. To make matters worse, my eldest daughter's travel card had developed a magnetic problem and would no longer work at the automatic ticket gates.
ささやかなランチを終え、カフェの外に出た時に、メトロの一日乗車券がないことに気づいた。どこを探してもみつからなかった。衣類の中もバックの中も。疲労困憊の中でロンドンの街を歩き続け、注意力は散漫になっていたのは確かだ。どこかで落としたんだろうと思った。おまけに長女のチケットも磁気がおかしく自動改札口に入れても通らなくなってしまった。
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Our Family Travel : One-day Tube Pass
Our Family Travel: One-day Tube Pass
After finishing our modest lunch, we stepped out of the cafe and realized that my one-day Tube pass was gone.
I searched everywhere, checking both my pockets and my bag, but couldn't find it.
We had been walking around London for hours, completely exhausted, and I knew my fatigue had dulled my attention.
I assumed I must have dropped it somewhere along the way.
To make matters worse, my eldest daughter's travel card had developed a magnetic-related problem and would no longer work at the automatic ticket gates.
To make matters worse, my eldest daughter's travel card had developed a magnet-related problem and would no longer work at the automatic ticket gates.
My preference would be to phrase it like this, although what you wrote is certainly equally valid. "Magnetic problem" could also mean that the problem in some sense attracts other problems, whereas writing it like this is a bit clearer, at least in my opinion. This is a pretty minor point though.
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Great work, it reads really naturally.
yesterday
Thank you very much.
Our Family Travel : One-day Tube Pass
Our Family Travel: One-day Tube Pass
After finishing our modest lunch, we stepped out of the cafe and realized that my one-day Tube pass was gone.
I searched everywhere, checking both my pockets and my bag, but couldn't find it.
We had been walking around London for hours, were completely exhausted, and I knew my fatigue had dulled my attention. We had been walking around London for hours, were completely exhausted, and I knew my fatigue had dulled my attention.
I assumed I must have dropped it somewhere along the way.
To make matters worse, my eldest daughter's travel card had developed a magnetic problem and would no longer work at the automatic ticket gates.
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Very good, as ever!
yesterday
Thank you very much.
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Our Family Travel : One-day Tube Pass
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We had been walking around London for hours, completely exhausted, and I knew my fatigue had dulled my attention. We had been walking around London for hours, were completely exhausted, and I knew my fatigue had dulled my attention. We had been walking around London for hours, were completely exhausted, and I knew my fatigue had dulled my attention. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I assumed I must have dropped it somewhere along the way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To make matters worse, my eldest daughter's travel card had developed a magnetic problem and would no longer work at the automatic ticket gates. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
To make matters worse, my eldest daughter's travel card had developed a magnet My preference would be to phrase it like this, although what you wrote is certainly equally valid. "Magnetic problem" could also mean that the problem in some sense attracts other problems, whereas writing it like this is a bit clearer, at least in my opinion. This is a pretty minor point though. |
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