June 5, 2025
yesterday happen
yesterday I played tennis with my mother in the morning.
I haven't played tennis for long time .
At first, very terrible but I'm gradually getting used to it.
play the match,we were getting tired.
Then we return to home , take a shower.
After we'll go to eat soba.
Yesterday was so hot,so soba is very yammy.
To be honest, I chosed " orosisoba".
Yesterday was so happy.
昨日私は母と朝からテニスをしました。
私は久しぶりにテニスをした。
最初のほうはひどかったけど、だんだん慣れていった。
試合をし、だんだんつかれてきた。
それから家に帰って、シャワーを浴びた。
そしてそばを食べに行った
昨日はとても暑かったので、そばはとてもおいしかった。
じつはおろしそばをえらびました
昨日はとても幸せな日だった
what happened yesterday happen
i get what you were trying to say with the title so i just swapped it around to make it make more sense
yesterday I played tennis with my mother in the morning.
I haven't played tennis for long time .
At first, i was very terrible but I'm gradually getting used to it.
it made sense but “i was” shows it was you who was very terrible at first
we play ed the match, we were getting tired.
showing who played the match is a good idea and i made it played as you had already done it when you wrote this!!!
Then we return to home , take a shower.
After we'll go to eat soba.
Yesterday was so hot, so soba is very yaummy.
i think it was maybe just a spelling mistake with “yammy” it is spelt yummy but i still understood what you said but i think it was maybe just a small mistake
To be honest, I chosed " orosisoba".
Yesterday was so happygood.
happy is an emotion, although it makes sense saying a day was happy isnt a thing but saying a day was good is, english is very confusing sometimes haha
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well done!! i loved this passage and all your mistakes were very small and it make alot of sense before i fixed it well done🩷
yesterday I played tennis with my mother in the morning.
I haven't played tennis for a long time .
Use the article "a" before "long time"
At first, very terrible but I'm gradually getting used to it.
Then we returned to home , takeand took a shower.
Remember to include past tense endings - regular verbs are normally (-ed) endings. "Take" is irregular so the past participle is "took"
Yesterday was so hot,so soba iwas very yammy.
Use the past tense when talking about yesterday. The past tense of "Be" is was :)
To be honest, I chosed " orosisoba".
"Choose" is an irregular verb, so the past tense is "Chose"
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Very good effort! Just remember to include the past tense when talking about things that have already happened :)
June 10, 2025
Thank you so much
Something that happened yesterday happen
yYesterday I played tennis with my mother in the morning.
You can also say "Yesterday morning I played tennis with my mother."
I haven't played tennis for long time .
At first, I was very terrible, but I'm gradually getting used to it.
We play theed a match, and we were getting tired.
Then we return toed home , takeand took a shower.
I changed it to past tense since this happened yesterday.
After we'll gothat, we went to eat soba.
I changed it to past tense since this happened yesterday.
Yesterday was so hot, so the soba iwas very yaummy.
To be honest, I chosed " orosisoba".
"To be honest" here doesn't really make sense to me, unless it's unexpected or a secret.
Yesterday, I was so happy.
You can also say "Yesterday was a good day."
June 10, 2025
Thank you so much
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yesterday happen Something that happened yesterday what happened yesterday i get what you were trying to say with the title so i just swapped it around to make it make more sense |
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yesterday I played tennis with my mother in the morning.
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I haven't played tennis for long time . This sentence has been marked as perfect! I haven't played tennis for a long time . Use the article "a" before "long time" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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play the match,we were getting tired. We play we play showing who played the match is a good idea and i made it played as you had already done it when you wrote this!!! |
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Then we return to home , take a shower. Then we return I changed it to past tense since this happened yesterday. Then we returned to home , Remember to include past tense endings - regular verbs are normally (-ed) endings. "Take" is irregular so the past participle is "took" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After we'll go to eat soba. After I changed it to past tense since this happened yesterday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday was so hot,so soba is very yammy. Yesterday was so hot, so the soba Yesterday was so hot,so soba Use the past tense when talking about yesterday. The past tense of "Be" is was :) Yesterday was so hot, so soba is very y i think it was maybe just a spelling mistake with “yammy” it is spelt yummy but i still understood what you said but i think it was maybe just a small mistake |
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To be honest, I chosed " orosisoba".
"To be honest" here doesn't really make sense to me, unless it's unexpected or a secret. To be honest, I chose "Choose" is an irregular verb, so the past tense is "Chose" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday was so happy. Yesterday, I was so You can also say "Yesterday was a good day." Yesterday was so happy is an emotion, although it makes sense saying a day was happy isnt a thing but saying a day was good is, english is very confusing sometimes haha |
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