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hope world peace

world order began to be broke,war between ukraine and russia plus the war usa assaulted iran and so on wars outburst consistantly.alone concern about russia and ukraine and how many persons who are vivid and substantial have became victims by them,although i firmly believe peace will arrive in soon future,but it still can't refrain my frustrated for wars between human being and human being,every when i heard the news like certain country assaulted certain country,i had a kind of feel that doomsday arrived.all in all hope wars finish earlier.


世界秩序开始被破坏,乌克兰和俄罗斯之间的战争,加之美国袭击伊朗的战争,诸如此类的战争不断爆发。单单是俄乌战争,多少有血有肉的人已经为之遇难,尽管我坚信和平在不远的将来将来到,但是这仍无法抑制我对人类相残的伤感,每当我听闻某某国家袭击某某国家时,我都有有一种末日到来的感觉。总之希望战争早日结束。

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Thanx

hope world peace


hHope for world peace Hope for world peace

hHope and world peace Hope and world peace

You need a verb or something else to connect these nouns. You could also say 'Hoping for world peace'.

world order began to be broke,war between ukraine and russia plus the war usa assaulted iran and so on wars outburst consistantly.


The world order has begaun to be broke,n. There's war between uUkraine and rRussia, plus the war usaUSA assaulted iing Iran, and so on wars outburst. Countries consistantly break out into wars. The world order has begun to be broken. There's war between Ukraine and Russia, plus the USA assaulting Iran, and so on. Countries constantly break out into wars.

I don't really know about the wording of the last sentence.

The world order has begaun to be broke,reak. For example, the war between uUkraine and rRussia, plus the war usa assaulted iran and so on wars outbursassault by the USA on Iran. Wars seem to break out consistantly. The world order has begun to break. For example, the war between Ukraine and Russia, plus the assault by the USA on Iran. Wars seem to break out constantly.

alone concern about russia and ukraine and how many persons who are vivid and substantial have became victims by them,


aloneI'm concerned about rRussia and uUkraine, and how many persons who are vivid and substantialople with vivid, precious lives have became victims byof them, I'm concerned about Russia and Ukraine, and how many people with vivid, precious lives have became victims of them,

I changed "substantial" to something I think has a meaning you were going for, but is more natural to use to describe people.

aloneI am concerned about rRussia and uUkraine and how many persons who are vivid and substantialinnocent people have became victims by them,now? I am concerned about Russia and Ukraine and how many innocent people have became victims by now?

Not sure what you mean by vivid and substantial, have suggested 'innocent' instead

although i firmly believe peace will arrive in soon future,but it still can't refrain my frustrated for wars between human being and human being,


although iI firmly believe peace will arrive in soon future,but ithe near future. But that still can't refrainalleviate my frustrated forion with wars between human being and human being,s. although I firmly believe peace will arrive in the near future. But that still can't alleviate my frustration with wars between human beings.

aAlthough iI firmly believe peace will arrive in soonthe future,but it I still can't refrain myhelp feeling frustrated forby wars between human being and human being,s. Although I firmly believe peace will arrive in the future, I still can't help feeling frustrated by wars between human beings.

every when i heard the news like certain country assaulted certain country,


eEvery when i heard the news like certaintime I hear news that some country assaulted certainanother country, Every time I hear news that some country assaulted another country,

eEvery when itime I heard the news likethat a certain country hassaulted certain attacked another country, Every time I hear the news that a certain country has attacked another country,

'Assaulted' is more used for personal violence, you wouldn't normally say a country 'assaulted' another but a person could assault another person.

i had a kind of feel that doomsday arrived.


i had a kind ofI feel thatlike doomsday arrivedhas come. I feel like doomsday has come.

i had a kind ofI feel that doomsday has arrived. I feel that doomsday has arrived.

all in all hope wars finish earlier.


aAll in all, I hope all the wars finish earliersoon. All in all, I hope all the wars finish soon.

aAll in all, I hope these wars finish earlisooner rather than later. All in all, I hope these wars finish sooner rather than later.

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