April 26, 2025
Yinghuai Garden
This morning, I rode my trike to Yinghuai Garden with my wife.
Yinghuai Garden is situated in the southeast part of Fuyang City, next to the Fuyang South Entrance of the Chuxin Highway.
Inside the garden, there is one high tower, one lake, one river, two bridges and other green areas with trees, bamboos, bushes and flowers.
Flowers that are blossoming in the garden include Chinese rose, which is the “city flower” of my city. We saw a lot of Chinese roses, and they were arranged in different patterns.
We also saw many people in the garden. I think they were from nearby neighborhoods. They were taking photos while they were walking.
The weather today was a bit hot - the highest temperature was 28 degrees Celsius. We walked there for more than one hour, until we got sweaty.
When it was around ten - thirty, we started to go back home. It was a short trip of about thirteen kilometers and only took me about forty minutes.
When I got to my neighborhood, I went to a barber shop and had my hair cut. Then I returned home and cooked lunch.
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April 26, 2025
Thank you very much.
This morning, I rode my trike to Yinghuai Garden with my wife.
Yinghuai Garden is situated in the southeast part of Fuyang City, next to the Fuyang South Entrance of the Chuxin Highway.
Inside the garden, there is one high tower, one lake, one river, two bridges and other green areas with trees, bamboos, bushes and flowers.
Flowers that are blossoming in the garden include Chinese rose, which is the “city flower” of my city.
We saw a lot of Chinese roses, and they were arranged in different patterns.
We also saw many people in the garden.
I think theyose people were from nearby neighborhoods.
*Better indicate who "they" is specifically.
Because in the preceding sentence you said "We saw a lot of Chinese roses.." and "saw many people..."
"They" could be "Chinese roses" or "people" which are from the nearby neighborhood.
But that might just be me. Else, no mistakes.
They were taking photos while they were walking.
The weather today was a bit hot - the highest temperature was 28 degrees Celsius.
We walked there for more than one hour, until we got sweaty.
When it was around ten - thirty, we started to go back home.
It was a short trip of about thirteen kilometers and it only took me about forty minutes.
When I got to my neighborhood, I went to a barber shop and had my hair cut.
Then, I returned home and cooked lunch.
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Best of Luck!
This morning, I rode my trike to Yinghuai Garden with my wife.
Yinghuai Garden is situated in the southeast part of Fuyang City, next to the Fuyang South Entrance of the Chuxin Highway.
Inside the garden, there is one high tower, one lake, one river, two bridges and other green areas with trees, bamboos, bushes and flowers.
Flowers that are blossoming in the garden include a/the Chinese rose, which is the “city flower” of my city.
We saw a lot of Chinese roses, and they were arranged in different patterns.
We also saw many people in the garden.
I think they were from nearby neighborhoods.
They were taking photos while they were walking.
The weather today was a bit hot - the highest temperature was 28 degrees Celsius.
We walked there for more than one hour, until we got sweaty.
When it was around ten - thirty, we started to go back home.
It was a short trip of about thirteen kilometers and only took me about forty minutes.
When I got to my neighborhood, I went to a barber shop and had my hair cut.
Then I returned home and cooked lunch.
April 26, 2025
Thank you very much.
This morning, I rode my trike to Yinghuai Garden with my wife.
Yinghuai Garden is situated in the southeast part of Fuyang City, next to the Fuyang South Entrance of the Chuxin Highway.
Inside the garden, there is one high tower, one lake, one river, two bridges and other green areas with trees, bamboos, bushes and flowers.
Flowers that areALSO POSSIBLE: Flowers blossoming in the gardenre include the Chinese rose, which is the “city flower” of my city.
We saw a lot of Chinese roses, and they were arranged in different patterns.
We also saw many people in the garden.
I thinkMY GUESS: I think most of theym were from nearby neighborhoods.
MORE SUCCINCTLY: They were taking photos while they were walking.
ALSO POSSIBLE: They were taking snapshots while strolling.
ALSO POSSIBLE: The weather today was a bit hot - the highest temperature was: today's high reached 28 degrees Celsius.
ALSO POSSIBLE: We walked there for more than one hour, until we gotgetting sweaty.
When it was around ten - thirty, we started to go back home.
It was a shortALSO POSSIBLE: The return trip of was about thirteen kilometers and only took me about forty minutes.
When I got to my neighborhood, I went to a barber shop and had my hair cut.
Then I returned home and cooked lunch.
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Sounds nice! Glad you had a good day.
April 26, 2025
Thank you very much.
Yinghuai Garden
This morning, I rode my trike to Yinghuai Garden with my wife.
Yinghuai Garden is situated in the southeast part of Fuyang City, next to the Fuyang South Entrance of the Chuxin Highway.
Inside the garden, there is one higha tall tower, onea lake, onea river, two bridges, and other green areas with trees, bamboos, bushes, and flowers.
Flowers that are blossoming in the garden includare Chinese roses, which is the “city flower” of my city.
Or Chinese roses
We saw a lot of Chinese roses, and they were arranged in different patterns.
We also saw many people in the garden.
I think they were from nearby neighborhoods.
They were taking photos while they were walking.
The weather today was a bit hot - the highest temperature was 28 degrees Celsius.
We walked there for more than one hour, until we got sweaty.
When it was around ten - -thirty, we started to go back home.
Without the hyphen is okay too
It was a short trip of about thirteen kilometers and only took me about forty minutes.
When I got to my neighborhood, I went to a barber shop and had my hair cut.
Then I returned home and cooked lunch.
April 26, 2025
Thank you very much.
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